1、典题精讲经典例题短文改错Dear Ms.Smith,I appreciate your help very well.On the first day of1._camp,you came up to myself while I was sitting alone.After2. _that,you always gave me specially attention and inspired3. _to me to join in activities.As a result,I gradually got to know4. _the other campers.Because the
2、help you gave me that summer,5. _my life changed.I gained so much confidence that I go back6. _to school as new person.My grades improved.I became7. _very active but made new friends.Today,I got a letter that8. _said I had been admitting to a college.I am proud of it.I just9. _want to thank you for
3、helping me becoming a different person.10. _Yours,Bob思路解析：1.答案：well改为much解析：very much副词，修饰appreciate，表示非常。2.答案：myself改为me解析：此处myself的主语是you，因此应该是me。3.答案：specially改为special解析：special形容词，修饰attention。4.答案：去掉me前的to解析：inspire是及物动词，接宾语时不加介词，因此去掉to。5.答案：Because后加of解析：because后面接从句，because of后面接名词。本句后面接the h
4、elp，因此应用because of。6.答案：go改为went解析：本句话是过去时态，应用过去时。7.答案：new前加a解析：作为一个新人，应加不定冠词a。8.答案：but改为and解析：本句话意思没有转折，而是并列关系，因此应将but改为and。9.答案：admitting改为admitted解析：从句意看，是“我被学校接收了”，是被动的意思，应该用过去分词admitted。10.答案：becoming改为become解析：help sb. do sth.后面用动词原形。因此用become。黑色陷阱：第4小题受汉语的影响，误以为“对某人给予鼓舞”，认为本行没有错误。第5小题受Because
5、的影响，误以为认为本行没有错误。忽视了与because of的区别。第7小题受汉语“作为新人”没有冠词的影响，认为本行没有错误。第10小题受helping的影响，认为本行没有错误。忽视了固定句型。绿色通道：短文改错一般应遵循保持句子原意的原则,即不能改变文章或作者所表达的意思,包括其语气和上下文的逻辑关系,只对短文中的用词错误、语法错误、行文关系错误进行改正,且要小改而不大改。常常从下列方面找错误：1.名词的单复数用错，可数与不可数名词的混用。2.动词的时态和语态不一致。3.形容词和副词的混用。常出现需形容词的地方用了副词。4.介词的多余、缺失或错用。这一部分需要平时多多积累，弄清常用介词的搭
6、配。5.主谓一不致性，第三人称单数漏掉s，或主语为复数，谓语动词用了单数；再就是就近原则对主语的影响。6.冠词的多余或缺失。7.连词的混淆。8.代词的格与数的错用。志鸿原创题完形填空阅读下面短文，从短文后所给各题的四个选项（A、B、C、D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。The Chinese Kungfu Star TV Contest,organized by the Shaolin Temple and the Shenzhen Satellite TV Station,began in March this year and has 1countless kungfu fans fr
7、om around the world.The masters got to the 2 stage of the contest by taking out the first three places in each of its six 3 competitions in the United States,Russia,Australia,France,Germany and Italy,and in the five 4 held in China.It is said 5 the competitors will have the temples 18 arhats,Luohan
8、in Chinese,6 their teachers,who will 7 unique kungfu skills and give lectures on Buddhist thought and kungfu history.The competitors must 8 temple rules by wearing the kasaya (袈裟),eating 9 meals and shaving their heads and facial hair during their seclusion (闭观).And 10 had been no easy task to gathe
