1、第四板块写作高考总复习大二轮 山东版 英语 第二部分 读后续写浙江卷三年考情分析年份写作类型信息提示体裁话题题材内容词数要求2018年6月读后续写汉语提示记叙文社会生活父子去农场的一次惊险的经历150 字左右2017年 11月读后续写汉语提示记叙文社会生活童年回忆150 字左右2017年6月读后续写汉语提示记叙文社会生活路途中偶遇一只狼150 字左右2016年 10月读后续写汉语提示记叙文旅游一次旅游的坎坷150 字左右命题者说1.考纲要求提供一段 350 词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示的关键词进行续写(150 词左右)，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情
2、节和结构完整的短文。读后续写或概要写作，两种形式在不同考次不定期交换使用。2.考查特点读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式，旨在考查学生的综合语言运用能力。与应用文不同，故事续写除了要求学生掌握丰富的词汇和句式外，还注重学生的内容构思和情节衔接的能力。主要聚焦在以下四个方面：3.选材特点(1)所需阅读的短文词数在 350 以内；(2)多以记叙文、故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类的文章为主，故事情节曲折、跌宕、起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。4.续写特点简言之，读后续写就是阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后，根据要求和提示把这篇文章未写完的部分补充完全，使之浑然一体。它一方面能很好地考查考生对所学
3、语言知识的实际运用能力，另一方面，它也培养学生的发散思维能力。根据考试说明该部分的规定，考生在续写文章时，要注意续写部分“与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度”，“内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况”，“应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性”以及“上下文的连贯性”。5.命题趋势自 2016 年 10 月浙江省启用新题型以来至 2018 年 11 月高考，连续四次考查读后续写，这足以看出读后续写的重要性。但 2017 年 11 月的高考读后续写与前两次的不一样，出现了标题，内容也不是有关遇险的。因此，今后读后续写的文章形式及内容会更加丰富，也会给考生留下更大的发挥空间，只要掌握读后续写的命题规律
4、和写作方法，并具备一定的阅读和写作能力，该题型就会迎刃而解。(2018浙江卷 6 月)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It was summer，and my dad wanted to treat us to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque，a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the lat
5、e afternoon.Uncle_Paul，my dads friend，picked us up from the airport and drove us to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm_house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the
6、 river nearby.Very early in the morning,Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast，“The day starts at dawn on my farm，”he said,After breakfast,I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens，while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul rid
7、ing horses.They looked really cool.In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride，and he said yes，as long as my dad went with me.I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So，my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats，got on our horses，and headed slowly towards the mountain.“
8、Dont be late for supper，”Uncle Paul cried，“and keep to the track so that you dont get_lost！”“OK！”My dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks，the deep green pine trees，and the late afternoon sun mixed to crea
9、te a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse._Paragraph 2：We had no idea where we wer
10、e and it got dark._范文欣赏Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.“What a lovely rabbit！”I shouted with terrific excitement.It was quite different from those I saw in our city,thus immediately stimulating my interest.Dad was also stunned by this special rabbit，gawking at it
11、 motionlessly.“Dad,lets catch it as our pet！”I suggested,unexpectedly receiving his prompt agreement.Entirely forgetting what Uncle_Paul had told us，we chased after that pretty rabbit，frantic with rapture.Unfortunately，so clever and swift was it that it disappeared in the forest before long.Not unti
12、l then did we realize that the last ray of twilight was quickly disappearing among the numerous trees and we couldnt find our track at all！We did get_lost.Paragraph 2：We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.The bone-chilling wind howled fiercely like a wolf，making the darkness even more
13、 suffocating.“Dad，what can we do？”I threw my arms around him tightly，quivering and seized by stark horror.“All is going well！”Dad answered in a gentle voice，calm and mollified.We wandered in the scary forest and didnt know what horrible things would happen to us，hoping to find the way back.Suddenly，
