1、2003高考英语考生书面表达评价与失误分析2003高考英语考生书面表达评价与失误分析2003年高考NMET书面表达题沿用1999年和2000年的看图说话形式提供材料。用写信这一写作手段来考查考生的写作水平，考生普遍感到题材贴近现实生活、立意新颖，比较好下笔，要点容易抓住，内容易于表达。同时可适当增加细节，以使短文前后连贯，意思通顺。笔者认为，本题命制地很巧妙，给考生很大的自由发挥余地，让考生有话可说，有内容可写，突出了语言的实用性和交际性，全面考查了考生的基础知识。2003年的书面表达的难度比2002年有所降低。区分度较好，有利于高校选拔优秀英语人才。笔者参加了湖南省2003年高考英语书面表达
2、题人工阅卷工作。下面就三 篇考生习作，做要点点评。1.2003年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语书面表达假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文。来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元注意：1词数：100左右；2参考词汇：房租rent(n.)。One possible version:Dear Bob,Im so glad to learn that youre coming in September.Ive found a place for you.Its a small flat
3、 of 25 square meters,with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.In the bedroom there is a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair.The rent is 500 yuan per month.The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street,which is not far from Jianxiu Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school.In fact,its only
4、one stop.Do you think youd like it?If not,I can try and find another place for you.Just let me know.YoursLi Hua习作1Dear Bob,Im glad to tell you that I have booked a series of rooms for you to study【live】here.They live【lie】in Fangcao Street.Besides【beside】the bus station which leads to Jianxing Chines
5、e Languadge shool.There are three rooms,including the washing rooms【room】,the kitchen and the bedroom.The three rooms will be your new home here and they will give you a comfortable sense.They have a【an】area of twenty-five square meters.and to rent them,it will cost you five hundred yuan,shall you c
6、ome over early to have a look at it by yourself?Then,you will find it greatful【nice to live in it.】I am lookingforward to hearing from you soon.yours Lihua习作2Dear Tom:Im glad to【have】receive【received】your letter.Now Id like to tell you something about the flat I【have】rent for you.it is in Fangcao st
7、reet and its not far from the bus stop where you can take a bus directly to Jianying Chinese language school.Besides,its【it is】convinient【convenient】【in】transportation,both the surroundings outside and the conditions inside are very good.Around the building are all kbinds of green trees and colorful
8、 flowers.At the same time,all【the】needed furniture is available for you.Whats more,you have a chicken【kitchen】and,a bathroom as well as a big enough living room【in the flat.】.the rent is 500 yuan per month Im looking forward to seeing you in September.【Best wishes.yours Lihua】习作3Dear Bob,I am glad t
9、o have heard from you.You said you were going to learn Chinese in Jianxin Chinese school and asked me to find a flat for you.Now I am writing to tell you something about the one Ive found for you.It is on the second floor at Fangcao street and covers 25 square meters.It divide【is divided】into three
10、parts-the bedroom,the bathroom,and the kitchen.When entering the bedroom,you will see a bed on your left.In front of you lies a sofa.There is a window on the right with a desk beside it.you can study there.As far as the bathroom is concerned,it is OK,in my opinion.By the way,you cantake No 11 bus【straight】to the school,It is only one stop.Furthermore,the rent is 500 yuan per month.I think you can comeand see it for yourself.Best wishes.Yours Lihua
