1、Section(自修课)Writing报告一、基本结构报告的写作可分为以下几个步骤：1按照报告的题头格式，写出报告的呈交人和接收人，报告日期和报告主题。2正文一般由以下四部分组成：(1)简要介绍所报告的对象的基本情况及写作目的。(2)介绍所报告的对象的好的方面。(3)介绍所报告的对象的不好的方面或欠缺之处。(4)最后总结并提出改进的建议或自己的观点。二、增分佳句1The aim of this report is to.2On the one hand,there are some advantages about.3On the other hand,there exist several
2、problems/disadvantages about.4On the other hand,some things exist not so good.5On the other hand,I find these things disappointing.6However,there are many things which could be improved.7In conclusion.need to do something to.题目要求现在有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包，这一现象引起了很大关注。现在请你根据如下内容写一篇英文报告：1父母经常翻看孩子的日记或书包；2不同人对这种
3、现象的不同看法；3你自己的见解。注意：1.词数 100 左右。2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文是一篇；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第人称；3确定时态：主要以为主。二、构思第一部分：提出问题。第二部分：孩子和家长的想法。第三部分：表达自己的想法。一般现在时报告三第二步：核心词汇想周全1 频繁地2厌烦，讨厌3争论4对敏感5.责任6有益于7.印象8心贴心的交谈frequentlybe fed upargue aboutbe sensitive toresponsibilitybenefitimpressiona heart-to-heart talk
4、第三步：由词扩句雏形现1现在一些家长经常查看孩子的书包或日记，这使得他们很厌烦。Now,some parents or read their diaries frequently,and _.2他们认为父母没有责任这么做，因为人人都有权利为自己的隐私保密。They think their parents _ .look into their childrens school bagsit makes their childrenfed uphave no responsibility to do so,foreveryone has his right to have his own secr
5、et3另一些人认为：他们想了解自己的孩子是因为他们关心自己的孩子。Others think they want to know their children _.4我认为：与父母心贴心的交谈是解决这个问题的好办法。As far as Im concerned，we should have a heart-to-heart talk with parents,_.because their parents care about themwhich is a good measure to deal with thisproblem第四步：句式升级造亮点1用非限制性定语从句改写句12用强调句型改写
6、句33用不定式作主语改写句4Nowadays,some parents look into their childrens school bags or read their diaries frequently,which makes their children fed up.Others think it is because their parents care about them that they want to know their children.As far as Im concerned,to have a heart-to-heart talk withparents
7、 should be a good measure to deal with this problem.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Nowadays,some parents look into their childrens school bags or read their diaries frequently,which makes their children fed up.People have been arguing about this topic for a long time.On the one hand,some students are sensitive to this
8、phenomenon and they think it has annoyed them and affected the relation between them and their parents.They think their parents has no responsibility to do so,for everyone has his right to have his own secret.On the other hand,others think it is because their parentscare about them that they want to know their children and thismay benefit their better development,although it may make abad impression on them.As far as Im concerned,to have a heart-to-heart talk withparents should be a good measure to deal with this problem.
