1、专题能力训练二十二短文改错能力升级训练第67页ASometime in February,my teacher told us about the city speech contest,its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”.I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic.Then I carefully prepared for contest.A couple of weeks later,after the first round I w
2、as choosing to be one of the seven finalists!The final was held soon.I was the sixth to presenting the speech.How a relief when I finished it!After the last person finished,the judge made their final decisions and announced that I have won first prize.The audience were going wildly clapping and chee
3、ring!I was extremely happy.It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it.答案:Sometime in February,my teacher told us about the city speech contest,itswhose或its前加and topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”.I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic.Then I
4、 carefully prepared for the contest.A couple of weeks later,after the first round I was choosingchosen to be one of the seven finalists!The final was held soon.I was the sixth to presentingpresent the speech.HowWhat a relief when I finished it!After the last person finished,the judgejudges made thei
5、r final decisions and announced that I havehad won first prize.The audience were going wildlywild clapping and cheering!I was extremely happy.It was suchso exciting a moment that I will always remember it.BMr Liu Jin,aging 39,is working in a factory in Shanghai as an chemical engineer.After he gradu
6、ated from Nanjing University in 1978,he sent to Tokyo University to study chemical engineering.Through her hard work for 4 years,he achieved remarkably results in scientific research.But he received a doctors degree in 1982.A Japanese company manager tried hard to invite him to work and promise to g
7、ive him a good salary but he didnt receive it.In 1983,he returned back to China without a moments hesitation.He has made up his minds to devote all his life to our country.答案:Mr Liu Jin,agingaged 39,is working in a factory in Shanghai as ana chemical engineer.After he graduated from Nanjing Universi
8、ty in 1978,he was sent to Tokyo University to study chemical engineering.Through herhis hard work for 4 years,he achieved remarkablyremarkable results in scientific research.ButAnd he received a doctors degree in 1982.A Japanese company manager tried hard to invite him to work and promisepromised to
9、 give him a good salary but he didnt receiveaccept it.In 1983,he returned back to China without a moments hesitation.He has made up his mindsmind to devote all his life to our country.CWith the national college entrance examination approach,many students are too worried about the coming exam to fall
10、 asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness.Its a fair common phenomenon among us student.Here is some effective methods for you to adopt.First of all,you should spend a plenty of time preparing for the test.Secondly,it is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions.I think ta
11、ke a deep breath is a helpful way to reduce your stress.Last but not least,you ought to believe yourselves and keep a good state of mind.Follow my tips,but youll overcome your exam anxiety.答案:With the national college entrance examination approachapproaching,many students are too worried about the c
12、oming exam to fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentallymental illness.Its a fairfairly common phenomenon among us studentstudents.Here isare some effective methods for you to adopt.First of all,you should spend a plenty of time preparing for the test.Secondly,itthere is no need to feel nerv
13、ous when you have some bad emotions.I think taketaking a deep breath is a helpful way to reduce your stress.Last but not least,you ought to believe in yourselves and keep a good state of mind.Follow my tips,butand youll overcome your exam anxiety.DLi Ming and Wang Ying are student of Senior Three.Th
14、ey all work hard but they have different learning method.Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher.As a result,he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework.But he has to stay up late and doesnt get enough sleep.However,W
15、ang Ying has quite the different way of learning.She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class.Because this,she spends less time doing her homework,which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.答案:Li Ming and Wang Ying are studentstudents of Senior Three.
