1、听力略第一部分阅读理解 （共两节，满分40分）第一节（共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）阅读下列短文 ，从每题所给的四个选项 （A 、B 、C 和 D ）中选出最佳选项 ，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑 AScientists are trying to make the deserts into good land again They want to bring water to the deserts， so people can live and grow food They are learning a lot about the deserts But more and more of
2、the earth is becoming desert all the time Scientists may not be able to change the desert in time Why is more and more land becoming desert？ Scientists think that people make deserts People are doing bad things to the earth Some places on the earth dont get much rain But they still dont become deser
3、ts This is because some green plants are growing there Small green plants and grass are very important to dry places Plants dont let the sun make the earth even drier Plants do not let the wind blow the dirt away When a bit of rain falls， the plants hold the water Without plants， the land can become
4、 desert more easily 21 Deserts _ A never have any plants or animals in them B can all be turned into good land before long C are becoming smaller and smaller D get very little rain22 Small green plants are very important to dry places because _ A they dont let the sun make the earth even drier B the
5、y dont let the wind blow the soil away C they hold water D All of the above 23 Land is becoming desert little by little because _ A plants cant grow there B there is not enough rain C people havent done what scientists wish them to do D scientists know little about the deserts24 Which is the main id
6、ea of the first paragraph？ A Scientists know how to change desert into good land B Land is becoming desert faster than scientists can change it back into good land C If scientists can bring water to desert， people can live and grow food there D More and more places are becoming deserts all the time
7、【答案】21.D22.D23.C24.B【解析】试题分析: 本文讲述了科学家们在试图把沙漠变回农田，他们想把水引到沙漠，人们就可以在那里生存种植作物了，但沙漠一直在增多。植被可以防风固沙，留住雨水21.D考查细节题：从第一句话：They want to bring water to the deserts， so people can live and grow food. 可知沙漠的水很少，故选D项。22.D 考查细节理解题。根据第三段提到Small green plants and grass are very important to dry places Plants dont let
8、 the sun make the earth even drier Plants do not let the wind blow the dirt away When a bit of rain falls， the plants hold the water可知三个原因都有，故选D项。23.C 考查细节理解题。根据第一段提到Scientists may not be able to change the desert in time科学家不可能及时地改变沙漠，可知人们没有按照科学家所说的去做，故选C项。24.B 考查细节理解题。根据第一段提到科学家努力把沙漠变成土地，为了做了很多的努力，
9、但越来越多的土壤沙漠化，科学家不能及时的进行改变，故选B项。考点 ：环保类阅读。 B In order to know a foreign language thoroughly（完全地），four things are necessaryFirst，we must understand the language when we hear it spoken Secondly，we must be able to speak it ourselves， with confidence（自信） and without hesitation（犹豫） Thirdly， we must do much
10、 reading Finally， we must be able to write it We must be able to make sentences that are correct in grammar There are no shortcuts to success in language learning A good memory is a great help， but it is not enough only to memorize the rules from a grammar book It is not much learning by heart long
11、lists（一览表） of words and theirmeanings， studying the dictionary and so on We must learn by using the languageIf we are pleased with a few rules we have memorized， we are not really learning the language We must “learn through use” Practice is importantWe must practice speaking and writing the languag
12、e whenever we can 25 The most important things to learn a foreign language are _. A understanding and speaking B listening， speaking， reading and writing C writing and understanding D memorizing and listening26 Someone hears and writes English very well， but he speaks it very badly This is because _
