1、读后续写在新高考中，读后续写题型为第四部分写作的第二节，与概要写作在不同考次中交替出现。该题型提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要根据材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写(150词左右)，将其发展成一篇与所给材料衔接紧密、情节和结构完整的短文。由于记叙文具有上下文连贯性强、结构清晰、故事性强等特点，十分适合用于读后续写，所以该题型所选文章的体裁一般都是叙事性的记叙文。特别注意事项仔细揣摩原材料所要表达的意图和主题：续写要求“续”的不仅是内容，还有叙述角度(常见第一或第三人称视角)、任务特点、文风和思想。因此，在读原文时，要寻求故事的内在联系，注意前后照应，注意隐含的情感因素。好的续写除了要与所提供的
2、材料保持情节的延续外，还要与其保持风格的统一。一定要注意与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接：续写已给出两段的首句，因此写作时要注意与前文叙述的高度融合。千万不可忽略所提供的段落首句而肆意创作。切忌以大篇幅对白，尤其是以直接引语的形式展开写作；应尽可能巧妙地设置情节，着重起因、转折与高潮，多关注动作描写和心理描述。读写一体化训练在做故事类的阅读理解或完形填空时，读到适当的位置，不妨中断阅读，根据已读部分文章的脉络，发散思维，设想可能的结局，然后对照原文，检查自己的设想是否与之一致。微型化训练平时进行英语阅读的过程中，对文章的某一段落进行设想。即根据某一段落的首句提示，结合上下文对该段进行合理的设想，具
3、体推断该段可能要讲述的细节内容。注重语言积累读后续写不仅要求情节完整，也要求词汇丰富。所以备考时，应尽量扩大词汇量，准确、熟练运用多种句型。由于读后续写多以故事性的文章为原材料，而故事类文章多侧重动作和心理的描述，因此对于动词和形容词的积累便尤为重要。另外，为了使情节衔接顺畅，也应多积累一些记叙文中常用的衔接词。专题化训练俗话说，熟能生巧。通过适度地练习，可以进一步熟悉该题型的特色，然后掌握本书中所讲的写作方法，以便轻松驾驭该题型。读后续写一般遵循以下五个解题步骤：剖析原文、推断情节、确定细节、润色文字、检查定稿。第一步剖析原文准确理解材料，理清人物事件。读后续写题首先要做的就是“读”。“读”
4、的目的是确定文章的主题，明确篇章结构。这样可以帮助我们理清文章脉络，提炼出故事的主要人物事件，为合理想象故事的发展提供线索。第二步推断情节根据段落开头语，确定写作方向。在理清文章脉络，提炼出人物和故事要点之后，应结合两个续写段落的首句充分发挥想象，推断出这两段要写的情节，也就是故事中的时间、地点、人物和事件四要素，确定写作的方向。第三步确定细节根据文章隐含的思路，确定续写细节。将上一步中确定好的四要素加以串联，并增加细节描写(内心情感、态度、表情等)，从而形成完整的段落。两段合计要能写出8到15个句子，以满足续写词数的要求。另外，串联时要注意选用合适的衔接词。第四步润色文字调整写作语言，优化读
5、后续写。初稿完成后，要对续写段进行润色，即对其中的用词和句式进行升级。用词升级的方向为：新颖化，短语优先，恰当使用形容词和副词等修饰词。句式升级可通过使用三大句式、特殊句式、复合结构、虚拟语气等较为复杂的句式来实现。第五步检查定稿做到完整统一，完成读后续写。读后续写检查的重点是统一性和完整性。考生可通读所给材料和自己续写的内容，既要确保不出现与原材料相矛盾的地方，又要做到内容上前后连贯、语句通顺。此外，还要检查有无拼写、标点符号、大小写、语法等错误，检查词数是否符合要求。一切无误后，将其工整地誊写到试卷上，完成读后续写。(2018浙江高考)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的
6、故事。It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle_Paul,_my dads friend, picked us up from the air
7、port and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm_house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke u
8、s up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm，” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afterno
9、on, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Dont be late for supper，” Uncle Paul cr
10、ied, “and keep to the track so that you dont get_lost！”“OK！” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looke
11、d like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Paragraph 2：We had no idea where we were and it was getting d
12、ark. 解题步骤1.剖析原文在仔细阅读所提供的材料后，我们可提炼出故事的主要事件：父亲(dad)带作者(I)去“西部荒野”的保罗叔叔(Uncle Paul)的农场(farm house)，喂鸡牧羊(feed, sheep)，体验农场生活；见父亲和叔叔骑马很是潇洒，作者心生向往，于是亲自上马体验2.推断情节第一段所给首句“Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.”是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的结果入手扩展开去，可写马受到惊吓狂奔而去，也可写人的反应，无论从何种角度去拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。第二
13、段所给首句“We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.” 呼应前文Uncle Paul的嘱托不要迷路，可从如何寻路返回入手去续写。3.确定细节根据画线词语做出更多的细节猜想。例如，我们可以勾勒以下细节：野兔如此可爱，于是我们便去追赶，结果迷失(lost)在森林中，更糟糕的是，天又下起了雨，冲掉了我们做的标记(track)，幸好父亲记得叔叔家附近有条小河，找到小河，沿河行进也就找到了回去的路，困难便迎刃而解。4.润色文字在完成初稿后，我们可在语言上加以润色，可使用更加准确、生动的词汇来刻画动作、心理等。例如，表情感的：panic，r
14、elief，nervous，worried和表动作的：run，cry，think to oneself。再如，在表达“我们迷路了”时候可使用“There was nothing left in our sight but the trees.”而不使用we are lost这样的简单句，如此能让文章更具亮点。5.检查定稿将所给材料和自己续写的内容通读一遍，在注意故事的完整性和统一性的同时，留意拼写、标点、语法等错误，一切无误后，誊写在答题纸上。精彩范文Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Af
15、raid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse. However, it became scared and started to run like crazy. All this coming without warning, I was seized by fear. “Dont let go of the rope! Keep calm！” yelled Dad. I followed what he told me to. To my rel
16、ief, it stopped slowly. But before we jumped off the horses, we found that we had been off the beaten track and got lost.Paragraph 2：We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. I kept shouting for help, hoping my shouts could
17、be heard by someone, but there was no reply. Dad sounded a little worried as he reminded me to calm down. It was then that my mind raced. “Listen, dad, the rushing river water，” I shouted excitedly, “we can return to the farm house down the river.” Before long, we caught sight of the lights in the d
18、istance. We knew we were safe. What a thrilling vacation, like never before, we had!以上讲解的五步解题流程中，前两步是前提，而后三步尤其是第三步(确定细节)和第四步(润色文字)是取得高分的关键，下面我们就细节刻画和语言优化这两个环节来加以讲解、逐一突破。一、细节刻画读后续写的评分原则之一是“内容的丰富性”，即要求续写部分详细、生动地描述情景、态度和情感等。如果仅根据基本思路简单地交待事件与过程，续写部分必是内容干瘪、词数不足。要使续写部分的词数符合要求且内容丰富，就需要结合基本情节添加相关细节。通常可以通过对人
19、物动作、语言、心理活动、表情和环境等细节的刻画来丰富内容，增强叙述的画面感。在添加细节时，需注意以下两点：(1)不仅要使所添加的细节符合所在的叙述情境(即小语境)，而且要使所添加的细节与所给短文中已有的、与该细节有关的信息(即大语境或伏笔)相一致。(2)“事件”与“人或物”要紧密联系。为情境中的“事件”提供相关细节时必须特别注意所给短文中有关主要“人或物”特点的描写，并紧扣这些特点添加相关细节。特别注意所给短文中描写外貌(外观)、表情(心理)、动作、环境等反映“人或物”特点的词句。二、语言优化语言的准确运用，能够为文章增色，营造得分亮点。语言的优化主要是指高级词汇和句式的运用。高级词汇主要表现
20、在表示人物情绪、体态、品质、动作、心理和日常活动的词汇及表示天气、地理位置等词汇，我们在平时学习中一定要注意积累，厚积薄发；高级句式主要指避免过多使用简单句，主要可从两方面着手：一是使用形象词汇或短语，二是使用三大从句、非谓语动词或特殊句式等高分复杂句式结构。但要注意无论使用何种形式，其目的在于使句子更加符合情境，表达更加地道。Type 1惊险类Test 1阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。One August afternoon, Richard Allen dropped off his last passenger, Mr
21、s Carey. Helping Mrs Carey to carry two grocery bags, he followed her across the yard and stood on the step of her house. Glancing up, he saw a large wasp (黄蜂) nest under the roof. Allen had heard that wasps can become more likely to sting (蜇；叮) in summer. He mentioned this to Mrs Carey, who had ope
