1、短文改错方法与练习短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（）并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。1.I am good in playing football.2.I can return to school now.3.I like playing piano.theat1）
2、错词 2）多词 3）缺词 更正删除补漏短文改错应注意的问题四不改:标点符号不改。大小写不改。词序错误不改。在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。做短文该错应采取三个步骤1.通读短文，掌握大意2.细读全文，逐句观察3.复读全文，验证答案1.通读全文，掌握大意时注意从句子的角度分析：五个一致（1）查时态是否一致 1、They offered me coffee and other drinks,we have a good time talking and laughing2、My favourite sport is football.I was a member of ou
3、rfootball team.3、I remembered her words and calm down.had am calmed（2）查主谓是否一致 1、Everyone borrows a book andwrite nothing to 2、Playing football not only makes ushealthy,but also give us pleasure 3、there is many policemen looking intothe matterwrites gives are（3）查指代是否一致1、They must study hard if we stu
4、dents want to go tothe college.2、I used to love chemistry,physics,maths both ofthem-3、I liked those classes because I felt that it helpedme a lot.We all they（4）查上下文修饰语是否一致 1、They want to know about China and ask me a lot ofquestion.2、We study quite a few subject.3、She said that she and my classmate
5、all love me.4、Ill spend all the whole weekend reading andprepare for it.questions subjects classmates preparing 5）查行文逻辑是否一致 1、It is a very important exam but I cant afford tofail it.2、Most people can quickly get for help from a doctoror go to a hospital since they are ill.3、She was smiling but noddi
6、ng at me.I remembered.so when and 2.细读全文，逐句找错主要是找每个句子中语法错误动词形，名词数还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟.介词短语须关注习惯用法要记住冠词连词常光顾 一般过去时与一般现在时错用，尤其and 前后动词时态不一致。第三人称单数形式错用，谓语动词与主语不一致。缺少谓语动词或错用（尤其缺be动词）主动语态与被动语态错用 谓语与非谓语动词互改（doing/to do/done）此考点归纳的是动词考点，它包括：1)My picture and prize is on the desk.2)She liked it very much and reads
7、 it to the class.3)Of course,when my mother was asked,“Have you”4)There will have an English film in the school hall tonight.5)After that,the boy decided not to a teacher.6)After have a rest,my father went out for a walk.7)After an hour or so we began to feel very interesting in it.are _readbe be ha
8、ving 第三人称单数形式错用 一般过去时与一般现在时错用 主动语态与被动语态错用 缺少动词 谓语动词错用 谓语与非谓语动词互改 非谓语动词doing/to do/done互改 短文改错的名词考点主要涉及1）名词的单复数问题，即在该用复数的地方误用其单数，或在该用单数的地方误用其复数。2）混淆可数名词与不可数名词 1)so that Ill get good marks in all my subject.2)Their word were a great encouragement to me.3)After class we become stranger at once.4)I look
9、ed at his other hands.5)We write to each other all the times.subjects wordsstrangershandtime名词的单复数问题 混淆可数名词与不可数名词 1 2.Unfortunate,there are too many people in my family.2 He asked angry if we had finished the work.3 Finding information on the Net is easily.4 Last Sunday,police cars hurried to the ta
10、ller building in New York.5 he played strong and loudly music till four oclock in the morning unfortunatelyangrilyeasy修饰名词、be或系动词后要用形容词，然而误用副词 修饰动词、形容词、过去分词、整个句子用副词，然而用形容词 错用比较级和最高级 tallest loud 修饰整个句子用副词 修饰动词用副词 be或系动词后要用形容词 比较级和最高级的错用 修饰名词 要用形容词 1.The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.2.