13、. A he doesnt understand the language when he hears it spoken B he doesnt have a good memory C he always remembers lists of words and their meanings D he often hesitates（犹豫） to practice speaking it27 One can never learn a foreign language well by _. A doing much practice B studying the dictionary C
14、learning through use D using the language28 Which is the most important in learning a foreign language？ A A good memory B Speaking C Practice D Writing【答案】25.B26.D27.B28.C【解析】27.B 考查细节理解题。根据第二段A good memory is a great help， but it is not enough only to memorize the rules from a grammar book好的记忆力是会很有
15、帮助，但是光从语法书上记忆语法规则是不够的。以及第三段If we are pleased with a few rules we have memorized， we are not really learning the language We must “learn through use” Practice is important 如果我们对于记点语法规则就很满足，但在并不是真正在学语言。我们必须通过使用它来学这门语言。所以推断B28.C 考查细节理解题。根据第三段Practice is important We must practise speaking and writing t
16、he language whenever we can练习非常重要。我们必须尽可能地练习说和写一门语言，故选C项。考点 ：日常生活类阅读。 C My interest in Chinese food started years ago, when I was a young reporter for the Washington Post. Our office wasnt far from Chinatown, where I found some very good Chinese restaurants.The first time I ever ate Chinese food I l
17、oved it. I noticed the fresh taste of the meat and vegetables. When I learned more about the food, I began to understand why it has this special feature.Many years ago, China had an energy crisis because it lost much of its wood due to overpopulation and poor management of its forests. This loss was
18、 very bad for the country, of course, but it turned out to be very good for the food. Wood became very expensive and hard to get, so the Chinese had to either find a substitute for their valuable wood, or learn how to use it better. There werent any substitutes, so people found ways to economize.In
19、order to economize in cooking, they had to use very little wood. So they started cutting their meat and vegetables into small pieces before they put them in the hot oil. That way, the food cooked faster and they saved their fuel. The food prepared in this way kept its fresh flavor and its this flavo
20、r that attracts people from other countries to the art of Chinese cooking.29. This text is mainly about _.A. what caused Chinese food to taste fresh B. how Chinese food is cooked in the US C. when the author started to make Chinese food D. why most foreigners like cooking Chinese food30. The author
21、mentioned the energy crisis to show _. A. it is important to protect the forests B. it is necessary to find substitutes for wood C. why the Chinese changed their way of cooking D. what problems a big population caused for China31. It can be inferred from the text that before the energy crisis Chines
22、e food _. A. didnt taste good at all B. didnt look so fresh as nowC. was cooked in water instead of oil D. was cooked in rather large pieces【答案】29.A30.C31.D【解析】试题分析: 这篇短文主要介绍了中国食品为什么很新鲜的原因。原来是古时候，人们为了节省木柴，而给变了烹饪方式。正是这种快速的烹饪方式让食品保持了它的新鲜29.A考查主旨大意题。阅读短文可知，本文主要讲述了为什么中餐风味独特的原因，故选A项。30.C 考查推理判断题。根据第三段提到W
23、ood became very expensive and hard to get, so the Chinese had to either find a substitute for their valuable wood, or learn how to use it better.因为木头变得越来越贵，因为中国人要么找到替代品，要么学会如何更好的利用再根据最后一段提到为了节省木材他们把肉和蔬菜切成小块，这就是为为什么中国烹饪变得的原因，故选C项。31.D 考查推理判断题。根据最后一段提到So they started cutting their meat and vegetables
24、into small pieces before they put them in the hot oil. That way, the food cooked faster and they saved their fuel.他们开始把肉切成小声，再放入油里，可知在能源危机之前应该是切成大块，故选D项。考点 ：文化类阅读。D ABC News anchor (节目主持人) Peter Jennings died on Aug.7, 2005 at home in New York after a brief battle with lung cancer. ABC News anchors
