1、Part Writing描写动物动物是常见的写作素材。对动物的描写常采用以下几种方法：1.总分结合法2.特征说明法采用总分结合法描写动物时，要注意总述与分述之间的关系。分述部分要紧紧围绕总述部分所讲的特点来写。此外，分述部分要有一定的顺序。采用特征说明法描写动物时，一般先介绍动物的某一特征，再说明它的作用，或说明为什么具有这一特征。接着采用同一方法逐一介绍动物的其他特征。3.重点突出法采用重点突出法描写动物时，首先要仔细观察此动物，找出它与众不同的地方加以描述。在描写动物最主要的特点时，可采用比喻、拟人等方法，使重点部分更加突出，给读者留下深刻的印象。【增分佳句】1.The giant pan
2、da is an animal that/which lives in the mountains.大熊猫是一种生活在山区里的动物。2.It feeds/lives on bamboos.它以竹子为主食。3.As forests are being cut down,its habitat is becoming smaller and smaller.随着森林遭到砍伐，它的栖息地变得越来越小了。4.To protect the giant pandas,measures should be taken to set up some nature reserves.为了保护大熊猫，应该采取措施
3、建立自然保护区。5.Its our eager hope that more people will lend us a hand to help save them.希望更多的人伸出援助之手来拯救它们。6.If we dont protect them,theyll probably die out soon.如果我们不保护它们，它们很可能会在不久之后灭绝。7.Finally,we should let people know the importance of protecting endangered animals.最后，我们应该让人们知道保护濒危动物的重要性。根据要求写一篇有关濒危动
4、物金丝猴的短文。1.栖息地：中国。2.外貌：金黄色，有点灰；尾巴和身体一样长。3.生活环境：海拔1 5003 000米的森林。4.生活习性：群居，吃水果、干果，在树上活动。5.它们的数量减少了，呼吁人们保护金丝猴。注意：词数100左右。第一步：布局谋篇很关键审题1.确定体裁：本文为说明文；2.确定人称：本文主要人称为_；3.确定时态：本文应用_介绍金丝猴的生活习性与特征。构思第一部分：总体描述金丝猴的栖息地。第二部分：_金丝猴的外貌、生活环境和生活习性。第三部分：_数量减少了。第四部分：呼吁人们对其保护。第三人称一般现在时具体介绍生存现状第二步：核心词汇想周全1._ v.保护2._ adj.金
5、色的3._ adj.灰色的4._ 和一样长5._ n.森林6._ n.水果7._ 以为食8._ 自然保护区protectgoldengreyas long asforestfruitfeed/live onnature reserve第三步：由词扩句雏形现1.中国政府保护它们。(主谓宾结构)_2.它们的皮毛是金黄色的，有点灰。(主系表结构)_3.它们的尾巴和身体一样长。(as long as)_4.雄性金丝猴又大又壮。(主系表结构)_Chinese government protects them.Their fur is golden and a bit grey.Their tails a
6、re as long as their bodies.The male golden monkeys are big and strong.5.雌性金丝猴比较小。(主系表结构)_6.金丝猴居住在森林里。(主谓结构)_7.这些森林在海拔1 500米至3 000米以上。(主系表结构)_8.我们的政府已经建立了一些自然保护区来保护它们。(现在完成时)_9.我们希望越来越多的人将会理解保护金丝猴的重要性。(一般将来时)_The female golden monkeys are much smaller.Golden monkeys live in forests.The forests are 1，
7、5003，000 meters above the sea level.Our government has built some nature reserves to protect them.We hope more and more people will understand the importance of protecting golden monkeys.第四步：句式升级造亮点1.用被动语态改写句1_2.用while连接的并列句连接句4和句5_3.用定语从句合并句6和句7_They are protected by Chinese government.The male gol
8、den monkeys are big and strong while the female ones are much smaller.Golden monkeys live in forests which/that are 1，5003，000 meters above the sea level.第五步：过渡衔接连成篇The Golden MonkeyGolden monkeys live only in China.They are protected by Chinese government.Their fur is golden and a bit grey.Their ta
9、ils are as long as their bodies.The male golden monkeys are big and strong while the female ones are much smaller.Golden monkeys live in forests which are 1，500 3，000 meters above the sea level.They like living in family groups.They feed on fruits,nuts,tree leaves and so on.But now their number is getting smaller and smaller.Our government has built some nature reserves to protect them.We hope more and more people will understand the importance of protecting golden monkeys.We also hope that people will stop hunting golden monkeys.
