1、写作专项提升 Step 4 巧衔接增强行文过渡流畅英 语 2023高 考 总 复 习 优 化 设 计 GAO KAO ZONG FU XI YOU HUA SHE JI 衔接1 起始与顺序 1.起始关系:first/firstly(第一),in the first place/first of all(首先),to begin/start with(首先),as we all know(众所周知),as is known(正如了解到的那样),as is shown in.(正如在中看到的那样),according to(根据),nowadays/now(现在),at present(目前),r
2、ecently(最近)等。(2021全国乙卷,书面表达)As we all know,time is rather limited in todays society.众所周知,在当今社会,时间是相当有限的。(2020天津卷,书面表达)First of all,we were shown some photos and videos.首先,我们看了一些照片和视频。To begin with,please come up with a workout schedule and stick to it so that you can get in shape soon.首先,请制定一个锻炼计划并坚
3、持下去,以便你保持体形。2.时间顺序:at the beginning(起初),then(然后),after a while(一会儿之后),after that(后来),afterwards/later on(后来),at the same time(与此同时),in the meantime(在此期间),before long(不久),shortly after(之后;立即),in the end/eventually/at last(终于),finally/lastly(最后)等。At the beginning,I wiped the dust off all the furniture
4、.Then I collected all the things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.After that,I mopped the floor.首先,我擦去所有家具上的灰尘。接着,我把所有的散落在屋子里的东西收拾起来放好。然后,我拖了地。Shortly after moving into her apartment,she found a job.搬进公寓不久,她就找到了一份工作。Lastly,I would like to thank my parents for all their support.最后,我想感谢父母对
5、我的全力支持。(2020浙江1月卷,写作)In the end,I am looking forward to your involvement and do wish you a success!最后,我期待着你的参与,并祝你成功!对点过关训练 翻译/补全句子 1.(2020上海卷,书面表达)首先,没有必要为不可控的事情烦恼,比如天气状况。,such as the weather condition.2.最后,我们应该经常参加体育运动和户外活动。3.当今,越来越多的人选择在家上班。Firstly,there is no need to bother with things uncontrol
6、lableFinally,we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently.Nowadays,increasing numbers of people elect to work from home.4.首先,记住,你成功的决心比其他任何事情都重要。is more important than any other thing.5.你来这里参加这个交流项目已经有三周了,这让我们都受益很多。,which has benefited us all a lot.First of all,bear in mind that y
7、our resolution to succeedIt has been three weeks since you came here for the exchange program衔接2 条件与因果 1.条件关系:if,unless,in case(of),as/so long as,on condition that,provided(that)等。(2021全国甲卷,书面表达)If I want to decorate my website with someChinese elements,what should I do?如果我想用一些中国元素装饰我的网站,我应该怎么做?2.表示
8、原因:because,as,since,for,now that,considering(that),thanks to,due to,as a result of,so,therefore,as a consequence of,owing to,on account of,for the reason of等。Millions will face starvation next year as a result of the drought.由于发生旱灾,明年将有数百万人面临饥饿的威胁。(2020上海卷,书面表达)Since it happened,why not try hard to
9、get it settled?既然事情已经发生,为什么不努力去解决它呢?Considering that you only started studying English a month ago,youvemade amazing progress.考虑到你一个月前才开始学习英语,你的进步已经非常惊人了。3.表示结果:so,thus,therefore,consequently,as a result,as a consequence等。(2019全国卷,书面表达)Therefore,I am equipped with a wide range of knowledge in this a
10、spect,which can help people in London have a deeper understanding of Chinese paintings.因此,我在这方面拥有广泛的知识,这可以帮助在伦敦的人对中国画有更深的了解。I was badly treated in your store.Consequently,I am writing to you in the hope of getting things settled.在你的店里,我受到了不好的对待。因此,我写信给你,希望事情能得到解决。(2020全国卷,书面表达)Therefore,we are in ur
11、gent need of your help and guidance.因此,我们迫切需要你的帮助和指导。对点过关训练 补全句子 1.(2020全国卷,书面表达)我之所以尊敬她,是因为她从不发脾气,反而总是鼓励我。_ is that she never loses temper but instead always encourages me.2.(2019江苏卷,书面表达)如果我们的目的是分享中国文化,那么这些不便利就不是问题。The inconvenience is not a problem _.The reason why I show respect for herif our pu
12、rpose is to share Chinese culture3.由于人类的活动,许多物种已经灭绝了。Many species have died out _.4.正如谚语所说:“三个臭皮匠赛过一个诸葛亮。”因此,团队合作极其重要。As a proverb goes,“Two heads are better than one.”_.5.由于我们的努力,任务提前完成了。_,the task was finished ahead of time.as a consequence of human activities Therefore,teamwork is of vital import
13、anceOwing to our efforts衔接3 并列与转折 1.并列关系:and,or,as well as,not only.but also.,either.or.,neither.nor.等。(2021新高考全国卷,写作)Not only does it supply me with a platform to broaden my horizon,but its rich content can also spark my burning passion for English.它不仅为我提供了一个开阔视野的平台,而且它丰富的内容也可以点燃我对英语的热情。(2019北京卷,书面
