1、2021高考英语读后续写专题（十二）一：典题技法指导It was a beautiful October evening, a cool gentle breeze was blowing as the moon rose high in the sky, and I had gotten home from work about an hour earlier. As I often did after a long day, I went straight to my backyard and did some work in my flower garden before decidin
2、g to light the grill to make dinner for my husband and myself. I had only just walked a few steps when I suddenly felt a horrible blow to the right side of my neck. It felt as though someone had hit me with a baseball bat(棒球棒). I knew that no one was in the yard with me, so no one could have hit me.
3、 Totally confused, I reached up and, to my shock and horror, realized that I had been shot- with an arrow.I grabbed the arrow tightly where it had gone through my neck and ran inside, screaming my husbands name. Ed was in the back of the house talking to our daughter, Keila, on the phone. He dropped
4、 the phone and ran to me. Ed grabbed me by the shoulders to stop me from running and told me to lie down on the couch. Then he went to call 911. I lay there and prayed. I didnt know if there was any way that I could survive.The next hour or so was a crazy, disorderly mix of events. The arrow had com
5、e from a young hunter practicing with a compound bow, used for hunting, in his backyard. Luckily, he was using a practice arrow, which is smooth and rounded; a broadhead arrow for hunting would have killed me. He lived across the back street and was shooting to the north. The arrow had bounced and t
6、urned back to the south. It went over two, possibly three, fences, through the bushes and an oak tree, between two large hanging baskets, and into my neck as I walked to the grill. A shot from a compound bow can travel up to 200 miles per hour, or 300 feet per second.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使5个以上短
7、文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: Soon, I was sent to the hospital. Paragraph 2: The bow hunter paid a visit to me the next day. 二、写作思路1. 确定主题：考查遇险如何解决问题的能力，第一段可以提及first aid，第二段可以强调安全教育，同时，强调学会宽容他人的过失。2. 时空变化：第一段应该是故事当天送到医院，第二段是是第二天应该是作者住院的病房内。3. 续写难点：情节比较简
8、单，但很难确定主题。如果是强调急救，应该属于人与自然-自然灾害与防范，安全常识与自我保护方面的内容。如果是强调宽容，应该是人与社会-良好的人际关系与社会交往。如果强调生命的意义与价值，应该属于人与自我。因此，文章很难收尾。根据原文第三段，这支箭能如此离奇地射中“I”，那这支箭为什么不能射中我的女儿 (Keila) 的心, 最后年轻人成了我女儿的男友呢？来个surprise ending不是很好吗？下水时有过这样的思考，但还是放弃了。三、写作提纲Paragraph 1: Soon, I was sent to the hospital.1. But again panic started to
9、boil up inside me.2. At this point, my neck seemed to explode in pain, and even worse, I could hardly breathe.3. I was close to tears at the thought that I was going to die.4. How I wished that the horrible nightmare could end soon!5. Fortunately, after doing a CT scan on my neck, the doctors immedi
10、ately performed an operation on me.6. The moment I woke up, one doctor showed me the arrow that might kill me, saying that if it had not been for my husbands quick action and knowledge of first aid, I would not have survived.7. Hearing this, I smiled at my husband and then sighed with relief. Paragr
11、aph 2: The bow hunter paid a visit to me the next day.1. In front of the hospital bed stood the young hunter, who bowed his head in shame and prayed for forgiveness.2. I sat up slowly, with no idea what to say.3. There was a moment of silence before Ed pushed open the door.4. When he realized who th
12、e young man was, an angry look crossed his face, but he managed to contain his anger.5. “It was an accident, but you mustnt practise shooting in the street,” my husband said sternly, patting him on the shoulder.6. Soon the young mans eyes gleamed with relief and joy, and he promised that he wouldnt
13、do that again.7. With a few more words, he bowed to us both, thanked us again and left.四：参考文章Paragraph 1. Soon, I was sent to the hospital. But again panic started to boil up inside me. At this point, my neck seemed to explode in pain, and even worse, I could hardly breathe. I was close to tears at
14、the thought that I was going to die. How I wished that the horrible nightmare could end soon! Fortunately, after doing a CT scan on my neck, the doctors immediately performed an operation on me. The moment I woke up, one doctor showed me the arrow that might kill me, saying that if it had not been f
