1、专题能力提升练五短文改错(一)Test 12020广州市综合检测二 Flowing through the centre of Guangzhou, the Pearl River plays an important role in the life of city. Each day, boats take people in and from work, and ships transport goods to factory and markets. The river is also a great source of entertain. Along the riverbanks,
2、 where you can see people walking, exercising and enjoy beautiful views. In recent years, locals had worked hard to improve the river environment. Among their efforts are planting trees along the banks or creating several new parks. Most important, theyve reduced river pollution, making the water so
3、 clean as people can now fish in the river.Test 22020合肥市高三第三次教学质量检测 There was a lively discussion held in my class last Friday. It was main about protecting the fine Chinese culture. Some suggested raising peoples aware of preserving our culture and making people fall in love with them. For example,
4、 we could conduct creative activity like discovery tours and culture shows to help people have better understanding of our culture. Others think some courses should be offered in schools, which goal was to help students learn more about our customs, ways of life and so on. And in my view, what was m
5、attered was that everyone should feel proud in our own culture. Also, we should attempt to passing our fine culture down from generation to generation.Test 32020太原市高三年级模拟三 I have been learning English since I am in primary school, but the truth was that I was not so good at listening. No matter how
6、hardly I tried, I couldnt understand clearly which my English teachers or native speakers said. One day, I was surfing the Internet while an advertisement for English listening drew your attention. To my amaze, it was a website where recording of some wellknown books were provided. When see the webs
7、ite, I fell in love it, which turned out to be that useful. Now I have made a progress in listening.Test 42020成都市高中毕业班第三次诊断 The first time I heard the expression “Know yourself” by Socrates, I didnt realize its meaning until I go to university. I started my university life unwillingly, because I did
8、nt want to leave my parents and university of engineering was not my dream school too. However, I changed my mind complete after a semester. My schoolmates are from different place, some of which are really outstanding. This makes me realized there is always someone much more better capable. Since t
9、hen, to know myself has become an importance part of my life. Only by knowing who I am or where I am can I really follow the right path.专题能力提升练五短文改错(一)Test 1答案与解析： Flowing through the centre of Guangzhou, the Pearl River plays an important role in the life of city. Each day, boats take people and fr
10、om work, and ships transport goods to and markets. The river is also a great source of . Along the riverbanks, you can see people walking, exercising and beautiful views. In recent years, locals worked hard to improve the river environment. Among their efforts are planting trees along the banks crea
11、ting several new parks. Most ， theyve reduced river pollution, making the water so clean people can now fish in the river.city前加the冠词漏用。此处city指的是上文提到的Guangzhou，表示特指，应该用定冠词修饰，故在city前加the。in改为to介词误用。表示“到(某处)”应用介词to。factory改为factories名词单复数误用。factory是可数名词，又其前没有限定词修饰，且根据语境可知，此处应用复数形式，故用factories。entertai
12、n改为entertainment动词和名词混用。介词后一般跟名词、代词或动名词作宾语，故此处应用entertain的名词形式entertainment。删除where关系副词多用。分析句子结构可知，“you can see people walking. views”是主句，而非where引导的非限制性定语从句，因此删除where。enjoy改为enjoying动词形式误用。根据句中的and可知，此处与walking、exercising并列，作宾语补足语，故用enjoying。had改为have动词时态误用。根据句中的“In recent years”可知，此处应用现在完成时，又主语loca
13、ls为复数形式，故用have。or改为and连词误用。根据语境可知，此处表并列关系而非选择关系，故用and。important改为importantly形容词和副词混用。分析句子结构可知，此处应为副词，修饰整个句子，故用importantly。as改为that固定搭配误用。“so. that.”如此以至于”是固定搭配，引导状语从句，故用that。Test 2答案与解析： There was a lively discussion held in my class last Friday. It was about protecting the fine Chinese culture. Som
