1、2020 年高三英语之纠错笔记：书面表达易错点 1审题不细，偏离主题1.（2019新课标卷 I）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.个人优势；3.能做的事情。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。_Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua.【错因分析】本文虽然看起来比较容易，但学生真正动起笔来，还是比较困惑的。原因为：1.个人的优势，写作时不能简单地罗列自己优点，而要选取与内容相关的、具有说服力的优点来写；2.能做
2、的事情有很多，写作时要简洁扼要地介绍自己能做的、与画展相关的事情，而不要啰里啰嗦地写一堆。【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。书信格式，落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：volunteer，a ChinesePainting Exhibition，local city，advantages，a good command of，beneficial for，familiarity with，appreciate，take m
3、y application into consideration。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如 First of all,Besides,tobegin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least 等，使全文衔接自然，语意流畅。【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam,I am a Chinese student named Li Hua,who is studying in London during the summervacation.Knowing th
4、at the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings,I amwriting to apply for volunteering.As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 yearsold,I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners.Besides,my fluent spoken English and rich k
5、nowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitorsunderstand the meaning behind each painting deeply.I will appreciate it if I could be given theopportunity.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua.2.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在传统文化进校园活动中，向面人艺术家学习捏面人的过程，并以A Day with a Craftsman为题，给校刊英语角
6、写一篇英文稿件。注意：词数不少于 60。提示词：一个面团 a piece of dough面人 dough figurine（请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内）_【错因分析】对于看图作文，考生会由于审题不清，往往纠缠于某幅图中的某个细节而偏离文章的主题。【试题解析】这是一幅图画作文。四幅图向我们展示了一个完整的小故事，应按照事情的发展的时间顺序结合每幅图的要点进行写作。本题考查的细节是手工艺人教大家如何去做这个东西，学生认真聆听，是教与学。第二幅图最重要的点就是学生能不能找到学生认真聆听这个环节，因为老师教一定能看得出来，但是学生能不能写到学生在听，这应该是一个得分点。第三幅图是一个指导。所以
7、，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。最后一幅图是我们在上课的时候会重点讲照相，大家很欢乐，做成一个作品。所以，除了四幅图的要点之外，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。所以写好这样的作文一定要抓住细节，才能得分。还需要注意时态，词汇不要拼写错误，多用复合句式才能体现出亮点。考生切忌在文章开篇犯低级的语法错误，尤其注意时态、单复数及冠词的正确使用。相比于实用性强的应用文来说，情景作文可以在保证要点齐全的前提下适当增加长难句的使用，如对非谓语、三大从句及连词进行灵活运用。关注句式的多样性及用词的准确性对取得该板块的高分会有更大的保障。本文可分三段来写：第一段简单介绍故事发生的背景信息；第二段描述图画
8、的内容；第三段对全文进行总结。【参考范文】Last Tuesday,our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines.When the craftsman came into the classroom,we gave him a warm welcome and two boyshelped him with the tool box.First,he showed us the basic steps and skills of making doughfigurines.We stood
9、around him and watched attentively.Then we started to have a try ourselves.The old man walked around and helped us patiently.Finally,we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman.Looking at the figurines,we were all very excited.We hope we can have more activitie
10、s of this kind!1.假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友 Tom 约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.另约时间。_【写作指导】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封道歉信。写作要求只给出了大体的框架，因此具有很大的开放性。道歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意，请求对方谅解自己的过失。写道歉信时要明确不是找借口为自己辩护，而是承认自己的过错并提出弥补过错的具体建议和方法。此类信件的关键是用词准确，表达真诚。在写作时可以根据提示的要求按照三段式的模式布局谋篇。首段：重述自己做错的事，表示歉意。主体段：说明道歉的具
11、体原因，应尽量详细描述做错事的经过。写信时应该注意在申述理由时要照顾读信人的感受，切忌强词夺理。结尾段：再次表明承认错误的态度，请求收信人的谅解。也可以提出补救的办法。【参考范文】Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School StudentPhotography Show.The theme of the show is environmental protection.It will start from June 15thand last for three week
12、s.Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.I know youtake good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection.Iremember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.This issurely a good chance for more people to see them.I
13、f you want to join,you can send yourphotos to .Hope to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Hua2.假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊英语园地写一篇短文，记述你和朋友上周日去北京奥林匹克森林公园（Beijing Olympic Forest Park）游玩时发生的一件事。词数不少于 60。_【写作指导】本题考查看图作文。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊英语园地写一篇短文，记述你和朋友上周日去北京奥林匹克森林公园（Beijing Olympic Forest Park）游玩时发生
14、的一件事。认真读图，把握中心。多幅图常为记叙文，描述过去发生的事情用一般过去时。写作时根据图片顺序讲述故事，注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。写作时尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。【参考范文】Last Sunday,I went to Beijing Olympic Forest Park with my friend Chris.As soon as we gotthere,we were so attracted by the breathtaking scenery that we couldnt help taking m
