1、写作进行时(五)提纲作文技巧点拨.写作要点1认真审题和分析所给的提纲,认清题目和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、大致内容以及文体。2每一个要点可以作为文章的一个段落层次。段落的展开应围绕提纲的中心和内容,不能偏离,也不能任意增减。3提纲只是对文章的提示和概括,不是主题句。考生需要根据提纲的性质,写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子,使之成为主题句,然后围绕主题句进行扩展。4搜集材料支持主题句。材料可以是例证、亲身经历、名人名言、谚语警句等。应当注意的是,所选材料要与文章的主题相符,即要“扣题”,同时要具有典型性,能充分说明问题。在有多个例证的段落中,还要注意各个例证之间的连贯性。.常用模板/句式
2、A结构模板In recent years, has caused a heated debate on_.The factors for_. First of all,_. Then, there comes a case that_. Moreover,_. Especially when_.Indeed, these unique points can be collected to remind people that_. In this way, we should behave just like_.B常用句式1It is often said that.2It goes witho
3、ut saying that.3It can be easily proved that.4One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is.5I am of the opinion that.6The chief reason why.is that.7To take.for an example(instance).8According to a latest study, it can be predicted.9Another special consideration in this case is that
4、.10This may be true, but we still have a problem with regard to.习作点评假设你是李华,于2013年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班(flight number BA793)回国后,发现遗失了一个行李箱(suitcase)。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信,请他们帮你寻找。信件要点包括:陈述写信原因简要描述该行李箱说明其重要性期待回复并表示感谢注意:120150。Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua, I took the plane BA793 on June 3,2010.【表示“乘坐航班”应该使用“take the f
5、light”。】But unfortunately, when I came to my home, I found I had lost a suitcase. As a result, I am writing to you request you to help me to find it back. 【此处应该使用动词不定式to request作目的状语。】My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip on the top of it. There is a label on the handle with my name and place o
6、n it, which I stuck to it in case I can easily identify it among the masses of suitcases.【表示“地址”应该用“address”。】It is really important for me, because I put all my important documents in it, including my ID card, passport and so on.【此处应该用过去完成时“had put”表示过去的过去。】Besides, it_is_my_father sent to me on my
7、 birthday as a present. 【在is后应该添加连词what引导表语从句。】From the above, you may imagine how worried I am now. Please help me.Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receive your earliest reply. 【look forward to后接动名词形式receiving。】Yours truly,Li Hua露一小手1(2013辽宁)一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件,介绍“中秋节”及这
8、个节日里的主要活动。写作要点: 1. 它是中国的传统节日之一;2. 家人团聚;3. 赏月、吃月饼;4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。参考词汇: 中秋节 the MidAutumn Festival农历 lunar calendar赏月 enjoy the full moon月饼 moon cake_参考范文:The MidAutumn Festival The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chin
9、ese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most
10、 is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruits, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.2(2013河南豫西五校
11、高三教学质检)在紧张的高三备考阶段,英语老师为了提高复习效率,广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华,请根据以下提示,给英语老师(王老师)写封信,表达你们的需求和建议。1适当放慢进度,留出思考时间;2反复训练重要的、易错的知识点;3指导学习、做题方法;4适当减少作业量以保证复习时间;5多与学生谈话,给予更多鼓励;注意:1信中不得提及本班老师姓名;2不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Wang,Were so pleased that you are willing to share our views._Yours,Zhang
12、 Hua参考范文:Dear_Mr._Wang,Were_so_pleased_that_you_are_willing_to_share_our_views.In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didnt learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we nee
13、d a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can have enough time to review.By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.Thank you for your time and consideration!Yours,Zhang_Hua