22、ned the door.“Oh, they dont bother me，” she said lightly. “I go in and out all the time.”Anxiously, Allen looked at the nest againto see the wasps flying straight at him. “Hurry！” he shouted to Mrs Carey. “Get in！”She stepped quickly inside. Allen ran for his minibus. Too late; they were upon him. J
23、ust as he jumped aboard, half a dozen red spots showed on his arm, and he felt more on his back and shoulders.As he was driving down the road, Allen felt as if something was burning at the back of his neck, and the pain was spreading forward toward his face. And immediate anxiety took hold of him. A
24、llen knew that stings could cause some persons to die. But he had been stung the previous summer and the aftereffects soon passed. However, what he didnt know was that the first sting had turned his body into a time bomb waiting for the next to set off an explosion.Miles from the nearest medical cli
25、nic, Allen began to feel his tongue thick and heavy and his heartbeat louder. Most frightening, he felt his breathing more and more difficult. He reached for the phone, trying to call the minibus center, but his words were hardly understandable. Signals were also poor that far out. He knew he had to
26、 struggle for survival by himself and couldnt give up because he had to support a big family. So his best chance was to reach the nearest medical clinic as quickly as possible.Allen tried his best to make it to the medical clinic. He woke up two days later. He found himself in hospital. 写作指导【所给故事内容】
27、八月的某个下午，司机Richard Allen在乘客Mrs Carey家的台阶上被房檐下的黄蜂蛰伤后，舌头变得又厚又重、心跳加速，更可怕的是，呼吸越来越困难，需要立即得到治疗。他试图给小型客车中心打电话，但已经吐字不清，且信号也不好。然后，他意识到要想存活，只能靠他自己想办法尽快到达最近的诊所。【续写段首句分析】根据段首句1 “Allen尽自己最大努力赶去最近的诊所”，我们可作如下思考：在去诊所的路上，Allen 会发生什么情况呢？首先，他肯定要强忍住痛苦和恐慌，专心开车，尤其是转弯的时候。其次，他的身体状况不断恶化，可能来不及到达诊所就失去知觉了。所以他要趁意识还清醒的时候就近呼救， 鉴于他
28、是个司机，可能对加油站比较熟悉，所以他很可能会想到先到附近的加油站寻求帮助。最后，根据续写第二段段首句可猜测，他尽全力赶到了加油站，求救后就休克了。根据段首句2 “两天后他醒来了”，我们可作如下思考：1谁救了他呢？根据对续写第一段内容的猜测“他赶到了加油站，求救后就休克了”可知，应该是加油站里的人救了他。2怎么救的呢？根据常识，被黄蜂蜇了后要及时做应急措施，所以加油站里肯定有人懂一点相关的医疗知识，在救护车到之前对他进行了简单的急救处理，让他暂时没有生命危险。3知道自己被救的过程之后，有什么感悟呢？他肯定意识到急救的重要性，很可能也去学急救知识，希望有一天自己也可以帮助别人。【结合原文，安排续
29、写情节】第一段：Allen尽自己最大的努力赶去最近的诊所在去诊所(medical clinic)的路上，Richard Allen专心开车，尽量不让自己恐慌但是，他感觉自己渐渐地失去了知觉他心里充满了焦虑(anxiety)和痛苦(pain) 突然他想起附近有个加油站，也许在那里可以得到帮助他用尽最后力气赶到加油站他求救(shouted)后就休克了第二段：两天后他醒来了他发现自己在医院里医生告诉他，他很幸运，被黄蜂蜇(stung)伤后逃过一劫加油站里有个人(person)碰巧以前学过医在救护车到来之前，这个人对他进行了及时的救治他很快就康复了意识到急救的重要性之后，他去学了一些急救知识，希望有一
30、天也能帮助别人精彩范文Allen tried his best to make it to the medical clinic. On the way to the medical clinic, Richard Allen tried not to panic, focusing his mind on each sharp turn. However, he felt he was losing consciousness gradually. Faced with such a bad condition, Allen was filled with anxiety and pain.
31、 Suddenly he remembered there was a gas station nearby. There someone may help him. Without hesitation, he spared no effort to get there. “Call medical clinic，” he shouted, “Emergency .” Then he went into shock.He woke up two days later. He found himself in hospital. The doctor told him he was so lu
32、cky and that he had a narrow escape after he was stung by wasps. The person at the gas station happened to study medicine before, so he applied timely first aid to Allen before the ambulance came. Allen recovered soon. Knowing the importance of first aid, he learned some knowledge about first aid, h
33、oping one day what he learned could make a great difference to others.Test 2阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。I awoke in the night to find my husband, Marty, gently rocking our baby son, Noah. I stood for a moment in the doorway, watching this amazing man with whom I was so blessed t
34、o share my life, lovingly stroke Noahs fat pink cheeks in an effort to comfort him. I felt in my heart that something was seriously wrong with Noah. This was one of several nights Noah had been up, burning with a high fever.Tears filled my eyes as I watched Marty move Noahs little cheek up against h
35、is own chest, so that Noah could feel the vibrations of his voice. Noah is deaf. Learning to comfort him has brought on a whole new way of thinking for us. We relied on our voices, audio toys, and music to comfort our other children. But with Noah, we need to use touch, sight, the feel of our voices
36、, and most importantly, the use of sign language to communicate emotions and a sense of comfort to him. Marty made the sign for “I love you” with his hand and I saw a tear roll down his cheek as he placed Noahs tiny, weak hand on top of his.We had taken Noah to the doctor more times than I can remem
37、ber. It had been a week and a half and Noahs fever remained very high and very dangerous, despite everything the doctor or we had tried. I knew in my soul the way only a mother can know, that Noah was in trouble.I gently touched Martys shoulder and we looked into each others eyes with the same fear
38、and knowledge that Noah wasnt getting any better. I offered to take over for him, but he shook his head. When morning finally came, we called the doctor and were told to bring him in again. We already knew that he would probably put Noah in the hospital. So, we made arrangements for the other childr
39、en, packed bags for all three of us, and tearfully drove to the doctors office once again. Our hearts filled with dread, we waited in a small room, different from the usual examining room we had become used to.Our doctor finally came in, saying that Noah had to be admitted to the hospital right now.