15、anyphotos to record the beautiful moments.As we walked on,we noticed a kite hanging up on abranch,but its owner,a little boy,was too short to get it down.The boy looked worried and wedecided to help him.Unluckily,the kite was also beyond our reach.Then we looked around andfound a stick,with which we
16、 got the kite down.We gave the kite back to the boy.He was verydelighted and thanked us for what we did.We also felt very happy and it made our outing moreenjoyable.易错点 2条理不清，内容混乱请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作。If you could give your younger self one piece of advice,what would you say?要求：（1）作出回答并说出理由；（2）词数不少于 60；_【
17、错因分析】本文属于开放性比较强的写作。对考生英语运用能力的要求较高。考生看到此材料时，不能清楚地理解所给出的英文句子的真实含义和言外之意，往往不知如何下笔，没有自己的明确看法，从而导致文章内容极度混乱，条理不清。【试题解析】本文属于考查开放性作文写作，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。【参考范文】Were I three years younger
18、 than I am now,I would strongly recommend that I set morepractical and specific goals.As an old saying goes,living without a clear and achievable aimis like sailing without a compass.Compared with many abstract objectives,practical ones canbring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one st
19、ep forward.If only I couldgo back and reset my goals.写作时要注意文章的人称，同时要紧扣要求中的第一点，即做出回答并说明理由。所以回答要明确，理由要鲜明。在保证语言规范的情况下，尽可能地使用高级词汇和特殊句式，并注意长短句的有机结合，使文章表达多样化。如何理解成功，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写篇短文。Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.Sir Winston C
20、hurchill内容要求：1.你对该引语的理解；2.你的相关经历；3.恰当的结尾。注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息；3.词数：120 左右。ThisquotationfromWinstonChurchilltellsusthat_【写作指导】如何理解成功，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1.结构上：采用三段成文，第一段引出话题，自己对于该引语的理解；第二段写出自己的相关经历；第三段恰当地结尾。2.时态：自己的相关经历用一般过去时；3.人称
21、：第一人称；4.注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5.适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【参考范文】This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged right afterfailures.Rather，we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continueefforts through failures.At the age of twelve，I got a n
22、ice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldnt waitto try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavyand difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when myfather came and encouraged me to keep going.With
23、more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.Actually，we cant succeed in everything we try.Whats important is that we should stick at it.易错点 3母语干扰，语法错误最近你校学生会组织学生开展了一次题目为What is the beauty standard的讨论活动。假如你是学生会主席，请根据下表学生讨论的结果写一份总结材料，并谈谈你
24、的看法。学生观点理由好脸蛋就是一封介绍信在社交、竞争、求职等方面作用大漂亮不能当饭吃追求外在美而放弃内在美不是真正的美注意：1.词数 100 左右，标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。2.参考词汇：求职介绍信recommendationWhat is the beauty standard?What does beauty really mean?Everybody has his own definition._【错因分析】在这篇作文的写作中，考生可能会根据写作的要点提示汉语思维方式直接翻译，这样就造成写作上的失误。产生 Chinglish 的直接原因是把英语写作视为机械的 word-for-
25、word translation 的过程，生搬硬套，久而久之，便不会在特定的上下文中正确遣词造句。比如，针对提示中的好脸蛋社交外在美等词汇，考生就很难准确地表达出来。同时有些考生把漂亮不能当饭吃翻译为Beautifulcant as a meal to eat.【参考答案】Some students think that a good face is a letter of recommendation.Good appearanceoften makes a big difference in social communication,competition,finding jobs and
26、 so on.Notonly can it help you become more confident,but also it helps you be impressed.Physicalbeauty is likely to draw much attention.Others,however,hold the idea that good appearance will buy no beef.Inner beauty ismore important.A beautiful person is not the one with good looks,but the one with
27、a broad andkind heart.In my opinion,the standard of beauty changes with societies,cultures and nations.Some hold the point that good appearance is of great importance,which is visible to all.Othershave the idea that inner beauty is the loveliest one,which lasts long.However different theymight be,th
28、eir opinions are all acceptable.对于此类错误，考生要清楚：扎实的语言基础知识是好的书面表达高分的必要条件。平时要注意积累词汇，尤其是考试大纲中要求考生掌握的词汇。同时要注意灵活运用所学语法知识，尤其是英语中一些句型和结构，要注意辨析其与汉语之间的差异，特别是要掌握五种简单的基本句子结构。假设你是李华，你校广播站正在招收英文编辑，请你根据以下提示，向负责此事的外教 Mr.Mark 申请这一职位。要点包括：职位要求1.有很强的英语表达能力；2.关心时事。个人优势1.有做记者的经历，沟通能力强；2.父亲是一位专职编辑,深受其影响；3.注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.
29、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作指导】本题要求用英文写份书面求职申请。应该注意以下几点：1.大方得体，不落俗套。应尽可能彰显个性，能做到与众不同，方能抓住机会；2.言简意赅，引人入胜。求职信属于应用文，言辞要求正式、庄重、准确,忌调侃、俏皮、花哨、夸夸其谈；3.充满自信，态度诚恳。自己首先得信心十足，但不能自吹自擂，满篇浮夸，不能少了敬语、祝颂语。【参考范文】Dear Mr.Mark,Im writing to apply to be an English editor of the broadcasting station of our school,which Iam wild ab
