1、Section Reading for Writing每/日/金/句：Exercise is the source of happiness, and happiness is the wealth of life.运动是快乐的源泉，快乐是生命的财富。精读课文疏通理解障碍读文清障positive pztv adj.积极的；正面的；乐观的；肯定的negative adj.消极的，负面的slim slm adj.苗条的；单薄的worry about担心diet dat n规定饮食；日常饮食 vi.节食go bananas发狂；发疯have no idea不知道make a difference有作
2、用或影响rather than而不是rather r(r) adv.相当；有点儿things此处意为“形势；局面；情况”。instead of代替，而不是(介词短语)instead adv.反而，却pushup pp n俯卧撑situp仰卧起坐cleanup大扫除checkup体检liftup升空takeoff起飞cut.out停止做(或使用、食用)；剪下add.to.把加到上now and then有时；偶尔compare.with.把与作比较compared with/to与相比(常在句中作状语)compare.to.把比喻为/比作make a list of.列一个的清单be posit
3、ive about对乐观原文呈现GOING POSITIVEI always wanted to look like the slim girls on TV even though I knew that it was impossible1. I worried about my weight and tried every new diet I read about online. I tried nofat, lowfat, 52, only bananas, no bananasI almost went bananas， too.1本句是主从复合句。其中even though引导让
4、步状语从句，that引导宾语从句。Then I read an article that said instead of asking“Am I fat？” I should be asking “Am I fit？” I had no idea a letter could make such a difference2! Once I started thinking about fitness rather than weight, things began to change. Instead of saying “I want to lose three kilos”， I woul
5、d say “I want to run two kilometres in eight minutes” or “I want to be able to do 30 pushups”. Rather than cutting out the foods I enjoyed, I added healthy foods to my meals. I could still have a burger now and then， but I would add a salad or an apple.2本句是主从复合句。其中idea后跟了一个同位语从句，连接词that被省略了。that引导名词
6、性从句时，没有实际意义，是一个标志词。Finally, I stopped comparing myself with actresses and models and looking for things that were wrong with my face or body3. Instead, I made a list of the things I liked about myself4. By being positive about myself and my body, I became both happier and healthier.3此处是that引导的限制性定语从
7、句，修饰things。that在从句中作主语。4此处是省略了关系代词that/which的定语从句，修饰the things。关系代词在从句中作liked的宾语，可以省略。课文翻译积极向上我总是努力想让自己看起来像电视上的那些苗条女孩一样，即使我知道这是不可能的。我担心我的体重，也尝试了网上看到的每一种新的减肥饮食方案。我尝试了无脂肪、低脂肪、52（轻断食法）、只吃香蕉、不吃香蕉我也几近疯狂。后来，我看到一篇文章，说不要问自己“我胖吗？”而应该问“我健康吗？”我不知道一词之差会产生这么大的影响！一旦我开始考虑健康而不是体重，事情就开始改变了。我不会说“我想减掉三公斤”，我会说“我想在八分钟内跑
8、完两千米”或“我希望做30个俯卧撑”。我不再拒绝我喜爱的食物，而是在自己的三餐中添加健康食品。我仍然能偶尔吃个汉堡，但我会加上一份沙拉或一个苹果。最后，我不再拿自己和女演员、模特作比较，也不再寻找自己的脸或身材有什么问题。相反，我把对自己满意的地方罗列出来。通过积极看待自我和自己的身体，我变得更加快乐、也更加健康了。对接写作体现学以致用目标一 宏观理解构建模板1.Read the health report and put the necessary part of the health report in order.What made me change.My life at presen
9、t.My problem in the past._2Read the health report and find out the structures that the author uses to describe her changes._3Read the health report and find out the structures that the author uses to describe her present life._4According to the health report，we can learn that when we write a health
10、report，we can use the following outline.（写作模板）In the past，I was/used to do Then I was told by a friend thatI began to change.Instead of doing ，I would do Rather than doing ，I did Finally，I was no longer.By doing.，I a m happier and healthier than before. 目标二 写作要领技法指导本单元的写作任务是写健康报告书。 文体感知健康报告书是把自己身体由不
11、健康向健康方向转化的前后过程写出来，使读者从中受益。写作时涉及的词汇：（1）不健康习惯和不健康身体状况：stay up late, lack of exercise, become too fat, often fall ill。（2）健康习惯和身体状况：change the unhealthy habit, go to bed early, get up early, keep balanced diet, do some running in the morning, develop a good habit。写作时根据行文需要灵活运用衔接词，使文章整体连贯顺畅。 篇章结构 话题词汇pla
12、yer/athlete/competitor n.运动员；竞技者strength n. 力量；体力medal n. 奖章；勋章sports events 体育项目；运动项目keep fit 保持健康do exercise 进行锻炼get injured 受伤face difficulty 面临困难the first prize 一等奖give up 放弃；投降track and field 田径cut out 停止食用 话题句式第一段：简述个人的身体现状或者人们的健康状况。I once got into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and sn
