1、第二讲 怎样跳出“大众分”词汇要“美”，妙语要“多”第三部分 写作技能培优第三部分 写作技能培优大众化的词汇、平庸的表达会使长时间工作的阅卷教师产生视觉疲劳。如果一篇作文中出现几个与众不同的靓词佳句，老师给分也绝不会吝啬！第三部分 写作技能培优一、增加靓词的“出镜率”，吸引阅卷老师的眼球很多考生作文裹足不前的一个重要原因是反复用初中学过的“第一反应词”，背了大量的靓词妙语而不用。(建议大家在想到一个表达时，务必要想一想还有没有更好的表达方式)，这就是我们平时常讲的“头脑风暴法”，例如想表达“美丽的”这个含义，大家首先想到的是“beautiful”，那么在下笔时，要想一想还有没有更出彩的表达，如
2、“attractive”或“charming”等。再如表达“困难的”时，大家常用“difficult”，那是不是用“tough”或“challenging”更与众不同呢？第三部分 写作技能培优二、巧用 4 招，实现由低级向高级的转化1“语”众不同，避免人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。(2015安徽高考书面表达)I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is so interesting as I have read.I would also l
3、ike to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read.第三部分 写作技能培优(2015陕西高考书面表达)Successfully，I have helped her in several English activities of my class,which have been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates.Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her i
4、n several English activities of my class,which have been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates.(2015湖北高考书面表达)From this experience I have learnt that questioning can help us to seek the truth.From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the
5、truth.第三部分 写作技能培优2更新换代，避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also built a library where the old playground used to be.Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also set up a library where the
6、 old playground used to be.第三部分 写作技能培优3单词与短语巧妙互用一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。(2015江苏高考书面表达)Quite a few things caused the traffic problem.Quite a few things gave rise to the traffic problem.(2015 福建高考书面表达)We should try to improve ourselves through learning and prepare for the
7、 future.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.第三部分 写作技能培优(2014江西高考书面表达)Developing a good habit is also important.Developing a good habit is also of importance.We can look at this problem in many ways.We can view this problem in many ways.(view 比 l
8、ook at 更有内涵)We all live on one and the same planet.We all share one and the same planet.(share 比 live on 更有“味感”)第三部分 写作技能培优4用高年级学到的词汇代替低年级学到的词汇为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，应避免反复使用初中或小学阶段学过的词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。(2014山东高考书面表达)So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up,we are sure to achieve succes
9、s.So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up,we are bound to achieve success.第三部分 写作技能培优Environmental protection is becoming an important thing people pay special attention to.Environmental protection is becoming a focus people pay special attention to.We offer hot water 24 hours every
10、day and the swimming pool is free to use any time you want.Hot water is available 24 hours every day and you can have free access to the swimming pool any time you want.第三部分 写作技能培优 请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的低级词汇1We all have the same chance._2More and more visitors have been attracted to this place._3The teacher
11、 directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses._4Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us._5I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us._have possessMore and more An increasing number ofdifficult challengingdevelop promotebear put up with第三部分 写作技能培优6Would
12、 you please help me to turn down the radio？_7He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up._8Developing very quickly,the Internet causes the breakdown of face-to-face communication._9When you are bored with the people sometimes,youd better find a quiet place,listening to some classical music._help
13、 me do me a favordecided determined/made up his mind causes gives rise tobored with fed up with第三部分 写作技能培优10He didnt listen to what I said in the class._11Suddenly I thought of an idea that someone had broken into my house._12As soon as he arrived,he began his research._didnt listen to turned a deaf
14、 ear toI thought of an idea I came up with an idea/an idea occurred to meAs soon as he arrived On/Upon his arrival第三部分 写作技能培优 请用高级词汇提升下面考生作文(2016沈阳东北育才学校模拟)新学期开始，你校英语报为高三学生开设专栏，讨论高中生的学习问题。假定你是高三学生李华，请你结合自身实际，根据以下提示，用英语为该专栏写一篇稿件。1过去的三年中，你在学习上遇到了不少困难；2列举其中的一次困难并阐述你是如何克服的；3从此次困难中，你认识到了什么；4谈谈你对解决高中生学习上遇
15、到的困难的建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第三部分 写作技能培优考生作文 When we get into high school,we are sure to meet withdifficulties in our study.A difficulty I met_with was that Ihad strong Chinese accent while communicating with othersin English,making everyone laugh at me.Facing the difficulty,I bought a_lot_
16、of CDs of nativespeakers public speaking and tried to imitate every day.Ioften asked the teacher for help,who always helped correctmy pronunciation.As_a_result,_I made great progress.第三部分 写作技能培优We do meet some difficulties in our study,but each man is the architect of his own fate and success always
17、 grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties,due to which we become strongerTo solve our difficulties in study,we should find out the reasons first and then take effective measures.Besides,_consulting our teachers can contribute a lot to solving the problems.Only in this way can we perform well
18、and gain success.第三部分 写作技能培优升级作文 When we get into high school,we are _ to meet with difficulties in our study.A difficulty I _ was that I had strong Chinese accent while communicating with others in English,making everyone laugh at me._ the difficulty,I bought _ CDs of native speakers public speakin
19、g and tried to imitate every day.I often _ the teacher for help,who always helped correct my pronunciation._，I made great progress.boundencounteredFaced witha large quantity ofturned toAs a consequence第三部分 写作技能培优We do meet some difficulties in our study,but each man is the architect of his own fate
20、and success always grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties,due to which we become _ To _ our difficulties in study,we _ find out the reasons first and then take effective measures._，consulting our teachers can contribute a lot to solving the problems.Only in this way can we perform well and gain success.toughercope/deal withare supposed toIn addition/Whats more/Moreover第三部分 写作技能培优本部分内容讲解结束 按ESC键退出全屏播放