30、out all the time.Im qualified for the position based on the following reasons.First,I meet your requirementsfor the position well.That is,I have a good command of English communication skills.Besides,Iam concerned a lot about current affairs and take great interest in journalism.Second,I was apart-t
31、ime reporter when I was in junior middle school,which developed my communication andinterpersonal skills.In addition,my father is a professional editor,by whom I was deeplyinfluenced from an early age and from whom I learned a lot.Therefore,I am eager to get theposition and I really hope I will be g
32、iven the honor to be one of you.Looking forward to hearing from you.Thank you!Yours sincerely,Li Hua易错点 4 逻辑混乱，表达不当假定你是李华，你校英文报外国文化栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：1.栏目介绍；2.稿件内容；3.稿件长度：约 400 词汇；4.交稿日期：6 月 28 日前。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；3.开头语已为你写好。【错因分析】如何将几条简单的要点有逻辑地表达成一篇短文，对一些考生来说很难。
33、前后顺序不知道如何表达，从而导致逻辑混乱，表达不当。【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息要求给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，内容是美国节日风俗和中学生生活。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：首先，简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。2、建议 Peter 介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。3、稿件的要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【参考范文】Dear Peter，Id like to ask you to write an article for our s
34、chools English newspaper.The Foreign Cultures section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carriesarticles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you pleasewrite something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especiall
35、ywelcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,and the life ofAmerican high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting andinformative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?Im looking forward to hearing from you.You
36、rs,Li Hua假如你是李华。某国际学生杂志邀请你在国际交换生项目专栏中分享你作为国际交换生的经历。请给该栏目编辑写封邮件，内容包括：1.遭遇的困难；2.问题的解决；3.你的感想。注意:1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。Dear editor,Lastyear,IwenttoEnglandforastudentexchangeprogramme._Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】本书面表达要求写一封邮件，属半开放式作文。考生可依据题中提供的三个内容要点(遭遇的困难，问题的解决，你的感想)依次行文。注意：因为要讲述过去的经历，
37、因此要以一般过去时为主；此外，半开放式作文要围绕话题及作文要求合理地发挥想象。写作时可能用到的表达：1.交流方面的困难：It was hard for me to communicate with them.或者 I couldnt make out whatthey were saying.2.事 情 的 好 转：Things gradually got better.或 者 With the help of the homestay family/myclassmates,I.3.当交换生的好处：Being an exchange student offers me a chance to
38、.或者 Being an exchangestudent benefits me in that.【参考范文】Dear editor,Last year,I went to England for a student exchange programme.Before I went,I was quiteproud of my English,but everyone in England spoke so fast that I couldnt make out what theywere saying.Being in a completely different culture was
39、scaring and I even wanted to gostraight back home.However,things soon got better and better.The homestay family was very kind,and,fortunately,the boy that I was staying with was keen on football,which made my stay moreenjoyable and stress-free.Besides,I developed an interest in English cooking and I
40、 ate pasta andinternational food just as I do at home!Being an exchange student offers me a chance to improve my English and to learn aboutthe foreign culture and people.The best part of all is knowing that I could cope,even in such adifficult situation.Yours,Li Hua书面表达是历年高考英语的重头戏之一，它旨在考查学生的英语表达能力，即
41、运用学过的英语知识和掌握的技能，以书面语言形式进行思想交流的能力。如何写好书面表达除了要求基本功要扎实、平时多背多练以外，还要注意以下八点：一、注意审清题目要求有的学生写作文没耐心，审题时只扫一眼题目，不细审就急于下笔，结果离题甚远。其实书面表达一般属控制性写作，都提供文章的文体、人物的身份、事情发生的时间、地点、文章的主旨，这些都为写作提供了依据。所以动笔之前，一定要花上几分钟，仔细审题，力求做到全面、准确地把握题目所提供的内容、时间、人物、环境、地点、体裁等信息。二、注意用合理的体裁、题材写作前，首先要弄清文章的体裁，才能考虑用何种语言、语气。而且，恰当的体裁也无疑会给批阅者留下好的印象。
42、所以动笔之前，一定要审清文章的体裁和题材。一般说来，书面表达题材与现实生活息息相关。如交友信、询问信、介绍人物、事情、场所、保护环境、爱护动物等，这些学生都比较熟悉。书面表达常碰到的体裁有记叙文、说明文、应用文、记叙文、说明文多用书面语，而应用文多用口头语。各种体裁又都有自己的格式。如：写信时，要求写信人的地址、时间写在信的右上角；英文便条无须写地址，但要写明时间；口头通知无须注明通知的时间和地点，但开头要加称呼语和提示语，结束要加Thankyou.。书面通知要有明确的通知时间、通知人或单位。所有这些都要求学生平时牢记在心。三、注意正确使用人称根据评分标准，如果书面表达人称写错，全文要另外扣除
43、分，而每年期末考试各年级试卷统批中，总有一批学生在这方面失分，委实令人惋惜。因此，写作之前，确立人称是审题必不可少的步骤之一。四、注意掌握中心要点要点是否写到、写全，是否遗漏内容是书面表达评分标准的一个重要标尺。所以审清了文章的主题、人称以后，接着要考虑文章的内容要点了。如果题目给出了汉语提示和要求，则可仔细从中找出要点；如果是图画、图表则要仔细观察，故事性的则按图画顺序去设计故事发展情节；介绍事、物的作文应注意图画中的箭头、事物、场景及前后对比变化，同时注意图画以外的提示。然后将内容要点一一列出，再用合理的词语、句型连词成句。五、注意正确合理地使用词语与句型句子结构的好坏直接影响意义的表达和