14、e suggested raising peoples of preserving our culture and making people fall in love with . For example, we could conduct creative like discovery tours and culture shows to help people have better understanding of our culture. Others some courses should be offered in schools, goal was to help studen
15、ts learn more about our customs, ways of life and so on. And in my view, what mattered was that everyone should feel proud our own culture. Also, we should attempt to our fine culture down from generation to generation.main改为mainly形容词和副词混用。分析句子结构可知，此处修饰谓语动词，应用副词形式，所以将main改为mainly。aware改为awareness形容词
16、和名词混用。分析句子结构可知，名词所有格后面应该用名词形式，所以将aware改为awareness。them改为it代词误用。此处代指our culture，应用单数形式，所以将them改为it。activity改为activities名词单复数误用。根据本句中的“like discovery tours and culture shows”以及该词前面无限定词修饰可知，此处指的活动不止一种，应该用可数名词的复数形式，所以将activity改为activities。have后加a冠词漏用。have a better understanding of.为固定用法，意为“对有更好的理解”，所以在h
17、ave后面加a。think改为thought动词时态误用。根据文章第一句“There was a lively discussion held in my class last Friday”可知，本篇文章主要讲述的是上周五课堂上进行的讨论，故此处叙述的事情发生在过去，时态应用一般过去时，所以把think改为thought。which改为whose。定语从句关系词误用。分析句子结构可知，空处引导定语从句，在从句中作定语，先行词为some courses，所以将which改为whose。删除was动词语态误用。分析句子成分可知，what与mattered之间为主谓关系，matter为不及物动词，
18、不用被动语态，故删除was。in改为of介词误用。feel proud of.为固定搭配，意为“为感到骄傲”，所以将in改为of。passing改为pass动词形式误用。attempt to do sth.为固定搭配，意为“努力做某事”，所以将passing改为pass。Test 3答案与解析：I have been learning English since I in primary school, but the truth was that I was not so good at listening. No matter how I tried, I couldnt understa
19、nd clearly my English teachers or native speakers said. One day, I was surfing the Internet an advertisement for English listening drew attention. To my ， it was a website where of some wellknown books were provided. When the website, I fell in love it, which turned out to be that useful. Now I have
20、 made progress in listening.am改为was动词时态误用。since引导时间状语从句时，从句时态一般用一般过去时，此处讲述的in primary school是过去，应用一般过去时，所以将am改为was。hardly改为hard副词混用。hardly意为“几乎不”，hard作副词时意为“努力地，猛烈地”，结合句意“无论我多么努力地尝试”可知，此处应将hardly改为hard。which改为what。引导词误用。分析句子结构可知，空处引导宾语从句，作understand的宾语，结合句意“我无法清楚地明白老师或当地人所说的话”可知，此处引导词应用what，所以将which
21、改为what。while改为when连词误用。本句为固定句型“sb. was/were doing.when.”，意为“某人正在做突然”，所以将while改为when。your改为my代词误用。结合句意“一条英语听力的广告吸引了我的注意力”可知，此处代词your应该改为my。amaze改为amazement动词和名词混用。to onesn.为固定表达，意为“令某人的是”，所以把amaze改为amazement。recording改为recordings名词单复数误用。分析句子结构可知，本句谓语动词为were provided，所以主语应该为可数名词复数，recording of some we
22、llknown books为主语，核心词为recording，所以将recording改为recordings。see改为seeing动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知，本句谓语为fell，空处作非谓语，逻辑主语为I，两者之间为主动关系，作时间状语，所以将see改为seeing。love后加with介词漏用。fall in love with.为固定用法，意为“爱上”，所以在love后加with。去掉a冠词多用。make progress意为“取得进步”，progress为不可数名词，所以将不定冠词a去掉。Test 4答案与解析：The first time I heard the express
23、ion “Know yourself” by Socrates, I didnt realize its meaning until I to university. I started my university life unwillingly, because I didnt want to leave my parents and university of engineering was not my dream school . However, I changed my mind after a semester. My schoolmates are from differen
24、t ， some of are really outstanding. This makes me there is always someone much more capable. Since then, to know myself has become an part of my life. Only by knowing who I am where I am can I really follow the right path.go改为went时态误用。根据上文中的“didnt”和下文中的“started my university life”可知，此处要用一般过去时。univer
25、sity前加a/the冠词漏用。此处可以泛指“一所工程大学”，也可以特指“我”就读的“那所工程大学”，故应在university前加a/the。too改为either副词误用。否定句中用“either”表示“也”。complete改为completely形容词和副词混用。此处修饰动词“changed”，应用副词形式。place改为places名词单复数误用。place为可数名词，其前无限定词修饰，结合语境可知此处表示复数概念，应用复数形式。which改为whom关系代词误用。先行词为“My schoolmates”，指人，又关系词在介词后作宾语，故用whom。realized改为realize非谓语动词误用。使役动词后加省略to的不定式作宾语补足语。删除better比较级误用。capable前加more变成比较级，better多余，应删除。importance改为important名词和形容词混用。此处修饰名词part，应用形容词。or改为and连词误用。根据语境可知，此处表示“只有知道我是谁和我在哪里，我才能走上正确的道路”，此处为并列关系而非选择关系，故将or改为and。