六年级英语下册Unit 1单元话题写作“寓言故事”译林版三起.docx

1、Unit 1单元话题写作“寓言故事”第一篇【话题分析】同学们，本单元我们通过一则寓言故事，复习了一般过去时，并学习了形容词和副词的使用。现在让我们以龟兔赛跑为例，讲述一个含有一般过去时的故事。【思路点拨】作文结构展示可能用到的词汇和句子开头：介绍故事的时间、地点、人物和起因。句子：Long long ago, there was/were.One day,.met a tortoise(鸟龟).中间：根据时间顺序/情节发展顺序进行叙述，注意动词形式的变化，并结合使用形容词和副词。词汇：walk by/wake up, run fast/slowly句子：Lets have a race.A f

2、ew minutes later.Just then.Soon, he caught up(赶上)with.结尾：写清故事的结局，可以进行总结、评价。句子：At last, he won the race.The rabbit cried sadly.From then on.【范文欣赏】Long long ago, there was a rabbit. One day, she met a tortoise. She said, Hello, Mr tortoise. Lets have a running race now.” “Great!”said the tortoise. The

3、n they began to run. The rabbit ran fast. A few minutes later, the rabbit stopped. She couldnt see the tortoise.The tortoise runs so slowly, said the rabbit. So she slept on the grass. But the tortoise didnt have a rest. Soon, he caught up with the rabbit.At last, he won the race. The rabbit cried s

4、adly.【句型热身】1.那些学生正在阅览室安静地看书。 2.一只狗吵醒了婴儿。婴儿大声地哭了起来。 3.女孩开心地大笑起来，因为她发现了很多五彩缤纷的烟花。 【写作练习】一天， 你和朋友们去你家附近的公园玩，你们玩得很开心。就在这时你们遇见了一个找不到回家的路的小女孩。你们帮她找到了家，她看到家人很开心。请你据此写一篇短文记叙事情的经过，注意使用一般过去时，运用副词，可适当发挥想象。 【参考答案】一、 句型热身1. Those students are reading quietly in the reading room.2. A dog woke the baby up. The bab

5、y cried/began to cry loudly.3. The girl laughed happily because she found many/a lot of colourful fireworks.二、 写作练习One day, I went to the park near my home with my friends. We played games there. We had a lot of fun. Just then, we saw a little girl crying sadly on the ground. What happened? She coul

6、dnt find her way back home. We talked with her and helped her find her home. She was happy to see her family again.第二篇请你根据图片提示，用英文编写一则小故事。不少于6句话。【思路点拨】这是一篇有关“狐狸与葡萄”的看图作文。同学们在写作之前，要先弄清楚每幅图片所要表达的内容。在写作时，要注意文章的连贯性、情节的完整性。故事的写作通常使用一般过去时，所以文章中主语后的大多数谓语动词要用过去式。另外，在写作时可以适当增加故事中角色的心理描写，使故事更加生动，但需注意的是，角色的心理描

7、写要用一般现在时。【范文欣赏】Long long ago, there was a fox. He was hungry. So he went out to look for food. He saw some big and beautiful grapes when he walked by a garden. “Those grapes look so nice. I can pick some to stay my hunger(充饥),” said the fox. “I think I can jump high and get them.” So the fox started

8、 to jump to get the grapes. He tried it several times, but he still couldnt reach them. At last, the fox had to go away and said angrily, “I dont want to eat those grapes at all. They are green. They must be sour!”【小试身手】Long long ago, 【参考答案】Long long ago, there was a fox. One day he was hungry. He looked for food, and saw some grapes. He wanted to get those grapes because they looked beautiful. The fox started to jump up. But he couldnt get them. Then the fox went away. He said, “I dont want those grapes. They are green. They arent sweet.”