1、表达 作文巧升格UNIT 1 Lights，camera，action!如何写影评影评通常包括两部分，第一部分是简介，第二部分是评论。电影、电视剧的简介包括故事的背景(setting)，故事情节(plot)和人物角色(characters)等。评论就是自己的看法，写作时要注意点面结合以及观点与材料的统一。评论时以一般现在时为主，简介视具体情况而定。简介时用第三人称，评论用第一人称。基本框架 文章基本结构为“三段式”：第一段：电影简介。第二段：情节介绍。第三段：对电影的评价。常用词块 1as we can see 正如我们所看到的那样 2was adapted from a novel with
2、 the same title 由同名小说改编 3is based on a real-life incident 以真实事件为蓝本 4was directed by 由执导 5tell an interesting story 讲述一个有趣的故事 6justice and courage 正义和勇气 7I clearly saw.我清晰地看见 8a film starring.由主演的电影 9is set in London 以伦敦为背景 10as far as Im concerned/in my opinion/according to my view 依我看；我个人认为 常用语句 精彩
3、开头 1Many people must be familiar with the film.directed by.许多人一定对导演的电影很熟悉。2My favourite film is.我最喜欢的电影是 3The film is liked by many audiences.许多观众都喜欢这部电影。4The film is full of special effects.这部电影充满了特技效果。5One of the keys to the films success is.这部电影成功的关键之一就是 正文佳句 1The story takes place in.故事发生在 2The
4、film.is about.电影介绍了 3The story goes that.故事是这样发生的 4People like the film not just because.but also because.人们喜欢电影不仅是因为，而且是因为 5The plot/movie describes.情节/电影描述了 6One interesting anecdote contained in the film is that.影片中有一件有趣的轶事 余味结尾 1Its a really.film.这真是一部的电影。2I really enjoyed.我的确喜欢 3What an amazing
5、 film it is!这是一部多么精彩的电影啊！4Even with these slight drawbacks，it is still a great film.即使有这些轻微的缺点，它仍然是一部伟大的电影。5I think/In my opinion/From my point of view.我认为/依我看 请根据下面的材料，写一篇 80 词左右的短文，介绍电影夜宴。Night Banquet夜宴 Stars(Cast)：Zhang Ziyi(章子怡)，Daniel Wu(吴彦祖)，Zhou Xun(周迅)，Ge You(葛优)Director：Feng Xiaogang(冯小刚)P
6、lot：这部电影根据莎士比亚(Shakespeare)的哈姆雷特(Hamlet)改编。该片讲述了中国的五代十国时期，宫廷中人与人之间争权夺利的故事。Review&comments：这是一部历史武打题材的电影。冯小刚用激动人心的故事向我们诠释了正义和勇气的含义。这部电影堪称精品，百看不厌。_ _ _ _ _ _ 学生习作 Night Banquet is a history and martial arts film.It is Feng Xiaogangs another masterpiece.And it is directed by Feng Xiaogang.Zhang Ziyi，Zh
7、ou Xun，Ge You，and Daniel Wu star in the film.The film is based on Shakespeares Hamlet.It is set in ancient China during the Period of Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms.It tells of a fight for power and interests in the court between different people.Feng Xiaogang has used an exciting story to examine
8、the ideas of courage and justice.So Id like to recommend it to you all.点评：1本篇习作布局合理，符合影评的“三段式”基本结构。2文章中运用了 be directed by，be based on，recommend sth.to sb.等有用的话题词汇，表达准确、恰当。3个别语句之间还存在优化整合空间，比如，用过去分词作定语合并句和句；用非限制性定语从句合并句和句。升格作文 Night Banquet is a history and martial arts film.It is another masterpiece
9、directed by Feng Xiaogang.Zhang Ziyi，Zhou Xun，Ge You，and Daniel Wu star in the film.The film，which is based on Shakespeares Hamlet，is set in ancient China during the Period of Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms.It tells of a fight for power and interests in the court between different people.Feng Xiaog
10、ang has used an exciting story to examine the ideas of courage and justice.So Id like to recommend it to you all.请根据电影功夫熊猫写一篇 80 词左右的影视评论。写作要点：1故事以 Chinas Valley of Peace 为背景；2从一只普通熊猫被选为神龙勇士(the Dragon Warrior)到成为功夫大师的过程；3发表自己的看法。参考词汇：功夫熊猫Kung Fu Panda _ _ _ _ _ _ _【参考范文】Kung Fu Panda tells a story
11、about a fat，big panda that can perform martial arts.It is set in Chinas Valley of Peace，where there are only a group of animals who can speak.At first，the panda works for his father in a noodle shop and is only a common panda.By accident，he is chosen to be the Dragon Warrior.Finally，he realizes the truth to be a master of Kung Fu is that you will succeed if you believe in yourself.It is considered one of the greatest cartoons.It is popular among teenagers.点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!
