1、第四板块写作高考总复习大二轮 山东版 英语 第三讲 润色习作的 3 种高效策略 精准选词，妙笔生花从书面表达的评分标准中可以看出，恰当选用贴切、地道的高级词汇对提高书面表达的得分非常重要。写作时恰当使用一些大多数考生有可能想不到的词汇，恰当地求新求异或使用较为高级的短语、习语等来代替普通词汇，可以提高文章的得分档次。为写作增添色彩。请考生牢记并熟练运用下面的词汇。一、选用高级词汇“四原则”1具体性原则在具备一定词汇量的条件下，具体的表达比泛泛而谈的内容更能引起阅卷人的共鸣。例如：当描述一个具体事物或人时，类似 a nice/good man 的表达让人感觉很空洞，我们可以用有个性的，具体的词描
2、绘一个人，如 kind-hearted(好心的)；generous(慷慨的；大方的)；easy-going(随和的)等。再如：It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a goodatmosphere.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.2新颖性原则写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。In the coming three years，our school lif
3、e will be difficult.In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging.3短语优先原则多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and Id like you to help me.I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and Id like you to do me a f
4、avor.(全国卷书面表达)4避免重复原则尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.If you want to participate，you can send your photos to .Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.If you want to join，you can send your photos to .(全国卷书面表达)二、高级词汇积累 45 例1另外
5、 besidesin addition/whats more2总之 in a wordto sum up/in conclusion/in summary3但是 buthowever4机会 chanceopportunity5选择 choicealternative6考虑 considertake into account/consideration7最终 finallyeventually8勤奋的 hard-workingdiligent9分发 hand outdistribute10后果 resultconsequence11应该 shouldbe supposed to12决定 deci
6、demake up ones mind13理解 understandmake sense of/figure out14可用的 usableavailable15使用 useemploy/make use of16艰难的 difficultpainstaking17改正，修改 correctpolish18不同的 differentvarious19想要 wantintend20做，从事 dotake up21获得 getgain22记住 rememberkeep in mind23种类繁多 all kinds ofa wide range of24和 andas well as25反对 be
7、 againstobject to26厌烦 be bored withbe fed up with27忙于 be busy in/withbe occupied in/with28发生 happenoccur/come about29提高 improvepromote30重要的 importantvital31立即 immediatelyin a flash32参加 joinparticipate33巨大的 largeenormous34有意义的 meaningfulrewarding35许多 manya large quantity of36明显的 obviousapparent37合适的
8、properappropriate38丰富的 richabundant39与不同 be different fromdiffer/vary from40渴望做be eager to dobe dying to do/long to do41因为 because ofon account of42闻名 be famous forhave a reputation for43越来越多 more and morean increasing number of44感到舒心 feel comfortablefeel at ease45成功做某事 succeed in doing sth.make it题
9、组过关 1升级文中加黑词汇Dear editor，With the development of economy，more and more(1._)Chinese people are making a trip at home and abroad，which makes us not only enjoy more beautiful scenery but also learn more about the culture and the customs of the places we visit.Unfortunately，some of us shout loudly，litte
10、r or spit in public，which has harmed(2._)the good reputation of us Chinese.In my opinion，when going on trips，we should behave ourselves and obey the culture and customs there.Besides(3._)，the environment should(4._)be protected.In this way，we will win respect for ourselves and(5._)our country.Finall
11、y(6._)，we should always remember(7._)that it is everyones responsibility to uphold the image of our motherland.Yours sincerely，Li Hua答案：1.an increasing number of 2.done harm to 3.In addition 4.is supposed to 5.as well as6Eventually 7.keep in mind 句式丰富，表述地道写作文时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并注意句式的灵活多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生
12、深厚的语言功底得以体现，让作文跨上五档线！一、利用复合句式，提升文章档次复合句包括定语从句，状语从句和名词性从句(主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句)。1增加亮点的定语从句定语从句的应用可以非常有效地提升表达档次，在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句，或者把并列句改为含有定语从句的复合句，这些都能为文章增加亮点。I am Li Hua，a student from China.I am studying in London during the summer holiday.I am Li Hua，a student from China，who is stud
13、ying in London during the summer holiday.(2019全国卷书面表达)The film is mainly related to the development of our school.It will greatly help us students know the schools history better and appeal to us to make contributions to our schools development.The film is mainly related to the development of our sc
14、hool，which will greatly help us students know the schools history better and appeal to us to make contributions to our schools development.(2019全国卷书面表达)We will go to Spring Mountain and there we can have a chimb.We will go to Spring Mountain where we can have a climb.(2017浙江卷 6 月应用文写作)2吸引眼球的状语从句在英语写
15、作中，状语从句是经常用到的句型，它的灵活运用能使作文更具吸引力。Secondly，the inconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to share Chinese culture.(2019江苏卷书面表达)If you have any opinion about the film，please send emails to .(2018全国卷书面表达)We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books.(2016全国卷书面表达)Whe
16、n it comes to the season I like best，spring will always occur to me in no time.(2016四川卷书面表达)3提升档次的名词性从句名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句，是写作中常见的高级表达方式。I think that I am qualified to be a volunteer.(宾语从句)(2019全国卷书面表达)I do believe that I am very qualified for this voluntary work，because I have a good comman
