1、短文改错与书面表达专练考点规范练第56页一、短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。AI am angry about the behavior of dishonest in exams.This doesnt mean Ive never c
2、heated.I once write the answers on my hand for a history test,but unluckily caught by my teacher.Because she was one of my most favorites,there were no words to describe what sorry I felt at that time.I thought cheat would help me keep my straight A.Little I know that I was hurting not only me but a
3、lso my teacher.From this lesson I know our teachers want their students to succeed by learning with their own and do the best they can,not by cheating.答案:I am angry about the behavior of dishonestdishonesty或在其前加being in exams.This doesnt mean Ive never cheated.I once writewrote the answers on my han
4、d for a history test,but unluckilywas caught by my teacher.Because she was one of my most favorites,there were no words to describe whathow sorry I felt at that time.I thought cheatcheating would help me keep my straight A.Littledid I know that I was hurting not only memyself but also my teacher.Fro
5、m this lesson I know our teachers want their students to succeed by learning withon their own and dodoing the best they can,not by cheating.BI like going to concerts a lot.Therefore,when my mother knew one of my favorite stars were going to have a concert in my city,she bought two tickets to me so I
6、 could invite one of my friends to go with me.But my mum had never attended a concert before,so I decide to ask her come along with me.Perhaps she would get to like them.She said she would go,but only if she paid for a meal before a concert.She chose a Japanese restaurant because of I love Japanese
7、food very well.That night,we had a lot of funs.Maybe next time,we can do something that my mum love together.答案:I like going to concerts a lot.Therefore,when my mother knew one of my favorite stars werewasgoing to have a concert in my city,she bought two tickets tofor me so I could invite one of my
8、friends to go with me.But my mum had never attended athe concert before,so I decidedecided to ask herto come along with me.Perhaps she would get to like themit.She said she would go,but only if she paid for a meal before a concert.She chose a Japanese restaurant because of I love Japanese food very
9、wellmuch.That night,we had a lot of funsfun.Maybe next time,we can do something that my mum loveloves together.二、书面表达A假如你是一名极限运动协会的工作人员,你所在的协会为了吸引人们报名参加极限运动推出一份宣传广告。请你根据以下信息用英语写一篇短文。内容要点如下:1.极限运动时尚,能够锻炼人们的勇气;2.极限运动有利于我们的身体健康;3.极限运动有助于释放压力。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。Nowadays,th
10、ere are more and more adventure activities,like bungee jumping and rocking.Since there are so many advantages of attending adventure activities,why not join them?参考范文:Nowadays,there are more and more adventure activities,like bungee jumping and rocking. They are so popular that many people,especiall
11、y the youth are willing to attend them.In most peoples eyes,adventure activities are believed to be modern and fashionable.Besides,people generally believe that attending adventure activities is an efficient way to test peoples courage.Apart from these,adventure activities can have a good effect on
12、our physical health.As we all know,modern people are busier than ever before and lack enough exercise,so taking adventure activities is a good choice to take exercise.Finally,attending adventure activities can help us release our pressure from work and study,so there is no doubt that they can be use
13、ful to our mental health.Since there are so many advantages of attending adventure activities,why not join them?导学号03730060B据报道,在我国仍有很多山区的孩子因为家庭贫穷而上不起学,你们班就如何帮助这些孩子上学进行了讨论。假如你是李华,请你把你们的建议写成一封信寄给EnglishWeekly,希望他们能够呼吁更多的人参与这项活动。建议要点:1.收集旧课本和衣服;2.呼吁更多人帮助他们;3.你的建议,至少一条。要求:1.100词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;2.可适
14、当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Editor,Im a senior high school student.Well really appreciate it if you can,through the EnglishWeekly,increase public awareness of the poor childrens living conditions and call on more people to help them.Yours sincerely,Li Hua参考范文:Dear Editor,Im a senior high school student.Its re
15、ported that in China many children in mountainous areas still cant go to school because of poverty.Last week,our class held a discussion about how to help them to go to school and live a happy childhood.Here are our suggestions.First,some old textbooks and clothes can be collected and sent to those
16、children so that they can be reused by them.Second,its also very important to appeal to more people and social organizations to help and care for those poor children.As far as Im concerned,we should save some of our pocket money and give it to those children in need.Above all,we should give them respect,never looking down upon them because they are poor.Well really appreciate it if you can,through the EnglishWeekly,increase public awareness of the poor childrens living conditions and call on more people to help them.Yours sincerely,Li Hua导学号03730065