13、acks and didnt take exercise regularly.我曾经养成了吃很多垃圾食品和零食的习惯，不经常锻炼。I spent a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV.我花费很多时间躺在沙发上看电视。I put on so much weight that I found it difficult to climb stairs.我的体重增加了很多，以至于我发现爬楼梯都很困难。Nowadays, being overweight is a worry for teenagers, so our school plans to
14、set up a swimming club.现在，超重是青少年的担忧，所以我们学校计划成立一个游泳俱乐部。第二段：介绍保持健康的方法。I will keep on exercising and have a healthy lifestyle.我会坚持锻炼，保持健康的生活方式。If you want to keep fit, joining the swimming club may be a good choice.如果你想保持健康，加入游泳俱乐部可能是一个不错的选择。In order to have a good state of mind, I suggest that you run
15、 for 15 minutes every morning.为了有一个良好的心态，我建议你每天早上跑步15分钟。第三段：鼓励同学们养成锻炼的习惯。Taking exercise is good for your health.锻炼对你的健康有好处。You must keep on exercising to build up your strength.你必须坚持锻炼来增强你的力量。No matter how cold it is, you should insist on running every morning.不管多冷，你都应该坚持每天早上跑步。目标三 写作实践分步演练【写作要求】假设
16、你是王林。过去，由于一些不健康的生活习惯，你的健康出现了问题。之后，你改变了生活方式，现在又恢复了健康。请你根据此经历写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1之前不健康的生活习惯：不吃早饭，经常熬夜，很少锻炼；2导致的问题：肥胖，易生病；3解决的办法：保持均衡饮食，积极锻炼，早睡早起；4给其他同学的建议：坚持锻炼，以保持身体健康。注意：1词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。第一步布局谋篇第二步遣词造句1过去我经常熬夜，并且很少进行体育锻炼。In the past, I often_2结果，我变得肥胖，易生病。As a result, I_3我下定决心改变不健康的生活方式。_ change the
17、 unhealthy lifestyle.4我不仅开始保持均衡的饮食，还积极参加各种体育活动。Not only did I begin to keep a balanced diet _5我养成了早睡早起的习惯。_.6两个月过去了，我恢复了健康。_.7我建议其他同学尽快改掉他们不健康的生活习惯。没有什么比健康更重要。I suggest other students _. Nothing is more important than health. 第三步句式升级8用with复合结构改写第二步中的句6_9用because将第二步中的句7合并升级为原因状语从句_第四步完美成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以
18、上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。_自查语基落实基本知能.核心词汇根据语境写出正确的单词1 to fall down假装摔倒2 of yuan 数百万元3. thousands of 数以千计的观众4. have a attitude to life 对生活有积极的态度5. look like the girls 看起来像那些苗条的女孩6. try every new 尝试各种新的饮食7make exercise like more enjoyable 使慢跑这样的锻炼更有趣8 sb. 欺骗某人.拓展词汇根据语境写出相应的派生词1 for ones country 为了祖国而比赛
19、a friendly （n.） 一场友好的比赛a （adj.） company 一个具有竞争力的公司the youngest （n.） 最年轻的比赛者2heavy （n.） 沉重的压力a （adj.） lifestyle 一个充满压力的生活方式feel （adj.） 感到压力很大.重点短语1 有道理； 合乎情理； 表述清楚2 假装做某事 3 即使； 虽然 4 有作用或影响 5 而不是 6 停止做（或使用、食用）； 剪下7 有时； 偶尔 8 把与相比较9 对积极的 10 列举清单 .重点句型1句型even though 引导状语从句， 意为“即使”。教材I always wanted to lo
20、ok like the slim girls on TV_that it was impossible.我总是努力想让自己看起来像电视上的那些苗条女孩一样， 即使我知道这是不可能的。2句型once 引导状语从句， 意为“一旦”。教材 _rather than weight, things began to change. 一旦我开始考虑健康而不是体重， 事情就开始改变了。3句型v.ing作状语教材 _ myself and my body, I became both happier and healthier.通过积极看待自我和自己的身体， 我变得更加快乐， 也更加健康了。探究新知发展语言知
21、识1（教材P41）An athlete should think about honour and his/her fans if he/she is competing for his/her country.如果一个运动员在为他/她的祖国比赛，他/她应该考虑荣誉和他/她的球迷。compete vi.竞争；对抗；参加比赛（1）compete with/against 和竞争compete for 为了而竞争compete in sth. 参加比赛（2）competitor n. 竞争者，竞争对手；参赛者competition n. 竞争；竞赛，比赛competitive adj. 竞争的；有
22、竞争力的佳句Teams from ten classes in Grade One will compete with each other in Chunlei Theater.来自一年级的十个班的团队将在春雷剧场比赛。练通单句语法填空 Im greatly honoured to be here to compete the good chance.One of the oldest （compete） won the gold medal.No one can entirely keep away from the （compete） world.写美应用文佳句我写信邀请你参加中国的剪纸
23、艺术展。Im writing Chinese papercutting art exhibition.2（教材P41）That doesnt make any sense!那没有任何意义！make sense 有道理；合乎情理；表述清楚（主语常是物）make sense of 理解；明白make no sense 没道理；没意义There is no sense in doing sth. 做某事没道理佳句Actually，the reason why he was late for the meeting didnt make sense.实际上，他开会迟到的理由根本说不通。练通单句语法填空
