1、第三讲 怎样赚取“级差分”句式要“高”，句子要“鲜”第三部分 写作技能培优第三部分 写作技能培优句式单一、缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。考生在写作文时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并注意句式的灵活多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，从而使作文跨上五档线！第三部分 写作技能培优一、平时多注意有意识地多运用背诵过的“高级句式”在日常学习过程中，要有意识地把背诵过的句式尝试运用到写作中去，碰到一个句子时，要想一想有没有更好的表达句式。如把两个简单句合为定语从句，把一般句变为强调句等，更 要看 一下能 否套 用学过 的句 型。如“not.until.句型”“so.
2、that.句型”等。学习用英语思维，养成用英语句式写作的习惯。第三部分 写作技能培优二、考前再强化用熟 10 大王牌写作句式，美化写作再增分在写作中，恰当地运用 23 个高级句式是获得高分的必备条件。下面为考生推荐 10 种能有效提升写作档次的王牌句式，供大家选择使用，希望大家能够对它们烂熟于胸，在考场上能信手拈来。(一)as 和 which 引导的非限制性定语从句定语从句有多种形式，引导词也有若干，但最容易掌握、最常运用的是 as 和 which 引导的非限制性定语从句。第三部分 写作技能培优1表达“正如”这一含义时，我们常用as引导的非限制性定语从句，它常放在主句之前，有时也可放在主句之中
3、或主句之后，常见的句式有：As we all know./As is known to all.众所周知As he pointed out.正如他所指出的那样As the famous saying goes.正如名言所说(2014重庆高考书面表达)As we all know,our friends lend us a helping hand when we need help and they help us get through difficult situations.第三部分 写作技能培优2which引导的非限制性定语从句的写法which在引导非限制性定语从句时，可以指代某个单词
4、，也可以代指整个主句，在从句中可以作主语或宾语。下面以2013年辽宁高考的满分作文为例讲解一下which引导的非限制性定语从句的写法。人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。第三部分 写作技能培优第一步：先写出两个句子。People can enjoy the moon while eating mooncakes.The mooncakes/They are the special food for this festival.第二步：找出两个句子中共同的部分：mooncakes。第三步：令其中的一个句子作主句，另一个作定语从句。People can enjoy the moo
5、n while eating mooncakes,which are the special food for this festival.第三部分 写作技能培优再如：(四川高考)In reality,different students have different learning habits.I think the habits influence their learning efficiency greatly.In reality,different students have different learning habits,which I think influence t
6、heir learning efficiency greatly.第三部分 写作技能培优(二)状语从句在英语写作中，状语从句是经常用到的句型，它的灵活运用可以有效地增加作文的亮点。(2015全国卷书面表达)You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative.(2015四川高考书面表达)We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese,
7、so that we can improve our oral speaking.第三部分 写作技能培优(2014山东高考书面表达)At the beginning,learning English seemed so difficult that I wanted to give up without even trying.(2014山东高考书面表达)A famous saying goes“Where there is a will,there is a way”，which means that if we are really determined to do something,h
8、owever difficult it might be,well eventually find a way to do it well.第三部分 写作技能培优(三)what和that引导的名词性从句名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句。其中what,that所引导的名词性从句是写作中常见的高级表达方式。what在名词性从句中作主语、宾语、表语或定语，而that在从句中不作任何成分，只起连接作用。在写作中如果我们能够把两个简单句合并为一个含有名词性从句的复合句，或者把一个简单句扩展成为含有名词性从句的复合句，对写作都是一种质的升华。第三部分 写作技能培优He said a
9、lot at the meeting.His words were very attractive.What he said at the meeting was very attractive.One mans meat is another mans poison.What is one mans meat is another mans poison.He didnt turn up on time.It annoyed his boss.That he didnt turn up on time annoyed his boss.第三部分 写作技能培优再如：(2015安徽高考书面表达)
10、If I could interview him，I would ask him what made him an astronaut(宾语从句)and how he was trained.(2014四川高考书面表达)In addition,what may interest you most(主语从句)is that I am really nervous and upset(表语从句)when taking the exam.(2014浙江高考书面表达)What we need most(主语从句)are popular science books.(2014重庆高考书面表达)What
11、he says(主语从句)suggests that he cares little about others pain or trouble(宾语从句),even if theyre his friends.第三部分 写作技能培优(四)强调句型强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子的某一部分，它是一种比较容易掌握的高级表达方式。其构成：It is/was被强调部分that/who其他。在写作中，我们可以通过强调句型将句子提高到一个新的层次。Our parents have devoted their unconditional love to us,which indeed deserves ou