40、 The next morning, a resident doctor came over to tell us that Noah just had a common high fever. 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Noah先天失聪，还经常发烧，父母对他心疼不已，文章讲述了父母带他去医院的经过，他会转危为安吗？精彩范文Our doctor finally came in, saying that Noah had to be admitted to the hospital right now. I was seized by fear and couldnt stop crying.
41、 Marty reassured me that he felt in his heart that Noah would be okay. It was a tortuous day, filled with horrible tests that made my sons tiny little voice echo through the halls as he screamed over and over. Marty and I prayed together for Noah. With tears streaming down his face, Marty humbly ask
42、ed the Lord to heal our son. My heart was filled with comfort and gratitude.The next morning, a resident doctor came over to tell us that Noah just had a common high fever. Noah would recover soon! Marty and I grinned at each other through our tears. By noon, Noah was already standing up in the hosp
43、ital crib, bouncing like he was on a trampoline. My husbands talk with the Lord was already being answered. Finally, early in the night, our own doctor came in and told us that it was fine to take Noah home. We couldnt pack fast enough!Test 3阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。On Octob
44、er 20th this year, a small piece of paper made me very embarrassed (尴尬). That day one of my friends who had just returned from abroad invited me to her house. I promised. Early that day I went to a supermarket to buy some gifts. There had been a lot of customers in it when I got there. I spent nearl
45、y an hour choosing what I thought was the perfect one. After I paid the bill and was passing through the door, the alarm suddenly rang. It was loud enough to wake the dead. I got a terrible shock. Worse still, I found a lot of people looking this way, which made me rather nervous. In no time I saw a
46、 young security man (保安) running towards me, and without asking any questions, he ordered me to follow him to a certain place. I felt so upset and I was puzzled. I didnt move until the young security man had asked me several more times. At that point he wanted me to go into a small room. I told him
47、that I did nothing wrong and didnt want to do as he told me, so I stopped at the door. Finding me unwilling to enter the room, he shouted at me. I felt burnt in my face and didnt want to be in trouble in front of others. I had to go into the small room. The manager of the market was there together w
48、ith some other workers at the desk. They closed the door. I was so afraid that they were going to bring me great trouble and didnt know what to do. Suddenly, a sharp voice said in my ear：“Take out the things you have stolen！” Hearing that, I nearly cried. “I stole nothing，” I said. But they didnt be
49、lieve me. “Do as I told you. If we find them, youll be in big trouble.” “Theres nothing，” I answered, taking everything out of my pockets and bag. Seeing that, they apologized to me in the small room. 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。“我”去超市购物，结账后走出超市时，警报器却响了，工作人员认定“我”偷了东西，对“我”严加审问。“我”该怎么办？精彩范文“Theres nothing，” I answe
50、red, taking everything out of my pockets and bag. Actually it suddenly struck me that I didnt have to do it, especially when my lawyer was not here, and they had no right at all to search me. But not wanting to be late for my appointment, I complied. Then they asked a salesgirl to examine me. Of cou
51、rse they didnt find anything. But they still wouldnt let me go. After a while, the security man asked me to raise my feet. I did, and was surprised to find a small piece of paper on the bottom of my shoea label. That was the very thing that had brought me such great trouble.Seeing that, they apologi
52、zed to me in the small room. They should have apologized in public, shouldnt they? Shops are supposed to respect the customers, rather than humiliate and bring suffering on them. Therefore, I filed a stronglyworded complaint to their management office demanding a proper explanation and apology, hopi
53、ng this kind of “misunderstanding” would never happen again.Test 4阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, b
54、ut they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, thats a big dog！
55、” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs r
56、elief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶)Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at
57、passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh. At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of
58、it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the
59、wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now. The car abruptly stopped in front of him. A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived. 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章中的主人公Mac与朋友骑车旅行，落单的Mac却遭遇了饿狼的追击，就在Mac以为自己难逃厄运之时精彩范文The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and dashed for th
60、e side of the car. He slammed the car door wildly as the hungry wolf was almost reaching him. Paul quickly unlocked the door and Mac dived into the car breathlessly. The hungry wolf seemed unwilling to give up on its prey. It kept growling outside, trying to enter the car. The frightened three sat i
61、nside, praying that the wolf would leave as soon as possible. After what seemed a long time, the exhausted wolf walked away, disappearing in the woods.A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived. Mac was still trembling with fear. Seeing his friends, he rushed to them and told how he narrowly es
62、caped the danger from the fierce wolf. All of them thanked Paul and Becky, who had been so kind to stop their car to save Macs life, and watched the couple driving off. The three friends then were again on their bicycles, continuing their trip. Type 2励志类Test 1阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的
63、词数应为150左右。Once, there were several researchers in a forest, trying to study the rarest creature in the world. No one had ever seen it, and its existence was only known by some remains, and by its highly characteristic call. The call was similar to that of a dog with a toothache: “Oooh . waooOOOH！”Ev
64、eryone expected to be the first to photograph and study it. The “beast” was active at night, so during the day the researchers would pass their time making a study of other matters or in discussion. The most remarkable of them was Sir Walter TickFondler. He was a very pleasant and reliable man, with
65、 a tiny little moustache and a huge explorers hat. Every day, before tea, he would spend an hour sitting at his desk, putting all his equipment and bits and pieces in their proper place. He did this with careful precision. The notebook went right at the far edge of the desk, on the right hand side,
66、slightly beyond the recorder, and next to the five pencils which were always in the same order: black, red, blue, green and yellow. The lamp was always towards the end of the desk, next to the camera, on the left . and so it was with all his things, even with the smallest of details. Everyone was am
67、used that this gentleman was such a perfect example of the famous English obsession with order.The researchers spent a great many nights in that area before the creature appeared, and before it did so some of them even doubted its existence. It, however, appeared suddenly, while everything was quiet
