1、(2011年广东省六校第一次联考题)你们班同学上周五就“应该送什么样的礼物给同学或朋友”的话题展开了讨论，下面是讨论记录。60%的同学到商店买礼物好商店的礼物精致、美观，适合赠送40%的同学自己制作礼物好自己制作礼物能够展现个人才能，培养动手能力，增强节约意识你的看法？【写作内容】1.讨论的时间和话题；2.同学们的意见和各自的理由；3.你的看法。【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。One possible version：Our class had a heated discussion last Friday onwhat gift
2、s we should give to our classmates and friends.Sixty percent of our classmates said that they wouldbuy gifts from a shop because they think such gifts aredelicate and pretty,thus proper for giving.However,the others prefer to make the gifts by themselves.Onthe one hand,this can show their personal o
3、utstandingskills and help them develop their abilities to do thingsthemselves and on the other hand,they can use materials from home to make gifts,which can strengthen their awareness of importanceof saving.In my opinion,giving gifts made by ourselvesis a better way to express our feelings.【思路点拨】第一步
4、，审题。本篇基础写作要求写出一个调查问卷的结果。问卷调查中，观点态度类通常可以使用现在时。第二步，确定内容逻辑，表中数据与理由的对应非常清楚，前面是人数，后面是理由。数据较少，因此分句可以相对自由。第三步，确定句与句之间的逻辑，选择恰当的连接词。一、调查采访类命题形式可大致分为两大类1.表格类作文：特点是简洁、直观，能够分门别类列出多项写作内容，多用于考查考生提取、分析、表达表格信息的能力。表格类作文通常是调查研究结果对比、人物性格爱好对比、过去现状对比、呈现辩论双方论点等基础写作。如2007年广东英语高考基础写作要求考生对比、分析“男女生心中偶像”的调查结果。2提纲类作文：此类形式的写作要点
5、都已经列出，相对较容易，如2009年广东英语高考基础写作要求我们说明一次对中学生近视情况的采访情况。二、技巧点拨1.开门见山，注意时态。第一句开门见山进入题目要求的写作内容(如概括时间、人物、发生了什么事等)，并根据写作文体和事件发生的时间，使用适当时态。调查研究和辩论讨论，发表议论和个人观点等句子通常使用一般现在时。Last week,we carried out a survey about idolsamong 2,600 students.The result shows that more and more people tend touse computers in their d
6、aily life.(撰写调查结果，使用一般现在时)2.转换表格，写成短文。考生必须重新组织表格内容，不能依据表格逐条翻译，不能出现如“1.2.3.”的列点翻译，更不能写成短语式的提纲，而要写成适当文体的短文。3.变换表达，丰富语汇。表格类作文多出现相同内容的描述或分析。为避免重复，建议使用不同语言和句式表达同类信息。三、常用表达1.介绍、引入写作内容。make/do/conduct/carry out a survey about/on sth.开展了一项关于某事的调查have/organize a(heated)debate/discussion over sth.进行/组织有关某事的(激
7、烈)辩论/讨论2.呈现数据或结果。The survey/result/debate shows that调查/结果/辩论表明As the data/table shows正如数据/表格所示，3.进行对比或比较。常使用but,while,however,on the contrary等。As the data shows,“parents”ranks the second for thegirls,but the fourth for the boys.正如数据所示，“父母”在女生心中排第二位，但在男生心中排第四位。The survey shows that half of the girls
8、choose film andTV stars as idols,while 48%of the boys choose sportsstars.调查表明，50%的受访女生选择影视明星作为偶像，然而48%的受访男生选择体育明星作为偶像。4.呈现不同人的观点和看法。SomeOthers一些人，另一些人使用定语从句：those who，the people who那些的人in ones opinion,as far as sb.is concerned据某人看来sb.think/believe/argue/consider/reflect that某人认为One possible version：
9、Nowadays,with the development of the Internet,more and more people like to use Web Language inwriting and communication and some people evenspeak Chinese mixed with English letters,so our classhave had a discussion about whether we should useWeb Language.40%of the students think/hold the view that i
10、t iskind of ridiculous and hard to understand and in theiropinion,using Web language not only has bad effectson learning English,but also makes the Chineselanguage less standard and pure,finally ruining ourmother tongue.However,the others,60%of our class,are fond of Web Language for the reason that it issimple,convenientandhelpfulinexpressingthemselves and whats more,it makes the languagemore interesting.In my opinion,its not a good habit to use WebLanguage.It may be popular as some people think,butyou may also make yourself misunderstood.
