1、第4课时 如何写好“开放、半开放类”书面表达开放性书面表达给考生留有很大的自由发挥空间，体裁以记叙文、议论文为主。其特点是直接提供话题，要求考生围绕该话题写一篇短文。1.运用上面三个课时所提到的策略技巧。2.做好衔接与过渡 衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接性词语是非常必要的。考生应该掌握的连接性词语可以归纳如下：(1)表示起始关系的过渡性词语 first of all，to begin with，according to，as you know，as isknown，as is shown in，etc.(2)表示时间
2、顺序的过渡性词语 at the beginning，then，later，in the end，finally，at last，afterthat，afterwards，since then，immediately，meanwhile，etc.(3)表示并列关系的过渡性词语 and，or，as well as，neither.nor.，not only.but also.，either.or.，not.but.，etc.(4)表示转折关系的过渡性词语 but，yet，however，while，otherwise，on the contrary，nevertheless，etc.(5)表示因果
3、关系的过渡性词语 because，as，since，for，thanks to，due to，as a result of，so，therefore，as a result/consequence，etc.(6)表示条件关系的过渡性词语 if，unless，in case(of)，as/so long as，on condition that，provided(that)，etc.(7)表示递进关系的过渡性词语 whats more，furthermore，moreover，besides，whats worse，still less，to make matters worse，worse s
4、till，more importantly，etc.(8)表示列举事实的过渡性词语 such as，for example/instance，take.for example，that is to say，as follows，in other words，on the one hand.on the other(hand).；for one thing.for another.etc.(9)表示观点的过渡性词语 in my opinion，in my point of view，as far as I am concerned，asfor me，personally，etc.(10)表示总结
5、的过渡性词语 in short，in brief，in conclusion，in a word，to sum up，all inall，on the whole，in general，generally speaking，etc.3.巧用谚语 谚语的准确使用也可为文章增色。例如：As the old saying goes，“An inch of time is worth an inch ofgold.”俗话说，一寸光阴一寸金。Every coin has its two sides.任何事物都具有两面性。4.灵活使用高级表达 例如：(1)cant.too much/enough怎样也不算
6、过分 We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes toomuch.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。(2)cannot be overemphasized无论如何强调都不为过 The importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized.交通安全的重要性无论如何强调都不为过。(3)cant but do sth不得不做某事 In dealing with ones future career，one cannot but admit that it isvery
7、important to decide ones future career as early as possible.在涉及未来的职业方面，一个人不得不承认尽早决定未来的职业很重要。(4)have no choice but to do除做之外别无选择 There is always something challenging in our life.We have nochoice but to face it.我们生活中总有一些充满挑战性的事情。除了面对我们别无选择。(5)cant help but do不得不做/cant help doing禁不住做 When it came to t
8、he sad part，she couldnt help but burst into tears.说到伤心处，她禁不住大哭起来。(6)nothing but只有，仅仅 I want nothing but the best for my children.我只是想给我的孩子们最好的。(7)anything but决不，根本不 The book I borrowed was anything but interesting.我借的那本书一点儿趣都没有。【典例剖析】(2015安徽卷)某英文杂志正在举办以“Fancy yourself asan interviewer”为主题的征文活动，请你以“A
9、 Famous Chinese IWould Like to Interview”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1.采访的对象；2.采访的原因；3.想提的问题。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview _ _ _【思路点拨】题干给出了一个征文的通知，要求考生根据提示以“AFamous Chinese I Would Like to Interview”为题，写一篇英语短文，属于命题作文。写作时时态宜用将来时，人称宜用
10、第一人称。本文可分为三段来写：第一段：介绍你打算采访谁。第二段：采访这个人物的原因，包括该人物的成就以及自己的兴趣和愿望。第三段：打算问的问题，可以是该人物成功的经历，自己的兴趣所在，或其他让人感兴趣的问题等。语言润色示例 中档作文 润色示例 A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview I want to interview one of the most famous writersMo Yan.Mo Yan is one of the most famous writers at home and abroad.One of his novels
11、was made into the film Red Sorghum.He was the first Chinese who won the Nobel Prize in Literature.We are proud of him.Im interested in writing from an early age.Im determined to become a successful writer like him in the future.I would like to ask him about his childhood life and how he began his wr
12、iting.And Ill try my best to work hard to pursue my dream.第一段中的want表达平淡，既然表示愿望，最好用wish/desire/would like to do，另外这个简单句放在行文的开头，分量太轻，改为：The person I would like to interview is Mo Yan.第二段第三句和第四句句式简单，且连接不紧密，表达亮点不足，改为：Whats more，he became the first Chinese to winthe Nobel Prize in Literature，in which we
13、all take pride.第二段第五句和第六句句式相似，均以Im开头，衔接不紧密，改为：Most importantly，Im interested in writing from an early age and determined to become a successful writer like him in the future.满分作文感悟 满分范文 名师点评 A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview The person I desire to interview is Yang Liwei.The reason why I wo
14、uld like to interview him is that he is not only the first Chinese in space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.Should I interview him，I would ask him what made him an astrona
15、ut and how he was trained.I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read.Finally，if_permitted，I would ask a few questions about his personal life，which must be very interesting.作者思路清晰，情感真切，表达准确，段落分明。首句便吸引住阅卷老师的眼球，这是一个较复杂的复合句。包括定语从句，表语从句，还有not only.but also.并列句，表现出考生很好的语言功底。第三段首句“Should.，I would.”也很有效地吸引阅卷老师。Finally过渡自然。if permitted省略句运用恰切。