44、文章的得分。所以，写作时，学生应尽量确保使用正确的词语与句型。这就要求学生平时要多背多练，有扎实的基础。同时要让学生懂得，如果自己基础较差，则在写作时尽量多用自己熟悉的句型。尽量回避自己不熟悉的单词、句型，用自己有把握的短语、句型，少追求文章的华丽。因为评判一篇文章的好坏，错误的多少是一个重要依据。同时，为使文章主题突出，行文流畅，写作结束后应仔细查看上下文逻辑关系与过渡词使用得是否恰当，尽可能地运用自己已掌握的一些高级词汇、短语或从句，这对提高文章档次是至关重要的。这就要求学生平时注意掌握一些表示并列、递进、转折、因果等的过渡词，如：and,but,however,yet,so,theref
45、ore,then,later,meanwhile,whatsmore 等。六、注意使用正确的时态、语态根据评分标准，书面表达时态用错全文要扣 5 分，所以正确使用动词的时态、语态是书面表达的重点。一般说来，记叙文讲的是发生了的事情，应以过去时为主。通知是将要发生的事，以事实为主。说明文、议论文阐明的是事实、论点、论据，以现在时为主。七、注意正确使用标点符号英语和汉语的标点符号在形式与使用上有所不同，而英语课本中又没有专门涉及其用法的知识，所以，很多同学在英文写作中极易在标点符号的使用上犯错误。常见的标点错误有以下两方面：（）不会用标点。如一个复合句主从句间不该断句的地方断了句，两个简单句之间该
46、断句却无标点；（）错用标点。第一种，错用顿号和省略号。第二种，错用冒号。汉语中直接引语前某某说之后一律用冒号，但英语中习惯用逗号。第三种，错用书名号。英语中没有书名号，表示书的名称一般用引号。这样即使文章本身没有或只有少量错误，内容也丰富，但仍然要被归入低档篇。因为它让人读起来非常吃力。并且，近两年的高考评分标准中标点误用类错误被视为影响表达的错误。因此，要提升作文的档次，必须规范标点的使用。八、注意大小写英语作文如果整篇文章全是小写或放在前面的主句或从句没大写首字母，后面的一句却大写了，这些势必影响文章意义的正确表达，降低了文章的档次，给批阅者也会留下不好的印象。所以，写完文章后一定要仔细审
47、查一遍全文，看看大小写是否使用正确。平时在学习课文或练习中，也应注意大小写的正确使用。高考书面表达高分秘笈秘笈一：运用高级词汇，彰显强功句式。高考英语书面表达对在选词和选句部分有较高的要求，尤其是对于想要得到高分的学生，在作文要使用较高级词汇，借以突显作文亮点，展示自己作文特色，同时也是提升作文档次的重要方面。因此针对历年高考书面表达的高频话题考点，给同学们总结了几个重要的话题词汇，希望能熟练掌握。话题一：环境保护Pollution,protect the environment,give off a bad smell,send out smoke and poisonousgases in
48、to the air,pour waste water into the river,cut down trees,throw litter,sandstorm,globalwarming,Greenhouse Effect,live in harmony with,take proper measures to,improve theenvironment,pose a great threat to,be endangered,die out,become extinct,species,be frombad to worse,spring up like mushrooms,flood
49、into.话题二：中学生的兴趣爱好Spare time,hobby,entertainment,be interested in,have special favor to,be fond of,bekeen on,have a taste in,read novels,surf the internet,chat online,collect stamps,doing sports,develop an interest in,play musical instrument.话题三：友谊Make friends with,friendship,friendly,trust each othe
50、r,righteous,honesty,knowledgeable,standard,precious,be loyal to,keep in touch with,keep company with sb.,have a lot incommon,share happiness and bitterness with each other,treasure,good-tempered.A friend is a present which you give yourself.A life without a friend is a life without a sun.话题四：劳动、求职与就
51、业Offer service to,heart and soul,physical labor,mental labor,honorable,earn pocketmoney,part-time job,full-time job,steel ones mind,enlarge ones knowledge,get workingexperience,apply for,major in,graduate from,degree,scholarship,be skilled in,confident,experienced,perform well in school,leadership,c
52、ommunicative,cooperative,competitive,diligent.话题五：校园文明与安全School rules and regulations,obey,be neatly dressed,respect ones teachers and parents,be on time,keep the environment clean,break the rules,spit,cheat in exam,get in line,punishsb for,its shameful to,library card,student ID,bicycle-permit,be a
53、bsent from.秘笈二：巧用插入语，点亮量分点。在平时做题时，总会出现不少插入语，尤其在情景交际这部分出现的频率较高，每个插入语都会给整个对话情景增添具体的语言氛围，从插入语中能够判断说话者的语气及态度，而且在写作中若能正确运用这些插入语，会使你的文章表达更地道，从而能使你的文章增色不少。1.whats more 更重要的是；更何况；而且You should go to see her,because she misses you,and whats more,she needs your help.你应该去看她，因为她很想念你，更重要的是，她需要你的帮助。He will surely
54、help you,because he is your best friend,and whats more,he is so kind.他肯定会帮你，因为他是你最好的朋友，更何况他的心地又是如此之好。2.besides 更何况You can pass the exam,because you study very hard,and besides,you are so clever.你能通过这次考试，因为你学习很认真，更何况你又很聪明。3.whats worse,to make the matter worse,worse still 更糟糕的是You cant play computer
55、games too much,because it will do harm to your health.Whatsworse,it will waste your time.你不能过分玩电脑游戏，因为它会损害你的身体。更糟糕的是，它会浪费你的时间。4.that is（to say）也就是说，即He will come on National Day,that is（to say）,October 1st.他国庆节，即十月一日来。5.or rather 更确切地说He arrived home late last night,or rather,early this morning.他昨天深
56、夜，更确切地说，今天一大早才回家。6.in other words 换言之You neednt come to work tomorrow,in other words,you are out of work.你明天不用来上班了，换言之，你下岗了。7.believe it or not 信不信由你Believe it or not,he is more than one hundred years old.信不信由你，他已经 100 多岁了。8.generally speaking,generally,in general 一般说来Generally speaking,boys are mor
57、e active than girls.一般说来，男孩比女孩更活跃。9.altogether 总之She is kind.She is diligent.She is considerate.Altogether she is a good girl.她善良，她勤奋，她善解人意。总之，她是一个好女孩。10.in a word 总之This book is very interesting.This book is very instructive.This book is very fashionable.In a word,this book is very good.这本书很有趣，这本书有
