1、Period Reading for WritingFailure is a common thing in life.But there are different attitudes towards failure. Whoever draws a lesson from every failure becomes experienced and successful.失败是生活中的普遍现象，但是人们对失败有不同的态度。谁能从每一次失败中吸取教训，谁就会变得经验丰富和成功。1_equal_/ikwl/ n同等的人；相等物adj.相同的；同样的2_gap_/gp/n.间隔；开口；差距3_de
2、mand_/dmnd/n.要求；需求vt.强烈要求；需要vi.查问4_vocabulary_/vkbjlri；NAmE leri / n词汇5_description_/dskrpn/n.描写(文字)；形容6_relate_/rlet/ vt.联系；讲述_relate_to_ 与相关；涉及；谈到7have _trouble/difficulty/problems_with sth./in doing sth. 在有麻烦；做某事有困难Step 1PrewritingDo you have some problems in learning English? What is your bigges
3、t challenge?Yes. Memorizing words is really a big challenge to me./Yes. Grasping the grammar is a big headache for me./Yes. How to write an impressive essay is difficult for me.Step 2Whilewriting1输入为先，阅读梳理文脉Task 1: 文本整体理解： 关注布局谋篇What is the main topic of this part? _The_biggest_problems_with_learnin
4、g_English._Task 2: 文本细节理解：选择最佳答案(B)(1)What is Liu Wens biggest problem with learning English?ASpeaking.BListening.CReading. DWriting.(D)(2)To get used to how fast native speakers talk, Jia Xin does the following EXCEPT _Alistening to English radio programmesBrepeating what he hearsCrecording his voi
5、ceDasking the radio host for help(A)(3)What does the word“bridge”in the sentence“ so I only need a few words to bridge the gap between us.” mean?A消除，填补 B架桥C桥梁 D减少2细读课文，关注表达策略学结构第二段作者 Liu Wen运用并列连词but自然过渡到自己在英语学习中存在的问题。第三段的作者 Jia Xin先分享了自己听力学习的经验，然后提出了自己在英语学习中存在的问题，逻辑清晰，层次分明。第四段作者 Li Rui的写作风格与第三段作者 J
6、ia Xin的写作风格相同，先针对第三段作者的问题提出建议，而后表达自己在英语学习中存在的问题，逻辑清晰。学表达1文章第二段倒数第三句中使用“catch”一词要比使用“understand”更形象地表达出了 Liu Wen的英语听力水平。第四段第三句中“bridge”一词是名词用作动词，表示“减小、消除两者间的隔阂、鸿沟或分歧”。2文章第三段使用了动名词短语作主语(Listening to English radio programmes)和宾语从句表达作者的建议。同时在呈现作者英语学习存在的问题时也使用了宾语从句。学语言1.our relationship is close and were
7、 equals，so I only need a few words to bridge the gap between us.我们的关系很亲密，我们是平等的，所以我只需要几句话来弥补我们之间的隔阂。(教材P66)equal(1)n.(a person or thing of the same quality or with the same status, rights, etc. as another)同等的人；相等物(2)adj.(the same in size, quantity, value, etc. as sth. else)相同的；同样的be equal to等于be equ
8、al to sth./doing sth.胜任(做)某事(3)v.比得上；等于(1)A equals B in sth.A在某方面比得上B(2)equally adv.同样地；平等地equality n.平等，同等 【语境助记】Boys and girls must be treated equally in education. They should have equal rights to study.在教育方面，男孩和女孩必须被平等对待，他们应有平等的学习权利。 【活学活用】(1)She treats the people who work for her as her _equals
9、_(equal).她以平等的身份对待为她工作的人。(2)I dont think he is equal to _doing_(do) this kind of work.我认为他不能胜任这种工作。(3)Learning to deal with the social world is _equally_(equal) important.学会应对社交是同等重要的。2But if Im talking to someone who isnt very close to me，I must make my request longerand I must make it a question,
10、not a demand.但是如果我和一个不是很亲近的人谈话，我必须用更长的句子表达请求我必须用提问题的方式，而不是要求(教材P66)demandn.要求；需求vt.(to ask for sth. very firmly)强烈要求；需要 vi.(to ask for sth.)查问(1)be in (great) demand(迫切)需求meet/satisfy ones demands满足某人的需求(2)demand to do sth.要求做某事demand that(should) do要求(应该)做(3)demanding adj.高要求的；要求严格的 【活学活用】(1)This s
