1、Tips:书面表达的质量要求：（1）要点全面、表达准确、语句连贯。2）能用书写体熟练清楚地书写，格式、连笔、词距、标点正确。zxxk（3）书写格式、行文及礼貌用语等无严重错误。（4）基本语法和常用句型无严重错误，意思表达清楚。（5）鼓励使用复杂结构，新颖词汇和顺畅连接。所谓复杂结构包括定语从句、强调句型、倒装、被动、虚拟、非谓语短语、sothat、和with加复合宾语等。注意：（1）仔细审题，看清题目要求与注意事项。（2）确定文章类型，如是记叙文，一般用过去时，如是说明文，主要用现在时。（3）看全内容要点，主要内容缺一不可。（4）尽量写草稿，实在没时间也要写一个简略题纲。（5）用你见过的句型来
2、写，不生造中国式的英文。（6）写好首句尾句，注意关联词语的使用。（7）记叙文注意 who,what,where,when,which,why,how（8）议论文注意论点论据。（9）可适当使用复杂结构和新颖词汇，但应以准 确传达意思为第一原则。（10）书写规范，卷面整洁也要重视。SAMPLEVersions(1)Dear Bob,How are you?I received your letter and very happy.You please me help you a rom,which I was found.With you stermber to our city Jianxinh
3、uawen school to study Chinese.1-5分The room on the Fangcao street,near you school a next.The room is three flood.Have a bed room,a Kitchen and toilet.The bed room has a bed and the desk fo your study,Behind,Kitchen and toilt savd,work the Chilt.Im very happy you can Chinesestudy.The best wish to you!
4、Yours,Li HuaVersions(2)Dear Bob,I hear that you will go to my school to study in sep.Im very happy to heard it.And you asked me to found a house nearly the“Jianxing Huwen Middle School”,6-10分I have found it,its in the Fang Chao road.You can take a 11 bus arrived there.Now,I tell you something about
5、the house.The house rent will cost you 500 Yuan every monthes,the house has 25 kilometers large,has three rooms,such as,bedroom,chitherroom and bathroom,the room is very clean,has a chair,a table and a light,all of them are new one.In a word,its very great,I think you are like it.Last,Im looking for
6、ward you and you all things best!Yours.Lihua 学科网Versions(3)Dear Bob,I already found a flat for you.It is on the Fangchao Street where near Jianxin Chinese school.The next bus stop of Fangchao Street is Jianxin Chinese school.11-15分 I will tell you some information about the flat.There are four rooms
7、,including a living room,bath room and a kitchen.In living room,you will use a sofa,a bed and a desk.And there are three doors to the bath room,kitchen and outside flat.All of above is the flat which I found for you.The house owner said the rent can be discussed if you want to live in.Im look forwar
8、d to your letter.Yours,Li HuaVersions(4)Dear Bob,Im very glad to hear from you and Im very happy to see you in September.I know you will study in Jian Xin Chinese school,16-20分so I have already found a comfortable house near this school for you.In front of the house,there is a bus station and the No
9、.11 bus will take you to the school where you will study.In the house,you will feel very comfortable.In its the biggest room,there have a bed,a sofa,a desk and so on.The house also has a toilet and a kitchen.I think you will have a good time in it.At last,the house is not too big and the rent is 500
10、 per month.will wait for you in the city!Yours,Li HuaVerseions(5)Dear Bob,How glad I was when I heard that you would come to Jian Xin Chinese school to study Chinese.Ive found a house,which youve mentioned in your last letter.21-25分As was expected,its near the school where youll study.As a matter of
11、 fact,its by the side of the road where lies the No.11 bus stop and the school is at the next stop.Let me tell you something in details about the house.For one thing,its large enough for a single person like you to live in.For another,its well equipped.Besides a sofa,a desk with a chair and a bed,th
12、ere are also a washroom and a kitchen.Its 25 square meters with the rent of only 500 yuan each week.It never occurred to me that you would come to study with me.Im looking forward to your coming soon.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua书面表达阶段训练(提高篇)二.使用高级词汇三.用好过渡性关联词一.使用多种句式和复杂结构一.使用多种句式和复杂结构，丰富文章的表现力，提高书面表达档次1
13、.学习使用被动句，以符合英语的表达习惯，使文章丰富多彩。例1:Every one should give back his or her library books on time.(一般 中文习惯)Library books should be returned on time.(高级 英文习惯)例2:People make great use of computers widely in the world.(一般 中文习惯)Computers are widely used in the world.(高级 英文习惯)例1：你老是问我这样的问题！You always ask me suc
14、h questions.（一般）2.尽可能多的使用各种时态变化，丰富语言表现力Youre always asking me such questions！（用现在进行时表示厌烦）例2：我现在住在一间非常舒适的公寓里。I live in a very pleasant flat now（一般）I am now living in a very pleasant flat（用现在进行时表示满意）3、使用名词性从句To my great surprise,he didnt know me at all.(一般)例1：翻译句子：他居然不认识我，这使我非常吃惊What surprised me most
15、 was that he didnt know me at all.(高级)It surprised me that he didnt know me at all.(高级)例2:Eeverybody was disappointed that he didnt turn up.(一般)I was surprised that he didnt know me at all.(高级)The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everybody.(高级)4、使用定语从句例1:The girl is spoken highly of.Hercompos
16、ition was well written.(一般)The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.(高级)例2：The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.(一般)The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street,which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.5、使用状语从句例1:I wont belie
17、ve what he says.(一般)No matter what he says,I wont believe.(高级)例2：He was very glad.He jumpedwith joy.(一般)He was so glad that he jumped with joy.(高级)例3：翻译：天气很好，我们决定去郊游The weather was fine,so we decided to go for an outing.Because the weather was fine,we decided to go for an outing.The weather being fi
18、ne,we decided to go for an outing.6.使用强调句型例1：My parents praised Ah Fu warmly.It had saved my little sister bravely.(一般)My parents praised Ah Fu warmly,because it was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.(高级)例2:My brother really dont know where he had his mobile phone stolen.(一般)My brother