58、教育意义，这本书很时尚。总之，这本书很好。11.similarly 同样A machine needs fuel.Similarly,man needs food.机器需要燃料，同样道理，人类需要营养。12.worst of all 最糟糕的是It was very dark,and I lost my way.Worst of all,it began to rain.天很暗，我又迷了路，最糟糕的是，天又开始下雨。13.in fact,actually,in reality,as a matter of fact 实际上She seems thirty-five,but in fact,sh
59、e is only thirty.她看起来有三十五岁，但实际上只有三十岁。14.in turn 反过来Theory begins with practice and in turn serves practice.理论来源于实践又反过来为实践服务。15.in return 做为报答She gave me much help,and in return,I gave her some money.她给我许多帮助，做为报答我给她一些钱。16.above all 尤其重要的是，最为重要的是You cant waste anything,and above all,you cant waste you
60、r time.你不能浪费任何东西，尤其不能浪费时间。17.after all 意思为毕竟，终究，放在句首时含有别忘了之意，用来表示听话人似乎忘记了某一个重要环节而需要被加以提醒，放在句末时有与预料中的情况相反之意Let her go alone;after all,she is eighteen,she is no longer a child.让她一个人去吧，毕竟，她十八岁了，不再是一个小孩了。I thought he was sure to die that night,but he lived through after all.我以为他活不过当晚，但他竟然活过来了。18.in ones
61、 opinion,in the opinion of sb.以之见In my opinion,your plan is not considerate.依我看，你的计划并不周全。19.exactly 非常确切，确切地We should serve the people heart and soul.Exactly.It is our duty to do so.我们应该全心全意为人民服务。确切地说。这是我们的责任20.as a result 结果It rained very hard,and as a result,he couldnt go out.雨下得很大，结果他不能出去。21.no w
62、onder 难怪He started very early yesterday morning.No wonder he got there ahead of time.昨天早晨他出发得很早。难怪他提前赶到了那里。所以，书面表达，在平时的训练中，考生就要注意归纳、总结(连接词、常见句式、创新观点、好词好句等等)，经常背诵佳句美文。在考试中，则要注意审题、要点、框架、逻辑、标点、大小写等规范性操作，并力求卷面整洁美观。高考英语写作 20 套经典模板一、求职信模板Dear,I write this letter to apply for the position that you advertis
63、ed in of.(信息来源)Not only do I have the qualifications for this job,but I also have the right personality for.(表明自己可以胜任某一职位)For one thing,.(胜任的理由一)For another,.(胜任的理由二)Should you grantme a personal interview,I would be most grateful.Please contact me at any time at.(提供个人联系方式)Thank you for considering
64、my application,and Im looking forward to meeting you.(结束语，表达感谢和期望)Yours sincerely,_二、邀请信模板Dear,(活动的内容、时间、地点)Im writing to invite you to.(发出邀请)There are some points you may want to know about./During _,we will have lots ofactivities you are interested in.(活动的具体内容)First,.(活动介绍一)Second,.(活动介绍二)I believ
65、e that you will be very interested in.For one thing/First,_.For another/Second,_(受邀人参加的理由)Since the _ will begin _,is it possible _?I really hope you cancome/Im looking forward to _.(提出希望)Yours_三、劝慰信和建议信模板Dear,I am sorry to hear that _(就某事表示遗憾).You have asked me for my advicewith regard to and I wil
66、l try to make some useful recommendations.(承上启下)First of all,_.Whats more,_.Last but not least,_(给出理由).I hope you will find these proposals practical.I am looking forward to hearing from yousoon.(结尾句，希望上述建议能有所帮助)Yours sincerely,_四、感谢信模板Dear,Thank you very much for/Thanks a lot for/Many thanks for/Im
67、 writing to you about mygratitude for/Im very grateful to you for.(开门见山地交代感谢原因)But for/Without your help.(从反面衬托对方的作用)/Its very kind of you to.(从正面说明对方的作用)I hope to have the opportunity to express my gratitude to you/repay your kindness.I will feelvery honored and pleased if.(提出回报对方的方式)Would you plea
68、se let me know?(希望对方给予回应)Thank you again for what you have done.(再次表达感谢)Yours sincerely,_五、道歉信模板Dear,Im so sorry to tell you that.Now,I am writing you this letter to show my deep regret.(就某事道歉)I do hope you can understand me and excuse me for _(希望得到谅解)I will be very grateful if you are kind to liste
69、n to my explanation.The reason for mydelay/absence was/is that.Therefore,.(解释原因)I wonder if _.(询问对方能够接受补救方案)Sincerely yours,_六、建议信模板Dear,I am very to know that.(写信的原因)Im looking forward to.(表示期待)Im afraid that.(表述提出建议的原因)Id like to suggest that first,then.(提出建议)I believe this kind of arrangement wil
70、l.(建议的作用)Moreover,if,it is necessary for you to.(补充建议)With you will.Wish.(祝愿)Yours sincerely,_七、咨询信模板Dear,I am.(自我介绍)I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with informationregarding.(要询问的内容)First of all,what are?Secondly,when will?Thirdly,is?(要咨询的问题罗列)I would also like to inquir
71、e.Could you be so kind to send me some relevent booklets on theabove-mentioned aspects?(附加问题)Thank you for your kindness,and your prompt attention to this letter will be highlyappreciated.(表示感谢)Yours sincerely,_八、电子邮件模板Dear,I am extremely pleased to hear from you.And I would like to write a letter t
72、o tell you that.(寒暄句加主题句)(扩展句一)(扩展句二)(扩展句三)I will greatly appreciate a response from your earliest convenience./I am looking forward toyour reply at your earliest convenience.(结束主体段落)Best regards.(结束语)Sincerely yours,_九、日记模板(月、日、年、星期、天气)(标题)Today/Yesterday,I/we.(事件)In the morning,we;then;after that.
