1、1Section Reading for Writing有关节日经历的记叙文本单元的写作项目是阅读一篇关于参加“那达慕”大会的经历的文章后，写一篇有关节日经历的记叙文。2.Pre-writing()Learning to write after the modelMY AMAZING NAADAM EXPERIENCEI experienced the Naadam Festival in Chinas Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region for the first time this year.The festival falls on the fourth d
2、ay of the sixth month of the lunar calendar，usually lasting for three days.Naadam means“games”in Mongolian，and it is represented by three events：horse racing，wrestling，and archery，which are all so exciting to watch！3On the first day，I set off to the games early with my friend Burin.I saw a lot of pe
3、ople wearing fancy Mongolian robes.Some were feeding their horses，some were practising archery，and others were chatting or taking photographs.Burin told me that Mongolians travel every year from near and far to attend the festival，just as their ancestors had done for centuries.4After the opening cer
4、emony and some amazing performances，the wrestling competition began.Mongolian wrestling is different from the wrestling in the Olympic Games.There are no rounds，and wrestlers are not separated by weight.The wrestler loses if any part of his body above his knee touches the ground.After singing some s
5、ongs，the competitors danced onto the green field，waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles.I was quite moved by their show of strength and grace.5I absolutely enjoyed the archery，too，but the horse races were my favouritepart.However，I was surprised to see that the riders were boys and girl
6、s!I heard it is because children are lighter and the horse can run faster and farther.At first，I was a little worried about the childrens safety，but Burin said，“Dont worry.Theyve been riding horses all their lives.Theyll be just fine.”That was the moment I started to understand why people say“Horses
7、 are at the heart of Mongolian culture.”Im finally back home now，feeling really tired，but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it.He invited me back for the winter to stay in a traditional Mongolian tent and eat hot pot.I cant wait！6篇章结构Opening paragraph：State the topic.What：the Naada
8、m FestivalWhere：in Chinas Inner Mongolia Autonomous RegionWhen：this year7First Body Paragraph：Describe the start of the festival and the surroundings.Second Body Paragraph：Describe in detail the festival activities.Activities：the wrestling competition，some songs，dance8Third Body Paragraph：Describe i
9、n detail the festival activities.Activities：the archery，the horse racesClosing Paragraph：Give a brief summary of the experience.910()Preparation for writingwords and phrases_ n.娱乐 _ n.庆祝；庆祝会_ n.典礼；仪式，礼节_ n.冠军_ v.&n.欢呼，喝彩_ vi.比赛，竞赛_ n.竞争；竞赛_ n.音乐会；演奏会amusementcelebrationceremonychampioncheercompeteco
10、mpetitionconcert11_ n.事件；大事_ n.盛宴，宴会_ n.节日；庆祝活动_ n.烟火(pl.)烟火表演_ vt.使相配 n.比赛，竞赛_ vi.参加，参与eventfeastfestivalfireworkmatchparticipate12_在度假_穿上盛装；乔装打扮_(节日等)是在(某天)_期望，期待，盼望_在特殊场合_燃放鞭炮be on holiday/leave/vacationdress upfall on(some day)look forward toon special occasionsset off fireworks13.While-writing假
11、如你是May，在刚刚过去的春节里，你应邀前往中国与笔友一起欢度中国年。请你用英语写一篇100词左右的短文来记录这一段难得的异国经历和感受。内容包括：1.春节期间你们参加了什么活动；2.谈谈你的感受。14Step 1List the outline of the passage.Paragraph 1：_Paragraph 2：_Paragraph 3：_I was invited to enjoy the Spring Festival.Describe the experience in detail.Brief summary and the feelings.15Step 2List t
12、he words，phrases and sentences.1.Words and phrases_ adj.高兴的；满意的 _ vt.邀请_ adj.愉快的；快乐的_探索外国文化_一个特殊的场合pleasedinviteenjoyableexplore a foreign culturea special occasion16_聚会；联欢_传统食品_参加_独特的文化和迷人的风景_ adj.(经历)难以忘怀的；不会被遗忘的get togethertraditional foodsparticipate inunique culture and attractive sceneryunforg
13、ettable172.Sentences很高兴，我的一个中国笔友邀请我和她一起度过了上一个春节。_中国的春节是中国家庭团聚的特殊日子，所以我们一起拜访了她的一些家人和亲戚。(so)_I was pleased that one of my pen pals in China invited me to stay with her during the past Spring Festival.The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families to get together so we visited
14、some of her families and relatives together.18此外，我们试吃了一些传统食物，看了舞龙舞狮，并参加了一些其他的庆祝活动，如庙会。(besides，such as)_在我看来，探索外国文化确实值得。(worthwhile)_Besides，we tried some traditional foods，watched Dragon and Lion dance and participated in some other celebration activities such as a temple fair.In my point of view，i
15、ts indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.19Step 3Draft the passage by using the following words.so，besides，such as，in my point of viewI was so pleased that one of my pen pals in China invited me to stay with her during the past Spring Festival.That was really an enjoyable and unforgettable
16、experience for me.The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families to get together so we visited some of her families and relatives together.Besides，we tried some traditional foods，watched Dragon and Lion dance and participated in some other celebration activities such as a te
17、mple fair.20Greatly impressed by Chinese unique culture and attractive scenery，I have known further about China.In my point of view，its indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.21.Post-writingpolishing the passageExchange your passage with your partner and pay attention to the following points
18、.1.Does the writer describe his experience in detail?2.Does the writer show his feelings in the passage?3.Is the text well-organised?4.Are there any grammar or spelling mistakes?5.Does the writer use correct punctuations？22亮点表达1.As Teachers Day was approaching，our class decided to hold a party to ce
19、lebrate the important day for a change this year.随着教师节的临近，今年为了换一种方式来庆祝这个重要的日子，我们班决定举办一场晚会。2.The MidAutumn Festival is a traditional festival of China，which is actually a day for family reunion.中秋节是中国的传统节日，实际上是家人团聚的日子。233.On the Eve of the Spring Festival，firstly，family members get together and have
20、big meals.Secondly，they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.在除夕，家庭成员首先聚在一起吃大餐，然后他们观看电视上的春节联欢晚会。4.It is said that TombSweeping Day，which falls on April 5th，has a history of several thousand years.4月5日是清明节，据说它有几千年的历史。5.After the meal they watch TV until the clock strikes twelve.饭后他们看电视一直到12点。246.This
21、 will be an unforgettable experience.这将是一段难忘的经历。7.Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.我想邀请你下周六和我们一起去附近的敬老院过重阳节。8.Well also spend some time together singing，dancing and playing games，which we hope will make them happy.我们也会花一些时间在一起唱歌，跳舞和玩游戏，我们希望能让他们开心。25写作技巧在写作时要注意以下几点：1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息。该写作要明确以下要点：春节期间你们参加了什么活动；谈谈你的感受。2.提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定的逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。本文主要使用过去时。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，增加文章的亮点。
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