9、r the international “kungfu stars”.Elie Saade,a Lebanese master who 11 a place in the top three in the Italian contest,lost 12 with the organizer after his city was destroyed by Israeli troops last month.The 13 committee got in touch with Chen Zhaoyang,Saades coach for help.Chen 14 to track down Saa
10、de and he arrived at the Shaolin Temple on Friday morning.15 the seclusion period is over,the 37 16 will take part in a grand ceremony to 17 the occasion.They will give demonstrations and 18 with the kungfu monks at the temple before they 19 for Guzhang County in Hunan Province and Shenzhen in Guang
11、dong Province to compete for the 20 of “World No. 1 Kungfu Master”.1.A.informedB.drawnC.performedD.checked2.A.firstB.backC.frontD.final3.A.internationalB.nationalC.ChineseD.American4.A.thingsB.mattersC.affairsD.events 5.A.whatB.whichC.thatD.when6.A.withB.atC.asD.to7.A.pass onB.learn upC.addict toD.w
12、ork on8.A.followB.establishC.giveD.remember9.A.deliciousB.vegetarianC.meatyD.poor10.A.itB.thatC.thisD.those11.A.beatB.defeatC.wonD.accepted12.A.heartB.interestC.confidenceD.contact13.A.organizedB.organizingC.organizesD.organize14.A.managedB.triedC.failedD.succeeded15.A.BeforeB.UntilC.DuringD.After16
13、.A.playersB.monksC.judgesD.arhats17.A.respectB.admireC.markD.inspire18.A.compareB.competeC.completeD.fight19.A.arriveB.reachC.leaveD.set20.A.competitionB.contestC.rewardD.title思路解析：1.Bdraw在此表示“吸引”，即这场比赛吸引了许多来自世界各地的武术迷。2.D获得各场比赛的前三名后，选手们到了比赛的最后阶段。3.A根据句子中的the United States，Russia，Australia，France，Ger
14、many和Italy可以知道：这场比赛是国际性的。4.Devent可以表示比赛的项目，其他几个表示事情的单词均没有此意。5.Cthat在该句中引导一个主语从句。6.Chave.as是一个固定短语，意思是“有作为”“把看作”。7.A本题考查动词短语。pass on的含义是“传递”；learn up的意思是“尽量地学习”；addict to有“沉溺于；迷恋”；work on则是“继续工作；做”。8.A解析：follow temple rules的意思是“遵守寺院的规定”。9.B解析：既然在寺院里，当然要吃素食。10.A解析：本题考查it作形式主语的用法，其他几个代词均不能作形式主语。11.C解析：
15、动词beat和defeat的含义是“击败”，其宾语是人或队；而win则表示“获得，赢得”，后接place，prize等表示物的单词。12.D解析：lose contact with sb.与某人失去联系。13.B解析：organize与committee之间存在逻辑上的主谓关系，应该用现在分词作定语。the organizing committee的含义是“组织委员会”。14.A解析：manage to do sth.是“设法做到某件事情”，侧重事情的成功；try to do sth.是“尽力去做某事”，但未必成功。15.D解析：应该是闭关过后，将参加一次庆祝仪式。16.A解析：由上文可推知是
16、比赛选手进行闭观，因此应是37比赛选手参加盛大的庆祝仪式。17.C解析：mark表示“纪念”。18.B解析：compete with的含义是“与进行比赛”。19.C解析：表示“出发去某处”应用词组“leave for”或“set out/off for”。20.D解析：“World No. 1 Kungfu Master”应是一个头衔。黑色陷阱：第2题所处的句子比较长，如果理解不好，将很难选出正确答案；第5题考查主语从句，如果不能判断出it是形式主语，引导词that也不容易选出；第9题考查生活常识，如果忽视和尚吃素的事实，也会误选其他选项；第14题考查manage的用法，如果对于manage和try的用法不能区分，比较误选B；第15题考查固定短语的用法，如果不能把握set out for和leave for是同义词，可能误选D。绿色通道：要做好本篇完形填空，首先要具有能够分析长句的能力；其次还要掌握基本的语法知识如主语从句的用法等；第三要把握一些近义词和同义词用法的区别。志鸿巧学法园地阅读歌诀人物都是谁，时间是何时，地点在哪里，数据有哪些，用笔来画出，边画边记忆。