73、By the time we had a good time.Finally.Ill neverforget the memorable day!(事件经过)From this activity,I have learned that/I think.(事件意义和自己的感想)十、演讲稿模板Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,Its a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech.(表示荣幸)My name is.(自我介绍)The topic of my speech is.(提出演讲主题)To b
74、egin with,many people suggest that.(话题或现象列举)Secondly,.Thirdly,.What I want to stress is that.(重申主题)For one thing,.For another,.Besides,.(原因或重要性列举)In a word,.(总结)Thank you for your listening/Thank you.十一、口头通知模板Ladies and gentlemen,may I have your attention,please?I have an announcement tomake.(称呼语及开场
75、白).(正文部分，说明具体通知事项)All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks andmake notes./Please listen carefully and well have a discussion in groups.Make sure youllcome on time and dont be late.(说明通知对象和注意事项)Please come and join in it./Everybody is welcome to attend it./I
76、hope youll have a nicetime here.(重申希望大家参加之情)Thats all.Thank you.(结束语)十二、记叙文模板One day,_,_.(事情发生的时间、地点等)When I was _,something strange happened _.(事 情 发 生 的 过 程)Finally,_.(结果)Ill never forget _(感受)十三、说明原因型说明文模板Nowadays,there are more and more in some big cities.It is estimated that.(用具体数据说明某现象)Why hav
77、e there been so many?Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first reasonis that.(原因一)Besides,.(原因二)The third reason is.(原因三)To sum up,the main cause of is dueto.(指出主要原因)It is high time that something should be done.For one thing,.(解决建议一)For another thing,.All these measures will certainly.(解
78、决建议二)十四、描述事物型说明文模板What I have known about is that.(具体描述某事物)Firstly,.(描述要点一).(具体阐述要点一)Secondly,.(描述要点二)(具体阐述要点二).As a collegestudent,.(结合自身描述要点三)All in all,.(做出总结)Therefore,we should.(提出建议)十五、问题解决型说明文模板In recent days,there has been a problem,which is becoming more and more serious.(说明问题及其现状)First,.Se
79、cond,.(进一步阐释现状)We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,_.For another thing,_.Finally,_.(列举解决该问题的方法)Personally,I believe that _/Consequently,Im confident that a bright future isawaiting us because _.(结尾段，指出我的信心及理由)十六、谚语/警句型议论文模板The good old proverb remin
80、ds us that.Indeed,we can learn many things from it.(引出名言，阐明含义)First of all,.For example,.Secondly,.Another case is that.Furthermore,.(举例说明理由)In my opinion,.(自己的观点)In short,whatever you do,please remember the saying.If youunderstand it and apply it to your study or life,youll necessarily benefit a lo
81、t from it.(总结)十七、正反观点对比型议论文模板There is a widespread concern over the issue that.But it is well known that the opinionconcerning this hot topic varies from person to person.(引出话题)A majority of people think that.(观点一)In their view there are two factors contributing to thisattitude as follows:In the fir
82、st place,.(支持观点一的原因一)In the second place,.(支持观点一的原因一)So it goes without saying that.The other people,however,differ in their opinion on this matter.They hold the idea that.(观点二)In their point of view,on the one hand,;on the other hand,.(支持观点二的原因)Therefore,there is no doubt that.As far as I am concer
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84、s follows.Firstly,.(优点一)And secondly,.(优点二)Just as a popular saying goes,Every coin has two sides.is no exception,and in otherwords,it still has negative aspects.To begin with,.(缺点一)In addition,.(缺点二)To sum up,we should try to bring the advantages of into full play,and reduce thedisadvantages to the
85、 minimum at the same time.In that case,we will definitely make a betteruse of.(总结)十九、图画作文模板As is vividly shown in the picture,.(描 述 图 画 内 容)The picture/cartoon informs us of thephenomenon that.(图画反映的现象)Thesemay/mightbeseveralfactorscontributingto/responsibleforthephenomenon/problem.To start with,.Se
86、condly,.Whats more,.Last but not least,.(说明原因)In my opinion,the government/the school/we should take measures to/something must bedone to.Only in this way can the problem be really solved./Only when everyone can do so willour world become more and more beautiful.(解决问题的方法)二十、图表作文模板As the bar chart sh
87、ows,during the years of to.(说明图表反映的问题)Several factors contribute to.And.Furthermore.All these result in.(分析问题产生的原因)However,is faced with some problems.With,the effect of which is not only discouraging,but also challenging.So my principle is to pay due attention to,but not just to.(提出解决措施)高考真题题组一 201
88、9 年真题Writing 1(2019新课标卷 II)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友 Chris 球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达期待。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【写作指导】本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。【范文】Dear Chris,Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball
89、 match next month.The match willtake place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th.We will play against the team fromHongXing High School.In order to win the match,we should get fully prepared and practicehard.So from tomorrow,we need to train for two hours after school every day.Please come
90、tothe school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.Youre an excellent player.With you on the team,we are confident that we can win thegame.Lets try hard together!Cheers,Li Hua【名师点评】本文内容完整，详略得当，并运用了高级句式。Im writing to let you know that we will have avolleyball match next month.宾语从句；In order to win the
91、match 不定式作目的状语。文章语言流畅，上下文转换自然。Writing 2(2019新课标卷 III)假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友 Allen 参加，内容包括：1.时间；2.活动安排；3.欢迎他表演节目。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【写作指导】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：How is everything going?a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremo
92、ny 等。第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。【范文】Dear Allen,How is everything going?Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in theschool hall.And Im writing to invite you to join us.The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am,and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech.Thenthere will be various fantas
93、tic performances played by talented students.You are definitelywelcome to show up on stage,which will add color and fun to our festival.Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes,Li Hua【名师点评】本文内容完整，详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage,which will add color and fun to ou
94、r festival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。Writing 3(2019北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。注意：词数不少于 60。提示词：西瓜 watermelon_【写作指导】本文属于图画作文，要求根据图画内容写一篇英文周记。图画作文内容要点比较清晰，其中包括：老师宣布活动内容和意义，我为活动准备，在农场的劳动过程，介绍活动感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全文可分成三部分，开头段概括活动，中间段描述图画，结尾段总结收获和意义。文章用第一人称来写，使用一般过去时。【
95、范文】Last week I took part in a farm work programme in the suburbs.At the class meeting,our teacher told us about the programme with the theme“Working ismost beautiful”.And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.When I gothome,I packed up my luggage for the trip.On the farm,we helped
