1、Section Writing 想象类作文 写作技法指导想象类作文是作者根据已有的生活经验和知识,超越现实生活来勾画出从未见过或者不曾出现过的生活图景的文章。注意事项:1理清想象类作文的基本内容及要点。2明确文章结构。文章可分为三段:开头对所描述事物的总体说明;主体描述该事物的形态、构造、种类和用途等;结尾对所描述事物做一个简单评价或提出一点希望。3找准时态与人称,层次要划分清晰,过渡要自然。积“黄金”词句,写高分文章1To solve this problem,our company puts out the household robot.为了解决这一问题,我们公司推出了这款家用机器人。2
2、It was designed to take care of old people.它是专门为照顾老人而设计的。3It can deal with many emergencies.它可以处理很多紧急情况。4It can watch over the old while you are not at home.当你不在家时它可以照看老人。5It would be of great help to you if you own such a robot.要是你有这样一个机器人,那它对你将会帮助极大。6I believe it can bring me happiness and make my
3、 life more convenient.我相信它能带给我快乐并且使我的生活更加便利。三步写作规范题目要求假设你是李华,请以 My Robot 为题,介绍一款未来家庭生活中的机器人,要点如下:1机器人的名字、外貌;2机器人的结构、性格和能力。注意:词数 80 左右。My Robot第一步:对接单元词汇1与相似 2在很多方面3由支配4发出信号5接收信号6解读信号7操控动作8在的帮助下9应付,对付,解决be similar toin many waysbe directed by.send out signalspick up signalsread the signalscontrol the
4、 moveswith the help of.deal with第二步:巧用单元语法和句型1完成句子我有一个机器人好朋友,他的名字叫杰克。,and .他有 1.2 米高,有一张可爱的脸和一双明亮的眼睛。“He”is about 120 centimeters tall .“他”是一个由我的思想支配的机器人。“He”is a robot .我的大脑把信号传给我头上戴的帽子。My brain the cap on my head.I have a good robot friend“his”name is Jackwith a lovely face andtwo bright eyesdirec
5、ted by my thoughtssends out signals to帽子接收了信号然后把它传递给电脑。This cap can and a computer.电脑解读信号,并且操控机器人的一举一动。The computer and then controls“his”moves.我只需动脑,Jack 就能为我做一切了。I just need to think and then !在 Jack 的帮助下,我能够解决一切问题,生活变得很轻松了!,I could everything and life has become easier.pick up the signalssend the
6、m toreads the signalsJack will do all for meWith the help of Jackdeal with2句式升级用定语从句改写 用过去分词短语合并 用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句连接 I have a good robot friend whose name is Jack.“He”is a robot about 120 centimeters tall with a lovelyface and two bright eyes,directed by my thoughts.My brain sends out signals to t
7、he cap on my head,whichcan pick up the signals and send them to a computer.第三步:连接过渡成篇My RobotI have a good robot friend whose name is Jack.“He”is similar to a human being in many ways.“He”is a robot about 120 centimeters tall with a lovely face and two bright eyes,directed by my thoughts.When I put
8、on my cap,my brain sends out signals to the cap on my head,which can pick up the signals and send them to a computer.In this way the computer reads the signals and then controls“his”moves.As you can see,I just need to think and then Jack will do all for me!As a result,with the help of Jack,I could deal with everything and life has become easier.“单元加餐练”见“Unit 3 单元加餐练”(单击进入电子文档)“单元质量检测”见“Unit 3 单元质量检测”(单击进入电子文档)谢谢 观 看