1、模块二专题二第2讲A假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10 处，多者(从11处起)不计分。(2020河北石家庄市高三一模)Nowadays more and more students attend different kind of training classes or hire tu
2、tors to improve their grades at weekends.Some of the students think that necessary to do so.Firstly, its more effective to study under a teachers help than by themselves.Secondly, students can make up for that they miss or fail to understand in class on weekdays.Besides, they can have more chances a
3、nd time communicate with teachers.Therefore, others dont think so.For one thing, the students can easily develop the habit of dependence, causing some students not to listen attentive in their regular classes.For another, students needed time for rest and recreation at weekends.Whats worse, attend t
4、raining classes means costing them much money.【答案】Nowadays more and more students attend different of training classes or hire tutors to improve their grades at weekends.Some of the students think necessary to do so.Firstly, its more effective to study a teachers help than by themselves.Secondly, st
5、udents can make up for they miss or fail to understand in class on weekdays.Besides, they can have more chances and time communicate with teachers.， others dont think so.For one thing, the students can easily develop the habit of dependence, causing some students not to listen in their regular class
6、es.For another, students time for rest and recreation at weekends.Whats worse, training classes means costing them much money.【解析】本文是一篇议论文。文章讲述关于周末学生是否应该参加辅导班和请家教这个问题，不同的人有不同的看法。1考查名词。句意：现在越来越多的学生在周末参加各种培训班或聘请家教来提高他们的成绩。根据前面的different可知，kind应用复数形式。故将kind改为kinds。2考查代词。句意：一些学生认为这样做是必要的。分析句子结构可知，此处应用it
7、充当形式宾语，真正的宾语为不定式to do so。故将that改为it。3考查介词。句意：首先，在老师的帮助下学习比自己学习更有效。with sb.s help/with the help of sb.在某人的帮助下，是固定短语。故将under改为with。4考查名词性从句。句意：其次，学生可以弥补他们在工作日课堂上错过或不理解的东西。分析句子结构可知，for后是一个宾语从句，引导词在从句中作宾语，指物，应用what。故将that改为what。5考查非谓语动词。句意：此外，他们可以有更多的机会和时间与老师交流。此处用不定式作后置定语。故在communicate前加to。6考查副词。句意：然而，
8、其他人却不这么认为。根据语境可知，上下文是转折关系。故将Therefore改为However。7考查冠词。句意：一方面，学生很容易养成依赖的习惯，导致一些学生在正常的课堂上不专心听讲。此处students表泛指，不用定冠词。故去掉students前的the。8考查副词。句意：一方面，学生很容易养成依赖的习惯，导致一些学生在正常的课堂上不专心听讲。修饰动词listen要用副词。故将attentive改为attentively。9考查时态。句意：另一方面，学生在周末需要时间休息和娱乐。全文时态用一般现在时，表示客观事实。故将needed改为need。10考查非谓语动词。句意：更糟糕的是，参加培训班
9、意味着要花很多钱。作主语要用动名词形式。故将attend改为attending。B假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10 处，多者(从11处起)不计分。(2021内蒙古呼和浩特市高三一模)A city，whether big and small, should be clean.Only
10、when we live in a clean city we live a happy life.As we know, a clean city, that disease may be reduced and peoples health may be better, are good both to our mind and body.No one believes people lived in a dirty city with waste everywhere can live happy.However, as more and more people moving into
11、our city, it is not easy to keep our city clean.Beside, some factories will pour waste into the air, the river and onto the ground, making it is hard to keep our city clean.To make our city the better place to live in, we still have a lot to do.【答案】A city，whether big small, should be clean.Only when
