1、第四讲 怎样赢得“大满分”衔接要“巧”，过渡要“妙”第三部分 第四讲第三部分 第四讲审题、拟点、联句，接下来就是润色成文。有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“起、承、转、合”四方法使文章流畅自然，是考生书面表达争创满分的必备条件。第三部分 第四讲【常用开头词汇】表示“起”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有：first,firstly,first of all,at first,in the first place,above all,to begin/start with,today,nowadays,at present,currently,rece
2、ntly,generally speaking,according to 等。First,I think everyone needs friends and is eager to get friendship.First of all,we must make full use of every 45-minute lesson.第三部分 第四讲Nowadays/Recently,people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic.In the first place,she can read at the r
3、ate of 100 words a minute.To begin with,smoking should be banned in public areas.Generally speaking,the more you practise,the more skillfully you can write in English.第三部分 第四讲【常用开头句式】As the proverb says/As the saying goes,“Time is money.”As can be seen from the table,nearly everyone owns onemobile p
4、hone in China.With the development of the Internet,computers play animportant role in peoples life.It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthybody and mind.It is believed that health is above wealth.It is well known that the
5、elephant is a very kind and gentleanimal.Im excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine.第三部分 第四讲【满分作文选粹】(2015全国卷书面表达)Id like to ask you to write anarticle for our schools English newspaper.(2014 江苏高考书面表达)Today,more and more Englishwords find their way into the Chinese language.(2014全国卷书面表
6、达)First of all,Id like to know whenthe class will start and how many students there will be in aclass.(2014 天 津 高 考 书 面 表 达)Firstly,Id like to tell yousomething about the weather in my city,which is often windyand very cold in winter.(2014天津高考书面表达)Im glad to hear that you will cometo our school as a
7、n exchange student.第三部分 第四讲【常用顺承词汇】表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。常用的词汇有：second/secondly,also,besides,in addition,soon afterwards,after that,whats more,furthermore,moreover,still less,to make matters worse,what is worse,worse still,for example,in other words,especially,particularly,obviously,meanwhile,at t
8、he same time 等。第三部分 第四讲Also,do let me know if you need more information.Secondly,we should get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressionsWhat s more,good books can help us to develop good characters.In addition,we shouldnt neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.Meanwhile
9、/At the same time,I will regard it as my duty to keep our environment clean and healthy.第三部分 第四讲【常用顺承句式】Take Beijing for example,it is one of the oldest cities in theworld.What is more serious is that we dont cherish wildlife.As far as I am concerned,they stand for love,friendship andunity.第三部分 第四讲【
10、满分作文选粹】(2015四川高考书面表达)In addition,I am Chinese,which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.(2014北京高考书面表达)Soon afterwards,a second entrance was opened to the parking place.(2014福建高考书面表达)Worse still,I took many falls off the bike.(2014安徽高考书面表达)Second,go outdoors an
11、d play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.(2014福建高考书面表达)After that,I regained my enthusiasm for English and spent much more time and energy working on this particular subject.第三部分 第四讲【常用转折过渡词汇】表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。常见的词汇有：but,yet,however,whil
12、e,otherwise,or(else),on the contrary,on the other hand,contrary to,in any case,though,although,as,even if/though,despite,in spite of,regardless of 等。第三部分 第四讲But unfortunately I mind my own business without considering my parents.However,not until the match was over did we realize that we became the
13、loser.On the other hand,online shopping also has many disadvantages.On the contrary,the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the life on earth.Contrary to what I had originally said,the trip turned out to be fun.第三部分 第四讲【满分作文选粹】(2015江苏高考书面表达)But rules alone dont secure anorderly society.(2
14、014湖南高考书面表达)However,what amazes you most isthe following new function.(2014重庆高考书面表达)On the contrary,smart phones notonly take up our valuable time,but also do great harm to ourhealth.第三部分 第四讲【常用结尾词汇】表示“合”的词汇常用于小结上文的内容，引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。常见的词汇有：finally,last but not least,in short,in brief,in conc
15、lusion,in a/one word,to sum up,all in all,on the whole,in general 等。All in all,travelling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges.第三部分 第四讲In conclusion,a good citizen should observe traffic regulations.On the whole,I find a bike more enjoyable than a motorcycle.
