1、专题六写作课堂高分有法A(2017全国卷)假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：1时间和地点；2内容：学习唐诗；3课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。One possible version：Dear Leslie，I am Li Hua.How is everything getting along with you？ Im writing to tell you something in details.To start with，what I intend to stress
2、is that we are about to start our next lesson in Classroom 8 of the Teaching Building at 10 am.next Friday.Whats more，in order to have much knowledge of Chinese culture，it is of importance for you to be aware of the content，Tang Poetry.There is no doubt that you are supposed to know about the histor
3、y of Tang Dynasty in advance，which will make the class go smoothly.Ill appreciate it if you can reply to my letter at your earliest convenience.Yours，Li Hua名师点评1.范文覆盖所有内容要点，且时间、地点等有适当发挥。如：(1)学习时间(at 10 am.next Friday)；(2)学习地点(in Classroom 8 of the Teaching Building)；(3)简要了解唐朝的历史(know about the histo
4、ry of Tang Dynasty)。2范文应用了较多的语法结构。如：(1)主语从句what I intend to stress；(2)表语从句that we are about to start our next lesson in Classroom 8 of.；(3)非限制性定语从句which will make the class go smoothly。3范文尽量使用了较高级的词汇，如stress，be aware of，in advance等，增加了文章的得分点。B(2017全国卷)假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(papercutting)艺术展。请给他写封
5、邮件，内容包括：1展览时间、地点；2展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。One possible version：Dear Henry，Im Li Hua.Im writing to invite you to see the Chinese papercutting exhibition.It is a Chinese folk art with a long history. The exhibition will be held in the City Museum，located in the north of our city.It will sta
6、rt from June 16th and last for more than a week.Its said that a large number of papercutting works by experts throughout China will be on show，and some of them are made by famous artists.The papercutting are about animals，plants，people and other things.Visiting this exhibition，we will not only enjoy
7、 the folk art works，but also learn a lot.If youre interested in the Chinese folk art，please email me.We can make it any day to visit the exhibition.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua名师点评1.范文覆盖所有内容要点并作适当发挥。如：(1)写邮件的目的(invite you to see the Chinese papercutting exhibition)；(2)展览的时间、地点(in the C
8、ity Museum；start from June 16th and last for more than a week)；(3)展览内容(a large number of papercut works by experts throughout China will be on show)；(4)希望对方回复(Looking forward to your reply.)。2范文应用了较多的语法结构和句式。如：(1)一般将来时的被动语态：will be held(2)过去分词短语作后置定语：located in the north of our city(3)Its said that.
9、据说(4)现在分词作状语：Visiting this exhibition，we will.(5)if条件状语从句：If youre interested in.3范文显示了较强的词汇运用能力。如使用locate，with a long history，throughout，be on show，make it等，为文章增加了不错的得分点。4整篇文章语言连贯、过渡自然、衔接紧密。C(2017全国卷)假定你是李华，你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：1球队活动；2报名方式及截止日期。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
10、One possible version：Dear Eric，I am Li Hua.I am writing to tell you some good news.The Student Table Tennis Team of our school is looking for new members right now.I would like to invite you to join，since you are good at table tennis，and you are the most suitable person.Our team，apart from regular t
11、raining，will join in a variety of activities，such as participating in some national competitions on behalf of our school.After every game we will select the best players.If you will join，you may send your information to intlpssppt.The application time is scheduled for October 510,2017.I would apprec
12、iate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.Yours，Li Hua名师点评1.范文覆盖所有内容要点，且“活动、报名方式”等有适当发挥。如：(1)招收新队员(look for new members)；(2)球队活动(regular training，join in a variety of activities，participate in some national competitions， select the best players)；(3)报名方式、时间(send your information t
13、o.，be scheduled for)。2范文应用了较多的语法或句型结构。如：(1)I would like to invite you.(2)原因状语从句since you are good at.(3)条件状语从句If you will join(4)I would appreciate it if you could.3范文尽量使用了较高级词汇，作者具备较强的语言运用能力，增加了文章的得分点。较好的词汇有：the most suitable，apart from，a variety of，participate in，be scheduled for，at your earliest convenience等。