25、said they hope if anything good can be taken from Jennings death, it is a great awareness of the dangers of smoking. “I want to give a message,” Barbara Walters said. “If you have kids who are smoking, tell them that we lost Peter.” Lung cancer is the worst killer in America, taking more lives each
26、year than any other cancer, according to the America Cancer Society. About 160,440 Americans die each year of cancer, making up 28 percent of all cancer deaths. More than 87 percent of lung cancers are smoking related. Dr. Derek Raghavan, director of the Cleveland Clinic s Taussing Cancer Center(陶西格
27、癌症中心）, said that once a person stops smoking, he starts getting better. Three to five years after quitting, the possibility of getting lung cancer is reduced by half. Warning signs of lung cancer can also be mixed with symptoms connected with long-term smoking. The three main warning signs are an in
28、crease of coughing that doesnt clear up, coughing up blood and sharp chest pains. People with those symptoms should see a doctor. Raghavan said there have been promising developments in the treatment of lung cancer, including uses of radiation and surgery and drugs. “But the fact is that stopping sm
29、oking is the most important thing we can do,” Raghavan said. “There is no treatment that even comes close.”32. Anchor Peter Jennings died of lung cancer which was possibly caused by _. A. his bad eating habit B. overmuch work C. long-term smoking D. the old age33. The first paragraph mentioned Peter
30、 Jennings death in order to _. A. make him the main character of the passage. B. warn the smokers of the danger of smoking C. introduce the topic to be talked about D. make him better-known than before34. The underlined word “quitting” in the fourth paragraph probably refers to _. A. doing more exer
31、cise B. giving up smoking C. getting over lung cancer D. staying in hospital35. To fight against lung cancer, what matters much to smokers is _. A. to receive the treatment of lung cancer B. to do exercise regularly C. to see a doctor in time D. to stop smoking【答案】32.C33.C34.B35.D【解析】试题分析: 本文通过提到著名主
32、持人死于肺癌，提出戒烟是减少肺癌的关键。32.C 考查细节理解题。根据第二段提到If you have kids who are smoking, tell them that we lost Peter可知因为抽烟而得了肺癌，故选C项。33.C 考查推理判断题。本文提到这个著名节目主持人的死亡来引出话题，故选C项。34.B 考查细节理解题。根据第四段提到once a person stops smoking, he starts getting better. Three to five years after quitting, the possibility of getting lun
33、g cancer is reduced by half.一旦一个人戒烟后，他会变得好起来，戒烟三到四年后，得肺癌的几率会减半，故选B项。35.D 考查细节理解题。根据最后一段提到But the fact is that stopping smoking is the most important thing we can do,” Raghavan said. “There is no treatment that even comes close戒烟是我们所能做的最重要的事情，这是最好的治疗，故选D项。考点 ：科普类阅读。第二节 七选五：（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分)根据短文内容，从短
34、文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项，选项中有两项为多余选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。_36_Home can be a great place for children to study. It is important to provide a workspace of their own where they can read books or just write a letter to their friends. l Location_37_ Kitchen and dining room are not so well suited for regular study, sin
35、ce books and pens get in the way of the day-to-day uses of those areas. Set up a place where a child can settle in and leave papers and pens at hand without having to clear everything away each night. For a child that likes being alone, set aside a corner of his bedroom, but keep it separated from t
36、hings like games, music and other hobbies not related to studying. l Keeping Things in OrderParents should encourage their child to spread out, but to leave it neat and orderly when he isnt using his workspace. Ownership is very important for self-respect. _38_ The workplace should be personal, but