17、d of spoken English.(宾语从句)(2018浙江卷 6 月书面表达)It is known that we can benefit a lot from playing Ping Pong.(主语人句)(2017全国卷书面表达)Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice.(表语从句)(2017北京卷书面表达)二、利用句式变化、增加得分亮点(一)常用 7 大句式，考场驾轻就熟写作中，如果考生能够使用如强调句型，倒装句型等特殊句式，不仅能彰显考生的英语水平，还能提升写作档次。1省略句I
18、f accepted，I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors.(2019全国卷书面表达)As(it is)scheduled，we participated in severalinstructive activities.(2016天津卷书面表达)While taking this line，we can enjoy the beautiful scenery as well as the new looks of the villages and towns along the way.(2019昆明调研书面表达)2并列句型I
19、 suggest that you begin from Beijing，and Ill show you around.(2019北京卷书面表达)To be honest，voters sometimes feel annoyed，not because they hate voting，but because they are divided between emotion and fairness.(2016江苏卷书面表达)Visiting this exhibition，we will not only enjoy the folk art works，but also learn a
20、 lot.(2017全国卷书面表达)3强调句型that displays the richness，delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture with a history of thousands of years.(2019江苏卷书面表达)It is through this voluntary work that it will enable me to learn English better and meanwhile to broaden my horizons.(2018浙江卷 6月书面表达)4it 句型It is sad
21、for me to hear that youll return to your country soon.(it作形式主语)(2019浙江卷应用文写作)I think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you.(it 作形式宾语)(2017全国卷书面表达)Everyone in our society should help those in need，but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.(it 作形式主语)5倒装句At no ti
22、me should you let phone games absorb you again and disappoint your parents.(2019四川重点中学评估书面表达)Not only is it a practical technique for writing Chinese characters，but its a unique art form to purify our souls as well.(2019福州质量检查书面表达)6虚拟语气I wish that you could grasp this opportunity to learn traditiona
23、l Chinese culture further.(2017全国卷书面表达)Also，its time that I took it into consideration what I will take up in the future.(2019昆明质量检查书面表达)7with 复合结构With prices going up so fast,we cant afford luxuries.(2019东北三省四市教研模拟)In the picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table wit
24、h a pile of books on it.(2019潍坊二模)(二)言简意明的非谓语动词恰当地运用非谓语动词，不仅句型多样、句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑、言简意明。1Knowing an exhibition of Chinese painting will be held at the gallery next month，Im writing to apply for the chance to become a volunteer.(2019全国卷书面表达)2I would be happy to wear traditional Chinese clothes at the we
25、lcome ceremony.(2019江苏卷书面表达)3Although the traditional Chinese dress may look more beautiful and stylish，it is a little bit strange to walk around in it.(2019江苏卷书面表达)4Located behind the library，the newly-built stadium looks really beautiful.(2018全国卷书面表达)5Hearing that you are recruiting some volunteer
26、s to welcome the coming foreign students，I am gladly writing to apply for this job.(2018浙江卷 6 月书面表达)6To get admitted，I have made good preparations beforehand，tryingto know as much as I could about my city.(2017天津卷书面表达)题组过关 21句型转换For another reason，different cultures and traditions from the past lead
27、 to many foreigners living and working there with gladness.(变强调句型)_You can expect to receive only when you learn to give.(变为倒装句)_When we are faced with difficulties，we need friends to give us comfort and help.(变为含有非谓语动词的简单句)_Its time for us to take measures to protect endangered animals.(用虚拟语气改写句子)_
28、2合并句子Our school is located in a northern city of China.In our school，you can taste many kinds of delicious food.It is well famous for its snacks.(用定语从句和原因状语从句合并句子)_He said a lot at the meeting.His words were very attractive.(用名词性从句合并句子)_We should speak more English.We think it is very important.(用 i
29、t作形式宾语改写句子)_答案：1.For another reason，it is different cultures and traditions from the past that lead to many foreigners living and working there with gladness.Only when you learn to give can you expect to receive.Faced with difficulties，we need friends to give us comfort and help.Its time we should t
30、ake measures to protect endangered animals.2Our school is located in a northern city of China，where you can taste many kinds of delicious food，because it is well famous for its snacks.What he said at the meeting was very attractive.We think it very important to speak more English.衔接过渡，巧妙运用衔接与过渡词语的运用
31、是语言连贯性得以实现的重要途径。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接性语言是非常必要的。考生应掌握的连接性词语如下：1起创造良好开端表示“起”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有：first，firstly，first of all，at first，in the first place，above all，to begin/start with，today，now，nowadays，at present，recently，generally speaking，according to 等。First，I think everyone needs fr
32、iends and is eager to get friendship.First of all，Id like to know when the class will start and how many students there will be in a class.Nowadays/Recently，people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic.To begin/start with，smoking should be banned in public areas.Generally speaki