11、port demands both speed and strength这项运动既需要速度也需要体力。(2)First, science graduates are _in_ greater demand than arts ones in China.首先， 在中国， 对理科毕业生的需求比对文科生的更大。(3)The manager promised that they would try to meet their customers _demands_(demand).经理许诺他们会尽力满足顾客的需求。(4)The manager demanded that the workers _(
12、should)work_(work) hard to finish the task ahead of time.经理要求工人们努力工作，以便提前完成任务。(5)I had never had the courage _to_demand_(demand)the truth. 我从来没有勇气去要求实情。3Does the writer give a clear description of the problem？作者是否清楚地描述了这个问题？(教材P67)description n(a piece of writing or speech that says what sb./sth. is
13、 like; the act of writing or saying in words what sb./sth. is like)描写(文字)；形容(1)beyond description无法形容，难以描述give a description of介绍(2)describe vt.描述；形容；描绘 【活学活用】(1)He gave us a short description of the city.他给我们简短地介绍了这个城市。(2)The beautiful sight of Mount Huang is _beyond_description.黄山的美景是无法用语言来形容的。(3)
14、It is difficult _to_describe_(describe)how I feel now.很难形容我现在的感受。(4)新外研必修第二册Read the passage and find out how sharks _are_described_ (describe)in the film Jaws.阅读短文，找出电影大白鲨是如何描述鲨鱼的。4Does each sentence relate to the main idea？每句话都与主旨有关吗？(教材P67)relatevt.(show or make a connection between two or more t
15、hings)联系；(to give a spoken or written report of sth.; to tell a story)讲述(1)relate to与相关；涉及；谈到relate sth.to sb. 向某人讲述(2)be related to 与有关(3)relation n. 关系， 联系in relation to 关于 【活学活用】(1)He later related the whole story _to_me.他后来给我讲了整件事的来龙去脉。(2)新北师必修第二册Context is the situation, language or information
16、 that _is_related_to_ something and helps you to understand.语境是与某事物有关，且有助于你理解的情况、语言或信息。(3)I have a lot to say in _relation_(relate)to this affair.关于这件事， 我有很多话要说。5I used to get high marks in English, but now Im having a lot of trouble with my listening.我以前英语成绩很好，但是现在我的听力有很多问题。(教材P66)句型公式： have troubl
17、e with sth. 是固定句式， 意为“做某事有困难/麻烦”。(1)have trouble with sth./(in) doing sth.做某事有困难have difficulty with sth. /(in) doing sth.做某事有困难(2)take the trouble to do sth.不怕费事或困难尽力做某事ask for trouble自找麻烦； 自讨苦吃get into trouble陷入困境； 惹麻烦 【活学活用】(1)With his telephone number, I had no trouble in _getting_in_touch_with_
18、him. 有他的电话号码， 我毫不费力地联系到他了。(2)I had no difficulty _in_making myself understood.我毫不费力地表达了自己的意思。(3)If you do that, you might _get_her_into_trouble_如果你那样做， 你就会使她陷入困境。(4)We must thank you for _taking_the_trouble_to_make us a meal.我们必须谢谢你费力为我们做饭。通技法学写作规范技法指导本单元的写作任务是关于英语学习的博客，“博客”的英文为Blog，为Web和 Log的合成词。博客
19、主要是使用特定的软件，在网络上出版、发表和张贴个人文章。博客的内容可以是个人纯粹的想法和心得，包括对时事新闻、国家大事的个人看法等。审题步骤：第一步：明确要求博客属于应用文。时态通常以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；人称主要为第一人称和第二人称。第二步：确定结构分享英语学习建议的博客一般包括以下几部分内容：第一部分开头点题。第二部分具体的英语学习建议。第三部分总结并表达相关祝愿。积“黄金”词句写高分文章一、导语部分1Learning a language is a gradual processit does not happen overnight.学习一门语言是一个循序渐进的过程，不可能一蹴而
20、就。2English is one of the most important languages in the world so we should learn it well.英语是世界上最重要的语言之一，因此我们应该学好它。二、主体部分1Find friends to study with. Learning English together can be very encouraging.找朋友一起学习。一起学英语会使你们备受鼓舞。2Choose learning materials that relate to what you are interested in. Being in
