1、第四板块写作高考总复习大二轮 山东版 英语 第三部分 概要写作浙江卷三年考情分析年份写作类型信息提示体裁话题题材内容字数要求2019年 6 月概要写作汉语提示议论文社会生活父母对孩子的表扬60 字左右2018年 11月概要写作汉语提示说明文学校生活申请大学之前应对其了解60 字左右命题者说1.考纲要求提供一篇 350 词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。概要写作或读后续写，两种形式在不同考次不定期交换使用。2.考查特点概要写作属于限制性写作。主要考查考生凝缩大段阅读文字的概括能力，如考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力。同时，考查考生用简洁的语言概括
2、文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。3.选材特点(1)所需阅读的短文词数在 350 以内；(2)所选材料体裁没有限制，以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。4.题型特点简言之，概要写作就是对所读过的文章简要概括，写出文章的中心大意，也可称之为摘要。写概要时，读者要把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而不是抄袭文章的原句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换，对文章的具体信息进行概括，再用合适的语言表述出来。因此，概要写作基于阅读理解和书面表达，是二者的有机结合体，是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁。5.命题趋势自从 2016 年 10 月
3、以来，浙江省在高考中 2018 年 11 月和 2019年 6 月都考查了概要写作，考虑到高考的延续性和稳定性，不可忽视该题型。(2019浙江卷 6 月概要写作)阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。Parents everywhere praise their kids.Jenn Berman,author of The Ato Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids,says,“Weve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended
4、 to be more strict.”By giving kids a lot of praise,parents think theyre building their childrens confidence,when,in fact,it may be just the opposite.Too much praise can backfire and,when given in a way thats insincere,make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to st
5、ay on top where their parents praise has put them.Still,dont go too far in the other direction.Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much.Kids will feel like theyre not good enough or that you dont care and,as a result,may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishment
6、s.So what is the right amount of praise?Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity.If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome,you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward.“We should especially recognize our ch
7、ildrens efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal，”says Donahue，author of Parenting Without Fear：Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters.“One thing to remember is that its the process not the end product that matters.”Your son may not be the best basketball player on
8、 his team.But if hes out there every day and playing hard,you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses.Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard,cook dinner,or finish a book report.But whatever
9、 it is,praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的)to the amount of effort your child has put into it._范文欣赏Nowadays,parents tend to offer considerate praise to their children,hoping to boost their confidence,but it may produce the opposite effect.However,no praise from pa
10、rents also does harm to their self-confidence.Therefore,experts claim that sincere praise should be given for the process not for the result.Meanwhile,kids do deserve praise if they strive to do their duty.Anyway,the amount of praise you give depends on how hard they work.名师点评本文的要点可以归纳如下：要点 1，如今，父母总
11、是给孩子们太多的赞扬，希望增强他们的自信，但是这可能会产生相反的效果；要点 2，然而，父母不表扬他们的孩子同样有损孩子的自信心；要点 3，因此，专家认为，父母应该因为努力过程而赞扬孩子，而不是因为事情的结果；要点 4，同时，孩子如果做事尽职尽责，确实值得被赞扬。总之，你能给的赞扬程度应取决于他们的努力程度。一、文本解读1细读所给材料可知，文章以议论为主，主题是父母表扬孩子过多或者过少都会带来不良的影响，对孩子的表扬应着重于孩子努力的过程而非结果。2文章从表扬过多、表扬过少、表扬的正确方式以及要根据实际情况进行表扬等方面进行了论述。3文章一共有 4 段，每一段就是一个意义段，因此确定需归纳的要点
12、为 4 个。二、剪枝存精1第一段第一句首先揭示现状：父母到处表扬孩子。第二句通过引用其他人的话对第一句传达的信息表达了看法。第三句给出了作者的观点：父母认为给孩子很多表扬能培养他们的自信心，但事实上可能事与愿违。第四句进一步表明了作者的观点：过多不诚恳的表扬会让孩子害怕自己不能与表扬相匹配，从而不敢尝试新事物。2第二段第一句强调不要走向另一个极端：表扬过少。第二句指出表扬太少和表扬太多一样会产生不良影响。第三句说明不良影响的具体表现。3第三段第一句首先提出疑问：多少表扬才是合适的？然后陈述专家们的观点：表扬的质量比数量更重要。第三句对该观点进一步作出阐述：假如表扬是真诚的，关注孩子的努力而不是
13、结果，那么可以在孩子做了值得表扬的事情的时候多表扬。最后引用 Donahue 的话，强调努力的过程很重要。4第四段前两句提出：你儿子也许不是篮球队里面最好的运动员，但是假如他每天打球很努力，那么不管他的球队输还是赢，你都应该表扬他的努力。第三句指出，表扬努力的过程而不是结果也意味着当他们努力清扫庭院、做饭或完成读书报告时，你也要认可他们。最后一句总结观点：表扬应该视情况而定，与孩子付出的努力相称。三、归纳要点各段的要点明确了，段落大意也已经很清楚。通过同义转述和句子结构重组就可以用自己的语言完成写作。四、修正定稿初稿完成后，检查 4 个要点是否齐全，各要点是否表述准确，检查是否有语法错误、拼写
14、错误及标点符号错误等，最后检查词数是否符合要求。满分作文Contrary to the past,parents give too much praise to their kids.(要点 1)However,praising them too much or too little can be damaging.(要点 2)When giving praise,parents should be genuine and focus on the effort rather than the result.(要点 3)They are supposed to give praise acco
15、rding to how much effort their kids have put into the work they chose to do.(要点 4)阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。Mothers Day is the time to comfort your mom with your pure love for her and make her feel special for the fact that she shows you the light of this world.It is that day when you should hand
16、over to her something very personal,something that is a product of your own labor.Take a look at these craft ideas provided here.Use these splendid craft-making tips to make awesome crafts designed for Mothers Day and gift them to your mom or even use them to decorate your home during the occasion.I
17、f you find these Mothers Day craft ideas useful for your purpose,click here and refer this page to your friends and dear ones.There is one more interesting section for all you kids out there on Mothers Day.Here is a collection of six images to color.Just click on any of the thumbnails(小图),and you wi
18、ll get the full image in a new window.Then print that page,and start coloring!This is a grand way to say thanks to mothers and make them feel special.We have Mothers Day certificates that you can print out and personalize.We even have a blank certificate so that you can fill in whatever you like.Jus
19、t click on any certificate thumb,and it will open in a new window.Then print it out.It is more than an invitation card,and here you can be a designer!Design your own Mothers Day invitation card,and save the image to your device.You can also choose to send the link only by e-mail or messenger.Feel fr
20、ee to choose a given text,or add/edit your own text.Clicking/touching on the images will give you all the options.参考范文Mothers Day deserves your special expression of love for your mother，and you can make some gifts for her by yourself.(要点 1)You can download some images，print them and color them for your mom.(要点2)Besides，you can say thanks to your mother by printing out Mothers Day certificates from the website.(要点 3)You can also design your own Mothers Day invitation card and show your love by the given text or your own text.(要点 4)
