1、专题能力提升练八短文改错(四)Test 12020安徽省部分重点中学高三联考 Life can be tough sometimes because there is always something unexpected happened, which may tire or even stop us. However, we cant choose to escape. We are supposed take responsibility for ourselves and our families. Several year ago, my father lost my job and
2、 was unemployed for a long time. So he didnt take it seriously. Instead, he believed he had an enough time to rest and think about how to make a newly living. Now he had received a wellpaid job offer. So, when you are faced with challenges, choosing to believe good things are in the way.Test 22020合肥
3、市高三第一次质量检测 I have been decided to become a pilot since I am a little kid. Each time I see a plane flying across sky, I feel extremely excited but want to fly it. That is why I believe it can make me happily and free. To make my dream come true, I have to be physically fit by keeping a healthy diet a
4、nd work out regularly. Besides, I must work hard to make great progresses with my studies. Although it is not that easy to being a pilot, Ill never give up my dream and spare no effort to realize them.Test 32020广州市高三年级阶段训练 The first a few weeks of the term are over and it has definitely been a new e
5、xperience. Having school lesson online is something Ive only read about in articles where discuss future technology. Now I am living in the future! They took me some time to get used to my new Internet classroom. At first, I cant always hear what the teacher or my classmates was saying. Sometimes I
6、wasnt well preparing. Slowly, however, I adapted the new learning environment but now things are going smoothly. Of course, I still miss seeing my classmates and play together outside. Hopefully, we can meet soon.Test 42020湖北八校第一次联考 As it is known to all, the Great Wall is the most famous places of
7、interest in China. Everybody wants to go there, but I am no exception. Then, this summer vacation, the day I have been looking forward to coming at last. I got up very early that day and set off with my brother Tim followed behind. After two hours bus ride, we arrived at which looked like the large
8、market, where there were millions of people talking, pushing and photographing. Looking at that, my enthusiasm immediate disappeared. Indeed, the Great Wall is really something must be experienced with a little ease and privacy.专题能力提升练八短文改错(四)Test 1答案与解析：Life can be tough sometimes because there is
9、always something unexpected ， which may tire or even stop us. However, we cant choose to escape. We are supposed take responsibility for ourselves and our families. Several ago, my father lost job and was unemployed for a long time. he didnt take it seriously. Instead, he believed he had enough time
10、 to rest and think about how to make a living. Now he received a wellpaid job offer. So, when you are faced with challenges, to believe good things are the way.happened改为happening动词形式误用。happen与something为逻辑上的主谓关系，故把happened改为happening。supposed后加to不定式符号漏用。be supposed to do sth.是固定用法，意为“应该做某事”，故在suppos
11、ed后加to。year改为years名词的单复数误用。several后面应跟可数名词的复数形式，故把year改为years。my改为his代词误用。根据本句的主语my father及后面的“and was unemployed for a long time”可知，父亲失去了他的工作，故把my改为his。So改为But连词误用。上文表述父亲丢了工作，此处所在句子表述他没把这当回事。故根据语境可知，此处表转折，应用连词But。删除enough前的an冠词多用。此处time意为“时间”，是不可数名词，其前不用不定冠词修饰。newly改为new副词和形容词混用。living是名词，意为“生计，谋生”
12、，其前需用形容词修饰，故把newly改为new。had改为has动词时态误用。根据该句中的“Now”和语境可知，此处应用现在完成时，表示过去发生的动作对现在造成的影响，故把had改为has。choosing改为choose动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知，“when you are faced with challenges”为when引导的时间状语从句，主句为祈使句，故把choosing改为choose。in改为on介词误用。根据语境可知，此处表示好的事情即将来临，on the way意为“即将来临”，符合语境，故把in改为on。in the way意为“妨碍”。Test 2答案与解析：I h