96、 pick watermelons.Whileworking,I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.When I came back home,I shared my experiences with my parents.And they were veryproud of me.【名师点评】本文内容完整，语言表述通顺。使用了连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。文章使用了宾语从句 howhard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.还使用了 At t
97、he class meeting,When I got home,On the farm,While working,When I came back home 等过渡词。Writing 4(2019江苏卷)请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。Li Jiang:Have you heard this?A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our schoolnext month.Su Hua:Yes,I have.Some are already recommending the tradition
98、al Chinese dress for thewelcome ceremony.Li Jiang:But it seems people have different opinions.Su Hua:What do you think?Li Jiang:I think its a good idea.Its an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known tointernational students.Su Hua:I agree.But we dont have to dress that way.Thats not our
99、 daily style.Besides,its notvery convenient.Li Jiang:You see.Its the Chinese culture that the British friends are coming for.Just the rightoccasion.Su Hua:I prefer the school uniform.Its nice.Its also a better display of our school culture.【写作内容】1.用约 30 个词概括上述信息的主要内容；2.在上述场合，你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装？请说明理由(不少于两
100、点)。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。_【范文】Possible version one:Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students nextmonth.Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform.I would be happy to
101、wear traditional Chinese clothes at the welcome ceremony.Firstly,thisis precisely what the British visitors are expecting.They come to learn about Chinese culture withtheir own eyes.Their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive.Theschool uniforms are fine,but not specia
102、l enough to give a unique Chinese flavour.Secondly,theinconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to share Chinese culture.It is just the so-calledinconvenience that displays the richness,delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture witha history of thousands of years.The traditional Chine
103、se clothes,it seems to me,will make the occasion very Chinese andinviting to the British guests.Possible version two:Li Jiang and Su Hua dont agree on what to wear when greeting the British students.Lisuggests traditional Chinese clothes while Su thinks the school uniforms are more suitable.I prefer
104、 the school uniform to the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony nextmonth.Although the traditional Chinese dress may look more beautiful and stylish,it is a little bitstrange to walk around in it.We feel at ease in our school uniforms every day.Whats more,thetraditional Chinese dress ca
105、nt reflect the unique culture of our school.From the design andcolour of our uniforms,the British friends will learn more about our school.Besides,the choice ofthe traditional Chinese dress means extra money,and extra time,for we have to change it backafter the event.So the school uniforms are a bet
106、ter choice than the traditional Chinese dress for such anoccasion.题组二 2018 年真题Writing 1(2018新课标卷 II)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片 Growing Together，内容包括：(1)短片内容：学校的发展；(2)放映时间、地点；(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。注意：(1)词数 100 左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作指导】英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。另外层
107、次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。【范文】Boys and girls,May I have your attention,please?Recently,an outstanding movie will be shown in ourcampus.Welcome to join us end enjoy it!Here are some relevant details about it.To begin with,the name of the movie is Growing together,which is about the developmentof o
108、ur beloved school;as a result,it will be not only meaningful but also interesting.Besides,it willbe in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th.Whats more,every one of youwill be welcome to take part in it,enjoying the movie,having a heated discussion afterwardsand giving your own
109、comments.Hopefully,you would make it to our activity.I have the confidence that you will have agreat time.The Student UnionWriting 3(2018天津卷)假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友 Chris 就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于 7 月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。（1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱
110、，请他提出建议。注意：（1）词数不少于 100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics CompetitionDear Chris,I have good news to tell you._Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin【写作指导】本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1.代表兴趣小组发出邀请
111、；2.介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3.说明邀请他的原因，包括 Chris 曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4.告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【范文】Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you.The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held inTianjin at the end of July.Hearing that
112、you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition andwon an award,I,on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group,intend to invite you to join our team inthe coming competition.I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning theaward but also enhance the friendship between our two schools
113、.With this email I also send you our training plan,about which I wish to get your advicebecause you are more experienced than us.We sincerely hope that we can participate in thecompetition as team partners.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li JinWriting 4(2018北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一
114、篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。注意：词数不少于 60。(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内)【写作指导】本文为图片介绍类作文，这类作文是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛，可以是记叙文、说明文，也可以是议论文。按照本文的要求可知，是写一篇记叙文。1.认真读图，把握中心。根据提示可知，内容是带领外国学生体验中国茶文化的全过程，介绍了茶具、泡茶、沏茶、品茶的过程，所以这是这组图画所要表达的中心。2.初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文
115、章的内容。本文是讲述上周发生的事情，故时态要以过去时为主，人称是第一人称，尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。3.连词成句，然后再连句成文。运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。4.反复审核，修改错误。一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。5.宜详则详，该略则略。对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。如果是可有可无的细节，则可
116、视具体情况进行增删。据此，我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容，看其是否影响文章的内容。【范文】Last week,we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic teaculture,which turned out be to extremely rewarding.On arriving at the tea house,the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea potsand tea cups.I gave them
117、a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture,including itsprofound history,its rich variety,and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interestgreatly sparked,I then began to teach them how to make tea.In order to deliver a clear presentation,I slowly explained the traditional p