11、And Tom cant forget the food you cooked for her.3.One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher.4.I just smiled to me.theirhimit错误特点：1.代词性别错误 2.单数代词或复数代词误用 3.缺少人称代词 4.反身代词 四、代词格，细领悟 myself单数代词或复数代词误用 代词性别错误 缺少人称代词 反身代词 1)we do not seem to get much time to talk about together.2)Well talk wi
12、th our plan for the weekend after dinner.3)I am writing to thank you with your kind help.4)He was looking for a glass the cupboard.5)The man is sitting next his son.aboutforinto五、介词短语须关注介词错误，主要涉及以下两方面：1 介词的含义；2 固定搭配 如talk about/with/to,serve,wait等。习惯搭配错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。例如：1)Suddenly,I caught a
13、sight of my English teacher.2)My teacher advised me to keep my diary.aAfter a hour or so we began to feel very frightened.I decided to climb tree to see where we were.He fell in a love with the pretty girl.Good health is most important in our life.an a the 1.冠词（a/an/the)错误表现：a、an、the误用；根据需要增删冠词或修改。1
14、 We tried to repair it and there was nothing we could do.2 It is a very important exam but I must pass it.3 It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.2.连词改错对的考查主要涉及：1）and,but,or,so 错误。2）定语从句关系词，特别是which 和that错用。3）其他从句关系词的错用或漏用。butso or 以上句子 and,but,or,so 错误 4 I live in Beijing，that
15、 is the capital of China5 I dont know what they are getting along with Tom.6 Charles said,“As soon I see a really tall building,I want to climb it.whichhowas 定语从句关系词错用 关系词的错用或漏用 关系词的错用或漏用 下面我们再一起做两篇改错回顾一下其中的语法错误 At Christmas Eve,Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree.They choose a big o
16、ne.It was almost as taller as the room!They put them in the corner of the sitting room.Kate was covered it with a lot of Christmas light.The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment.There were a fire burning in the fire place,but the Christmas tree lights were shinning brightly.All of fa
17、mily members were singing and dancing happily._On_chose_tall_it动词形介词短语须关注，习惯用法要记住还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟动词形_名词数lights还要注意形和副_beautiful_andthe was动词形连词含义须关注_冠词没了须关注We had guests last night who have not stayed in a B&B hotel ago.They did not want breakfast because of they were going out early in the morning.Th
18、ey came back lately and had some tea.I come into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light.He was looking for a glass the cupboard.He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests.I just smiled to me and thought“What can I do?We are guests after al
19、l.”hadbeforelatecameandinideamyselfTheyThe Story about Growing Pains is my favorite American TV play because it is very interested.The play tell humorous stories that happen in Seavers family.With such stories it made people think about life,but therefore attracts the audience.It is also a window wh
20、ich we can learn about America society.And there were many meaningful things that are worth think of,such as the relationship between parents and children in a lot of American family.It is quite different from those in China.The play is very popular.Wed better not to miss the chance to enjoy it.inte
21、restingmakesandarethinkingfamiliesthatfromtells 回顾：改错3步骤1.通读短文，掌握大意2.细读全文，逐句观察3.复读全文，验证答案五个一致：时态、主谓、指代、上下文、行文逻辑通过口诀，找每个句子中语法错误看看是否改够10处，有没有需要补充现象 Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself.I like eating fryingtomatoes with eggs,and I thought it must to be easy to cook.My mom toldme how to preparing
22、it.First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put themaside.Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly withchopstick.After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove，Iwaited patiently unless the oil was hot.Then I put the tomatoes and thebeaten eggs into pan together.Not that w
23、ay，my mom tried to stopus but failed.She was right.It didnt tum out as I had wished.1.【2020全国卷I】simplefriedprepareandchopsticksonuntilthemeThank you for your letter,what really made me happy.Im glad to know that youve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown.Im surely youll have a good
24、 time.Actually,I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old,for I have long been out of practice.Luckily,I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations.Then I can spare some time to learn it again,such that we can practice together on every day.Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in Ch
25、ina.See you sooner.2.【2020全国卷II】whichtosurestartedbut/yetvacationsoyoursoonMy mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families.In order to make surely all of us are in good health,and she makes specific plans for us.For example,every morning,my dad has to have the bowl of egg sou
26、p while I had to eat an apple.My dad dont like the soup and I dont enjoy apples.I tell my mom that if were forced eat things,we may become ill.But he insists on us eating healthy food.Understanding her good intentions,I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.3.【2020全国卷III】concern
27、edfamilysureahavedoesnttoshethatI became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident.Oneafternoon where I was in primary school,I was walking by the schoolplayground.Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me.Istopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playgro
28、und.To everyonessurprising,the ball went into the net.All the football player on the playgroundcheered loudly,say that I had a talent for football.From now on,I started toplay my football with classmates after school.I am a good player now.1.【2019全国卷I】interestedwhenaandhardsurpriseplayerssayingthenS
29、ince I was a kid,Ive considered different job I would like to do.First,I wanted to be a fireman,whose uniform looked so coolly.Then,whenI was in the five grade,I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my Englishteacher too much.When I studied chemistry high school,I reconsidered mggoal or decided to
30、 be a doctor.They were two reasons for the decision.Onewas that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much morebetter after seeing a doctor.And the other is that I wanted to help people inneed.2.【2019全国卷II】jobscoolfifthveryat/inandThereamazedwasIve had many dreams since I was a chi
31、ld.Now my dream is to opens a cafe.Though it may appear simple,it required a lot of ideas and efforts.What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one.I want my cafe have a special theme such as like Tang Dynasty.In the cafe,customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environm
32、ent what is created for them.If I succeed in manage one,I will open more.I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city.Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.3.【2019全国卷III】openrequiresordinarytothemselvesthat/whichmanagingcitiesaDuring my last winter holidays,I wen
33、t to countryside with my father tovisit my grandparents.I find a big change there.The first time I went there,they were living in a small house with dogs,ducks,and another animals.Lastwinter when I went here again,they had a big separate house to raise dozensof chicken.They also had a small pond whi
34、ch they raised fish.My grandpasaid last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish.I felt happily thattheir life had improved.At the end of our trip,I told my father that I plannedto return for every two years,but he agreed.1.【2018全国卷I】thefoundothertherechickenswheresellinghappyandWhen I was li
35、ttle,Fridays night was our family game night.After supper,we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room.As the kid,I loved to watch cartoons,but no matter how many times I asked to watching them,my parents would not to let me.They would say to us that playing card games would help my brai
36、n.Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes.I didnt realize how right my parents are until I entered high school.The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.2.【2018全国卷I I】FridaysortsawatchmewaswithwerewhenSuccess belongs to you!Bye-bye