37、not another part of the playroom. l _39_ Encourage the whole family to help build a supportive environment that children need for success in school. Give them a good example of how to deal with problems, how to manage time and get things done in the right way. _40_Study will be more enjoyable and ef
38、fective when supported by the whole family. A. Developing a positive attitudeB. Bring Organization into Your HomeC. Here are several ways to choose a locationD. Building a Good Home Learning EnvironmentE. Hold a can-do attitude and your child will follow your example. F. Setting up a space in a comm
39、on area of your home can be a good idea for children. G. A child who learns to organize his space will carry organization into every corner of his life. 【答案】36.D37.F38.G39.A40.E【解析】试题分析：本文讲述的如何为孩子建立良好的家庭学习的氛围所要考虑的各方面的问题36.D根据本段第一句Home can be a great place for children to study.说明家是孩子们学习的黄金场所，我们要为孩子建
40、立一个最好的家庭学习氛围。故D项符合本段大意37.F根据本段2,3行Set up a place where a child can settle in and leave papers and pens at band without having to clear everything away each night.说明我们要在家里给孩子找一个很好的空间让孩子学习也很重要。故F项符合段落大意。38.G根据本段第一句Parents should encourage their child to spread out, but to leave it neat and orderly whe
41、n he isnt using his workspace.说明父母要教会孩子整理好自己的一切物品，对他以后的个人发展很重要。故G项正确39.A根据本文最后一段Study will be more enjoyable and effective when supported by the whole family可知如果收到全家的支持，那么学习就会更愉快更有效。故家人的态度很重要，A项符合段落大意40.E根据前一句Give them a good example of how to deal with problems, how to manage time and get things do
42、ne in the right way说明父母要给孩子树立良好的榜样，让孩子去模仿。故E项内容符合上下文考点 ：七选五第二部分：英语知识运用（共两节，满分45分）第一节：完形填空（共20题，每小题1.5分，满分30分）阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。More Than I Had Dreamed Of From the time I was seven, I had a dream of becoming a member of the Student Union. I always _41_my school le
43、aders for taking responsibility for all of us. So I dreamed of being a leader. Years flew by, and soon I was able to take part in the elections（选举）, _42_I would win. But the reality struck that I hadnt had a chance. I wasnt pretty. Girls across the school hardly knew me. I just did not have what it
44、took to _43_a school election. I was _44_. As I cried in my room that evening, I _45_took a deep breath and decided I wouldnt stop dreaming. I decided that I would _46_for elections again in my final year at schooland I would win. I recognized that my _47_had a lot of advantages. What strengths did
45、I have? I had good grades, and I was _48_and helpful. And my biggest _49_was the faith（信念）I had. I would not allow my _50_appearance to hold me back from putting my best foot forward. That evening, I _51_my election plans for the next year. I realized that girls would have to get to know me and reco
46、gnized that I had the_52_ to speak for them. I loved making friends and I liked being helpful, _53_ I decided that perhaps I could use these qualities to work to my advantage. In order to learn how to give a great election _54_, I also took a course on successful public speaking. The day after the e
47、lection, when the head teacher announced I won the second highest number of votes(选票), the students_55_ . That joy on the faces of all my friends showed me that my success was _56_ theirs. Suddenly, I realized that I had _57_much more than I had dreamed of. I had made many new friends and had helped
48、 people _58_the way. I had won the _59_and love of my schoolmates and they knew me as somebody who would stand by them. I was able to put a smile on their faces and _60_their day. 41. A. admired B. remembered C. praised D. believed42. A. hoping B. planning C. guessing D. judging43. A. have B. lose C