21、terested in the subject will make learning more enjoyablethus more effective.选择你感兴趣的学习材料。感兴趣的主题可以让你学得更愉悦，因此效率也就更高。3The Internet is the most exciting, unlimited English resource that anyone could imagine and it is right at your fingertips.网络是最令人兴奋且不受限制的英语学习资源，任你发挥想象力，一切都触手可及。三、结束语部分1Be patient with y
22、ourself. Remember learning is a processspeaking a language well takes time. It is not a computer that is either on or off!对自己有耐心一点。记住，学习是一个过程。说好一门语言是需要时间的，它可不像一台说开就开，说关就关的电脑！2Rome was not built in a day. The same goes for English study, which is a long and difficult journey for all the learners.罗马非一
23、日建成，英语学习也是如此，对于学习者来说是一个漫长和艰难的旅程。3Be patient and persistent, especially in the initial period of study when all of the effort seems to be with no result; do believe in that we will see the fruit of our hard work after the suffering.要有耐心和毅力，特别是在学习的初期阶段，当所有的努力似乎都没有回报的时候。我们要相信，苦难过后，我们会看到努力学习的成果。4Practic
24、e makes perfect.熟能生巧。【例文鉴赏】假定你是李华，你班里有些同学在英语学习上有些困难。写一篇博客，提出一些英语学习建议，内容要点如下：1收听英语节目；2看英语电视节目和电影；3多读，多讲，多练。注意：1词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【思路点拨】体裁应用文：博客时态一般现在时和一般将来时主题语言学习人称第一、二人称结构第一部分：引出话题第二部分：具体的英语学习建议第三部分：总结【遣词造句】(1)词汇积累_have_trouble_in_learning_English_学习英语有困难offer/give _advice/suggestions_提建议_be_h
25、elpful/of_great_help_有帮助_widen/broaden_ones_view/_knowledge_ 拓展某人的视野/知识_make_progress_取得进步_look_up_words in a dictionary 在词典中查词_refer_to_a dictionary 查词典_make_full_use_of_充分利用focus/concentrate ones attention _on/upon_把注意力集中在(2)完成句子我知道一些同学学习英语有困难。I know some classmates _have_trouble_in_learning_Engli
26、sh_你也可以看英文电视节目或电影，这很有帮助。You can also watch English TV programmes or films, _which_is_of_great_help_你训练得越多，你说得就越好。_The_more_you_practice,_the_better_youll_speak_学习英语是现代社会的要求之一，它对我们未来的职业生涯有益。_Learning_English_is one of the_demands_in modern society and it will definitely_do_good_to_our future career.通
27、过阅读英语作品我们可以增加词汇量，了解更多说英语国家的文化和风俗。We can _enlarge_our_vocabulary_as well as dive into the cultures and _customs_of Englishspeaking countries by reading works in English.【连句成篇】I know some classmates have trouble in learning English. Here is some advice for your reference.First, if you want to improve
28、your listening ability, it is advised that you (should) listen to some tapes and radio programmes in English. I believe the more you are exposed to authentic listening materials, the quicker you will be at mastering the language. Second, I strongly recommend that you can also watch English TV progra
29、mmes or films, which, undoubtedly, will be of great help for you to learn the language. Last but not least, try to read aloud and practice speaking English.Im sure the more you practice, the better youll speak.Be patient with yourself. Remember learning is a processlearning a language well takes tim
30、e. I believe youll make great progress following the above advice.【亮点点击】文章要点齐全，思路清晰，在遣词造句方面，使用了多样且准确的表达，体现了作者较高的语言运用能力。非限制性定语从句which, undoubtedly, will be of great help和比较级句型the more the better 的运用，使文章句式结构复杂多变。have trouble in, for sb.s reference, make great progress, following the above advice等使得句子表达多样化。此外，First, Second, Last but not least等连接和过渡成分大大增加了文章的表达效果。