16、They all work hard but they have different learning methodmethods.Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listenlistening to the teacher.As a result,he missmisses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework.ButSo he has to stay up late and doesnt
17、get enough sleep.However,Wang Ying has quite thea different way of learning.She listens attentiveattentively and tries to catch everything that the teacher saidsays in class.Because of this,she spends less time doing her homework,which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.EDear Editor,Im
18、writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago,my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate,one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance,which carry them quickly to a
19、 hospital.After several hours treatment they finally escaped with death.As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly,we seldom care about the necessary safety measures.They shall be charged by law.Meanwhile,I do hope whole society can realize the important of
20、food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Yours,Li Hua答案:Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago,my neighborneighbors ate a bag of food buyingbought from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and their faces turnturne
21、d pale.FortunateFortunately,one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance,which carrycarried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours treatment they finally escaped withfrom death.As some illegal businessmen are only interested in making profits to become rich qui
22、ckly,wethey seldom care about the necessary safety measures.They shall be charged by law.Meanwhile,I do hope the/our whole society can realize the importantimportance of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Yours,Li HuaFLast Sunday I witnessed a traffic accident on
23、our way home.I was wandering down the sidewalk while there went loud crash.Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away.I went up and found the two drivers bad injured,bleeding and trap in the taxis.Luckily,they were rescued on time because people came to help them and called an ambul
24、ance.As was clear that the taxi drivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast.It reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and them.答案:Last Sunday I witnessed a traffic accident on ourmy way home.I was wandering down the sidewalk whilewhen there went a loud
25、 crash.Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away.I went up and found the two drivers badbadly injured,bleeding and traptrapped in the taxis.Luckily,they were rescued onin time because people came to help them and called an ambulance.AsIt was clear that the taxi drivers were so eage
26、r to take more passengers that they drove too fast.It reflected their lack of concern for the safesafety of both others and themthemselves.GDear Jin Jing,Your problem is common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advices can help you.First in all,believe in yourself.Your greatest pr
27、oblem is that you lack self-confidence.The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word.Your smile will show that you are friendly to him.Next,trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same int
28、erest as you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies.Unless anyone is in trouble,you should be ready to help him or her.Once you have confidence,you can make as many friends as possibly.Yours,Lily答案:Dear Jin Jing,Your problem is a common one among middl
29、e school students.Maybe the following advicesadvice can help you.First inof all,believe in yourself.Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence.The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loudlouder about your wish to make friends than any word.Your smil
30、e will show that you are friendly to himthem.Next,tryingtry talking with a student who is as shy as you or who shareshares the same interest as you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies.UnlessIf anyone is in trouble,you should be ready to help him or
31、her.Once you have confidence,you can make as many friends as possiblypossible.Yours,LilyHIm writing to invite you to visit China and spending the summer vacation with me.I have made wonderful plan for it.First,we can go to Qingdao,there it is cool and mild,and have funs at the seaside.Then we were t
32、o participate in a taiji camp in the Wudang Mountains.You are curious about Chinese kung fu,but I believe this is a good chance to learn it.Last of all,I have also been longed to take you to the countryside.We can stay there for a few days and visit some relatives of me.I hope this plan suits you go
33、od and I am look forward to your coming.答案:Im writing to invite you to visit China and spendingspend the summer vacation with me.I have made a wonderful plan for it.First,we can go to Qingdao,therewhere it is cool and mild,and have funsfun at the seaside.Then we wereare to participate in a taiji cam
34、p in the Wudang Mountains.You are curious about Chinese kung fu,butso/and I believe this is a good chance to learn it.Last of all,I have also been longedlonging to take you to the countryside.We can stay there for a few days and visit some relatives of memine.I hope this plan suits you goodwell and
35、I am looklooking forward to your coming.ILast Sunday I saw a worst storm this year.It came sudden and went on for over three hours.After lunch,I went into my room to have a rest.The air was hot,but all was quiet.Then a strong wind started to blow into my room.Pieces of paper on my desk flew high int
36、o the air and some flew out the open window.As I ran out to catch it,big drop of rain began to fall.When I come back into the house,it was raining more harder and harder.Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house.When I ran out to find out that had happened,a big tree had fallen d
37、own and broke the top of the backroom.答案:Last Sunday I saw athe worst storm this year.It came suddensuddenly and went on for over three hours.After lunch,I went into my room to have a rest.The air was hot,butand all was quiet.Then a strong wind started to blow into my room.Pieces of paper on my desk
38、 flew high into the air and some flew out of the open window.As I ran out to catch itthem,big dropdrops of rain began to fall.When I comecame back into the house,it was raining more删去或改为much harder and harder.Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house.When I ran out to find out th
