1、写作进行时(七)看图类作文一、图表作文技巧点拨.写作要点纵观近几年的高考书面表达试题，图表类作文是当今高考英语书面表达的常考题型之一，此类题型要求考生根据数据进行分析与讨论，得出令人信服的结论，或者对这一结论进行评价。A柱状图作为直观形象展示数据变化的手段之一，常常在高考英语书面表达试题中出现。而柱状类议论文要求考生要具备一定的数据分析能力，要能够通过对宽度相等的柱形的高度的比较来判断事物的动态发展趋势。B英语曲线图作文实际是一篇“解说词”，即通过曲线图提供的信息，分析图中数据，综合推断出文章的主题。C解答此类试题时，要认真观察坐标系信息，抓住变化趋势，结合提供的时间和数据参照寻求切入点。然后
2、根据变化过程，尽可能利用所给的文字信息进行分类、比较、总结。另外，写作过程中不必要将图中全部数据信息加以描述，只需将典型内容加以分析。.写作模板As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture，_has been on rise/decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from_in_to_in_. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that_.There are
3、at least two good reasons accounting for_. On(the)one hand，_. On the other hand，_is due to the fact that_. In addition，_is responsible for_. Maybe there are some other reasons to show_. But it is generally believed that the reasons mentioned above are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I
4、hold the point of view that_.I am sure my opinion is both sound and wellgrounded.习作点评以下是某英文报联合你校对你市(Kangming City)2001年到2013年家庭消费变化的图表，请据此写一篇短文，作为文字说明。词数120150。The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 10,000 yuan per year in 2001 to 23,000 yuan in 2013. In the meantime, the stru
5、cture of the average family expenses has_been_changed,_too. 【此处应该使用现在完成时的主动形式has changed。】These graphs show the change clearly.The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 2001, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In_2013,_expenses_on_housing_rose_to_42_pe
6、rcent. 【在该句前应该使用While表示前后两种情况的对比。】Food and drink is the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 2001, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In_2013,_the_figure_grew_by_30%.【在此句前应该添加Whereas表示对比，同时又与前面的while不同，显示用词表达的多样性。】As a result of such increase in the expenses on
7、 housing and food, expenses on other items have reduced from 57% in 2001 to 28% in 2013.Thus, a conclusion can_draw that as income increases, people can improve their living steps. 【此处应该使用被动语态can be drawn。】二、图画作文技巧点拨.写作要点图画作文一般可以分三段来描述。第一段用来描述图画并揭示其寓意(寓意一般用一句话来概括就可以)，第二段分析原因，最后一段发表评论或提出建议，其中第二、三段应该是
8、写作的重点。具体来说，应注意以下几点：1看清图画的标题。2仔细观察图画，弄清画面的含义，抓住画面的主题。3仔细品味图画的语言文字，认真思考其中所隐含的观点。4根据画面内容，进行合理想象。5认真安排内容，布局谋篇。.常用句式1开头Look at the picture/The picture shows that./From the picture, we can see./As is shown in the picture./As is seen in the picture./ As is described in the picture. / The purpose of the pic
9、ture is to show us that./The picture indicates / conveys the meaning that.2衔接句As we all know，./As is known to all./In my opinion，./As far as I am concerned，./This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.3结尾句In conclusion./In brief./On the whole./In short./ In a word，./Generally speaking，./As
10、has been stated.习作点评为唤起大家的交通安全意识，假如某中学英语报社就下面的图画举行征文活动。请你根据下面的信息提示写一篇词数为120150的英语短文参加比赛。这幅漫画想告诉我们什么？你有何感想？In the cartoon, we can see a man make a phone call is driving his car crazily past two people. 【make a phone call作a man的定语，应用making。】At the sight of the scene, one of them said he did the same t
11、hing as the driver before.【此处应该使用过去完成时had done。】Obviously, the badly injured man felt very sorrow_and_regret about what he had done.【此处应该分别使用形容词形式“sorrowful and regretful”。】What the cartoon implies is that we should never neglect the traffic safety rules，and we would regret all the life.【此处要用or表示转折关
12、系。】On seeing the cartoon，I cant help remind people to observe the traffic rules strictly.【此处要用cant help doing这一短语结构表示“情不自禁”。】For one thing, it concerns the safety and happiness of all the people, _either you are a driver or a pedestrian. 【此处要用whether.or.连接状语从句。】For another, we should enforce the pun
13、ishment to the trafficrulebreakers, make them fully understand the great value of observing the rules. 【此处用现在分词短语making.作目的状语。】露一小手(2013江苏)请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“Actions Speak Louder than Words” 为题，用英语写一篇作文。参考词汇：banner(横幅)stump(树桩)你的作文包括以下内容：1简要描述两幅图的内容；2概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；3举例说明两幅图对你的启示。注意：1可参考图片适当发挥；2作文词数150
14、左右；3作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名，人名等。Actions Speak Louder than Words_参考译文：Actions Speak Louder than WordsPeople celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees. The
15、 message conveyed here is clear：“Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage, Should we just pay up service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees to protect the env
16、ironment.Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. Only when
17、 we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.(2013山西部分重点高中高三联合测试)不久前，为零售提供数据的美国服务机构SumAll对网上购物的优惠情况进行了调查。调查发现，一周内优惠最多的并不是人们普遍认为的周末。下面的图表显示了每天的优惠率(百分比)。请根据图表写一篇100词左右的英语短文。短文应该包含以下两点：1分析图表内容；2发表你的观点和看法。参考词汇：优惠率rate of concession。_参考译文：If you think that s
18、hopping online on weekends can get you the best deals, then think again. According to a survey of online shopping, Tuesday is actually the best day of a week if you want to grab a bargain. The best day of a week is Tuesday when rate of concession is 4.81 percent, followed by Thursday at 4.80 percent
19、.In the third place is Friday at 4.65 percent, then Monday at 4.30 percent and Wednesday at 4.13 percent. Its not advisable to shop on Saturday when you only save 3.84 percent and Sunday is the worst with 3.37 percent. Shopping online has become something of a science. So, if you do not want to spend more than you should, do it on the right clay.