68、.Only a few meters away, the researchers heard its call which was the famous call of the dog with a toothache, loud and clear. It lasted only an instant, because all the commotion (骚动) of the researchers scrabbling for their cameras and notebooks scared the creature, and it shot off before it could
69、apparently be seen or studied in any detail.The next morning the researchers all compared their findings. They were all wondering how Sir Walter TickFondler made it. 写作指导【所给故事内容】几名研究人员在森林里试图拍摄一种没有人见过的、在晚上比较活跃的稀有动物。白天他们都在研究讨论其他事情，只有Sir Walter TickFondler一直在有条不紊地把所有大小设备摆放到合适的位置。一天晚上，稀有动物突然现身，但大家匆忙做记录的
70、骚动把动物吓到了。在大家还没看清时，它就消失不见了。【续写段首句分析】根据段首句1“第二天早晨研究者们都在比较他们的发现”，我们可作如下思考：1他们都记录了些什么呢？因为在研究者还没有看清这只动物之前，它就被吓跑了，所以研究者记录的东西肯定不太全面，由此可推测，有的人记录了叫声、有的人记录了它是如何移动的，有的人还拍到了(photograph)它的尾巴和腿等。2谁的记录最完整呢？结合原文及续写第二段的开头语可知，Sir Walter TickFondler总是将一切都安排得井井有条，在那么仓促、突然的情况下，他的记录应该是最完整的，可推测他不仅拍到了几张完整的照片，而且记录了它的叫声。根据段首
71、句2 “他们都很好奇 Sir Walter TickFondler是怎么做到的”，我们可作如下思考：1他是怎么做到的呢？因为他总是把东西摆放得井井有条，所以在黑暗中他也可以快速地找到录音机、相机、笔记本和笔等。2这一出色表现会给他带来什么呢？这次完整、清晰地记录这一罕见动物的事迹使他名声大噪。【结合原文，安排续写情节】第一段：第二天早上，研究人员比较他们的发现有的人记录了叫声(call)，有的记录了它是如何移动的，有的甚至拍到了(photograph)它的尾巴和腿他们为记录到的东西互相祝贺当他们看到Sir Walter TickFondler的记录时都震惊了他拍到了几张完整的照片，且录到了它的
72、叫声，并就此做了一次详细(detail)、完美的(perfect)展示第二段：其他研究人员很好奇他是怎么做到的他们祝贺Sir Walter TickFondler，也明白了他为什么总是把东西摆放得井井有条(order) 他可以快速地找到录音机(recorder)、相机、笔记本等Sir Walter TickFondler对世界上最稀有的生物(the rarest creature)的研究贡献使他为众人所知精彩范文The next morning the researchers all compared their findings. Some had managed to record its
73、 call, others had noted down how it moved, and the most fortunate one had even managed to photograph parts of its tail and legs. They all congratulated each other on what they had got, but when they saw what Sir Walter TickFondler had got, they were shocked. He had taken several complete photos, as
74、well as recording its cry. Then he made a perfect fullcolor presentation on the creature in detail!They were all wondering how Sir Walter TickFondler made it. Then they ran to congratulate him as the best researcher of them all. And they understood that his obsession with order had been the best way
75、 to prepare himself for working in the dark. This had meant Sir Walter TickFondler had no problem in finding and using the recorder, the camera, the notebook and the pencils, all in a flash and without having to look for them. Of course, the work Sir Walter TickFondler did on “the rarest creature in
76、 the world” made him wellknown.Test 2 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。My mother once read me a speech she had made at a local high school that life is learning to deal with Plan B, hoping that shed answer my endless questions.Ever since I was very young, I have turned to my parents
77、, grandparents, friends and teachers for guidance. Afraid to make a mistake, Ive asked countless whattodo, because I only wanted to do things in the “right” way, even if it didnt mean doing something. Sometime during my high school years, I changed. Maybe it was when I decided to try for the lead in
78、 “Beauty and the Beast”. Never mind that I would have to memorize lines, and I would take the chance that I might fail. The day of tryouts I was still telling myself, “If you dont think you can do it in the right way, just dont go.” My heart was pounding so quickly when I got up to sing that I wasnt
79、 certain the people holding the audition would hear me. But something happened. When I opened my mouth to sing, the sound was loud, powerful and sweet. I reached the high notes that sometimes were beyond my reach and nailed them. With no crack in my voice, I was trying to do my best even though I mi
80、ght fail. But I didnt. That audition probably wasnt the end of the trap that kept me from trying but it was definitely an important part of the process. I realize that if I want to live life to the fullest, I have to take chances. Now, I do take these chances, with steps every day, voicing my opinio
81、ns in class discussions, reaching a high note when I sing, performing in other school plays, riding my horse over a threefoot jump, and doing running, my favorite sport. However, three years ago, I fell from my horse going around a hunt course, hurting my legs so I couldnt carry a bag or take gym fo
82、r four months.It was both frightening and limiting for I couldnt ride for nearly a year. I have come to realize what my mother read me. 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。“我”是一个谨慎的人，在参加音乐剧的试镜之前一直如此。但是令“我”改变的是那次试镜。就在“我”大胆开始做喜欢的事时，意外发生了精彩范文It was both frightening and limiting for I couldnt ride for nearly a year. The inju
83、ry meant I couldnt ride my horse, which I loved. However, I still liked to run, so I started running with my mother. No stopwatches. No cheering crowds. But I have finally pulled through and learned to push myself. Im taking a tough science course now and have overtaken my classmates in many courses
84、. Im taking chances. If I try hard enough, Ill get improvement in my acting and science course regardless of making a mistake.I have come to realize what my mother read me. Even though my parents, grandparents, friends and teachers dont always have the answer to my whattodo question, they will be th
85、ere to support me. I try, because my mother stated in her speech that life is learning to deal with Plan B. More importantly, I now know that the plans I make for my life will become easier and easier with every chance I take.Test 3阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。If theres one thin
86、g I cant stand people saying, its, “Im no good at anything . I dont have any talent.” I just dont buy that at all. To me, everyone has at least one talent, and while it sometimes takes you a lifetime to find, it does exist. There was a time when I didnt believe that. What changed my mind was a seemi
87、ngly small event that took place in 1953.At that time I was a high school student. I was a funnylooking skinny boy named Euenge Orowitz, who weighed barely 100 pounds. I was a good student, but as far as I was concerned, in just about every other department I was a loser. I wanted to fit in, to be s
88、omeone and do something well. But I hadnt found anything I was good at. One sunny afternoon, our gym class went out to the schools running track. The teacher taught us all various track and field events. I was a loser in all of them. Then came the javelin (标枪). Suddenly something inside me began say
89、ing, “Try it! Try it！” I had to wait my turn, though, trying not to look too eager. Finally, when everyone had had a chance to throwthe best throw going about 30 yardsI looked at the teacher.“Hey, Orowitz, you want to try？” he asked.Embarrassed, I looked down, but managed to nod my head.“Well, come
90、on then，” he said impatiently, and handed me the javelin. Behind me I could hear some of my classmates laughing. As I grasped the javelin in my hand, I was seized with a strange feelinga newfound excitement. For some crazy reason, I was relaxed over what I was about to do, even though Id never done
91、it before. I raised the javelin over my head, took six quick steps and let the thing go. The same voice that had urged me to throw it, now told me it was a good throw.I watched as the spear (标枪) took off. My heart quickened . That night I took the javelin home with me. 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章中的作者是一个没有自信的、瘦