14、表达)After packing my suitcase,I as well as my classmates set off for our destinationa farm in the morning.收拾好行李箱后,我和我的同学们在早晨出发去了我们的目的地一家农场。2.转折关系:but,yet,however,while,otherwise,at the same time,nevertheless,otherwise(否则,不然),despite/in spite of/regardless of(不管,不顾),rather than(而不是),instead(of)(相反,反而,
15、却),on the other hand(另一方面),unfortunately(不幸地,令人遗憾地),or(不然),although/though/as/while(虽然),even if/though(尽管),no matter.(无论;不管)等。(2021全国乙卷,书面表达)However,there also exist some disadvantages.然而,也存在一些缺点。(2020全国卷,书面表达)She has her weakness,yet that does not mean she is not up to the job.她有缺点,然而那并不意味着她不能胜任这项工
16、作。Dont start giving me problems;otherwise,Ill have to be very unpleasant indeed.不要开始给我找麻烦,否则我就真的不客气了。On the other hand,there are several reasons why it is a good idea to teach history.另一方面,为什么教历史是个好主意还有几个原因。Although/Though he grew up in the countryside,hes always had a taste for the bright lights in
17、 the city.尽管他是在农村长大的,但他始终对城市的五光十色情有独钟。对点过关训练 完成语段 1.正如你所知,我对美国文化很感兴趣。生活在美国会是一个了解更多美国文化以及提高英文水平的良机。然而,我刚得知寄宿家庭的主人生病了,住在他家会很不方便,所以我需要你的帮助。As you know,_._ will be a great opportunity for me to learn more about American culture and improve my English._ and it will be inconvenient for me to stay in his h
18、ouse._.I have been interested in American cultureStaying in AmericaHowever,Ive justlearned that my host falls illSo I need your help2.刚开始学英语的时候,我本想在一周内拿下它。然而我失败了。之后我调整了策略。我不再记忆单词短语和背诵文章,而是耐心地遵循着我的学习道路,欣赏英文音乐、电影和杂志。不知不觉中,我在英语上取得了进步。At the beginning of English learning,_within one week._._,I made adju
19、stments to my strategies._ and reciting articles,I took my path with patience and enjoyed English music,films and magazines._ before I realized it.I had intended to conquer itBut I failed After thatInstead of memorizing words and phrasesI made progress in English衔接4 列举与递进 1.列举事实:such as,for example/
20、instance,take.for example,that is to say,as follows,in other words,on the one hand.on the other(hand).,for one thing.for another.等。(2019北京卷,书面表达)Its very convenient for you to travel in the three cities because there are many means of transport for you to choose,such asbuses,tubes,trains,taxies,and
21、shared bikes.你在这三个城市旅行非常方便,因为你可以选择多种交通方式,例如公共汽车、地铁、火车、出租车和共享单车。2.递进关系:besides/moreover/furthermore(此外;而且),additionally(另外),also(还),still less(更差的是),in addition(而且),not only.but also(不但而且),apart from/as well as.(此外;除之外),whats more(此外),equally important(同样重要的是),more importantly(更重要的是),last but not lea
22、st(最后但同样重要的是),to make matters worse(使情况更糟糕的是),worse still/whats worse(更糟糕的是)等。(2021全国乙卷,书面表达)Moreover,the atmosphere of the class is not warm enough.此外,课堂气氛不够热烈。As a result,I dont have enough time to take exercise.Whats worse,Idont communicate a lot with my parents and my friends.结果,我没有足够的时间锻炼身体。更糟糕
23、的是,我与父母和朋友之间的交流也不多。Additionally,they should be allowed to teach,and be rewarded for doing it well.此外,他们应该被允许去教书,并因做得好而得到奖励。Last but not least,be sure to choose the right products for yourself.最后,也是很重要的一点,确保你选择了适合你的产品。(2021浙江卷,写作)Through the exhibition,not only can you admire wonderful pictures,but a
24、lso it can enable you to have a better understanding of traditional Chinese painting.通过展览,你不仅可以欣赏到精彩的图画,还可以让你更好地了解中国传统绘画。(2020新高考全国卷,写作)More importantly,we come to know it is our responsibility to challenge ourselves.更重要的是,我们逐渐认识到挑战自我是我们的责任。My car broke down when I was driving home from work,and wha
25、t wasworse,it was pouring with rain.下班回家的路上我的汽车坏了,更糟糕的是,天还下着大雨。对点过关训练 翻译/补全句子 1.(2019全国卷,书面表达)而且,那时我也希望看到你在舞台上。2.(2019天津卷,书面表达)就个人而言,我不仅喜欢听音乐,还喜欢唱国内外的歌曲。Personally,I love_.Furthermore,I also expect to see you on stage then.not only listening to music,but also singing songs fromhome and abroad3.自行车似乎