19、really dont know where it was that he had his mobile phone stolen.(高级)7.使用倒装句例1：她下岗了，但是并未灰心丧气。She was laid off.She didnt give up.(简单句）Although she was laid off,she didnt give up.（复合句）Laid off as she was,she didnt give up.（倒装句）例2：Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.（一般）Weak as I am,Ill make the effort
20、.(高级)例3：He came here at 5 pm.yesterday.(一般句式)He did not come here until 5 pm.yesterday.(否定句)Not until/till 5 pm.did he come here yesterday.(倒装句)It was not until 5 pm.that he came here yesterday.(强调句)8.使用好现在分词、过去分词、不定式、动名词等非谓语动词形式。(1).使用不定式例1：The foreigners want to know how they can learn to do Chine
21、se Kongfu well.The foreigners want to know how to learn to do Chinese Kongfu well.例2：She was so weak that she couldnt take care of her baby.She was too weak to take care of her baby.例3.The ice on the lake was so thinthat people couldnt skate on it.The ice on the lake was not thickenough for people t
22、o skate on.(2).使用V-ing形式例1:When he arrives,please give me an e-mail.(一般)On arriving/his arrival,please give me an e-mail.(高级)例2:If the weather permits,Ill come morrow.(一般)Ill come tomorrow,weather permitting.(高级)例3:The driver escaped and didnt stop.He left the old man lying on the road.(一般)The drive
23、r escaped without stopping,leaving the old man lying on the road.(高级)My brother was riding the bike with me sitting on the seat behind.(NMET1997)例4:My brother was riding the bike and I sat on the seat behind him.例5:The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.Hearing the bad news,the
24、 young man couldnt help crying.(3).使用过去分词例1:She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(一般)Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.(高级)Once seen,it can never be forgotten.(高级)例2:Once it is seen,it can never be forgotten.(一般)巩固练习:翻译句子:我建议你三思而行(.think it over before you take
25、action)I suggest that you should think it over before you take action.Youd better think it over before you take action.My suggestion is that you should think it over before you take action.Id like you to think it over before you take action.I think it would be better for you to think it over before
26、you take action.I am utterly in the dark about the matter我对这件事完全不知道。(介词词组in the dark作表语）二.使用高级词汇,增加文章的亮点 Christmas is coming up圣诞节就要到了。（动词短语come up作谓语）对于“较复杂的词汇”，可以从以下几个方面着手。1.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如:原文A new railway is being built in my hometown.修正A new railway is under construction in my hometown2
27、.使用一些很有“洋味”的单词。如:Thank you for sharing the time with us.The way he views the world is very practical.3.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:原文I like reading while my brother likes watching television.修正I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.4.At the foot of the mountain,there was a small river.At the
28、 foot of the mountain,there flowed a small river.5.My parents and I are very pleased to invite you to stay at home.My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us.巩固练习:翻译句子:天一亮,我们就出发.We set out as soon as the day broke.We set out the moment the day broke.We set out immediately the day broke.Ha
29、rdly had the day broke when we set out.No sooner had the day broke than we set out.三.使用过渡性连接成分，使文章流畅、过渡自然、富有逻辑性书 面 表 达 常 用 过 渡 性 词 语（1）表时间的：now,then,afterwards,soon,before long,shortly after that,minutes later,just now,just then,suddenly,immediately,the moment,etc.（2）表顺序及过程的：first(ly),first of all,s
30、econd(ly),at first,then,next,at last,finally,etc.（3）表转折的：but,yet,and yet,instead,however,although,though,otherwise,or else,in spite of,etc.（4）表结果的：thus,therefore,so,as a result,seeing that,luckily,(un)fortunately,etc.（5）表强调的：first of all,above all,indeed,surely,certainly,of course,after all,at least
31、,at most,etc.（6）表并列的：and,also,as well,etc.（7）表递进的：besides,whats more,in addition,even,once more,what was worse,to make things worse,etc.（8）表解释或说明的：in other words,that is,that is to say,namely,for example,actually,and so on,such as,personally,believe it or not,to tell you the truth,according to this,
32、for this reason,etc.（9）表比较的：just like,just as,in the same way,more or less,on the contrary,on one hand,on the other hand,while,etc.（10）表总结的：finally,in conclusion,in a word,in general,generally speaking,in short,as you/we know,in the end,in all,etc.Exercise Time Tell a story1.answer the question What
33、 tense is used in the listening passage to tell a plete the passage with these words.Put the verbs into the present simple tense.about have invent know try sound take place use A:Tell me more about His Dark Material.B:Well,I cant tell you the whole story,because its very long.As you know,the story i
34、s(1)-_ a girl called Lyra and a boy called Will,and it(2)_ in several different worlds.In Lyras world,everyone(3)_ a daemon,a creature that is part of them but separate from them at the same time.This daemon can,for example,be a dog or a bird.Your daemon(4)_everything you think and is your closest f
35、riend.In the story,a group of people(5)_ a machine that can separate a person from his daemon.They(6)_the machine on children.Lyra(7)_to stop this.A:It(8)_ very interesting!B:It is!You should read it!DiscussionIn group of four to discussDid the young man do good things with the ring or bad thing?How
36、 did he do good/bad things withthe ring?Give examples.Did he have problems because of the ring?Did other people find his secret?How?Did the story end happily orunhappily?Step 1.Discuss in group and try to make up an end to the story.Step2.Then write your story down in the way that each one write several sentences in your part.Step 3.At last put your sentences together to form a whole story.组卷网