92、弱的男孩。体育课上大家轮流扔标枪，轮到作者时，他听到了背后同学们的嘲笑声，但他仍然勇敢的扔出标枪，奇迹发生了精彩范文I watched as the spear (标枪) took off. My heart quickened constantly as the javelin drew a beautiful curve in the azure sky. “31 yards！” the teachers astonished voice hit my eardrum directly, making all the sounds fade into total silence. Cont
93、rary to their previous laughs, my classmates looked at me with adoration. It was the best throw that put me to the top of the list. The teacher announced excitedly, “If it hadnt been for the javelin, the skinny boy who named Euenge Orowitz would never have found his talent.” When the teacher decided
94、 to send it home with me as a gift, I gave him a big hug, shrieking with excitement.That night I took the javelin home with me. I seized it desperately as if it was my life line. No sooner had the sports meeting ended than I was chosen to be a member of the track team. Since then, I have participate
95、d in various races and gotten excellent scores in the javelin competition. Although Im a professional javelin thrower now, Ill never forget that sunny afternoon in 1953, which let me approach my own talent. If youre still trapped in the worry of your lack of confidence, let the thing go and try to c
96、hallenge yourself right now like my first flying javelin in the azure sky.Test 4阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。I have a friend named Monty Roberts who owns a horse ranch (养马场). He has let me use his house to put on fundraising events. The last time I was there he introduced me by
97、saying, “I want to tell you a story. It all goes back to a story about a young man who was the son of an itinerant horse trainer who would go from stable to stable, race track to race track, farm to farm and ranch to ranch, training horses. As a result, the boys high school career was continually in
98、terrupted. When he was a senior, he was asked to write a paper about what he wanted to be and do when he grew up.”“That night he wrote a sevenpage paper describing his goal of someday owning a horse ranch. He wrote about his dream in great detail and he even drew a diagram of a 200acre ranch, showin
99、g the location of all the buildings, the stables and the track. Then he drew a detailed floor plan for a 4,000squarefoot house that would sit on a 200acre dream ranch.”“He put a great deal of his heart into the project and the next day he handed it in to his teacher. Two days later he received his p
100、aper back. On the front page was a large red F with a note that read, See me after class.”“The boy with the dream went to see the teacher after class and asked, Why did I receive an F？ The teacher said, This is an unrealistic dream for a young boy like you. You have no money. You come from an itiner
101、ant family. You have no resources. Owning a horse ranch requires a lot of money. You have to buy the land. You have to pay for the original breeding stock and later youll have to pay large stud fees. Theres no way you could ever do it. Then the teacher added, If you will rewrite this paper with a mo
102、re realistic goal, I will reconsider your grade.”“The boy went home and thought about it long and hard .” Monty then turned to the group and said, 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章中作者的朋友向他讲述了一个故事，在这个故事中不谙世事的男孩拥有一个看起来不切实际的梦想精彩范文“The boy went home and thought about it long and hard. He asked his father for advice. His
103、 father said, Look, son, you have to make up your own mind on this very important decision. Finally, the boy handed in the same paper, making no changes at all. He stated, You can keep the F and Ill keep my dream.”Monty then turned to the group and said, “I tell you this story because you are sittin
104、g in my 4,000squarefoot house in the middle of my 200acre horse ranch.” He added, “The best part of the story is that two years ago that same teacher brought 30 kids to camp out on my ranch for a week. When the teacher was leaving, he said, Look, Monty, when I was your teacher, I was something of a
105、dream stealer. Fortunately you had enough courage not to give up yours.” “So dont let anyone steal your dreams. Follow your heart, no matter what，” Monty at last concluded.Type 3情感类Test 1阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Michelle was eight years old when she heard her mom and dad tal
106、king about her little brother, Jack, now only an infant (婴儿). He was very sick and they were completely out of money. Only a very costly operation could save the baby now but there was no one to whom they could turn for the money needed. She heard Daddy say to her tearful mom, “Only a miracle can sa
107、ve him now.”At the words, Michelle went to her bedroom and took out all the coins from her little moneybox. After counting the coins three times, she slipped out the back door and made her way to the drugstore six blocks away . She waited for a long time before the pharmacist (药剂师) turned around and
108、 asked her, “And what do you want？”“Well, its about my brother，” Michelle answered. “Hes really, really sick . and I want to buy a miracle.”“I beg your pardon？” said the pharmacist. “His name is Jack and he has something very bad growing inside his body and my daddy said only a miracle can save him
109、now. So how much does a miracle cost？”“We dont sell miracles here, little girl. Im sorry but I cant help you，” the pharmacist said. “Listen, I have the money to pay for it.” And with these words, Michelle poured out all the coins from her pockets. At this time, a welldressed man behind Michelle stoo
110、ped down and asked the little girl. “Im selling the miracle you want. Tell me how much money you have.”“One dollar and eleven cents.” Michelle answered in a low voice. “And its all the money I have, but I can get some more.”“Well，” smiled the man. “A dollar and eleven centsthe great price of a mirac
111、le for your little brother. Show me the place where your brother lives.”Holding the mans hand firmly, Michelle took him home. When asked why he chose to help the family, the man detailed, 写作指导【所给故事内容】八岁的Michelle的弟弟生病了，但是家里没有钱去救她弟弟。于是她去药店想用1美元11美分买个可以救她弟弟的“奇迹”。但是药剂师没法满足Michelle的请求。 而这时，一位穿着讲究的男士说他可以卖
112、这个奇迹，并让Michelle带他回家。【续写段首句分析】根据段首句1 “Michelle紧紧握着这位男士的手，把他带回了家”，我们可作如下思考：1父母看到这位男士会是什么反应呢？看到孩子手牵着陌生人回家，父母肯定会感到很吃惊。很可能会询问这个人是做什么的，有什么企图。2男士会是什么身份呢？既然可以跟着小女孩回家，这位男士很可能有办法治好女孩弟弟的病，所以他很可能是位医生或者是一个很有钱的人。3男士会如何帮助小男孩呢？如果是医生的话，肯定会给予治疗；如果是有钱人，那么就会送小男孩去医院，付医药费，直至小男孩痊愈。根据段首句2 “当被问到为什么选择帮助这个家庭时，这位男士进行了详述”，我们可作如
113、下思考：这位男士为什么会帮助Michelle呢？可能是他被Michelle的真诚和她为弟弟的付出而感动；可能是被小女孩相信有奇迹(miracle)存在的坚定信念所打动；也有可能是自己也有过类似的经历，所以感同身受。【结合原文，安排续写情节】第一段：Michelle把这个人带到了自己家当她告诉父母自己买到了奇迹(miracle)后，妈妈很惊讶这个人说Michelle确实用1美元11美分(one dollar and eleven cents)买了一个奇迹，他提议把Jack送往医院送Jack去医院后，这个人支付了高额的手术费，手术(operation)成功，Jack渐渐康复父母的感激无以言表，但是
114、不理解这个人为何帮助他们一家第二段：当被问到为什么选择帮助这家人时，这位男士进行了详述他说那天在药店(the drugstore)无意中听到Michelle和药剂师的谈话他被小女孩的真诚深深打动了，所以决定帮助她救治弟弟(little brother)父母向这个人表示感谢精彩范文Holding the mans hand firmly, Michelle took him home. “Dad, Mom, I have bought a miracle.” Michelle said excitedly. Feeling surprised, her mother asked in a low