39、atwhat had happened,a big tree had fallen down and brokebroken the top of the backroom.JThere are many people think that wealth is better than health.I used to think so until one day I had read a story about Howard Joyce.He was an European billionaire who got everything he wanted.Therefore,in the la
40、st twenty years of his life,his health began to get worse and he led a miserably life.Although the best doctors called for him,he could still find no relief.I have realized that health is worth all the money in the world.If you have million of dollars but you are at poor health,you will not be able
41、to do what you want to do.So I would like to advise you not to hurt yourself and trying to make money.Instead,take care of your body and be happy with which you do.Health is more important.答案:There are many people thinkthinking或前加whothat wealth is better than health.I used to think so until one day
42、I had read a story about Howard Joyce.He was ana European billionaire who got everything he wanted.ThereforeHowever,in the last twenty years of his life,his health began to get worse and he led a miserablymiserablelife.Although the best doctors were called for him,he could still find no relief.I hav
43、e realized that health is worth all the money in the world.If you have millionmillions of dollars but you are atin poor health,you will not be able to do what you want to do.So I would like to advise you not to hurt yourself and tryingtry to make money.Instead,take care of your body and be happy wit
44、h whichwhat you do.Health is more important.KThree years ago,I became a student in a ordinary school.Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom,I find the teachers patient and considerate.Besides,I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I decided to make the bes
45、t use for it.I worked hardly and got along well my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties,they are always helpful.Soon,I became one of the top student in my class,what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated.My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but t
46、hat how you use it that determines who you are.答案:Three years ago,I became a student in aan ordinary school.DisappointingDisappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom,I findfound the teachers patient and considerate.Besides,I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I
47、 decided to make the best use forof it.I worked hardlyhard and got along well with my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties,they arewere always helpful.Soon,I became one of the top studentstudents in my class,whatwhich greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated.My experie
48、nce tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determines who you are.LUncle Marion was one of my mothers younger brother.He has been died for a year.When I was a teenager,he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn.We usually left home at
49、 three oclock in the morning,stayed in local restaurant for breakfast,and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations.Just after dawn,he would find the right spot in the woods.He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement.Though I never hunted an animal successfully,but I learned to
50、be brave and patiently through the experience.答案:Uncle Marion was one of my mothers younger brotherbrothers.He has been dieddead for a year.When I was a teenager,he taught usme how to hunt in the New Jersey woods usedusing the hours before dawn.We usually left home at three oclock in the morning,sta
51、yed in a local restaurant for breakfast,and then traveltraveled on to one of his hunting destinations.Just afterbefore dawn,he would find the right spot in the woods.He would show me how not to make a sound andor a movement.Though I never hunted an animal successfully,but I learned to be brave and p
52、atientlypatient through the experience.M(2014成都七中二诊模拟)I often go to a weekend school.So did many of my classmates.This seems popular among students.Good weekend schools have excellent teachers which help us improve our studies.Besides,we get to know students from another schools and learn about thei
53、r campus of life.So every coin has two sides.Our school work is already a heavy burden.Extra lesson often take up too much of the our time.In addition,pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects.We may also find ourselves very tired on Mondays to concentrate on the l
54、essons in our own school.We should think seriously about this issue and make best use of our time.答案:I often go to a weekend school.So diddo many of my classmates.This seems popular among students.Good weekend schools have excellent teachers whichwho/that help us improve our studies.Besides,we get t
55、o know students from anotherother schools and learn about their campus of life.SoBut every coin has two sides.Our school work is already a heavy burden.Extra lessonlessons often take up too much of the our time.In addition,paypaying lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect theirour school
56、subjects.We may also find ourselves verytoo tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school.We should think seriously about this issue and make the best use of our time.N(2014陕西五校第一次模拟)Senior Three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.“S
57、hould I choose a good major and a good university?” Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested.It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future.However,those who think differently believes that the environment is impo
58、rtant to ones development.They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find good jobs.In my opinion,a best choice is to choose a good major at a good university.But if we couldnt obtain both,the first thing to consider is a good major,because no matter
59、where we study,they can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.答案:Senior Three studentstudents will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.“Should I choose a good major andor a good university?” Some students prefer to consider majors first so that t
60、hey can learn what they are interested in.It will also make it possiblypossible for them to take their favorite jobs in the future.However,those who think differently believesbelieve that the environment is important to ones development.They also believe that students graduategraduating或其前加who from
61、leading universities are often more likely to find good jobs.In my opinion,athebest choice is to choose a good major at a good university.But if we couldntcant obtain both,the first thing to consider is a good major,because no matter where we study,theywe can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.
