1、Section_Writing 文学评论一、基本结构二、增分佳句(一)开篇简介1The new Chinese TV series is making waves in China and abroad. There must be more stories behind the scenes.这部新的中国电视剧在国内外掀起了波澜，其幕后一定有更多故事。2We are always finding new beauties in Shakespeares poetry.我们不断地在莎士比亚的诗歌中发现新的美妙之处。(二)介绍情节的句子1The film was adapted from a n
2、ovel, which told that a couple adopted a flexible way to bring up their adopted son, who gradually adapted to his new family.这部电影是由一部小说改编来的，它讲述了一对夫妇采用一种灵活的方法来抚养他们收养的儿子，使他逐渐适应了他的新家庭的故事。2He is an important man behind the scenes.他是一个幕后的重要人物。3They had little or no acquaintance with philosophy or history
3、.他们在哲学或是历史方面几乎一无所知。(三)发表评论的句子1The film is well worth seeing, as it carried the main idea that justice can always beat evil.这部电影很值得观看，因为它告诉我们正义一定会战胜邪恶。2What I have to admit is that this movie is wonderful, such as its advanced digital video effect and the worry about the future of human beings.我不得不承认
4、的是这部电影很不错，比如它先进的数字化特技效果和对于人类未来的担忧的意识。3We do not agree the result of this movie, in which only some scientists and political leaders can survive not common people.我们不能赞同的是这个电影中最终幸存的是一些科学家和政府高官，却没有什么平民。4As for a future rebuilding, everyone is important.对于未来的重建来说，大家都很重要。题目要求根据下列提示，写一篇关于马克吐温及其作品哈克贝里费恩历险
5、记的评论。1马克吐温(Mark Twain)，美国作家。本名塞谬尔朗赫恩克莱门斯(Samuel Langhorne Clemens18351910)。马克吐温是其笔名。他出生于密西西比河(the Mississippi River)畔小城。2代表作(masterpiece)之一是哈克贝利费恩历险记(The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn)。 讲述了白人小孩Huckleberry Finn从家中逃走，和黑奴吉姆在密西西比河流浪的故事。3Huckleberry Finn遇见的人物涵盖了社会各个阶层(walk)，因此这部小说生动地反映了当时的社会。4哈克贝利费恩历险记在
6、美国文学史上一直被称为最伟大的作品。注意：词数100左右。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为文学评论；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；3确定时态：主要使用一般现在时。二、构思第一部分：简要介绍马克吐温。第二部分：概括介绍其代表作哈克贝利费恩历险记。第三部分：准确评价哈克贝利费恩历险记。第二步：核心词汇想周全1grow_up,_be_brought_up长大 2.run_away,_flee,_escape 逃走 3.meet_with,_come_across,_run_into遇见4cover,_contain 涵盖5reflect,_mirror 反映第三步：由词扩句
7、雏形现1马克吐温，美国作家，本名塞谬尔朗赫恩克莱门斯 (18351910)。Mark Twain, whose_real_name_was Samuel Langhorne Clemens (18351910), was_an_American_writer.2他在密西西比河畔小城长大。He grew_up_in_a_small_town on the banks of the Mississippi River.3他最伟大的代表作之一是哈克贝利费恩历险记。One_of_his_greatest_masterpieces_is The Adventures of Huckleberry Fin
8、n.4这部小说讲述了白人小孩Huckleberry Finn从家中逃走，和黑奴吉姆在密西西比河流浪的故事。The novel tells Huckleberry Finn running_away_from_home_and_wandering down the Mississippi River with a slave named Jim.5Huckleberry Finn遇见的人物涵盖了社会各个阶层。The people Huckleberry Finn meets with cover_all_walks_of_the_society.6这部小说生动地反映了当时的社会。The nove
9、l vividly_reflects_the_society_at_that_time.7哈克贝利费恩历险记在美国文学史上一直被称为最伟大的作品。The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn has_been_considered_the_greatest_works_in_American_literature.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用动词ing形式作状语改写句2并与句1合并Growing up in a small town on the banks of the Mississippi River, Mark Twain, whose real name was
10、 Samuel Langhorne Clemens(18351910), was an American writer.2用定语从句合并句3和句4One_of_his_greatest_masterpieces_is_The_Adventures_of_Huckleberry_Finn,_which_tells_Huckleberry_Finn_running_away_from_home_and_wandering_down_the_Mississippi_River_with_a_slave_named_Jim.3用with的复合结构合并句5和句6With_the_people_Huckl
11、eberry_Finn_meets_with_covering_all_walks_of_the_society,_the_novel_vividly_reflects_it_at_that_time.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Growing_up_in_a_small_town_on_the_banks_of_the_Mississippi_River,_Mark_Twain,_whose_real_name_was_Samuel_Langhorne_Clemens(18351910),_was_an_American_writer. One_of_his_greatest_masterpiec
12、es_is_The_Adventures_of_Huckleberry_Finn,_which_tells_Huckleberry_Finn_running_away_from_home_and_wandering_down_the_Mississippi_River_with_a_slave_named_Jim.With_the_people_Huckleberry_Finn_meets_with_covering_all_walks_of_the_society,_the_novel_vividly_reflects_it_at_that_time. The_Adventures_of_Huckleberry_Finn_has_been_considered_the_greatest_works_in_American_literature.
