1、读后续写微写作情感描写之“吃惊”(二)素材积累必备单词副词:astonishingly 令人惊讶地;令人震惊地;令人惊叹地高级词块1freeze with shock震惊的动弹不得2feel/get surprised/astonished/amazed/shocked感到震惊3shake ones head in disbelief 难以置信地摇摇头4a flash of surprise一丝惊讶素材运用第一步按要求完成下列句子。1迈克慢慢地转过身向窗外望去,结果他面对的只是一堵空白的墙。Mike slowly turned to look out of the window, only t
2、o face a blank wall . (动词不定式短语作结果状语)2他呆住了,惊奇地张大了嘴。 He froze, his mouth hanging open in surprise .(独立主格)3他既困惑又惊讶,目瞪口呆地看着墙。“为什么是一堵墙?”他喃喃自语。 Confused and astonished , he gaped at the wall.“Why is it a wall?” he murmured.(形容词短语作状语)4似乎过了很长一段时间,他才回过神来,转向护士问道:“约翰是怎么看到外面那些令人印象深刻的景色,并描述给我听的呢?” After what see
3、med a long time , he recovered himself and turned to the nurse, asking, “How could John have seen those impressive views outside and describe them for me?” (what从句作宾语)5护士慢慢答道:“也许他只是想鼓励你。实际上,约翰是个盲人,他看不见墙。”The nurse replied slowly, “Perhaps he just wanted to encourage you.Actually, John was blind and
4、could not see the wall .”6听了这些话,他惊得下巴掉在了地上。Hearing this, his jaw dropped to the ground .(夸张)第二步将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵,注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇。参考范文:Mike slowly turned to look out of the window, only to face a blank wall.He froze, his mouth hanging open in surprise.Confused and astonished, he gaped at the wall.“Why is
5、it a wall?” he murmured.After what seemed a long time, he recovered himself and turned to the nurse, asking, “How could John have seen those impressive views outside and describe them for me?”The nurse replied slowly, “Perhaps he just wanted to encourage you.Actually, John was blind and could not see the wall.”Hearing this, his jaw dropped to the ground.