12、r appreciation and reward.Its our parents who have devoted their unconditional love to us,which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.第三部分 写作技能培优The villagers didnt realize how serious the pollution was until all the fish in the river died out.It was not until all the fish in the river died ou
13、t that the villagers realized how serious the pollution was.再如：(2015福建高考书面表达)It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.(2014江西高考书面表达)It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.(2014安徽高考书面表达)Its not what difficulties we meet once in
14、a while that shape our lives，but what attitudes we take to face them.第三部分 写作技能培优 被强调的是时间或地点状语时，不用 when 或 where，而应用 that。It was in the park that(不用 where)I came across my previous English teacher.第三部分 写作技能培优(五)倒装句在写作中倒装句应用比较广泛，涉及的句型比较多，包括部分倒装和全部倒装。常见的有：1“only状语”置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。(2014江苏高考书面表达)People from
15、 all over the world can only in this way communicate easily and effectively.Only in this way can people from all over the world communicate easily and effectively.第三部分 写作技能培优2none,neither,nor,not,never,hardly,little,seldom等否定词，以及由no构成的否定短语如at no time,by no means等置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。Books are not only shar
16、ed but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.Not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.第三部分 写作技能培优3在so/such.that.结构中，当so/such.位于句首时，其后的句子用部分倒装。(2014福建高考书面表达)I was so excited that
17、 I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.However,it was harder than expected.So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.However,it was harder than expected.第三部分 写作技能培优4here,there,now,then,out,in,up,down,on the wall,in the room等表示地点、时间或方位的副词或介词短语置于句首，且主语是名词而不是代词时，句子用全部倒装。A ta
18、ll tree with a history of 1，000 years just stands in front of our house,which is protected by the government now.Just in front of our house stands a tall tree with a history of 1，000 years,which is protected by the government now.第三部分 写作技能培优(六)虚拟语气写作中虚拟语气的使用可以使表达更委婉，更具可读性。写作中常见的有以下几种：1wish型虚拟语气(2014
19、全国卷书面表达)Besides,I wish there wouldnt be too many students in a class.2if only型虚拟语气If only I could go back and reset my goals.3(should)do虚拟语气(2014北京高考书面表达)Can I suggest that we put it off until early August?4Its(high/about)time(that).型虚拟语气(福建高考)It is high time that both children and parents took acti
20、on to make small changes.第三部分 写作技能培优(七)分词结构写作中分词结构的应用标志着写作水平上升了一个档次。写作中常见的有以下几种：1分词作定语(2015全国卷书面表达)It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.There are many fans waiting to see the famous singer outside the airport.第三部分 写作技能培优2分词作状语(2015湖北高考书面表达)Thinkin
21、g that his solution might be wrong,I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way.(2014安徽高考书面表达)Having realized that your time is limited,youll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation.(2014山东高考书面表达)Faced with difficulties,we need friends to give us comf
22、ort and help.第三部分 写作技能培优(八)with 复合结构with 复合结构可以使文章简洁、紧凑，一篇文章如果能恰当地使用一两个with复合结构，可以使文章增色不少。(2014江苏高考书面表达)With English words getting popular in both media and daily life,a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them.第三部分 写作技能培优(九)并列句型并列句型是用连词把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来，在这一句型中需要注意连接并列主语时，有些句型采取“就近原则”。写作中常用到的有以下几种
