1、GUIDED WRITING以理服人有技巧 如何写说服性议论文【写作指导】说服性议论文实质上就是一篇议论文，它是剖析事物、论述事例、发表意见、提出主张的文体。作者通过摆事实、讲道理、辨是非，来确定其观点的正误，树立或否定某种主张，从而达到让别人信服或接受其观点或看法的目的。说服性议论文常采用第一或第二人称，以一般现在时态写作。其写法一般分四个步骤： 第一步：仔细分析，确定观点 一般在第一段直接提出自己的观点和看法，即论点，是需要加以论证才能得出的观点。 第二步：认真思考，摆出论据 观点提出以后，应该用足量事实来支撑观点。通常，写作题目中会给出一些提示。这些提示可能以文字、图画或图表形式出现，需
2、要同学们认真审题。 第三步：严密论证，层层说服为使文章结构合理、脉络分明、层次清楚、逻辑性 和连贯性强，在说服过程中要对文字说明或图表内容进行分析，通过比较，抓住事物间的不同特点进行论证，以支撑你的观点。 第四步：善始善终，交代结论 通过以上的说服论证，最后一步应表达最终的结论，这个结论与你提出或倡导的观点或看法相呼应，是文意表达的必然结果，你的说服目的自然达到。【实例展示】请你根据下面所提示的电子贺卡的优越性，说服更多的人在新年来临之际给亲朋好友发电子贺卡，而不再用纸制贺卡。与传统贺卡相比，电子贺卡更活泼有趣；不仅可以看到动画，还可以听到声音；速度快；网址多，可发不同的贺卡；还可以用flas
3、h或其它软件自己设计贺卡；不用纸制贺卡，可以节省纸张，对节约资源是一大贡献。注意：1.文章应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，不能逐条翻译；2.词数：100左右；3.参考词汇：电子贺卡e-card; 动画animation; 软件software【习作选登】With the development of the Internet, people like sending e-cards rather than paper cards. I think there are many reasons for it. We send paper cards on New Years in the tradi
4、tional way. Now, e-cards are more interesting and lively. You can get not only pictures but sound and even animations. Besides, its faster to send e-cards. There are many sites online. There many cards are available. You can design different cards by using flash or other software if you dont like an
5、y cards on-line. Whats more, with the popularity of e-cards, less paper is used for making paper cards, which does good to the environmental protection. If we consider all of the above, in my opinion, more and more people would prefer to send e-cards than paper cards.【总体评价】 作者基本上能按照议论文的写作模式完成此篇文章，而且
6、层层论证，没有遗漏要点，也没有大的语法错误。但是有些句子有点生硬，显得不太地道； 简单句太多；有些词语使用频繁，缺乏变化，如过多使用many。【亮点赏析】 作者能按照总分总的思路安排结构，分三段，先提出观点：更多的人愿意发电子贺卡，然后分层论述发电子贺卡的优势，最后自然得出结论，从而达到说服的目的。 文章在论述时采用了对比方法，与传统的纸制贺卡相比，电子贺卡的优势一目了然，让人心服口服。 本文的语言使用也有不少亮点： 1)高级词汇的使用。如：rather than，even，available，environmentalprotection, all above， prefer等。2)复杂句型
7、的使用。如：Its faster to send e-cards. Less paper is used for making paper cards, which does good to the environmental protection等。3)为使上下句紧密衔接，论证严密，层层深入，本文使用了连接及过渡词汇和句子。如： not only but also, besides, Whats more及with短语。【锦上添花】 We send paper cards on New Years in the traditional way. Now, e-cards are more i
8、nteresting and lively. You can get not only pictures but sound and even animations.这三句话有点繁琐，而且侧重点（电子贺卡）也不突出，第三句和上句没有直接的连接手段，可把第一句改为过去分词短语，作比较状语，第三句加一个并列连词，表示补充原因，如：Compared with traditional cards, e-cards are more interesting and lively, for you can get not only pictures but sound and even animation
9、s. 这样此句繁简得当，衔接更加紧密，整体感更强。 There are many sites online. There many cards are available. 并列的简单句太多，many使用频繁，可改成定语从句，同时可用“不同种类”来替代many，即：There are many sites online where different varieties of cards are available. 这样，这句话显得更高级。 which does good to the environmental protection中的does good to不如换成“contribute
10、s to (贡献)”更吻合题目要求。【范文欣赏】With the development of the Internet, people now prefer to send e-cards rather than traditional paper cards. There are a number of reasons for this.E-cards are more interesting and lively than paper cards, as they can include not only pictures and words, but also sound and an
11、imations. Also, its faster to send e-cards and its free too.There are many sites online where you can choose a card, and if you dont like any of the available cards, you can easily design your own using “flash” or similar software.In addition, e-cards are good for the environment, as trees dont need to be cut down and turned into paper to make them, as they do for traditional cards.In my opinion, if we consider all of the above, e-cards are definitely better than paper cards.版权所有：高考资源网()
