1、高考资源网() 您身边的高考专家概要写作添加过度性词语写概要的时候,要准确表达原文的意思,也应充分考虑文章中体现出来的逻辑关系。逻辑关系理顺了,文章写起来也顺了,阅读概要文章的人也更理解我们要表述的内容了。在写作时,我们可以适当地运用一些衔接词,体现文章中的逻辑关系,使得完成的概要结构紧凑。1表示逻辑顺序:first,second,third,then,next,after that,finally,for one thingfor another,on (the) one handon the other hand2表示时间顺序:now,at present,recently,after,a
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4、t,as,thanks to,due to,therefore,as a result (of),for this reason阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Workaholics (工作迷) live for their work,often spending many extra hours at work,and often taking work home to complete.Its fine to live in a workhard culture,but when work becomes the only reason for a persons ex
5、istence above more important things (such as family and friends),the issue becomes critical.Thats the problem more and more Americans are faced with.Americans are working more hours per week than in years past,and with many companies reducing employees,more and more workers are worried about their o
6、wn jobs.Some studies show that as many as 40 percent of American workers dont even bother to take vacations,partly because of fears they may not have a job to come back to if they do.Besides,it is obvious that part of the matter is financial.More and more people begin to define success in terms of f
7、inancial measures.The higher ones income is,the more respect one gets.Finally,people nowadays live and work in a connected environmentemails,instant messaging,fax machines,and cell phonesmaking it hard for them to truly get time away from their work,even when they are on holiday.When work becomes th
8、e only reason for livingwhen it becomes the only thing people think about,the only thing that truly makes people happy,many Americans find that they are no longer close to their kids.Divorce rate jumps and serious stressrelated health problems come up.Undoubtedly,it is time to do something.To reduce
9、 workaholism,you must stay away from work once in a while.There are many ways to do that: Spend time with family and friends; Call home often to stay connected; Learn to say no to new assignments; Consider exercises to get your body back to a healthy shape; Fight the urge that everything you do must
10、 be perfect.It will take some effort,but for yourself and those you love,you really should make the effort.Have a try and you wont regret it. 【参考范文】An increasing number of Americans are becoming workaholics.(要点1)They work extra hours every week to maintain their jobs and become financially successfu
11、l.Even on holiday,modern communication technologies always connect them to work.(要点2)Consequently,workaholism breaks up their families and damages their health.(要点3)Luckily,there is a lot one can do to make time away from work though it takes some effort,but anyway,its worthwhile to have a try.(要点4)- 3 - 版权所有高考资源网