23、：1not only.but(also).不仅而且(2015江苏高考书面表达)It not only affects our everyday life,but may also threaten peoples lives.2not.but.不是，而是(重庆高考)So,from now on,lets not waste our time on unimportant things but have a hearttoheart chat with our parents once in a while.第三部分 写作技能培优(十)it句型it在句子中可以作形式主语或形式宾语，代替真正的主语
24、或宾语。1it作形式主语(2015江苏高考书面表达)It is everybodys duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.(2014北京高考书面表达)Now it is easy to park our bikes there.2it作形式宾语(2014北京高考书面表达)Soon after,there are two entrances to the parking places,making it easier for us to enter it now.第三部分 写
25、作技能培优 用复合句完成下列句子1我最大的爱好是读书看报，这已经成为我日常生活中不可或缺的一部分。(定语从句)My favorite hobbies are reading books and newspapers，_.which have become a necessary part of my daily life第三部分 写作技能培优2众所周知，由于全球气候变化，地球正变得越来越暖和。(定语从句)_，the earth is becoming warmer and warmer due to the global climate change.3我们到了一座小山，山脚下有一条小河在流淌
26、。(定语从句)We arrived at a hill,_.As we all know/As is known to allat the foot of which there flows a small river第三部分 写作技能培优4只要我们有强大的信念，就能够克服任何困难。(状语从句)_，well be able to get over any difficulty.5每当见到有人需要帮助时，我就会尽力去帮助他。(状语从句)_，I will spare no effort to help him.6一个人要是不努力，就会一事无成。(状语从句)Nobody can achieve an
27、ything of real significance _As long as we have a strong willWhenever I see someone in needunless he works hard第三部分 写作技能培优7与逃逸的司机相比,我为我所做的感到自豪。(宾语从句)Compared with the escaped driver,I am proud of _8不可否认的事实是，环境污染越来越严重了。(同位语从句)No one can deny the fact _.what I didthat the environment is getting pollut
28、ed more and more seriously第三部分 写作技能培优9使我印象最深的是他们都经过了专业的培训。(主语从句与表语从句)_ was _.10众所周知，鞋在我们的生活中起着重要的作用，因为它们能够保护我们的脚免受伤害。(定语从句与状语从句)_，shoes play an important role in our life,_What impressed me mostthat they had had professional trainingAs is known to all/As we all knowfor they can protect our feet from
29、 being hurt第三部分 写作技能培优 按要求升级下列句式1I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(用强调句型改写句子)_2The children can grow up to be mentally and physically healthy only in this way.(用倒装句改写句子)_It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English.Only in t
30、his way can the children grow up to be mentally and physically healthy.第三部分 写作技能培优3The local government didnt realize the problem until the river was seriously polluted.(用倒装句改写句子)_4Its time for us to take measures to protect endangered animals.(用虚拟语气改写句子)_Not until the river was seriously polluted d
31、id the local government realize the problem.Its time that we took/should take measures to protect endangered animals.第三部分 写作技能培优5After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months,we strongly desired to be the winner.(用分词作状语改写句子)_6As the society develops rapidly,its necessary for us to
32、have a good knowledge of English and computer.(用with复合结构改写句子)_Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months,we strongly desired to be the winner.With the society developing rapidly,its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.第三部分 写作技能培优7The problem for the recip
33、ient was trying to guess who the sender was and what his secret feelings might be.(用not only.but also.并列句型改写句子)_8We should speak more English.We think it is very important.(用it作形式宾语改写句子)_The problem for the recipient was trying to guess not only who the sender was，but also what his secret feelings might be.We think it very important to speak more English.第三部分 写作技能培优本部分内容讲解结束 按ESC键退出全屏播放
