1、 2011年辽宁高考考前短文改错强化训练假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 （一）To protect the environment, many people have found that helpful to make the switch
2、from paper and plastic bags for reusable grocery bags. But a report by Florida newspaper says that reusable grocery bags selling by some supermarkets contain high levels of lead. Lead is a metal which can be harmful to human, especially young children. Lead in the bags is not possible to pollute foo
3、d. However, as time went by, lead can come out as a result of repeating use. The bags with many pictures is found to contain more lead than plain reusable bags without decoration. We request that the government can take some measures. 参考答案：To protect the environment, many people have found that help
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6、sures. should （二）When we learn English, we always find we have difficulties in remembering the names of the months. Therefore, if we know something about the history of the months, possibly it wont be very harder for us to remember them. The following is one of example. January named after God Janus
7、. He was a strange god because he has two faces. He could look in two directions. He could look forward or backward at the same time. He was the god of endings and beginnings. January is the month on which one looks forward to the new year and its also a period of time how people think about the pas
8、t year.Now can you share with us the stories about rest of the months?参考答案：When we learn English, we always find we have difficulties in remembering the names of the difficultymonths. Therefore, if we know something about the history of the months, possibly it wont be very Howeverharder for us to re
9、member them. The following is one of example. January named after God Janus. hard wasHe was a strange god because he has two faces. He could look in two directions. He could look hadforward or backward at the same time. He was the god of endings and beginnings. January is the month andon which one l
10、ooks forward to the new year and its also a period of time how people think about the in whenpast year.Now can you share with us the stories about rest of the months? the （三）Born in Oct. 28, 1955, Bill Gates grew up in Seattle with his two sisters. Bill Gates attended public elementary school or the
11、 private Lakeside School, there he discovered his interest in software and begin programming computers at age 13. In 1973, Gates entered into Harvard University as a freshman. In her junior year, Gates left Harvard to devote himself to develop Microsoft, guiding by a belief that the computer would b
12、e a tool of great valuable on every office desktop. He proved to be success in the IT field. 参考答案：Born in Oct. 28, 1955, Bill Gates grew up in Seattle with his two sisters. Bill Gates attended public on elementary school or the private Lakeside School, there he discovered his interest in software an
13、d begin and where began programming computers at age 13. In 1973, Gates entered into Harvard University as a freshman. In her junior his year, Gates left Harvard to devote himself to develop Microsoft, guiding by a belief that the computer would developing guidedbe a tool of great valuable on every
14、office desktop. He proved to be success in the IT field. value a （四）He is already a singer and a director, so what is the Taiwanese superstar Jay Chou up to now? Hes a talk show host. His program Mr.J was first broadcast on October 31. But unlike her music, the show hasnt lived down to public expect
15、ations and has suffering a storm of criticism(批评).Chou was reported be nervous about the first shows. At that time in fact, it is only thanks to another celebrity(名人)guest that the program wasnt a failure. In a late show, Chou was criticized for gossiping about Lam Chiling(林志玲), a model from Taiwan,
16、 in an attempt to decrease audience rating(收视率).参考答案：He is already a singer and a director, so what is the Taiwanese superstar Jay Chou up butto now? Hes a talk show host. His program Mr.J was first broadcast on October 31. But unlike her hismusic, the show hasnt lived down to public expectations an
17、d has suffering a up sufferedstorm of criticism(批评).Chou was reported be nervous about the first shows. At that time in fact, it is only to show wasthanks to another celebrity(名人)guest that the program wasnt a failure. In a late show, laterChou was criticized for gossiping about Lam Chiling(林志玲), a
18、model from Taiwan, in an attempt to decrease audience rating(收视率). increase （五）Dear Mr. Li,Im very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in the morning, but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycles front tyre（轮胎）flat. I wanted to take bus or taxi to sc
19、hool, and I didnt have any money with me. I had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops were open in the early morning. So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. Thats how I was late for school.Please don
20、t worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary.Yours,Wang Hui 参考答案：Dear Mr. Li,Im very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in lessons usualthe morning, but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycles fr
21、ont tyre (轮胎) flat. I wanted to foundtake bus or taxi to school, and I didnt have any money with me. I had to look for a place a but along the street to get my bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops repaired that / which were open in the early morning. So I had to walk
22、 to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. Thats how I was late for school. whyPlease dont worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for helpabout / over themif necessary. Yours,Wang Hui （六）Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was en
23、joying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the
24、 crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved. I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need. 参考答案：Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as
25、usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake usualwhile suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a when heard shockedlittle child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing any
26、thing. people Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I andmanaged to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved. myI was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone
27、 else is in need. of hope （七）Traffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in
28、the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.In my opinion, the government should develop public transport. It should be cheaper and more convenient and comfor
29、table. Besides, we should use public transport as much as possibly. Its better to share cars during rush hours. In a word, we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars.参考答案：SocauseseasilywaitingistheircitiesaTraffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hou
30、rs. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traf
31、fic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem. （八）Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he wasvery excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to a big gardening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the intervi
32、ew. Mr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, looking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job. While waited, he helped the workers there to r
33、emove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give the job to whoever he believed was helpful.参考答案：Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep. Yest
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