1、写作步步高之三(置于模块三 Unit 1)如何运用丰富多彩的结构根据高考英语书面表达评分标准可知,一篇要点齐全,表达正确,但语言平淡,表达方式单一的书面表达是很难获得高分的。但如果能在一篇短文中有意识地呈现几处高级语法结构,如省略句、强调句、倒装句、感叹句、虚拟句的话,那就势必能使短文出彩,让阅卷者心动,从而提高书面表达的分数。一般来说使用如下复杂结构或句型能增强表达效果,提升写作能力层次。1. 强调句:可使用强调句型对时间、地点、原因、方式等状语进行强调,对谓语动词也可通过增加助动词的形式来进行语意强调。2. 倒装句:倒装句往往改变句子的正常语序,并使句子在意义、程度或语气发生变化,从而取得
2、修辞效果。3. 感叹句:感叹句多用于文章的开头或结尾,它能活跃文章的气氛。4. 省略句:省略句能突出重点信息,缩小交流间隔,简化表达程序,增加语言效果。5. 替代词:替代词的使用往往能使行文简洁流畅。6. 进行时态:进行时态与always连用时往往表示强烈的感情色彩。7. 被动句:有时候使用被动句更符合语意需要。8. 否定句:许多时候否定句或双重否定句比肯定句更有表现力,尤其在一些特定句型中。9. 插入语:插入语的合理使用可调整句子结构,增加表达的准确性。10. 虚拟语气。11. 比喻、拟人等修辞手法:修辞能给读者留下深刻的印象,具有强大的感染力。及时巩固:1. 请使用不同的句式来增强表达效果
3、。He came here at 5 pm yesterday.否定句:_.倒装句:_.强调句(强调时间状语):_.He went to the airport to pick you up but failed to find you.强调谓语:_.How did he found the way out?强调方式状语:_. I didnt take his advice, so I failed in the exam.虚拟语气: _. Without your timely help, we couldnt have finished the work on time.虚拟语气: _.倒
4、装虚拟语气句:_. As more and more forests are being cut down, some species are dying out.with 复合结构_ He has made great progress in recent years.感叹句:_ They believe what you said.反问句:_ To finish the work ahead of time, they have been busy recently.比喻句:_ Beijing held the opening ceremony of the 29th Olympic Ga
5、mes on August 8th.拟人句:_ We should emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes.否定句:_ He always comes late to school.进行时态:_2. 请根据汉语提示完成如下较复杂结构。 The more you move your feet, _(你就越健康). _(据说) Professor Yuan is one of the richest men in China. I _(很同意你的看法). Its time that _(采取措施) to prevent such a thin
6、g from happening again. _(如果有必要),you can turn to your teacher. _(毫无意义) in waiting here without knowing when he will come back. _(由于没有公交车),we had to walk home. _(这一天一去不返了) when we use foreign oils._(不久) he had to leave for another place._(好像) they were talking about it.答案:1. 否定句:He didnt come here un
7、til 5 pm yesterday. 倒装句:Not until 5 pm did he come here yesterday. 强调句:It was not until 5 pm yesterday that he came here yesterday.He did go to the airport to pick you up but failed to find you .How was it that he found the way out?If I had taken his advice , I wouldnt have failed in the exam.虚拟语气:B
8、ut for your timely help / If it hadnt been for your timely help,倒装虚拟语气句:Had it not been for your timely help,with more and more forests cut down, some species are dying out.What great progress he has made in recent years!Dont they believe what you said?To finish the work ahead of time, they have bee
9、n as busy as a bee recently. August 8th ,2008 saw Beijing holding the opening ceremony of the 29th Olympic Games. We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes. He is always coming late to school.2. The healthier you will beIts said thatcant agree with you moremeasures were taken / should be takenIf (it is) necessarythere is no sensethere being no busGone are the daysIt was not long before.It seems that版权所有:高考资源网()