1、Writing in English（以改促写）Topic 节假日活动(Festivals,holidays and celebrations)1.New Years Day 元旦2.the Spring Festival 春节3.Latern Festival 元宵节4.Womens Day 妇女节5.April Fools Day 愚人节6.Easter Day 复活节7.May Day劳动节8.Mothers Day 母亲节素材百宝箱9.Childrens Day儿童节10.Dragon Boat Festival 端午节11.Fathers Day 父亲节12.Teachers Day
2、教师节13.the Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节14.National Day国庆节15.Thanksgiving Day感恩节16.Christmas Day圣诞节Work Sheet Task one:translation 带来好运品尝各种美食共度好时光感谢某人用装饰给买些鲜花 Task two:1.我想向你介绍一些关于圣诞节的事情.2.中秋节是中国最重要的传统节日之一。3.我总是在母亲节帮助妈妈擦洗窗户好洗衣服。4.感恩节在亚洲变得越来越受欢迎了。审列连（词句）美查今天是父亲节，假定你是李华，请你给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日
3、子。要点如下：u 表达你与父亲间的感情；u 为父亲制作一张卡片；u 帮助父亲做点事；u 随父亲散步等。注意：1 词数 80-100 2 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥 3 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数。Dear John,Its Fathers Day today.Its a special day,isnt it?_ Whats your plan for Fathers Day?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua（2013安徽卷）今天是父亲节，假定你是李华，请你给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你如何与父亲
4、一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下：u 表达你与父亲间的感情；u 为父亲制作一张卡片；u 帮助父亲做点事；u 随父亲散步等。注意：1 词数 80-100 2 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥 3 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数。Dear John,Its Fathers Day today.Its a special day,isnt it?_ Whats your plan for Fathers Day?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua 11 审审(Analyze)(Analyze)仔细审题，圈出要点（审体裁，时态，要
5、求）文体：说明文时态：表达与父亲的感情用一般现在时，陈述自己要为父亲做的事应用一般将来时Outline(提纲)TopicFather s DayBeginning Body正文What thingsEndingPurpose make a card to show my thanksshow our love to our fathers 2 列(List)列出提纲，定好框架ready to help mehelp him wash the carcook his favorite foodplay chess with himtake a walk with himto make my fa
6、ther happyBeginning Body正文What thingsEndingPurpose show our love to our fathersready to help meplay chess with himtake a walk with himmake a card to show my thankshelp him wash the carcook his favorite foodto make my father happyI think we should show our love to our fathersHe is already there,ready
7、 to help me.I will make a beautiful card for him I will help him wash the car and cook his favorite food in the evening.I will take a walk with him and then play chess with himWhat I wish is to make him happy 3.连(Connect)找出关键，连词成句。三、高级 句型二、丰富的词汇和语言被动语态从句 4.美固定结构一、合理的过渡词/句子A good paragraph is one tha
8、t contains proper lingking words1.列举firstly,secondly,-finally；此外besides,in addition;并且 also;一方面，另一方面 on one hand,on the other hand；for one thing,for the other2.转折或让步although,though,but,yet;however;otherwise;instead 3.结果as a result;so;in a word,anyway;after all;therefore;4.强调最重要的是 above all;most impo
9、rtantly;首先 first of all;最后一点也是很重要的一点 last but not the least5.表达个人观点以我看来 in my opinion;对于我来说 As for me;一般说来 generally speaking6.解释事实上 in fact,as a matter of fact,actually;换句话说 in other words大家都知道的 as we all know;Use proper conjunctions 简单句为主，根据自身水平适当运用结构复杂的句子。Helen is a kind girl.Helen is the kindest
10、 girl that I have ever seen.There is no doubt that Helen is the kindest girl.The reason why I like her is that she is kind.She is a kind girl who always helps others.She is so kind that everyone likes her.She is not only kind but also clever.要点是否齐全，字数控制在80-100之间 检查人称是否一致、时态是否准确 检查句与句之间、段与段之间是否使用恰当的连
11、接词 没有把握的词或句子不要冒险,句式要丰富，尽量用上一些高级词汇 工整誊写到答题卷上，尽量不要涂改，注意大小写、标点 5.检(Check)仔细检查ExcellentPoorShow TimeAfter writing:self-check(自查)Grammar&Tense语法和时态Structure结构(是否分段，是否有主题句)Right linking words合适的连接词Useful patterns and expressions有用的句型和短语Punctuation&Capital letter大小写及标点Neat writing整洁的书写What should you pay a
12、ttention to?Peer-check(同伴互查)Any grammar mistakes?Any Chinglish(中式英语)?Any great sentences?Any linking words?Dear John,Its Fathers Day today.Its a special day,isnt it?I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day.My father and I are good friends,whenever I meet wi
13、th difficulties,he is always ready to help me.Today I will make a beautiful card for him,with my thanks and best wishes on it.Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon,and I will cook his favorite food in the evening.Besides,Ill take a walk with him after dinner and play chess with him,for he
14、 likes playing chess very much.I m sure hell be very happy.Whats your plan for Fathers Day?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua2).Recite some good phrases,sentences and articles.Eg:Proverbs(sayings)3).Dont write long sentences if you are not sure about it,Remember-short but good sentences are ok.1).Write neatly.Homework1.Rewrite your paper and hand it in.2.Recite all the good patterns and sentences.Help our students writeclearly,naturally beautifullyThanks for listening!Bye-bye
