1、山西省长治市2014高考英语短文改错训练（8）及参考答案短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some
2、people liked to buy goods online. And I dont like it, because online shopping is less reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers cant feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means t
3、he items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. In word, online shopping isnt reliable at all. 答案解析*短文改错Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent yea
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6、 public library in every town in Britain. Anyone 1._can borrow books if he or she wish. In some places you2._may borrow as more books as you need, but in others 3._you are limited in a certain number of books. You may 4._keep the books for several weeks so as you can have 5._enough time to finish it
7、. If the book you want is out 6._you may ask it to be kept for you. Most public libraries 7._also have a reading-room, that you can sit at the desk 8._and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other 9._books, but you are not permit to take them out. 10._答案1. *2. wish wishes3. more many4. in t
8、o5. as that6. it them7. ask ask for8. that where9. 去掉other前的the10. permit permitted短文改错Dear Mr. Donforth,Im writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. Ive 1. _heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. _have been learning about its rich culture and long history. 3. _Since y
9、ou have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. _know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. _learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. _experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. _help the whole class. Could you share you exp
10、eriences for 8. _us? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. _think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. _答案1. you 后添加 to 2. *3. its its 4. 去掉 so5. here there 6. you your7. knowledges knowledge 8. for with9. hoped hope 10. possibly possible短文改错-【命题趋向】短文改错是一项主要
11、测试考生的判断能力，观察能力、纠错能力语言基础知识及语言的综合运用能力。短文改错的趋势：1.改错短文以记叙文和说明文为主 。2.文章内容贴近学生生活，没有生僻词汇和复杂的结构，文章简单易懂，错误设置也很简单，多为学生平常作文中常出现的错误。3.短文一般100词左右，错误有9处。4.常见错有三种:错词、多词、 缺词。错词占60%左右【错误类型】 1. 错词 2. 多词 3. 缺词 4. 正错【考点透视】一错词的热点 1 动词时态 语态 非谓语 ；主谓关系。 2 联系词关系代词和关系副词；连词；连接词。3 名词可数名词 、不可数名词，可数名字的单复数变化。4 介词介词和动词的搭配错误。5 形容词/
12、副词词类错用。6 冠词定冠词和不定冠词的错用。7 代词人称代词；物主代词；反身代词。8 惯用法固定句型，固定短语。 二多词和缺词热点 1. 冠词2.介词3.副词4.代词5.关联词6.小品词 to【短文改错主要特点】1. 语言材料取自于学生的习作。 2. 短文为贴近学生生活的话题或学生身边事。 3. 短文难度符合学生水平。 4. 语言简单易懂。 5. 没有生僻的语言现象或繁难的语句结构。短文改错(第一节：短文改错(共10小题)假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下
13、面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop,
14、 but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldnt move. The young man didnt know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to t
15、he young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.参考答案、 短文改错(共10小题)I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebrahappen 去掉tocrossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The you
16、ng man saw the girl but tried to stop, when andbut he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldnt his badlymove. The young man didnt know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the policewhatarrived. They send her to the
17、nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and sent policemenwrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast. 加he或去掉was(2010河北部分重点联考)Dear Anish，Here are the information about Manchester University.1._It is about 200 miles far away f
18、rom London, and it 2._has a very big schoolyard. You can live in the school3._or near the school. They have all sorts of course.4._Im sure you will find one you like it. I know you5._are particular interested in human rights. So I will 6._see that there is anything on their website(网址).7._Ill send m
19、y friend Charlie meet you at the airport8._when you arrived. You met him a few years ago, but he 9._has changed a lot since then. Both your aunt or I look10._forward to seeing you again.See you soon.Peter答案与解析：1areisinformation是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式。2去掉farfar通常不与表示具体距离的数词连用。34coursecourses根据句中的all sorts
20、 of可知，这里要表示的是各种各样的课程，因此应用复数形式。5去掉it“(that) you like”是定语从句，修饰先行词one。在从句中，关系代词that作like的宾语，所以it多余。6particularparticularlyinterested是形容词，应使用副词修饰。7thatif/whether根据上一句中的内容可知这里的意思是看网络上“是否”有相关信息。8meet前加to此处是不定式表示目的。9arrivedarrive如果主句是一般将来时，时间状语从句通常用一般现在时。 10orand此处是“both.and.”结构，表示“两者都”。【重庆市万州二中】第一节 短文改错（共
21、10小题；每小题1分，共10分） 以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正： 此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：请在答题卡上作答。 Late in April, a photo show was held in our school. It lasted a week and was great success! All the photos were taken 76. _by t
22、he students themselves. They were most color photos, but 77. _some were black-and-white ones, presented our school life, the beauty 78. _of nature, festival activities and so on. All the work of art were 79. _at show in the reading-room on the second floor. Every day a large 80. _number of students
23、went to enjoy them, but they were surprised to 81._find the photos were such wonderful that some teachers also were 82. _present. Those whose photos were chosen the best are given different 83. _prizes. In the short, this photo show really made our life more colorful. 84. _We hope we will have much
24、more activities like this in our school. 85. _ 76. was 后加a 77.most-mostly 78.presented-presenting / 在presented前面加which 79.work-works 80.at-on 81.but-and 82.such-so 83.are-were 84.删掉the 85 much- many passage *Mary was an university student. She didnt have much 1 _ money and her parents were not rich,
25、 and she had an uncle 2. _ who had been fortunately enough to collect great wealth. 3. _ He always give her valuable Christmas and birthday presents.4. _ When her uncles birthday came round, Mary wanted buy him5. _ something really special, but because she was rich, she did not6. _ know how to get h
26、im. She went into the best shop in her7. _ town and explained what her problem was to one of helpful 8. _ shop assistants. Finally she asked, “What do you have for9. _ someone who has already got everything he wants or needs.10 The assistant sighed deeply and answered, “Envy, only envy.”【参考答案】Key 13 1. ana 2 andbut 3 fortunatelyfortunate 4 givegave 2. 5to buy 6.shehe 7how-what8the helpful.3. 9 assistant - assistants 10 right
