1、2014高考英语短文改错：2013暑假自测题（4）及答案或解析短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。(2012唐山三模）Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent
2、 years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I dont like it, because online shopping is less reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers cant feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures.
3、 This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. In word, online shopping isnt reliable at all. 答案解析*短文改错Online shopping is increasing popular among people
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6、结束. 短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Li Mei, With the mid-term exam come, you must get prepared for them. I think that you need i
7、s a right study method. What we all know, there are three stage in studypreview, study in class and review, among which review was the most important. You should first make a review plan, then stick on it. I follow my review plan strictly and have made a progress in my study. It turns out to be good
8、 enough. Of course, there are more than one way to review. So long as you review regular, Im sure you can find more ways to study well. If you have any question about subjects, ask me Ill be glad to help you. We may meet in our school library every Friday afternoon. Yours, Li Hua答案解析*短文改错Dear Li Mei
9、, With the mid-term exam come, you must get prepared for them. I think thatcoming it whatyou need is a right study method. What we all know, there are three stage in As stagesstudypreview, study in class and review, among which review was the most isimportant. You should first make a review plan, th
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11、 ask me Ill be glad to help you. We andmay meet in our school library every Friday afternoon. Yours, Li Hua*结束 Dear Mr. Li,Im very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in the morning, but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycles front tyre（轮胎）flat. I
12、wanted to take bus or taxi to school, and I didnt have any money with me. I had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops were open in the early morning. So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. Thats how
13、I was late for school.Please dont worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary.Yours,Wang Hui 参考答案：Dear Mr. Li,Im very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in lessons usualthe morning, but when I was read
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15、 early morning. So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. Thats how I was late for school. whyPlease dont worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for helpabout / over themif necessary. Yours,Wang Hui*结束 Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as
16、usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesi
17、tation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved. I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need. 参考答案：Last weekend
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