115、 voice, “Im sorry, sir .” “Its true, madam. Michelle has paid me one dollar and eleven cents for the miracle. Why not send Jack to hospital？” Though completely confused, her parents followed the man to send Jack to the hospital. He paid for the treatment and Michelles brother took a successful opera
116、tion. With Jack recovering day by day, his parents were extremely grateful to the man but still wondered why he offered help.When asked why he chose to help the family, the man detailed, “That day, I was wandering in the drugstore when I overheard the conversation between Michelle and the pharmacist
117、. She was so innocent and did all she could to save her little brother, which deeply touched me. Your daughter has a heart of gold.” Looking down at their lovely girl and gently stroking her head, the couple thanked the man again.Test 2阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Mo was waiting
118、 in the corridor outside her class. She was feeling sick. She had two exams that day and physics was the first. She really hated physics. It was her worst subject. Terry looked back at her from the front of the line, and then looked away quickly. Mo thought she looked guilty. She didnt have a proble
119、m with physics. She didnt have a problem with anything . Miss Perfect!“Hi, Mo, its your favorite exam today.” said Nima, laughing as she joined the line. Terry was looking at Mo again. “So whats wrong with her？” asked Nima. “I thought you were friends.” “Yes, so did I，” said Mo. “But she hasnt spoke
120、n to me for two weeks now. She promised to help me review for the physics exam too, but then she ignored all my calls and texts. And when I rang her house, her mum just told me she was busy. Shes forgotten who her friends are！” said Mo angrily. “Are you listening to me？” Mr Reed was talking to the c
121、lass and the other students were going into the exam room. Mo gave Nima a worried look and followed them.Mo couldnt answer question number five. She looked up and saw Terry sitting two rows in front of her. Mo couldnt believe it! Terry was holding her phone on her knee under the table and reading fr
122、om it. Is that how Terry always got such good grades? She felt really angry at Terry, but she didnt know what to do. She thought about telling the teacher, but what would everyone else think of her? “Stop writing and put your pens down.” said Mr Reed as he started to collect the exam papers. Oh no,
123、Mo hadnt answered two of the questions. She was going to fail again!Mo wanted to talk to Terry at lunch time, but she couldnt find her anywhere. The next exam was history. That was Mos favorite subject but she wasnt feeling good. Mo went to the library to study, but she couldnt concentrate. She didn
124、t know what to do about Terry. She thought about telling a teacher, but everyone would hate her if she did that. “It isnt fair！” she thought. “Terry was getting good grades by cheating all that time.” thought Mo. Just then, Mr Reed walked past her table. “Mr Reed .”Mo was sitting behind Terry again
125、in the history exam that afternoon. Mo was feeling terrible. Why had she told Mr Reed? But it was too late now. And anyway, Terry didnt want to be her friend! Mr Reed wanted her to look at him and nod if she saw that Terry was cheating in the exam.She was working on the last question when she saw th
126、at Terry had her phone under the table. Mo was walking towards the school gate, when she heard footsteps behind her. 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Mo和Terry是一对好朋友，临近考试前Terry却没能兑现约定帮助Mo复习功课。而在考试中，Mo发现Terry疑似作弊精彩范文She was working on the last question when she saw that Terry had her phone under the table. Though feelin
127、g uneasy and restless, she looked at Mr Reed and nodded. With her eyes glued to the phone, it wasnt until the teacher patted on her back that Terry noticed Mr Reed. Immediately, Terry was asked to leave. Terry rushed out of the class, crying all the way. Instead of feeling relaxed, Mo had ants in he
128、r pants. She felt guilty for telling Mr Reed about it, which had resulted in Terrys not finishing her exam.Mo was walking towards the school gate, when she heard footsteps behind her. She turned to find it was Terry who had just come out of the teachers office. Feeling embarrassed, Mo wanted to run
129、away. Nevertheless, Terry stopped her and said, “Mo, Im sorry I havent kept my promise to help you review for the physics exam, but my father has been badly ill for two weeks. Today he had a significant operation. I was so worried about him that I kept on reading the texts on the phone sent by my mo
130、ther to get the latest news about him, so Mr Reed forgave me. Can you forgive me？” “Of course! Lets go to the hospital to see your father.” Mo couldnt wait to reply.Test 3阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。In high school, Dad got me to play football in the first place. I enjoyed throw
131、ing the ball around with my friends, but I didnt think I had what it took to play on a team. “Im no football player，” I told my dad. “Youll never know what youre capable of unless you give it a try, Adam，” he told me. So, I did. It would give me a muchneeded sense of belonging and some confidence. I
132、 remember how proud he was when I won some awards and the hug he gave me after I received my congratulation letter. There was rarely a game where Dad wasnt on the sidelines, cheering me on.Four years of hard preseason football camps came down to my last game. I urged my dad to bring our video camera
133、.I waved at my parents before the opening kickoff, and put on my game face. My pads broke as I made contact with the offensive players. I grabbed at the clothes of their running back and dragged him to the field. A loud cheer came from the sidelines. There was Dad with the camera, cheering like craz
134、y. By the end of the game, I had stopped seven players and a sacking (擒杀)my best performance ever, a perfect end to my career. I ran into my dads arms. I was sweaty and smelly, but he hugged me anyway. I couldnt wait to watch the tapeexperience every moment again.As soon as we got in the house, I to
135、ok the tape out of the camera and put it in the player. My dad, mom, sister and I sat down in the living room in front of the big screen TV. I pressed Play. The video started. The two teams, lined up before the game, then the running back taking the handoff, running up to the line, me reaching out,
136、and then . the sky and clouds! I could hear my dad screaming “Way to go, Adam！” as images of the sky shook up and down on screen.I leaned forward to see the next big play. The tape ended and Dad was quiet. 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章中的作者在父亲的鼓励下，在橄榄球运动中过关斩将。在一次比赛中，作者希望爸爸可以帮忙记录整个比赛过程，结果精彩范文I leaned forward to se
137、e the next big play. Strangely the sky and clouds kept rooted on the screen, but the noise on the field and the cheering shouts from my Dad continuously occupied my ears. Almost instantly I realized that Dad must have dropped the video camera to the ground as he was crazily waving, but he was too th
138、rilled to notice anything. The voice on the screen ranged from “Good job, Adam！” to “Come on, get up！” and finally “Yahoo！” as he gave me a big hug. Watching the sky and clouds as the backdrop, I just silently listened.The tape ended and Dad was quiet. As Dad was uncomfortably shifting, I sensed the