26、太重了,以至于很难控制。更糟糕的是,我还从自行车上掉下来了很多次。The bike seemed too heavy to control._.4.更重要的是,我愿意帮助他人,所以我想在业余时间当一名志愿者。_,so I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time.5.还有,如果你需要进一步的信息,一定要让我知道。_ if you need further information.Worse still,I fell off the bike many times More importantly,I am willing to help oth
27、ers Also,do let me know衔接5 对比与对照 1.相似比较:similarly(相似地,类似地),equally(同样地),just as(正如),in the same way(以相同的方式,同样地),for one thing.for another(一方面另一方面)等。(2020新高考全国卷,写作)For one thing,this race gives us a good opportunity to have a deeper understanding of great patience.For another,it can build up our bodi
28、es in terms of long-distance race.一方面,这次比赛给我们提供了一个很好的机会,让我们对耐心有了更深的理解。另一方面,它也能通过长跑锻炼我们的身体。2.相反比较:instead(相反),while(而;然而),unlike(不像),however(然而;仍然),whereas(然而;反之),yet(然而),on the other hand(另外一方面),compared with/to(与比较),in comparison with(与比较),in contrast(to)(和对比),on the contrary(相反)等。(2021全国乙卷,书面表达)On
29、 the other hand,that will lead to a lack of communication between teachers and students.另外一方面,那样会导致师生之间缺乏沟通。(2020上海卷,书面表达)Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinders you from making up your mind.However,as far as Im concerned,its still worth our efforts.也许是最近的恶劣天气或可怕的
30、交通阻碍了你做决定。然而,就我而言,这仍然值得我们的努力。On the contrary,I like solving difficult problems because I always take them as exciting challenges.相反,我喜欢解决难题,因为我通常会把这些难题看作令人激动的挑战。对点过关训练 翻译/补全句子 1.首先,和传统的购物相比,网购很方便。_,online shopping is very convenient.2.相反,我们只寻找我们需要的信息。_ 3.我们原以为这些数据正确。不过,我们现在发现了一些错误。We thought the fig
31、ures were correct._ To begin with,compared with traditional shoppingInstead,we seek only the information we want.However,we have now discovered some errors.4.我们的生活也是如此,在不和他人合作的情况下,一个人仅靠自己是不可能轻易地完成一项富有挑战性的任务的。_on his own without cooperating with others.5.一方面,我可以帮助照顾孩子。另一方面,我可以提高我的英语水平,结交更多的朋友,并丰富我的暑假
32、生活。_,make more friends,and enrich my life during the summer vacation.Similarly in our life,an individual person cannot easily carry out a challenging taskFor one thing,I can help take care of the children.For another,I can improvemy English衔接6 观点与总结 1.表达观点:in my opinion,in my view,in my point of vie
33、w,as far as I am concerned,as for me,personally等。(2020天津卷,书面表达)As far as I am concerned,I will work hard for the peace and progress of the world.就我而言,我会为世界的和平与进步而努力。Personally,I prefer the tour along the Yangtze,the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.就个人而言,我更喜欢沿着长江游览,
34、它是中国最长的河流,也是中华文明的母亲河之一。2.归纳总结:in short,in brief,in conclusion,in a word,to sum up,to conclude,allin all,on the whole,in general,generally speaking等。On the whole,traveling is the best choice to enrich our lives and get ready for the new challenges.总的来说,旅游是丰富我们的生活、为新的挑战做准备的最好选择。(2021全国乙卷,书面表达)To concl
35、ude,I do hope all of us can be smart online learners.综上所述,我希望我们所有人都能成为聪明的在线学习者。(2020全国卷,书面表达)In general,Mr.Zhang is a very respectable teacher indeed!总之,张老师确实是一位非常可敬的老师!(2019 浙江卷,写作)All in all,words fail to express my thankfulness to you.总之,言语无法表达我对你的感激之情。To put it simply,I would be more than gratef
36、ul if you could give me an early reply.简而言之,如果你能早日回复,我将不胜感激。In brief,we cannot emphasize the essence of honesty too much.简言之,我们再怎么强调诚信的重要性也不为过。对点过关训练 翻译/补全句子 1.(2019全国卷,书面表达)总之,我坚信努力工作会带来好的结果!_ hard work will bring good results!2.(2019江苏卷,书面表达)综上所述,在这种场合,校服是比中国传统服装更好的选择。_ than the traditional Chines
37、e dress for such an occasion.To sum up/All in all/In short/In a word,I firmly believeTo conclude,the school uniforms are a better choice 3.总而言之,良好和谐的家庭环境对孩子的健康成长至关重要。_ is necessary for a child to grow up healthily.4.根据以上所述,我相信在彼此的相互帮助下,我们都会取得很大进步。_,I believe we both can make great progress with each others help.5.总的来说,科学为我们提供了许多有价值的东西。In short,a good and harmonious environment at homeAccording to what is mentioned above Generally speaking,science has provided us with many valuable things.
