1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家规范练(十) .短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()画掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dick is an Australian man， aged at 25， whose life is full of hardships. He was
2、 born without arms and legs. He used to be made fun by others. Everything seemed impossible to them. However， Dick never gave up. After many failure， he finally learned to swim， fish and even surf. That surprised us most is that he completed university education and get two degrees. And now he is th
3、e CEO of two companies. When asking about the secret of his success， he thinks a positive attitude is a key to success. Dicks story greatly inspired me. Compared with him， we are health. However， we are always frustrated when we face difficulties. I think Dick have set a good example to us. We shoul
4、d learn from him and never give up.答案：Dick is an Australian man， aged 25， whose life is full of hardships. He was born without arms and legs. He used to be made fun by others. Everything seemed impossible to . However， Dick never gave up. After many ， he finally learned to swim， fish and even surf.
5、surprised us most is that he completed university education and two degrees. And now he is the CEO of two companies. When about the secret of his success， he thinks a positive attitude is key to success. Dicks story greatly inspired me. Compared with him， we are . However， we are always frustrated w
6、hen we face difficulties. I think Dick set a good example to us. We should learn from him and never give up.书面表达假定你是李华，你校刚刚举行了教学开放周活动，你的英国网友Tom对此很好奇，写邮件向你了解基本情况。请你给他回一封邮件，要点如下：1.活动时间：4月17日至21日；2.活动目的：让家长了解学生的在校生活，促进学校与家长之间的沟通；3.活动内容：开放课堂，举行主题班会，邀请家长讲话；4.自己的体会。注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾
7、已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tom，Yours truly，Li Hua参考范文Dear_Tom，Im happy that youre curious about the Education Week held in our school recently and glad to give you a brief description of it.In order to show parents the colorful school life of their children and promote the schools communication with parents，
8、an Education Week was held April 17 through 21. During the week all classes were open to parents. It also included theme class meetings where students were proud to show off their talents. Besides， parents were welcomed to give advice on how to make our school better and share their experience in br
9、inging up children.The Education Week was a great success and we as well as our parents have benefited a lot from it.Yours_truly，Li_Hua阶段回顾(规范练六十)单词积累1.disguise vt.& n.掩盖；伪装2.resident adj.& n. 定居的；居民3.accumulate v. 积累4.predator n. 猎杀者；天敌5.range n. 范围；排列6.innocent adj. 清白的；天真的plaint n. 抱怨8.eventually
10、 adv. 最终9.conscious adj. 有意识的；神志清醒的10.destination n. 目的地11.reservation n. 保留；预订12.constant adj. 连续的；持续的13.belly n. 肚子v. 膨胀14.stretch v.&n. 伸展15.generate vt. 形成，产生(后代)16.curriculum n. 课程17.evaluation n. 估价18.literally adv. 逐字地；照字面地19.catastrophe n. 灾难20.checkout n. 结账短语整理1.side effect 副作用2.apply to 应
11、用于3.figure out 计算出，弄清楚4.fall apart 崩溃；垮掉5.think nothing of sth. 不把放在心上难句分析1.As we drove back to the Orlando International Airport， I thought about how I am not sure what my parents want， not only in their memorial services， but also how they want to be remembered and where they want to be laid to re
12、st.分析本句为复合句。As在句中引导时间状语从句；第一个how在句中引导宾语从句，作about的宾语；what和第二个how以及where在句中也引导宾语从句。翻译当我们驱车返回奥兰多国际机场时，我在思考自己是多么不确定父母想要什么，不仅是在他们的追悼会上，而且还包括他们想怎样被追思以及死后他们想在哪里安息。2.We suggest waiting for 6 or more inches of snow that lasts before taking out your bird feeders， especially if you have been visited in the pas
13、t by bears or if there are sightings of bears in your neighborhood.分析这是一个结构相对复杂的句子，句中使用了定语从句that lasts修饰snow，两个if引导条件状语从句。翻译我们建议等到雪的厚度达到或超过6英寸并且能够持续下去时，你再把喂鸟器拿出来，尤其是如果你们那里曾经有熊光顾过，或者附近有熊出没的话。3.For the study， the team analyzed more than 120 medical trials including around 600，000 people conducted over
14、 two decades， saying their findings are a call for an urgent review of existing blood pressure treatment guidelines.分析本句为复合句。conducted over two decades在句中作后置定语，修饰120 medical trials； saying.为现在分词在句中作伴随状语，且saying后接一个省略了引导词的宾语从句。翻译就这项研究来说，研究小组分析了进行了20多年的包括大约60万人的120多个医学实验，他们说他们的发现呼吁(人们)对现行的血压治疗准则进行紧急检讨。- 3 - 版权所有高考资源网