49、. hold D. win44. A. content B. upset C. surprised D. confused45. A. gradually B. immediately C. suddenly D. personally46. A. pay B. run C. speak D. wait47. A. competitors B. teammates C. coaches Dschoolmates48. A. outspoken B. curious C. direct D. friendly49. A. problem B. strength C. worry D. dream
50、50. A. young B. public C. special D. ordinary51. A. began B. discussed C. announced D. changed52. A. support B. necessity C. ability D. permission53. A. but B. and C. so D. or54. A. broadcast B. speech C. performance D. promise55. A. nodded B. gathered C. cheered D. argued56. A. only B. still C. alm
51、ost D. also57. A. achieved B. controlled C. devoted D. developed58. A. by B. to C. in D. along59. A. mercy B. acceptance C. election D. fame60. A. enrich B. widen C. brighten D. expand【答案】41. A42. A43. D44. B45. C46. B47. A48. D49. B50. D51. A52. C53. C54. B55. C56. D57. A58. D59. B60. C【解析】试题分析：文章介
52、绍了作者为了实现能够进入学生会的梦想所做的努力，并最终赢得了选举，顺利地进入了学生会，在实现了儿时的梦想的同时也收获了很多41. A 考查动词辨析A. admired钦佩；B. remembered记忆；C. praised 表扬 ; D. believed根据后句内容“So I dreamed of being a leader”可知作者梦想自己也有一天会当学生会成员，由此判断他对他们是钦佩，羡慕的，选42. A考查动词辨析。A. hoping 希望；B. planning计划； C.guessing猜 ； D. judging判断。根据上文可知作者特别期望可以获胜，所以判断hope能体现出
53、作者想赢得选举的心态43. D考查动词辨析A. have 有；B. lose失去；C. hold举起；D. win赢得；it 是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式：to win a school election。 ，符合句意44. B考查形容词辨析A. content 满意的；B. upset 不安的；C. surprised 吃惊的；D. confused困惑的；根据上题，作者不知道那什么来赢得选举，所以感到沮丧，不安，故选B项。45. C考查副词辨析A. gradually 逐渐地；B. immediately 立刻；C. suddenly突然；D. personally亲自地；句意
54、：我突然做了一个深呼吸并决定不放弃梦想，故选C项。46. B考查动词辨析A. pay支付；B. run 跑；C. speak说；D. wait等待；句意：我决定在我上学的最后一年重新参选并将要在选举中胜出，故选B项。47. A考查名词辨析A. competitors 竞争者；B. teammates队友；C. coaches 教练；Dschoolmates校友；由 语 境 可 知 ， 该 空 指 的 是 下 文 提 到 的 我 的 竞 争 对 手 们 ， 也 就 是 。句意：我意识到我的竞争对手有很多事情战友优势，故选A项。48. D考查形容词辨析A. outspoken坦率的；B. curi
55、ous 好奇的；C. direct 直接的；D. friendly友好的；句意：我的分数很高，很友好，爱帮助人，故选D项。49. B考查名词辨析。A. problem问题；B. strength强项， 力量；C. worry担忧；D. dream梦想。由上文的in their favor ，in my favor可知，这里谈论的是优势，所以选strength，意为“长处”。句意：我最大的长处是我有信念50. D考查形容词辨析A. young年轻的；B. public 公共的；C. special特殊的；D. ordinary普通的；作者不想让自己普通的的外表阻碍自己将最好的一面展现出来。作者在
56、列举长处时，没有提到自己的相貌。由此可以推知，她的相貌应该不占优势，故选D项。51. A考查动词辨析A. began 开始；B. discussed讨论；C. announced宣布；D. changed改变；分析完优势后，作者开始着手预先制定自己的选举计划，故选A项。52. C考查名词辨析A. support 支持；B. necessity需要；C. ability 能力；D. permission允许；句意：我意识到女孩们开始了解我，并且认可我有能力代表他们，故选C项。53. C考查连词辨析A. but 但是；B. and并且；C. so 因此；D. or或者；上文所提到的我的优势“lov
57、ed making friends and I liked being helpful”与下文打算利用自己的优势构成因果关系。所以选 so，意思是“因此”54. B考查名词辨析A. broadcast广播； B. speech 演讲；C. performance 表演；D. promise承诺；句意：为了学会在一个大型的演讲中如何表现自己，我还参见了一个高效公共演讲的培训，由下文的“public speaking”可知，故选B项。55. C考查动词辨析A. nodded点头；B. gathered 聚集；C. cheered 欢呼；D. argued争论；作者赢得选举，朋友们应该为此欢呼以示高
58、兴。此处应填“cheered”欢呼。56. D考查副词辨析A. only只有；B. still仍然；C. almost几乎；D. also也；句意：选举的胜利不仅是作者的也是他的支持者们的。also 也符合语境57. A考查动词辨析A. achieved实现； B. controlled 控制；C. devoted 奉献；D. developed发展；作者的本意只是在竞选中获胜，但获胜后作者突然意识到，除了实现了自己的梦想外，他还得到了友情、享受了一路走来朋友慢的支持和帮助，所以作者认为自己收获了比目标还要多的东西，故选A项。58. D考查介词辨析 句意：在竞选的过程中，我交了许多新朋友 并在
59、前进的道路上帮助别人，Along the way 一路走来，故选D项。59. B考查名词辨析A. mercy仁慈；B. acceptance接受；C. election 选举；D. fame名声；句意：我已经在选举中赢得了同学们的认可和关爱，故选B项。60. C考查动词辨析A. enrich使富足；B. widen 放宽；C. brighten使闪亮；D. expand扩展；这里指作者通过这次经历，有了更多的自信，可以“能够让自己的朋友 ”快乐起来，让他们的脸上带着微笑，照亮他们的生活，故选C项。考点 ：故事类短文。 第二卷第二部分：英语知识运用 第二节 （共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15
60、分）阅读文章，在空白处填入适当的内容（不多于3个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式Howlearninghabitsinfluenceonlearningresults?Itsusefulandnecessary to discusslearninghabits.Thereisafamoussaying“Goodhabitsleadtogoodendings” 61 showstheimportanceofhabits.“Anappleadaykeepsdoctoraway.”alsoshowshowahealthyeverydayhabithelpstobuildupourbody. 62 ,go