13、ave decided to become a pilot since I a little kid. Each time I see a plane flying across sky, I feel extremely excited want to fly it. That is I believe it can make me and free. To make my dream come true, I have to be physically fit by keeping a healthy diet and out regularly. Besides, I must work
14、 hard to make great with my studies. Although it is not that easy to a pilot, Ill never give up my dream and spare no effort to realize .删除been语态误用。此处表示“我从小就决定要成为一名飞行员，主语I和动词decide为主动关系，故been多余，应删除。am改为was时态误用。此处叙述的事发生在过去，应用一般过去时。sky前加the冠词漏用。修饰独一无二的自然现象或事物应用定冠词the。but改为and连词误用。根据语境可知，“我感到非常激动”和“想要开
15、飞机”为逻辑上的顺承关系，故应用and。why改为because连接词误用。根据语境可知，此处表示“这是因为我相信它能让我快乐和自由”，故此处应用because。happily改为happy副词和形容词混用。分析句子结构可知，此处与and后的free并列作宾语补足语，故用形容词happy。work改为working动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知，此处和keeping a healthy diet并列作介词by的宾语，故用working。progresses改为progress名词误用。progress为不可数名词，没有复数形式。being改为be动词形式误用。分析句子结构并结合句意可知，此处考
16、查“it isadj.to do sth.”的用法，故此处应用be。them改为it代词误用。此处指代的是上文出现的my dream，其为单数形式，应用代词it。Test 3答案与解析：The first few weeks of the term are over and it has definitely been a new experience. Having school online is something Ive only read about in articles discuss future technology. Now I am living in the futur
17、e! took me some time to get used to my new Internet classroom. At first, I always hear what the teacher or my classmates saying. Sometimes I wasnt well . Slowly, however, I adapted the new learning environment now things are going smoothly. Of course, I still miss seeing my classmates and together o
18、utside. Hopefully, we can meet soon.删除first后的a冠词多用。此处表示本学期的前几周结束了，其前有序数词first，冠词a多余，故删除。lesson改为lessons名词的单复数误用。根据第一句话中的“weeks”可知，这里表示在网上上的课不止一节，故要用名词的复数形式。where改为which/that定语从句的关系词误用。分析句子结构可知，此处引导定语从句，在从句中作主语，修饰先行词“articles”，故用which/that引导该从句。They改为It代词误用。it takes/took sb.一段时间to do sth.为固定用法，it在此句型
19、中作形式主语。cant改为couldnt动词的时态误用。根据该句中的“At first”可知，此处讲的是过去的事情，故把cant改为couldnt。was改为were主谓不一致。此处连词“or”连接并列主语“teacher”与“classmates”，其谓语动词的数与最近的词语保持一致，即和“classmates”的数保持一致，故把was改为were。preparing改为prepared动词和形容词混用。此处表示“没有做好准备”，应用形容词prepared，而不是prepare的现在分词形式。adapted后加toadapt to sth.意为“适应”，为固定用法。but改为and连词误用。
20、此处前后部分之间为顺承关系，故应用连词and。play改为playing动词形式误用。本句表示“当然，我仍然想见到我的同学，想和他们一起在外面玩耍”，此处和该句中的“seeing”并列作miss的宾语，故应用playing。Test 4答案与解析：As is known to all, the Great Wall is the most famous of interest in China. Everybody wants to go there, I am no exception. Then, this summer vacation, the day I been looking f
21、orward to at last. I got up very early that day and set off with my brother Tim behind. After two hours bus ride, we arrived at looked like large market, where there were millions of people talking, pushing and photographing. Looking at that, my enthusiasm disappeared. Indeed, the Great Wall is real
22、ly something must be experienced with a little ease and privacy.删除it代词多用。根据语境并分析句子结构可知，此处是定语从句，意为“众所周知”，关系代词as在该从句中作主语，故it多余。places改为place名词单复数误用。由该句中的“the most famous”和主语the Great Wall为单数概念可知，此处应用名词的单数形式。but改为and连词误用。前面一个分句表示每个人都想去长城，后一个分句表示“我”也不例外，由此可知，前后两个分句表示逻辑上的并列关系，而非转折关系，故应用and。have改为had时态误用。
23、根据后一句中的got up和下文的内容可知，本文讲述的事情发生在过去，又根据语境可知，此处应用过去完成进行时。故把have改为had。coming改为came动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知，come是主句的谓语，和后一句中的got up的时态应保持一致，所以应用一般过去时。followed改为followingwith复合结构误用。“with名词/代词分词/形容词/副词/介词短语/名词”构成with复合结构，在句子中一般作状语。本句中Tim和follow构成逻辑上的主谓关系，所以应用follow的现在分词形式。which改为what代词误用。分析句子结构可知，此处引导宾语从句，在从句中作主语，
24、表示“的事物”，应用what。“介词which”可以引导定语从句，但是此处前面没有先行词，故此处不是定语从句，不用which。the改为a冠词误用。market是可数名词，又是第一次在语境中出现，泛指“一个大市场”，所以应用不定冠词修饰，且large的发音以辅音音素开头，故用a。immediate改为immediately形容词和副词混用。修饰动词应用副词，所以此处应用副词immediately修饰动词disappeared，作状语。something后加that定语从句引导词漏用。分析句子结构可知，本句中包含一个定语从句，先行词是something，故应用关系代词that来引导该定语从句，在从句中作主语。