118、rocedure ofmaking tea in detail.Absorbed in every move of mine,the foreign students were once againamazed by this unique culture and they couldnt help taking pictures from time to time.Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.Washing the tea pots,adding tea leaves,and pouring
119、water into the cups,they followed my instructions and werereally immersed in charming tea culture.The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for allof us.At the end of the activity,holding the tea bags in our hands,we took a picture to memorizethe unforgettable day.It suddenly hit me that tradi
120、tional culture like tea culture was of greatcharm and huge value.And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over theworld.经典演练Writing 1假设你校开展“研究性学习”活动，要求学生设计未来的房子。请你以“My Dream House”为题，描述你设计的房子。内容要点如下：1.海边别墅，有两个庭院；2.有两层，第一层有电脑房和书房，第二层有 6 个卧室，每一间都有浴室；3.注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可适当增加细节，以
121、使行文连贯。参考词汇：安全报警器 security alarm；可视电话 videophone；自动门 automatic doorMy Dream House_【范文】My Dream HouseMy dream house is a villa which lies on the coast.There are two yards in the villa.The frontyard is a garden with many beautiful flowers and plants in four seasons.There is a swimming poolin the backya
122、rd,as my family is fond of swimming.On the ground floor,you can see a big hall when you enter the gate.On the right of the hallis a sitting room,here we can relax,have a rest,watch TV and enjoy entertainments.On the leftthere are a computer room and a study belonging to me.On the first floor,there a
123、re sixbedrooms,each with a bathroom.The villa will be equipped with modern equipment,such assecurity alarms controlled by computers,videophones,lifts and automatic doors.Well,that is my dream house.Writing 2假如你是李华，作为交换生去了法国，请你给好友 Tom 发一封电子邮件谈谈你对巴黎的认识：1.巴黎是历史悠久的现代化城市；2.埃菲尔铁塔是巴黎的象征，建于 1889 年，是为了纪念法国大革
124、命 100 周年而建的；3.其他名胜古迹，如凯旋门、罗浮宫等。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.开头和结尾已经写好，但不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：埃菲尔铁塔 Eiffel Tower；法国大革命 100 周年纪念 the centenary of the FrenchRevolution；凯旋门 the Arc de Triomphe；罗浮宫 the LouvreDear Tom,I have been in Paris for some days,and it leaves me great impressions._【范文】Dear Tom,I have be
125、en in Paris for some days,and it leaves me great impressions.As the capital ofFrance,Paris is a modern city with a long and rich history.So many events took place here andthere are so many places for the visitors to have a trip.The Eiffel Tower,which is about 320 metershigh,is the symbol of Paris.It
126、 was completed in 1889 for the centenary of the French Revolution.Also,the Arc de Triomphe is a world-famous building,too.Whats more,I enjoy myself in theDisneyland Paris,the first Disneyland in Europe.In a word,there are many attractions,such as thebeautiful Seine River and the wonderful palaces li
127、ke the Louvre.Paris is a great place to allpeople in the world.I wish you were here and we could have a good time.Best wishes.Yours,Li HuaWriting 3假如你是学校图书馆馆长助理李华，图书馆要更新网络系统，请你在阅览室向在场的外国留学生口头通知相关事宜，并请他们转告其他留学生。1.时间：2018 年 12 月 1 日到 12 月 15 日；2.在此期间，关闭阅览室，暂停电子阅览系统；3.仅周二、周五可以借、还图书。注意：1.100 词左右；2.可适当增加
128、细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：更新 update 电子阅览系统 e-reading system_【范文】Hello everybody!May I have your attention?Im Li Hua,assistant of the librarian of theschool library.The library will soon update the Internet system.I would like everybody to knowthat the reading room will be closed and the e-reading system will b
129、e temporarily stoppedbetween the dates of 1st December and 15th December,2018.You will only be able to take outand return books on Tuesdays and Fridays.Please pass on this message to those who are nothere today.Thank you all.Writing 4假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Jack 计划于 8 月份到中国西藏旅游，特来信询问有关西藏的情况。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一封回信，
130、并对他的到来表示盼望。地理位置中国西南方，被誉为世界屋脊(Roof of the World)人口约 3,080,000面积120 多万平方千米历史七百多年气候8 月份温度适宜，但早晚温差大风景秀丽，有很多名胜古迹，如布达拉宫(the Potala Palace)注意：1.词数 100 左右，信的开头和结尾已写好(不计入总词数)；2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Jack,Im glad to hear that youre coming to China to visit Tibet in August._Yours sincerely,Li Hua【范文】Dear J
131、ack,Im glad to hear that youre coming to China to visit Tibet in August.Youve made a wisechoice to travel there.Tibet,known as the“Roof of the World”,is located in the southwest of China.It has ahistory of more than 700 years,with a population of about 3.08 million.Covering more than 1.2million squa
132、re kilometers,Tibet is one of the biggest autonomous regions in China.By the way,the climate in August is pleasant in Tibet,but theres a big difference intemperature between the morning and the night.It is a paradise for tourists because it hasbeautiful scenery and many world-famous places of intere
133、st,such as the Potala Palace.Imsure youll have a good time there.Im looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Li HuaWriting 5假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“The Last Day of My Senior HighLife”为题，用英语写一篇短文向校刊“英语园地”投稿，记述你高中生活的最后一天。注意：词数不少于 60。_【范文】The Last Day of My Senior High LifeI spent the last
134、 day of my senior high life yesterday.We had the last class and the whole class was silent.Classmates were busy preparing for thecollege entrance examination which is also the last examination for us.And then we took thegroup photo with our dear teachers.It seemed significant because it was the firs
135、t time we hadall been photographed together.In the afternoon，we began to write the alumni book to eachstudent,leaving our best wishes.Before we left，we cleaned the classroom.The clean and tidyclassroom is about to welcome its next batch of students,just as it welcomed us.My high schoollife is over,b
136、ut my life has just begun.Writing 6请根据你对下图的理解，以“The Adaptation of the Classical Literature”为题，用英语写一篇作文。（写作内容）1.简要描述该图的内容；2.概述你对该图所反映的现象的理解和看法(背后的原因以及该现象对人们带来的潜在的影响)；3.举例说明针对这一现象我们能做些什么。（写作要求）1.可参照图画适当发挥；2.作文字数：150 字；3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。参考词汇：剧作家 playwright，电影编剧 scriptwriter（评分标准）内容完整，语言规范，
137、语篇连贯，词数适当。_【范文】The picture gives us a view of a popular phenomenon:some playwrights and scriptwritersbeat their brains to adapt the classics to cater to the tastes of some readers and viewers.As aresult,the traditional characters become so strange and the plots are totally different.What the picture
138、 reflects is thought-provoking.It is so ridiculous that the precious literarytreasures are allowed to be ruined so much.As we all know,classical literature is therepresentation of the outstanding art of our nation and on no account should we spoil ourliterary treasures for economic benefit.Moreover,
139、such adaptations may have negative effectson the average audience,especially children,whose outlook on life will be affected.Therefore,measures should be taken to restrict these sorts of adaptation.For instance,thereal classics are supposed to be presented on the bookshelves for appreciation.In addition,readers had better resist those inferior adaptation.To sum up,its joint efforts that count when itcomes to the rescue of our traditional cultural treasure._
