1、走向高考 英语路漫漫其修远兮 吾将上下而求索人教版(课标卷地区)高考总复习 基础知识聚焦第一部分 解题策略(四)短文改错之高效解题模型第一部分 1“不一致性”错误主要包括:主、谓语不一致;时态不一致;语态不一致;名词的单、复数不一致;代词指代不一致;搭配不一致等。【例1】(2013陕西卷)Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.解析:此句是名词的单、复数不一致错误。minute由few修饰,故应用复数形式。【例2】(2013四川卷)I didnt cheat.I was just helping a friend
2、.Why does she punish me?解析:此句是时态不一致错误。由于整个故事是发生在过去,故does改为did。【例3】(2013辽宁卷)I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped.解析:此句是代词指代不一致错误。指代Mr.Johnson,故应该把her改为his。2“行文逻辑”错误这种错误主要是运用行文逻辑,考查连接手段。谨记两种句式:并列句(并列连词),复合句(从属连词);六种关系:转折关系,选择关系,层递关系,并列关系,因果关系,同位关系;一种变化:语义的曲折变化。如:肯定与否定,方位与时空的转移等。【例4】(2
3、013陕西卷)I wanted to give up,and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer.解析:此句是行文逻辑错误。根据句意可知,前后分句之间是转折关系,故and改为but。【例5】(2013四川卷)We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents.解析:此句是行文逻辑错误。根据句意“她警告我们不要再作弊,否则她要告知我们的父母”可知,此处应把so改为or。3“平行结构”错误平行结构是指两个或更多的词、词组或从句具有相似或相等的句法功能。
4、在表达相互平行的概念时,要使用相同的语法结构,即动词与动词相配,形容词与形容词相配,分词与分词相配,不定式与不定式相配,短语与短语相配。平行结构经常借助于并列连词and,but,or或连词词组not only.but also.,not.but.,either.or.,neither.nor.,as well as等。【例6】(2012全国)For example,how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the lights or television when no one else was there?解析:此句是谓语不
5、平行错误。根据句法,leave在时态上应和walked保持一致,故leave改为left。【例 7】Do some nice things for your parents.like cooking,doing the dishing,or clean the floors.解 析:此 句 是 宾 语 不 平 行 错 误。根 据 句 法,clean和cooking,doing一样作介词like的宾语,故clean改为cleaning。【例8】On the other hand,40%think that fees should be charged because you need money
6、 to pay gardeners and other workers,and buy plants and young trees.解析:此句是状语不平行错误。根据句法,buy应和to pay gardeners保持一致,故buy前加to。4“词性、词形”错误主要包括名词的单复数变化、代词的词形变化以及形容词和副词的词形变化。弄清词性与词性之间的相互修饰关系。比如:形容词修饰名词,副词修饰形容词、动词、分词等。【例9】(2013陕西卷)After waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to get impatiently.解析:此句是词
7、性错误。get是系动词,后跟形容词作表语,故impatiently改为impatient。【例10】(2013新课标全国卷)He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town.解析:此句是词性错误。根据句意“他深沉的声音把他和别人区别开来”可知,himself应改为him。【例11】(2013新课标全国卷)In fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.解析:
8、此句是词性错误。during是介词,不能接从句,故该during为when。5“动词的变化”错误主要包括时态的词形变化、被动语态的词形变化、非谓语动词的词形变化以及第三人称单数等。【例12】(2013四川卷)Mary,my best friend,asking me to let her to copy my answers.解析:此句是谓语动词错误。由句式结构可知,本句需要谓语动词,结合上下文语境可知asking应改为asked。【例13】(2013陕西卷)Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.解析:此句
9、是非谓语动词错误。feel是感官动词,无被动语态,此处用非谓语动词形式作状语,Felt改为Feeling。【例14】(2013四川卷)After think for some time,I let her copy my answers.解析:此句是非谓语动词错误。介词after后应跟动名词,故think改为thinking。6“特殊疑问词”“连词”和“引导词”错误,特别是which和that引导定语从句、抽象名词后面常常跟that引导的同位语从句等。【例15】(2013大纲全国卷)This is how I need to improve in the future.解析:此句是引导词错误。
10、根据句意“这是我将来所需要提高的地方”可知,how应改为what或where.【例16】(2013辽宁卷)That is which other teachers say.解析:此句是引导词错误。表示其他老师的说话内容要用what,what引导表语从句并作say的宾语。7“多词”错误多词错误一般有如下几种类型:1)受母语思维影响,出现汉语式结构,造成冗言;2)不明词义内涵,造成词义重叠;3)介词多余;4)助动词、系动词多余;5)多冠词;6)定语从句中的成分重复;7)程度副词和频率副词,如much,more,often等的多余;8)多余小品词to等。【例17】(2012陕西卷)As soon a
11、s we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.解析:此句是连词多余错误。本句是主从复合句,从句中已经含有连词as soon as,所以主句中不需加并列连词,故去掉so。【例18】(2013大纲全国卷)My mother is very much kind and is friendly to everybody.解析:此句是副词多余错误。much不能修饰形容词原级,本句也无比较意义,故去掉much。8“缺词”错误缺词现象常见有:1)缺系动词;2)缺介词;3)缺冠词、物主代词等限定词;4)在定语从句中缺关系代词或关系副词;5)缺连接词;6)缺否定词;7)缺不定式符号to等。【例19】(2013四川卷)The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the test.解析:此句是定冠词缺失错误。same要和定冠词the 连用,故加the。【例20】(2013大纲全国卷)Ill think quickly and stand to answer.解析:此句是副词缺失错误。根据句意“站起来回答问题”,故在stand 后加up。