24、It doesnt make sense （buy） such a cheap computer just to save a few dollars. Theres no sense in （comment） on his behaviour now. We should find a solution.写美词汇升级There are so many new words in the passage that I could hardly understand them at all.If they cannot the speeches, they will lose interest i
25、n learning English.3（教材P41）A soccer player should not pretend to fall down even if it helps his/her team.即使假摔对他/她的球队有利，一个足球运动员也不应该那样做。pretend vi. & vt.假装；装扮pretend佳句The captain forced a smile and pretended that nothing had happened. 船长强作一笑，假装什么事也没发生。练通单句语法填空The manager pretended （read） the details o
26、f the comment. The old man pretends （be） an expert in treating lung cancer. 写美句型转换He pretended that he was reading a book when his mother came in.He pretended when his mother came in.句型公式：even if/though“即使；虽然”，引导让步状语从句（1）even though/if即使，虽然，引导让步状语从句，从句谓语动词用一般现在时表示将来要发生的动作或存在的状态。（2）as if/though就像似的；似
27、乎；仿佛。用于引导方式状语从句或表语从句。佳句Even though I didnt get the first place, I was very happy because many of my classmates cheered for me.即使我没得到第一， 我也很高兴， 因为我的很多同学都为我加油助威。写美应用文佳句尽管他很忙，他还是愿意帮我们。He is willing to help us 即使这次我失败了，我也会继续尝试的。，I will try again.4（教材P42）I worried about my weight and tried every new diet
28、 I read about online.我担心我的体重，也尝试了网上看到的每一种新的减肥饮食方案。diet n规定饮食；日常饮食vi.节食vt.进行规定饮食go on a diet 节食，控制饮食（表动作）be on a diet 在节食（表状态）a balanced/healthy diet 均衡的/健康的饮食佳句She is on a diet, hoping to become slimmer.她正在节食，希望变得更苗条。练通单句语法填空The doctor puts me a very strict diet, for Im too fat.She is always （diet）
29、but never seems to lose any weight. 写美应用文佳句节日和庆典期间， 医生提醒人们均衡饮食。During festivals and celebrations, doctors remind people to 5（教材P42）I had no idea a letter could make such a difference！我不知道一词之差，会产生这么大的影响！make a difference有作用或影响（1）make no difference （to sb./sth.） （对某人/物）没有作用或影响make some difference （to
30、sb./sth.） （对某人/物）有些作用或影响（2）tell the difference 分辨；区分；区别 佳句I hope my behaviour will make a difference to peoples attitude towards sorting garbage.我希望我的行为能对人们对于垃圾分类的态度起到作用。 练通单句语法填空What you have said will make no difference the naughty boy.The twins are so alike；its difficult to tell the difference th
31、em.写美词汇升级Luckily my teacher often tells me that every small thing can work.Luckily my teacher often tells me that every small thing can 6（教材P42）Once I started thinking about fitness rather than weight, things began to change.一旦我开始考虑健康而不是体重，事情就开始改变了。句型公式：once引导状语从句，意为“一旦”once引导状语从句，意为“一旦”，从句常用一般现在时。佳
32、句Once you make a promise，you should keep it.一旦你许下诺言，你就应该遵守它。写美应用文佳句一旦王先生决定做一些他感兴趣的事，他很少改变主意。_something he is interested in, Mr Wang seldom changes his mind.一旦你更好地了解了中国的餐桌礼仪，你就知道在晚宴上做什么了。_the Chinese table manners, you will know what to do at the dinner party.rather than而不是；与其倒不如（1）rather than用于连接两个并
33、列成分，可以是名词、代词、形容词、介词（短语）、动名词、分词、不定式等，但前后要对应。（2）连接两个名词或代词作主语时，谓语动词应与rather than前面的名词或代词在人称和数上保持一致。（3） 宁愿做而不愿做佳句It is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send Emails.我们最好给亲戚朋友们写信而不是发电子邮件。 练通单句语法填空The students, rather than their teacher, （be） going to have a picnic t
34、his weekend.Today，many Chinese people are learning Western styles rather than （focus） on Chinese traditions.写美一句多译她宁愿输掉比赛也不愿意从中作弊。_ cheat in it._ cheat in it._ cheat in it.7（教材P42）Rather than cutting out the foods I enjoyed, I added healthy foods to my meals.我不再拒绝我喜爱的食物，而是在自己的三餐中添加健康食品。cut.out停止做（或使