14、we heard the sound of water rolling down the river.We were over the moon and decided to follow the river.After a while，we heard the familiar sound of sheep and then caught sight of the farm_house，The family were waiting for us in the distance.Seeing this，a radiant smile lit up both of our faces.名师点评
15、光线的消退暗示了时间的流逝和黑夜的到来，推动了故事情节的发展，与下文的 getting dark 衔接；bone-chilling，scary，horrible 等词的运用以及比喻修辞的运用，渲染了阴森恐怖的气氛，也烘托了主人公内心的害怕、恐惧；同时，河流和羊的声音也为故事的结局提供了线索和出路，给故事画上了圆满的句号。一、文本解读文章主要记叙了父亲为了让大家过一个不同以往的暑假，带一家人去了 Uncle Paul 的农场。在那里，“我”在父亲的陪伴下，体验了一把骑马历险记。原文是故事的开始，主要介绍了整个事件发生的时间地点以及农场生活的初体验。在阅读文本时，我们要带着 when、where、
16、who、what、why、how 去理清文本的内容和故事情节的发展脉络。在梳理故事情节发展的脉络时，我们要把握住三条线索：时间线、故事情节线和情感发展线。时间线(background)one summer day(the first day)in the late afternoonspent the night(the second day)very early in the morningafter the breakfastin the afternoonafter a while故事情节线 根据以上的时间线，我们可以梳理出各个时间点的故事情节。大背景是：父亲带一家人去 Uncle Pa
17、ul 的农场过暑假。第一天：下午 uncle 到机场接我们，晚上在农场听青蛙叫和潺潺的水声。第二天：一早吃过早饭，体验了农场的生活，和 Tina 一起喂鸣，看望父亲和 uncle 一起放羊，同时看到父亲骑马觉得很酷，也想试一试。在“我”的请求之下，父亲答应陪“我”一起去骑马。出发前，uncle 叮嘱“我们”要沿着足迹走并在晚饭前赶回来，不然会迷路。于是，“我”和父亲就出发了。情感发展线 因为是旅游，整篇文章情感基调应该是积极的，虽然没有直接的情感表达，但是从 delicious dinner，peaceful，quiet，magic，beautiful 这些词可以看出“我”对于这次农场之旅还是
18、比较满意的，同时从“I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses”可以感受到“我”对骑马的浓厚兴趣。因此，即使下文骑马迷路，可能会遭遇险境，但最终结局应该不会太糟糕。二、下划线词、段首句解读1下划线词解读读后续写的关键词对故事情节的发展起着重要的作用，因而在构思文章的时候，不妨从关键词入手。已知本文的十个下划线词分别是：dad，Uncle Paul，farm house，river，feed，sheep，late，track，get lost，sight。根据这 10 个下划线的词，我们可以按照记叙文的基本要素进行粗略的分
19、类，然后进行详细的分析：Characters 角色类dad，Uncle Paul，sheepPlaces 地点类farm house，river，trackTime 时间类lateActions 动作类feed，get lost，sightCharacter 角色要素的选择上，“我”和 dad 是毫无疑问必须出现的，因为根据已知的文本，下面续写的内容就是“我”跟 dad去骑马。Uncle Paul 也几乎是一个必选项。因为下文的情节中可以有很多的场景出现，比如最终是 Uncle Paul 找到了迷路的“我们”，或者“我们”在迷路后想起了 Uncle Paul 的叮嘱，以及最终回到了Uncle
20、Paul 的农场。至于 sheep 则是一个可以考虑的备选，可以将它设定为路上看到的风景，也可以是回农场的线索之一。Places 地点的设定，能确定的是 farm house 是用得上的，因为这是终点。river 的角色可以跟 sheep 一样，用于环境描写或者是帮助主人公回去的一大线索，因为前文提及农场附近是有河流的。“track”这个词其实在这篇文章里是个挺关键的词，主人公正是因为偏离了原来的轨迹，才迷路了。当然如果不理解这个词的意思，那么建议还是慎重选择，以免影响故事情节的流畅。Time 时间中 late 设定了故事发生的时间：天色已晚。这个词很关键，因为时间的变化必然带来周围环境的变化
21、，进而影响人物心理活动的起伏，是第二段情节中不可或缺的一点。Action 中的 get lost 是必须出现的，这是文章矛盾的核心。late也很容易用到，因为迷路自然会 late for supper，或者天色渐晚。sight这个词，如果是作为动作，那么可能需要放入短语使用，如：catch sight of/lose sight of/come into sight/out of sight 等。2续写段首句解读第一段段首句“Suddenly a littel rabbit jumped out in front of myhorse.”中的 suddenly 表明情况发生了急剧变化。反观上文
22、的景色描写，可想而知“我”和父亲正在欣赏沿途静谧优美的景色，这时突然蹦出一只兔子，肯定会打破原本平静的基调。马、“我”以及父亲的反应和心理活动发生的相应变化，应该在这一段体现出来。第二段段首句“We had no idea where we were and it got dark.”提示“我们”迷路了，说明在上文里“我们”因为兔子的出现而偏离了原来的 track。可能是追着兔子不知不觉跑远了，也可能是马儿受到惊吓带着“我”乱跑导致迷路，但可以肯定的是，“我们”最终还是回到了农场。那么，在第二段，主要解决的问题是如何回农场了。除此之外，语言层面的焦点更要放在人物在天黑迷路时的心理活动、环境描写
23、以及父亲行为等的刻画上。三、写作思路解读思路 1 兔子的突然出现，让马儿受到惊吓，疯狂地乱跑，完全不受缰绳控制。我一手抓住缰绳，一边向父亲呼喊求救。父亲也一路快马加鞭地紧跟我，担心我的安全。马儿跑了很远直到筋疲力竭才停下来，这时父亲悬着的心终于也放下来。但是，我发现了一个严重的问题，那就是我们找不到来时的轨迹(track)了。我们发现自己迷路了而且天色已晚。我不由得觉得脊背发凉、一阵害怕。父亲一边安慰我一边思考着回去的路。这时我们听到了潺潺的流水声，回想起在农场附近也有河流，心想沿着水声应该可以回到农场。结果，真的回到了农场。Uncle Paul 一家正在等我们回家吃晚饭。思路 2 兔子突然出
24、现，它的可爱模样引起了我的兴趣，我一路跟着小白兔走着，一路欣赏着沿路的美丽景色并沉醉其中，以至于渐渐偏离了原来的轨迹而浑然不知。我们努力去回想来时的道路，但是无济于事。我们都不确定自己到底走到了哪里，而这时候天色已晚。周围的景色让人感觉阴森可怕，因为环境陌生，我和父亲都不敢轻举妄动，生怕越走越远，碰到更大的危险，只得在原地，期待 uncle 能来找我们。等了一会儿之后，果然 Uncle Paul 拿着火炬，呼叫着我和父亲的名字。最后，在 uncle 的带领下，我们回到了农场，得以脱险。四、写作思路微技能第一段我们可以尝试问这些问题：What was the rabbit like?_What
25、was my reaction to the rabbit?_What would we see while chasing the rabbit?_What happened next?_然后进行详细的回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段文章：_参考范文Suddenly，a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.It was such a lovely creature that I followed its track.But the rabbit was quickly out of my sight.In the process of s