16、In a word,success is important,and so is failure,because its the mother of success.To sum up,environmental protection is of great importance,which can make us live more comfortably and healthily.第三部分 第四讲【常用结尾句式】Id appreciate it if you could deliver them as soon as possible.It is high time that we di
17、d something to prevent theenvironment from being polluted.Only with combined efforts can we expect our hometown totake on a new look in the near future.We can,therefore,come to the conclusion that nothing is soprecious as peace in the world.From what has been discussed above,we may draw theconclusio
18、n that you must have selfconfidence if you want toachieve something.第三部分 第四讲【满分作文选粹】(2015湖北高考书面表达)From this experience I have learntthat questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seekthe truth.(2015安徽高考书面表达)Finally,I would like to ask a fewquestions about his personal life,which must be ver
19、yinteresting.(2015陕西高考书面表达)I will be grateful if you could giveme a kind consideration.第三部分 第四讲(2014江苏高考书面表达)In short,not only has the inclusionpoisoned Chinese,it may also bring about distance betweenthe Chinese people.(2014全国卷书面表达)In a word,my life will be muchricher and more colorful.(2014浙江高考书面表
20、达)Ill be glad if you can consider myrecommendation.(2014江西高考书面表达)Last but not least,health is alsovery significant for us students.第三部分 第四讲 用词汇或句式完成句子 1 _(首 先),the most significant thing is to set a goal,work out a plan and carry out your plan step by step.2_(就我而言),I love wealth,but I value health m
21、ore.3_(事实上),advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.4_(况且),listening to some soft music does relax your mood and give you a new start.First of all/To begin withAs far as I am concernedAs a matter of fact/In factBesides/In addition/Whats more/Moreover第三部分 第四讲5I lost my way in the fo
22、rest and_(更糟的是),it became dark.6_(因此),I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep.7_(总之),changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.to make matters worse/worse still/what was worseThereforeIn a word/In conclusion/In short/In brief第三部分 第四讲8_(确实到了的时候了
23、)we took some measures to solve the problem.9_(我们可以得出一个结论)our society is progressing and people are living a better life than ever before.10_(我从这次经历中了解到)being careful is very important and that we cant be too careful,especially in examinations.Its high time thatWe can draw a conclusion thatFrom this
24、 experience,I learned that第三部分 第四讲 篇章训练(2016江淮十校联考)近来，中学生普遍缺乏自我保护意识这一问题备受关注，请你用英语写一篇短文：1概括中学生自我保护的重要性；2就如何保护自己谈谈你的看法(至少两点)。第三部分 第四讲注意：1.词数100左右；2开头已写好，不计入总词数；3信中不能出现与本人相关的信息。Recently,it has been a great public concern that the students lack selfprotection awareness._第三部分 第四讲阅读下面短文，选择适当的词或短语填空above a
25、ll,besides,meanwhile,for one thing,for another,personally,in a wordRecently,it has been a great public concern that the students lack selfprotection awareness.There is a lack of social experience among students and therefore learning how to protect ourselves is of great significance to us all._，secu
26、rity comes first.Without security,we can achieve nothing and cannot live up to parents expectations._，protecting ourselves contributes to the healthy development of the students,which is associated with the happiness of every family._，it also helps to build a more harmonious society.For one thingFor
27、 anotherMeanwhile第三部分 第四讲_，in order to protect us students,_，we should strengthen our security awareness._，when accidents occur,we should calm down and turn to teachers or parents for help.The government also plays a leading role in protecting students._，only by the combined efforts of every side involved can we live and study in harmony.Personallyabove allBesidesIn a word第三部分 第四讲本部分内容讲解结束 按ESC键退出全屏播放
