1、第二周练(三)写作规范增分练(限时30分钟)第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)(2018日照三模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Jack，Id like to introduce you what has happe
2、ned to the transportation in our city.Firstly, great changes have been taken place to the transportation inside the city, which makes it convenience for citizens to get around.Some narrowly streets have been broadened, but there are less traffic jams.Secondly, transportation to other city has also i
3、mproved.Several highways were under construction, and two highspeed railways connected our city to the national highspeed railway web are close to completion.At that time, the travel time to Beijing will be reduced to three hours.What deserve to be mentioned is that an airport has been in use for se
4、veral years, making your city more and more popular.Yours，Li Hua答案：第一句：introduce后加to第二句：去掉been; convenienceconvenient第三句：narrowlynarrow; butso第四句：citycities第五句：wereare; connectedconnecting第七句：deservedeserves; yourour/the第二节：书面表达(满分25分)(2018名校原创预测卷九)假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，将在你校开展的常春藤夏令营正在招募英语志愿者，你想成为其中的一员。请你根
5、据以下提示给夏令营组委会的Mr. Stevenson写封申请信。要点包括：1写信目的；2个人优势；3表达希望。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：常春藤夏令营Ivy League Summer Camp参考范文：Dear Mr. Stevenson，Im writing to apply for an English volunteer for the Ivy League Summer Camp to be held in my school soon. As we know, Ivy League Camps bring excellent instruc
6、tors across the world to teach campers in a real English environment. Such camps have been fascinating me and I am eager to get access to them.I think I can serve as an outstanding English volunteer for this camp due to the fact that I used to be a volunteer in my community, gaining some relevant working experience. Furthermore, my English is good and I once won the first prize in the English speech competition in my school, which I believe is an advantage over other applicants.I really hope to be one of you. Looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.Yours sincerely，Li Hua