33、ng,the more you practise，the more skillfully you can write in English.2承顺势承上启下表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。常见的词汇有：second/secondly，also，besides，in addition，soon afterwards，after that，whats more，furthermore，moreover，whats worse，still less，to make matters worse，worse still，for example，in other words，especia
34、lly，particularly，obviously，meanwhile，at the same time 等。Besides，it is big enough to hold all the teachers and students in our school.(2018全国卷书面表达)Whats more，the stadium opens from 9 am.to 5 pm.Monday to Friday.(2018全国卷书面表达)In addition，there are famous artists who will perform how to cut paper on the
35、 spot.(2017全国卷书面表达)As far as Im concerned，every summer I stay at my uncles house in the country for three weeks and enjoy a wonderful life there.(2016四川卷书面表达)Meanwhile/At the same time，I will regard it as my duty to keep our environment clean and healthy.3转巧妙转折过渡表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。常见的词汇有：but，y
36、et，however，while，otherwise，or(else)，on the contrary，on the other hand，contrary to，in any case，though，although，as，even if/though，despite，in spite of，regardless of 等。On the other hand，online shopping also has many disadvantages.On the contrary，the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the lif
37、e on earth.However，a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.(2016浙江卷 6 月书面表达)But now，because my left foot was injured，I cannot go with you as planned.4合完美结束全文表示“合”的词汇常用于小结段落中上文的内容，引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。常见的词汇有：finally，last but not least，in short，in brief，in conclusion，in a/one wor
38、d，to sum up，all in all，on the whole，in general 等。All in all，traveling is the best choice to recharge our-selves and get ready for the new challenges.On the whole，I find a bike more enjoyable than a motorcycle.In a word，success is important，and so is failure，because its the mother of success.To sum u
39、p，environmental protection is of great importance，which can make us live more comfortably and healthily.题组过关 3选择适当的过渡词或短语填空Recently many schools have taken tough measures to forbid students to bring their mobile phones to school.1._，some students break this rule and some even play with their mobile
40、phones in class.The disadvantages of students bringing mobile phones to school are obvious.2._，mobile phones can distract students attention.3._，some students may get access to some unhealthy websites，which are bad for their development.4._，some students are likely to compare the brands of their mob
41、ile phones with their classmates.5 _，I strongly support banning mobile phones in schools.Only in this way can we devote more energies to our study and achieve our goals.答案：1.However 2.On the one hand 3.On the other hand 4.Worst of all 5.In my opinion.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中加黑部分1As high school students，we shou
42、ld be neatly dressed when at school.are_supposed_to2The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.painstaking3Well try our best to improve the traditional friendship between us.promote4He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.made_up_his_mind5When you are bored w
43、ith the people sometimes，youd better find a quiet place，listening to some classical music.fed_up_with.句式升级1Ive always longed for the days.I will be able to be independent then.(用定语从句合并句子)Ive_always_longed_for_the_days_when_I_will_be_able_to_be_independent.2This is my decision.All of us are to start
44、at 6 o clock tomorrow morning.(用表语从句合并句子)My_decision_is_that_all_of_us_are_to_start_at_6_oclock_tomorrow_morning.3We all know that our friends will lend us a helping hand when we need help.(用 as 引导的非限制性定语从句改写句子)As_we_all_know，our_friends_will_lend_us_a_helping_hand_when_we_need_help.(用主语从句改写句子)What_
45、we_all_know_is_that_our_friends_will_lend_us_a_helping_hand_when_we_need_help.升级加黑的衔接词并添加衔接词Dear Jack，Im sorry to hear that you are too addicted to making friends online.Now(Nowadays/At_present)，many teenagers like making friends online.(As_a_result/As_a_consequence)(结 果)，they often neglect the frie
46、ndship in real life.This has aroused social concern and I think its unreasonable.As we all know/As is known to all，net friends arent always worth trusting.Firstly(To_begin_with/To_start_with/For_a_start)，they often talk with us in the name of a good person，but the truth is quite the contrary.Secondl
47、y(In_addition/Whats_more)，making friends online will cost us much time and money，causing us not to focus our attention on study.Lastly(Last_but_not_least)，we get along with our real friends more often than net friends.They can study and play together with us.(The_most_important_of_all)(最重要的是),they always give us a hand when we are in trouble.(In_a_word/In_conclusion/In_summary/To_sum_up)(总 之)，making friends online isnt a good idea.So please come back to reality.Yours，Li Hua