12、 we live in a clean city we live a happy life.As we know, a clean city, disease may be reduced and peoples health may be better, good both to our mind and body.No one believes people in a dirty city with waste everywhere can live . However, as more and more people into our city, it is not easy to ke
13、ep our city clean.， some factories will pour waste into the air, the river and onto the ground, making it is hard to keep our city clean.To make our city better place to live in, we still have a lot to do.【解析】本文是一篇议论文。文章论述了保持城市清洁干净的重要性。1考查固定用法。句意：一个城市，无论大小，都应该是干净的。固定句式whether.or.表示“无论还是”。故将and改为or。2
14、考查倒装句。句意：只有当我们生活在一个干净的城市，我们才能过上幸福的生活。Only when we live in a clean city是only修饰状语从句位于句首，主句应用部分倒装。故在city后添加can/will。3考查定语从句。句意：我们知道，一个干净的城市，可以减少疾病，人们的健康可能会更好，对我们的身心都有好处。本句为定语从句修饰先行词a clean city，且先行词从句中作地点状语。故将that改为where。4考查主谓一致。本句的主语为单数名词a clean city。故将are改为is。5考查非谓语动词。句意：没有人相信生活在到处都是垃圾的肮脏城市里的人能幸福地生活。
15、此处为现在分词作定语。故将lived改为living。6考查副词。此处应用副词修饰动词live。故将happy改为happily。7考查时态。句意：然而，随着越来越多的人搬进我们的城市，保持我们的城市干净是不容易的。本句中as引导时间状语从句，从句中使用一般现在时。故将moving改为move。8考查副词。句意：此外，一些工厂将废物倾倒到空气、河流和地面，使我们的城市很难保持干净。besides“此外；而且”；beside表示“在旁边”。根据句意，故将Beside改为Besides。9考查固定用法。making it hard to keep our city clean为it作形式宾语的句型
16、。故去掉is。10考查冠词。句意：为了使我们的城市成为一个更适合居住的地方，我们还有很多事情要做。place为可数名词，此处泛指“一个地方”应用不定冠词。故将the改为a。C假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10 处，多者(从11处起)不计分。(2021黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市高三下学期第三次模
17、拟)I have a pet cat, which name is Lucky.She has white hair and two big eyes.She is cute and can do a few trick, which are funny and usually make me very surprising.Every day when I come home, Lucky always runs towards me happily to welcomed me.When I feel down, but she never leaves me alone.She is m
18、y considerate and faith companion.Now we had been living together for over two years.As time goes by, a relationship between Lucky and me becomes close than before.Therefore, I think of her an important member in my family and I really enjoy her company.【答案】I have a pet cat, name is Lucky.She has wh
19、ite hair and two big eyes.She is cute and can do a few ， which are funny and usually make me very .Every day when I come home, Lucky always runs towards me happily to me.When I feel down, but she never leaves me alone.She is my considerate and companion.Now we been living together for over two years
20、.As time goes by, relationship between Lucky and me becomes than before.Therefore, I think of her an important member in my family and I really enjoy her company.【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者和宠物猫的生活日常。1考查定语从句。句意：我有一只宠物猫，名字叫Lucky。分析句子结构可知，此句为定语从句，先行词cat在从句中作名词name的定语。故将which改为whose。2考查名词。句意：她很可爱，会耍一些小把戏，很有趣，通
21、常让我很惊讶。trick“小把戏”为可数名词，根据a few可知，此处表示复数。故将trick改为tricks。3考查形容词。句意：她很可爱，会耍一些小把戏，很有趣，通常让我很惊讶。此处形容词作宾补修饰人，应用v-ed形式形容词。故将surprising改为surprised。4考查非谓语动词。句意：每天当我回到家，Lucky总是高兴地跑向我欢迎我。分析可知，此处为不定式表示目的，不定式符号to后应用动词原形。故将welcomed改为welcome。5考查连词。句意：当我沮丧的时候，她从不离开我。此处是when引导的时间状语从句，不能再用并列连词。故将but删除。6考查形容词。句意：她是我体贴
22、而忠实的伴侣。根据considerate and可知，此处是并列的形容词作定语。故将faith改为faithful。7考查时态。句意：现在我们已经一起生活了两年多。根据时间状语for over two years可知，此处应该用现在完成进行时，表示动作从过去开始持续到现在，并继续持续到将来。故将had改为have。8考查冠词。句意：随着时间的流逝，我和Lucky的关系变得比以前更亲密了。此处指我和Lucky的关系，故为特指。故将a改为the。9考查形容词。句意：随着时间的流逝，我和Lucky的关系变得比以前更亲密了。因为有than可知，此处表示比较，应用形容词close的比较级。故将close改为closer。10考查介词。句意：因此，我认为她是我家庭的一个重要的成员，我真的喜欢她的陪伴。think of.as.为固定搭配，意为“把看作”。故在her后加as。