61、odlearninghabitscanhelpusgaingreatlearningresults 63 (include)highscoresandabundantknowledge.Atfirst,learninghabitsformourwaysofthinkingandattitudes 64 thecontentofourlearning.Obviously,agoodhabitcanhelpustospeeduptoreachourdestinations.65 wecansee,cultivatingagoodhabitissoimportant 66 Iwouldliketoi
62、ntroduceonekindofgoodlearninghabits-keepalearningdiaryeveryday.Wecanstart thehabitby67(write)learningsummaryandremembertorecordsomethingimpressiveand68(mean).Keepitinmind,andgraduallywecangainthis good learninghabitandbenefitfromit.Whatsmore,IfindoutthatIstillhavesomebadlearninghabitsaswell.Ican 69
63、concentrateonreadingforashorttimeandI70 (conquer)thisproblembyspendingmoreeffortonconcentrationpractice.Ibelievethatthroughmyefforts,Icangaingoodlearningresultsbyhavinggoodhabits.【答案】61.which62.Thus/Therefore 63.including64.towards/to65.As 66.that 67.writing 68.meaningful 69.just/only 70.willconquer
64、【解析】 61.which 考查定语从句；先行词Goodhabitsleadtogoodendings，定语从句缺少主语，故用which；62.Thus/Therefore 考查副词。健康的日常习惯帮助我们增强体质.因此好的学习习惯帮助我们取得好的学习效果。前后是因果关系，连词后有逗号用Thus/Therefore63.including 考查介词 。好的学习习惯帮助我们取得好的学习效果，包括高分数和丰富的知识，故用including64.towards/to 考查介词 。对某事的态度attitude towards/to65.As 考查定语从句；正如我们所看到的，定语从句中指代后面的一句话，
65、作宾语，位于句首用As66.that 考查固定句型；如此以至于，so. . . .that67.writing 考查动词。介词后用doing形式，填.writing68.meaningful 考查形容词。印象深刻和有意义并列做something的后置定语，用形容词形式.meaningful69.just/only 考查副词。自己还有一些坏习惯，就是阅读时只能注意力集中一会儿。70.willconquer 考查动词的时态。句意：通过努力集中练习我将会克服这一困难；考点 ：语法填空。第三部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）A. 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间
66、交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。My friend Li Hua come to visit me on May Day. During the following days, I showed he around the city of Hangzhou. We we
67、nt to the Museum in the morning of May 2, and we learnt many about the history of Zhejiang. In the afternoon, we made a tour to West Lake. It was really great funny! In the evening, I took Li Hua to the night zoo there. It is very interesting to see animal at night. The next day we went to the books
68、hop to buy books. Though we were very tiring in those two days, but we enjoyed ourselves very much.注：night zoo:夜间动物园【答案】e-came72.he-him 73.in-on74.many-much75.to后面加the76.funny-fun 77.is-was 78.animal-animal 79.tiring-tired 80.but去掉【解析】考点 ：短文改错第二节 书面表达（25分）肥胖已经成为危害人们健康的严重问题，中小学生的肥胖趋势更为明显。你们班对此展开讨论。根据
69、不同的观点，写一篇100词左右的短文。 1肥胖危害健康，应该节食，锻炼，预防肥胖。已经超重的，应该采取措施减肥。 2中小学生生长身体的时候，减肥会影响身体发育，也会影响学习，因此应该顺其自然。 词汇：肥胖：fatnessFatness is one of the serious problems which have a bad effect on our health._【答案】Fatness is one of the serious problems which have a bad effect on our health. And at present the situation i
70、n the teenagers is even worse, As to this, a discussion was carried out in our class.Some students think fatness does harm to our health, so it is necessary to be on a diet and take suitable exercise to prevent it. Those who are overweight should take measures to lose weight to be healthy.But others
71、 have a different opinion. They say losing weight will be bad for the teenagers during their growth course, as well as their studies. So there is no doubt to leave it as it is.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑
72、关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语have a bad effect on对。有坏的影响；carry out执行；be on a diet节食；take measures to do 采取措施做某事；lose weight减肥；Fatness is one of the serious problems which have a bad effect on our health这个句子运用到which引导定语从句；They say losing weight will be bad for the teenagers during their growth course, as well as their studies这个句子运用到动名词做主语；考点： 提纲类作文