1、写作指导 栏目索引 课标卷外研版 英语 写作指导二 高级词汇写作指导 栏目索引 1 高级词汇指导 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少,也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标准。词汇的运用不仅要准确,更要丰富。经常把第一反应词翻来覆去地使用,会导致文章用词的质量上不去。要让语言表达书面化、多样化,就要做到“人无我有,人有我优”,多使用第二反应词甚至第三反应词。写作指导 写作指导 栏目索引 第一反应词聪明的clever令人惊奇的 surprising乐happy悲 sad/unhappy感到满意的satisfied 平静 quiet烦 bored 生气 angry 怕 afraid失望disappointed 努力
2、的hard 非常,相当very(much)替换词(第二反应词)smart,intelligentamazing,astonishingpleased,amused,delighted,enjoyable,over the moonpainful,bittercontent calm,peacefulbe fed up withannoyed,cross,fly into a ragefrightened,scareddepressed,desperatediligent写作指导 栏目索引 越来越多more and more 许多的many 几乎不hardly仅仅 only好,棒极了 good有
3、益的helpful糟糕的 bad旧的,古老的old适当的 right不必要的unnecessary首先 first明显的obvious准确的truediligentextremely,rather,badly,desperately,ex-ceedingly,intenselyincreasing,growingan ocean of,a sea of,an army of,a host of,amultitude of barely,scarcelymerelyamazing,outstanding,miraculous,mar-velousbeneficial,rewardingdread
4、ful,unfavorable,adverseancient写作指导 栏目索引 准确的true著名的famous 详细的detailed重要的 important 相信 believe认为think操控operate解释,说明 explain使用,利用 use导致lead to吸收absorb想要want to总之 in a wordproper,appropriate,appositehardly necessaryinitially,primarily,first and foremostconspicuousexact,accuratewell-known,prestigious spe
5、cificsignificant,crucial,vital,consequential,of great importance be convinced,hold the belief thattake the attitude that,it is widely shared thatmanipulate写作指导 栏目索引 期待expect参加join考虑consider对感兴趣be interested in 奉献devote to注意,重视pay attention to interpret,illustrateemploy,utilizecontribute to,result in
6、take in,assimilateintend to,tend to,be inclined toto summarize,in conclusionanticipateparticipate in take into accountsth.appeals to sb.,sth.exerts a tremendous fascination on sb.dedicate topour attention into,attach importance to 写作指导 栏目索引 续表吸引attract ones attention记得remember不同意disagree/be against习
7、俗,传统custom人们people/persons事实上 in fact 例如for example 但是but 因为because假如 ifcapture ones attentionbear in mindfrown on sth.convention,traditionindividualsactually,virtually,as a matter of factfor instance,as an examplenonetheless,neverthelessin thatprovided写作指导 栏目索引 2 写作典例(2014山东)某英文报社组织主题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活
8、动,你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文,内容须包括:1.该谚语的含义;2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。A friend in need is a friend indeed.Where theres a will,theres a way.注意:1.词数:120150;2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。写作指导 栏目索引 参考词汇:谚语proverb【范文】Where there is a will,there is a wayI first saw this sentence when I entered junior high school.The moment
9、I came into the classroom,I saw the sentence on the blackboard.I like the proverb because it tells a valuable philosophy of life.Achieving ourgoals is always not easy,but if we have a strong will,we are sure to realize them.写作指导 栏目索引 Once I was not very good at English.I didnt know enough English wo
10、rds and my grammar was also poor,which really made me upset.Fortunately,my English teacher noticed my bad situation and said to me,“Dont lose heart.Remember:where there is a will,there is a way.”Suddenly I was re-minded of the sentence on the blackboard!From then on,I decided to work hard on my Engl
11、ish and it finally paid off.My English improved a lot and,more importantly,I gained much confidence.写作指导 栏目索引【写作点评】(1)作者运用了一些较为高级的词汇和短语:enter,valuable,upset,fortunate-ly,lose heart,from then on等,丰富了表达的内容。(2)熟练地使用了各类词或短语引导的状语从句:the moment,because,if等,使整篇文章结构紧凑、表达自如。(3)准确地运用了过渡词语,使上下句连接顺畅,增加了得分点。写作指导
12、栏目索引 3 跟踪训练(2015浙江诸暨中学期中)高中生由于冲动并且不知道如何用正确的方法控制自己而往往会引发同学间的冲突。请根据此现象用英语写一篇100词左右的文章。内容要求如下:1.记述一件发生在你自己或身边同学身上的一次同学之间的冲突。2.简要阐述冲突发生时该如何正确处理。注意:文章首句已给出(不计入总词数)Conflicts among us students are quite common because we are impulsive and dont know how to control ourselves when they happen.写作指导 栏目索引【范文】Con
13、flicts among us students are quite common because we are impulsive and dont know how to control ourselves when they happen.The other day,while waiting for my turn in the canteen,I stepped on another boys toes quite by accident.Immediately,I apologized.The boy,however,glared at me,saying that I did t
14、hat deliberately.His rude remarks annoyed me too.I turned my back to him and tried to ignore him.But to my great surprise,he pushed me hard from behind.It was more than I could bear and eventually the quar-rel changed into an act of violence.Despite the fact that conflicts are unavoidable,we,when involved,ought to keep calm,put ourselves into others shoes and find a proper way out rather than let the situation become worse.In this case,we are sure to live in peace with those around us.