139、 guilt in his heart. “Im sorry，” he said, “I failed to record you the whole game.” “No.” I firmly answered, “It was your cheers that fueled my courage in that fierce football game. For me, its the most precious part of the video.” Hearing my words, he smiled harder than ever before. During the incom
140、plete tape, I found the everhaunting melody of the football game and my entire life.Test 4阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Shay and his father had walked past a park where some boys Shay knew were playing baseball. Shay asked, “Do you think theyll let me play？” Shays father knew tha
141、t most of the boys would not want someone like Shay on their team, but the father also understood that if his son, mentally and physically disabled, was allowed to play, it would give him a muchneeded sense of belonging and some confidence.Shays father approached one of the boys on the field and ask
142、ed if Shay could play, not expecting much. The boy looked around and said, “Were losing by six runs (得分) and the game is in the eighth inning (局). I guess he can be on our team and well try to put him in to bat in the final inning.”Shay struggled over to the teams bench and put on a team shirt with
143、a broad smile and his father had a small tear in his eye and warmth in heart. The boys saw the fathers joy at his son being accepted.In the bottom of the eighth inning, Shays team scored a few runs but was still behind by three. In the top of the final inning, Shay put on a glove and played in the f
144、ield. Even though no hits came his way, he was obviously joyful just to be in the game and on the field. In the bottom of the final inning, Shays team scored again. Now, Shay was scheduled to be next at bat. Would they let Shay bat and give away their chance to win the game?Surprisingly, Shay was gi
145、ven the bat. Everyone knew that a hit was almost impossible. The first pitch (投) came and Shay missed. The pitcher again took a few steps forward to throw the ball softly towards Shay. As the pitch came in, Shay swung at the ball and hit a slow ground ball right back to the pitcher.The pitcher could
146、 have easily thrown the ball to the first baseman and that would have been the end of the game. That day, the boys from both teams helped bring a piece of true love and humanity into this world. 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章中的Shay是一个体弱多病的孩子，有一天Shay和爸爸路过棒球场，Shay很想加入其中一队上场打棒球，如此孱弱的Shay，能打好棒球吗？精彩范文The pitcher could
147、 have easily thrown the ball to the first baseman and that would have been the end of the game. Instead, the pitcher threw the ball right over the head of the first baseman, beyond the reach of all teammates. The audience and the players from both teams started screaming, “Shay, run to first！” Never
148、 in his life had Shay ever run that far but made it to first base, wideeyed and shocked. And then he surprisingly made it to the second and the third. At last Shay ran to home, stepped on the home base and was cheered as the hero who won the game for his team.That day, the boys from both teams helpe
149、d bring a piece of true love and humanity into this world. And it really did give him a real sense of belonging and much confidence. Unfortunately, Shay didnt make it to another summer and died that winter, having never forgotten being the hero and making his father so happy and coming home and seei
150、ng his mother in tears hug her little hero of the day.Type 4哲理类Test 1阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。It was in New Hampshire. Cody was an 11yearold boy. Just like other boys, he enjoyed running around the lake, and sometimes picked yellow daisies for his mothers kitchen table along
151、 the paths. But the thing he liked best was fishing. He went fishing whenever he had got a chance from the dock (船坞) at his familys cabin on an island in the middle of the lake and he was proud of his fishing skills.On the day before that years bass (鲈鱼) season opened, he and his father were fishing
152、 early in the evening, catching sunfish and perch with worms. Then he tied on a small silver lure (诱饵) and practiced casting. The lure struck the water, stirring up colored ripples in the sunset, and then silver ripples as the moon rose over the lake. It was an unusually quiet evening. The gentle br
153、eeze from the lake was so refreshing.After what seemed a long time, Cody noticed his fishing pole doubled over, and he knew at once that something huge was on the other end. His father watched with admiration as the boy skillfully worked the fish alongside the dock.Finally, he very carefully lifted
154、the exhausted fish from the water. It was the largest one he had ever seen, but it was a bass.The boy and his father looked at the handsome fish, gills playing back and forth in the moonlight. The father lit a match and looked at his watch. It was 10 pmtwo hours before the season opened. He looked a
155、t the bass, then at Cody.“Youll have to put the fish back, son，” he said.“Dad！” cried the boy.“There will be other fish，” said his father gently but firmly.“Not as big as this one，” cried the boy again.Cody looked around. Do we do right when no one is looking? 写作指导【所给故事内容】Cody与爸爸去新罕布什尔的某一片湖边钓鱼，Cody钓
156、到了一条很大的鲈鱼，但由于此时是鲈鱼禁渔期，爸爸要求他把鱼放回去，但Cody不愿意。【续写段首句分析】根据段首句1 “Cody 环顾四周”，我们可作如下思考：1Cody环顾四周的目的是什么呢？Cody想要留下那条钓到的大鲈鱼，所以此时他环顾四周应该是想确认周围有没有人。2如果没有人的话，他会怎么做呢？如果没有人，就算他把鲈鱼留下也不会被发现，他应该还会再次请求爸爸让他留下鲈鱼。3在儿子的再次请求下，爸爸会允许他留下鲈鱼吗？结合原文倒数第二段中的“said his father gently but firmly”和续写第二段的段首句可推测，爸爸是一个温柔但很有原则的人，就算周围没有人，应该还是
157、不会同意儿子留下鲈鱼。根据段首句2 “在没有人看到的时候，我们仍会做出正确的选择吗”，我们可作如下思考：1回忆生活中我们在没人的时候，是不是也能做出正确的选择？可举例说明：“周围没有人看”的这种场景日常生活中有很多，比如：在无人的街道上你会闯红灯吗？在没有老师监考的情况下你会作弊吗？2在没人的时候，应该怎么做呢？没人的时候，我们也应该坚持原则，拒绝诱惑。【结合原文，安排续写情节】第一段：Cody环顾四周，确定湖(lake)边没人在钓鱼 (fishing)Cody 再次看向爸爸(father)爸爸坚决(firmness)不同意Cody不得不把鲈鱼(bass)放回去他为失去这条鱼而叹息第二段：在没
158、有人看到的时候我们仍会做出正确的选择吗？ 列举生活中会让你陷入两难的例子讲述从这件小事中获得的人生感悟：不管有没有人在看(watching)，我们都应该学会坚持原则，拒绝诱惑(lure)精彩范文Cody looked around. No other men were fishing anywhere around the lake. He looked again at his father. Even though no one had seen them, nor could anyone ever know what time he caught the fish, the boy c
159、ould tell by the firmness in his fathers voice that the decision was final. He slowly worked the hook out of the lips of the huge bass and lowered it into the black water. The creature twisted its body and disappeared. The boy sighed at the loss of such an awesome fish.Do we do right when no one is
160、looking? Do we stop at the red light when the street is empty? Or do we never cheat in exams when no teacher is available? We would if we were taught to “put the fish back” when we were young. It was not about how we took advantage of someone or something, but about how we resisted a big lure when n
161、o one was watching.Test 2阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Dave was checking out at a local food store and started chatting with the cashier about his threeyearold daughters favorite food, which at that time was apple sauce. The cashier smiled and then told Dave that her own son who
162、was one year old also loved apple sauce. That got them talking a little about what was the most important for a child.Dave mentioned to the cashier that when children are young, parents need to spend as much time with them as possible, since the time goes by quickly. He also had two teenage daughter