35、用、食用）；剪下cut off 切断；剪掉；砍掉cut up 切碎；使伤心cut down 降低；减少；砍倒cut in 插嘴；打断（谈话）佳句You should cut out the unimportant details. 你应当删除掉这些不重要的细节。 练通用cut 短语填空Many trees are being cut and more and more forests are lost. It is suggested that we should cut the Internet connection in the classroom.Its impolite to cut
36、while others are speaking.写美应用文佳句如果你的食物中没有脂肪和糖，你就会更苗条。If you in your foods, you will be much slimmer.8（教材P42）Finally, I stopped comparing myself with actresses and models and looking for things that were wrong with my face or body.最后，我不再拿自己和女演员、模特作比较，也不再寻找自己的脸或身材有什么问题。compare.with.把与作比较compare with.
37、 与比较compare.to. 把比喻为beyond/without compare 无与伦比佳句I often compare what I think with what others have thought.我经常把自己的想法和别人的想法作比较。练通单句语法填空Michaels new house is like a huge palace, （compare） with his old one.Books are often compared friends of people.写美应用文佳句请不要把你的缺点和他的优点比较。Please dont stress n压力；紧张；重音vt
38、.强调；重读；使焦虑不安vi.焦虑不安（1）be under stress 在压力之下lay/place/put stress on 强调/重视（2）stress the importance of 强调的重要性（3）stressful adj. 压力重的；紧张的（常修饰物）stressed adj. 焦虑不安的（常修饰人）佳句Things can easily go wrong when people are under stress.人在压力之下做事容易出差错。练通单句语法填空It is necessary to team up with others, especially in suc
39、h a competitive and （stress） society.With such an important task to finish，I felt very （stress）.写美应用文佳句我们老师经常强调对学习持积极态度的重要性。Our teacher often taking a positive attitude to study.Section Reading for Writing对接写作体现学以致用目标一12Instead of doing.，I would do.Rather than doing.，I did.3Finally，I stopped doing.B
40、y doing.，I became both happier and more healthier.目标三第二步1stayed up late and took little physical exercise2became too fat and often fell ill3I made up my mind to4but I also took an active part in various sports activities5I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early.6As two months
41、 passed, I recovered.7get out of their unhealthy living habits as soon as possible第三步8With two months passing, I recovered.9I suggest other students get out of their unhealthy living habits as soon as possible, because nothing is more important than health.第四步In the past, I often stayed up late and
42、took little physical exercise. As a result, I became too fat and often fell ill.I made up my mind to change the unhealthy lifestyle. Not only did I begin to keep a balanced diet but I also took an active part in various sports activities. Whats more, I developed the habit of going to bed early and g
43、etting up early. With two months passing, I recovered.I suggest other students get out of their unhealthy living habits as soon as possible, because nothing is more important than health.自查语基落实基本知能.1pretend2.millions3.audience4.positive5.slim6diet7.jogging8.cheat.1competecompetitioncompetitivecompet
44、itor2stressstressfulstressed.1make sense2.pretend to do sth.3.even if/though4make a difference5.rather than6.cut.out7.now and thenpare.with.9.be positive about10.make a list of.1even though I knew2Once I started thinking about fitness3By being positive about探究新知发展语言知识1forcompetitorscompetitiveto inv
45、ite you to compete in2to buycommentingmake sense of3to have readto beto be reading a bookeven if/though he is very busyEven if/though I fail this time4ondietinghave a balanced diet5tobetweenmake a difference6Once he is determined to doOnce you have a better understanding ofarefocusingShe would rather lose the game thanShe would lose the game rather thanShe preferred to lose the game rather than7downoffincut out fat and sugar8comparedtocompare your disadvantages with his advantages9stressfulstressedstresses the importance of