26、eeking for it，I was totally attracted by the charm of nature.The forests，the flowers，the groups of sheep in the far distance and the singing river all made me feel relaxed.Both Dad and I had forgotten the time and it seemed difficult for us to go back.第二段我们可以根据上一段的内容以及段首句 We had no idea where wewere
27、 and it got dark，我们可以得知两个信息迷路和天色已晚。因此我们可以围绕这两个信息试着提以下问题：How did I feel and how did Dad react?_Did we find the way out？How?_Who may come to our rescue?_How about the surrounding in the darkness?_然后进行详细的回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段文章：_参考范文We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.The cold wind was blowi
28、ng hard and the darkness made me scared.“Dad,what can we do？”I asked.“All is going well！”Dad answered.We wandered in the forest and didnt know what would happen to us.Suddenly，we heard the sound of a river.We decided to follow the river.After a while,we heard the familiar sound of sheep and then cau
29、ght sight of the farm house.(2019杭州市质检)Love Will Melt Your HeartThe day before my daughter Norahs fourth birthday，something she said forecast a remarkable event.Id just picked her up from preschool when she cautioned me to mind the elderly person walking across the parking lot at a glaciers pace.She
30、 went on to explain that she has a soft spot for mature folks:“I like old people the best because they walk slow like I do and they have soft skin like me.They all gonna die soon，so Im gonna love them before they die.”I was struck by her thoughtfulness and empathy.The following dayher birthdayagain
31、on the way home from school，she asked if we could stop at the grocery store to buy cupcakes.How do you say no to a birthday girl？So we headed toward the up in the cart，excitedly waving and joyfully proclaiming，“Hi,old person！Its my birthday today！”Before I could hush her，he stopped and turned_to her
32、.His expression softened as he replied，“Well，hello，little lady！Happy birthday！”They chatted for a few minutes.Then，Norah turned to me and asked，“Can I take a picture with him？”I told her wed certainly ask.I approached him and asked if hed take a photo with my daughter for her birthday.His expression
33、 changed from confused to stunned to delighted.“A photo？With me？”he asked.“Yes，sure，for my birthday！”Norah answered.And so he did.I pulled out my iPhone，and they posed together.She placed her soft hand on top of his.He wordlessly stared at her with twinkling eyes as she kept his hand in hers，kissed
34、the top of his hand and then placed it on her cheek.They were chatting like long-lost friends.I asked his name，and he told us to call him Dan.We were blocking other shoppers，but they didnt care.There was magic happening in the grocery store that day，and we could all feel it.注意：1所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2至少
35、使用 5 个以上短文中斜体的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：After a few minutes，I thanked Mr.Dan for spending a bit of his daywith us.He_said，“No,_thank_you._This_has_been_the_best_day_Ive_had_in_a_long_time.”_He_turned_to_my_daughter._“Youve_made_me_so_happy，Miss_Norah.”They_said_g
36、oodbye._I_posted_the_story_and_a_photo_of_them_on_my_Facebook._Later_that_night,_I_received_a_private_message，from_which_I_learned_that_Mr._Dans_wife，Mary，had_passed_away_six_months_earlier._I_asked_for_Mr._Dans_phone_number_and_called_him_a_few_days_later.Paragraph 2：Afewdayslater，wevisitedMr.Danst
37、idyhouse.Reminders_of_Mary_still_proudly_displayed_everywhere._We_spent_nearly_three_hours_with_him_that_day._After_another_recent_visit，he_told_me_that_he_had_slept_soundly_every_night_since_meeting_my_girl.“Norah_has_healed_me，”he_said._Seventy-eight_years_separate_these_two_people_in_age._Somehow,_their_hearts_and_souls_seem_to_recognize_each_other_from_long_ago.