15、or my husbands quick action and knowledge of first aid, I would not have survived. Hearing this, I smiled at my husband and then sighed with relief. Paragraph 2. The bow hunter paid a visit to me the next day. In front of the hospital bed stood the young hunter, who bowed his head in shame and praye
16、d for forgiveness. I sat up slowly, with no idea what to say. There was a moment of silence before Ed pushed open the door. When he realized who the young man was, an angry look crossed his face, but he managed to contain his anger. “It was an accident, but you mustnt practise shooting in the street
17、,” my husband said sternly, patting him on the shoulder. Soon the young mans eyes gleamed with relief and joy, and he promised that he wouldnt do that again. With a few more words, he bowed to us both, thanked us again and left.二：课后练习读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Laurie sat quietly in the empty
18、dressing room. She had not competed since the accident. As she waited for her turn to skate, Laurie was verynervous. Today was very important in hercomeback(复出). If I can win today, she thought, I can skate in the World Cup next year. Before Laurie had her accident, everyone had said that she was th
19、e one to beat. She thought back to that car accident where herright kneewas badly injured. She spent six total months on recovery, treatment and practice because she hoped to regain her skill. Hello, Laurie, one of her friends burst in. Hows the knee? Is it going to slow you down? I guess well find
20、out tonight, Laurie said. Theres a girl named Jinny, strong in everything. Shes the onlyreal competitoryou have to beat, the friend said and hurried out. Hearing that, Laurie decided to show her mostdifficult jump. If I dont try it, I wont stand a chance, she thought. Does anyone believe that I can
21、still win? Suddenly her right knee sent pain up and down her leg. The doctor said it would do that for a while. What makes you think you have achancetonight? she said to herself. After the pain passed, she moved slowly to warm up. Then she said firmly, I must win! At that moment, a young woman hurri
22、ed in with a skate equipment bag. She put some of her belongings onto a chair.Her bag fell to the floor. Hi, Im JinnyJordan, she said. Laurie felt uncomfortable as she looked at Jinny. So this is my competitor, thought Laurie. Because of her, I maylosetonight. Im Laurie Collins, Laurie told Jinny. S
23、omething fell out of your bag, Jinny. As Jinny began to gather her belongings, the door opened. Jinny, someone called, your tape ofmusicis missing. You are the next one! Laurie, after Jinny. Oh, my God! I thought I had handed it in hours ago, thegreen boxwith my name on, screamed Jinny, hurrying out
24、.注意：1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:Music is so important to the skating, Laurie said thoughtfully, doing some preparation alone in the dressing room._Paragraph 2:Minutes later, Laurie glided to the centre of the stadium when her name was called._参考范文 “Music is so important to t
25、he skating,” Laurie said thoughtfully, doing some preparation alone in the dressing room. Suddenly, she saw something under a chair. She bent over to pick it up. “Jinnys green box” she exclaimed. it must have rolled out of her bag.” Laurie stood motionlessly, if Jinny doesnt have her music. She will
26、 lose She Is my only real competitor.” Laurie shivered slightly as she thought about this. Then she wondered, “Do! really want to win so much?” Laurie hesitated for a second. Then she hurried out to give Jinny her music tape. Jinny was grateful to Laurie, and finished the skating successfully.Paragr
27、aph 2:Minutes later Laurie glided to the centre of the stadium when her name was called. Nervous as she was, she tried to skate in time with her music. Then she did her most difficult jump. “Good,” she thought to herself, “my right knees holding up.” As the music ended, applause filled the stadium. When the marks appeared, Laurie knew she achieved her goal. As she walked back to the dressing room, Laurie thought about Jinnys music tape. No one will know how close I really came to losing,” Laurie said softly to herself.
