1、概要写作概要写作易错分析：1.不能准确抓住要点。抓住要点，除了读懂文章的主旨，了解文章的结构，还有特别注意一些标志词，如小标题、高频词。2.随意打乱文章的结构。概要写作一般会提供结构比较清楚的文章。不要轻易打乱文章的结构。3.各个要点的独立性不够。我们对要点的陈述要有相对的独立性，一般不要把几个要点放到一个句子中。4.照抄原文中的句子。切记要用自己的语言，而不是照抄原文中的句子来概括要点。Parents everywhere praise their kids.Jenn Berman,author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confide
2、nt Kids,says,Weve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict.By giving kids a lot of praise,parents think theyre building their childrens confidence,when,in fact,it may be just the opposite.Too much praise can backfire and,when given in a way thats insinc
3、ere,make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents praise has put them.How to praise our kids is really a sensitive problem.(主旨）Experts believe that too much praise or praising the kids in a wrong way may have opposite effects on child
4、ren.(要点1）Still,dont go too far in the other direction.Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging gas giving too much.Kids will feel like theyre not good enough or that you dont care and,as a result,may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.On the other hand,no praise also does
5、harm to kids development.(要点2）So what is the right amount of praise?Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity.If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome,you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward.We should
6、especially recognize our childrens efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal,says Donahue,author of Parenting Without Fear:Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters.One thing to remember is that its the process not the end product that matters.To gain the best result,o
7、ur praise should focus on the process rather than the end product.(要点3）Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team.But if hes out there every day and playing hard,you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses.Praising the effort and not the outcome can also
8、 mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard,cook dinner,or finish a book report.But whatever it is,praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的)to the amount of effort your child has put into it.Therefore,what we should praise is our kids proper
9、 effort,regardless of the result.(要点4）How to praise our kids is really a sensitive How to praise our kids is really a sensitive problem.problem.(主旨主旨)Experts believe that too much Experts believe that too much praise or praising the kids in a wrong way may have praise or praising the kids in a wrong
10、 way may have opposite effects on children.opposite effects on children.(要点要点1)1)On the other On the other hand,no praise also does harm to kids development.hand,no praise also does harm to kids development.(要点要点2)2)To gain the best result,our praise should To gain the best result,our praise should
11、focus on the process rather than the end product.focus on the process rather than the end product.(要要点点3)3)Therefore,what we should praise is our kids Therefore,what we should praise is our kids proper effort,regardless of the result.proper effort,regardless of the result.(要点要点4)4)73字 There are seve
12、ral reasons why school uniforms are a good idea.First of all,uniforms help the school look smart.The students feel that they belong to a particular group.When every pupil in the school wears the uniform,nobody _56_(have)to worry about fashion(时尚).Everybody wears_57_same style of clothes.Uniforms can
13、 be useful in unexpected ways,A school in Ireland has introduced an interesting new uniform.On the edge of the jacket,there is a piece of cloth _58_gives off light in the dark.When the children are walking or _59(cycle)to school on dark mornings,car drivers can _60_(easy)see them.56 has/will have 57
14、 the 58 that/which 59 cycling 60 easily But can uniforms help improve school standards?The answer _61_this question is not clear.One study in America found that students grades _62 _(improve)a little after the school introduced uniforms.But some students didnt want _63_(wear)the uniform.Other Americ
15、an studies showed no _64_(connect)between uniforms and school performance.School uniforms are _65 _(tradition)in Britain,but some schools are starting to get rid of them.Some very good schools dont have a uniform policy.However,uniforms are still popular.Pupils at about 90 percent of British seconda
16、ry schools wear uniforms.61to 62 improved 63 to wear 64 connection/connections 65 traditional A 90-year-old has been awarded“Woman Of The Year”for _(be)Britains oldest full-time employee-still working 40 hours a week.Now Irene Astbury works from 9.am to 5 pm daily at the pet shop in Macclesfield,_ s
17、he opened with her late husband Les.Her years of hard work hve _(final)been acknowledged after a customer nominated her to be Cheshires Woman Of The Year.Picking up her“Lifetime Achievement”award,proud Irene _(declare)she had no plans _(retire)from her 36-year-old business,Irene said,“I dont see any
18、 reason to give up work.I love coming here and seeing my family and all the fiends I_(make)over the years.I work not because I have to,_ because I want to.”Granddaughter Gayle Parks,31-who works alongside her in the family business-said it remained unknown as to who nominated Irene for the award.She said,“We dont have any idea who put grandma forward.When we got a call _(say)she was short-listed,we thought it was _ joke.But then we got an official letter and we were blown way.We are so proud of her.Its _(wonder).beingwhichfinallydeclaredto retirehave madebutsayingawonderful