163、s and had to miss out on a lot of their younger days because he worked outside the home as a busy manager. But now he was able to stay at home and he really cherished each minute and milestone.The cashier then sadly told Dave that she didnt see her son much because she worked two jobs and that she w
164、anted to be able to give him the best of everything so that someday he could go to college and be prosperous. This made Dave sad. On the one hand he understood, but on the other hand, he knew how much more important firsthand time with kids was against jobs and money.Dave wanted to do something nice
165、 for her and also hoped he might get her to think a little about the importance of time and company. Dave had just been blessed with a little extra money he was not expecting, so he thought he could bless this lady by giving her $100 and a note telling her to take at least one day off and just spend
166、 time with her son, doing whatever he wanted to do. Maybe they could have lunch out and eat some delicious ice cream.In the note, Dave told her to accept the money. The cashier was surprised and deeply touched. 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章中的Dave在结账时与店内的收银员聊了起来，原来两人都因忙于养家而错过了与孩子的相处时间。于是，善良的Dave决定精彩范文In the note,
167、 Dave told her to accept the money. He told her to use the money to spend a wonderful day with her son. He then called the food store and told the cashier what he had done for her. He said he was a customer she had helped out a few days before and he wanted to do something nice for her in return. He
168、 then went to the store and gave the money to the cashier.The cashier was surprised and deeply touched. She refused Dave, gave him a big hug and told him that he neednt give her the money because this incident had taught her what was of the most importance to her and to her son. Its important to hel
169、p a child get into a better college, but who can say for certain that a mothers love and time will not make the same child more excellent?Test 3阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。My fiance (未婚夫) and I were excited about shopping for our first home. But our funds were limited, and none
170、 of the houses in our price range seemed satisfactory. One agent recommended a house in particular. Although her description sounded wonderful, the price was beyond our range, so we declined. But she kept urging us to have a look at least.We finally did and it was love at first sight. It was our hom
171、e, small and charming, overlooking a quiet lake. Walking through the rooms and talking with the owners, a nice elderly couple, we felt the warmth and happiness of the marriage within that home. As perfect as it was, the price remained too high for us. But every day, we would sit by the lake, looking
172、 at the house and dreaming of what it would be like to live there. Days later, we made an offerfar below the asking price. Surprisingly, they didnt laugh at us. They renewed their offer instead. It was also much more than we could afford, but far less than the original asking price.The next day, we
173、got a disappointing message that another buyer had offered a much higher price. Even so, we decided to talk with the owners directly. We made our final offer, which still was thousands of dollars less than the other buyers bid. We knew it, but we had to try. Nobody knew if we could get it. We went t
174、o the owners home after we made our final offer. The owner looked at us and said, 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章中的年轻夫妇看中了一套房子，但奈何价格太高，二人负担不起，更令人心焦的是出现了比他们出价更高的竞争者。为了心仪的房子，夫妇二人决定最后一试精彩范文We went to the owners home after we made our final offer. The other potential buyer came with confidence. The owner smiled, sayin
175、g, “Tell me the reason why you need this house. The one whose answer satisfies me will take the possession of it.” “For my business.” The buyer answered without any hesitation. After thinking for a while, I replied, “I can feel warmth and love of the marriage in the house, which I have been longing
176、for.”The owner looked at us and said, “I want to sell my house to you！” A surge of shock hit me. “Why? He offered a higher price than I could afford.” I asked, surprised. “I want to give it to those who can fill it with love instead of money.” We appreciated him and felt a sense of warmth, deeply mo
177、ved. I realized that a sincere heart was more significant than money.Test 4阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。A merchant sent his son to learn the secret of happiness from the wisest man. The young man wandered through the desert for forty days until he reached a beautiful castle at t
178、he top of a mountain. There lived the wise man that the young man was looking for.When he entered a room, he saw lots of strange views: merchants coming and going, people chatting in the corners, a band playing sweet music, and there was a table with different kinds of delicious food on it. The wise
179、 man talked to everybody, and the young man had to wait for two hours until it was time for him.The wise man listened attentively to the reason for the boys visit, but told him that at that moment he did not have the time to explain to him the secret of happiness. He offered his suggestion that the
180、young man take a walk around his castle and come back in two hours time.“However, I want to ask you a favor，” he added, handing the boy a teaspoon, in which he poured two drops of oil. “While you walk, carry this spoon and dont let the oil spill (溢出)”The young man began to walk around the castle, al
181、ways keeping his eyes fixed on the spoon. At the end of two hours, he returned. “So，” asked the wise man, “did you see the beautiful curtains hanging from the windows of my dining room? Did you see the garden that the master of gardeners took ten years to create? Did you notice the beautiful furnitu
182、re in my library？”Embarrassed, the young man admitted that he had seen nothing. His only concern was not to spill the drops of oil the wise man had given him.“So, go back and see the wonders of my world，” said the wise man. “You cant trust a man if you dont know his house.”Now more at ease, the youn
183、g man took the spoon and walked around the castle again. “But where are the two drops of oil I gave you？” asked the wise man. 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文中的年轻人受父亲嘱托，决心向智者学习幸福的奥秘。但是智者却让他拿着装了油的勺子参观城堡，这是何用意？精彩范文Now more at ease, the young man took the spoon and walked around the castle again. He enjoyed the wonders
184、 with his mouth open. Never had him seen such breathtaking world. The colorful curtains had embroidery of animals on them. The flowers in the garden were smiling under the care of the gardener. The young man was so lost in the paradise that he didnt notice the walk come to the end. When he returned,
185、 he said, “How charming this castle is! I would be happy if I lived here.”“But where are the two drops of oil I gave you？” asked the wise man. Embarrassed again, the young man apologized, “I forgot the spoon totally. My only concern was the attractive sights.” “But you have got the happiness”， smiled the wise man. And the young man nodded. That is the secret of happiness! Happiness doesnt mean perfection, but a heart to appreciate the beauty of surroundings, which may give you mental satisfaction.
