1、第3讲 图画类作文专题六 书面表达 题型指导 1 跟踪训练 2 栏目索引 图画类作文要求将画面所包含的信息转换成文字，旨在避免汉语思维，要求直接用英语思维。它要求根据图画提供的图像信息写一篇短文，包括叙述一个故事，或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出结论。图画类作文就内容而言，可以写观察到的内容，也可以根据合理想象适当进行发挥来补充一些内容；就表达方式而言，可以单纯地理解、说明，也可以在说明中加以描写、叙述，因此该类文体不仅具有一定的观察分析能力，还要有较强的语言表达能力、想象力和逻辑思维能力。写好图画类作文的关键是：一定要根据自己掌握的词汇与熟悉的句型结构构思短文内容，并直接用英语表达，千
2、万不要先想好一句句的中文，然后逐句译成英文，那样就往往会超出自己的英语水平，作文中就会出现“生造”的英语句子，难免会出错。另外，对于与图画无关的事要少写，还要注意人称、时态的呼应，整个作文要通篇考虑。题型指导(一)写作要领 1.准确审题。这是看图作文写作的基础。准确审题就是注意文体、人物和时态。2.把握情境。这是看图作文的关键。要根据图画，合理想象，围绕特定的主题，把握情景，(利用图中人物间的关系、人物的对话、人物的活动及所处场所，以及图中的文字说明和标识来)提炼要点等。3.发表感想。围绕主题展开合理的想象，发表自己的联想或感想。(二)具体步骤 1.认真审题 首先要看题头的汉语要求或提示，通常
3、包括：(1)审文体，如是要求写说明文还是记叙文；(2)审时态，如若是写日记用过去时；(3)审人称；(4)审要求。2.看懂图意 把图片展示的时间、地点、人物、事件等有机地串联起来，使之成为内容连贯完整的故事或事件。注意：文字说明和参考词汇对我们理解图画的意思非常有用。3.组织要点 在看懂图画的基础上，最好在草稿纸上逐条列出要点，以免遗漏。若是几幅图，要列出各图的大意，然后将所列要点用完整地道的英语句子表达出来。4.连句成篇 首先，在理清句子之间的关系后选用恰当的关联词语，把句子连接成文。其次，要避免句子结构的单调重复。最重要的是，如果发现上下句之间跳跃性太大，没有逻辑关系时，要根据自己的生活经验
4、，适当发挥想象，增加合理细节，使文段衔接自然，行文流畅。文末应尽量加上适当的结束语，以使文章结构完整。(2016北京第二节)假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actionsfor a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：地球日Earth Day 典题印证 A week before Earth Day，posters were put up around our school，calling upon us to join in the act
5、ions for a greener earth.Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials.Webrought to our classroom worn-out clothes，pieces of cardboard and emptyplastic bottles，and turned those into dolls，handbags，tissue boxes and smallvases.That weekend，we went to a nearby neighborhood and ga
6、ve them awayto the people there.All were very happy with those unexpected gifts，especiallylittle kids and elderly people.We did so well that we were invited to share ouridea and experience with all the students of our school.We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a betterworld
7、.高分范文 每年的北京书面表达第二节均为图片作文，本篇文章从环保的角度给出了以“地球日活动”为主题的四幅图画，这类题目对于学生的审题提出了更高的要求；另外图片类作文还需注意对图片先要进行简要的描述，惯用如：As the picture is shown to us，.这样的句式来开头；主干部分需要主要体现的内容是我们要不遗余力地学习，克服自己所遇到的一切困难获取知识，图片作文的立意一定是积极向上的，这一点十分重要。写作良方 1.认真审题 审题时注意汉语提示语与图片的结合：(1)确定人称、时态：第三人称为主，一般现在时为主；(2)确定要求：本文是一篇记叙文，叙述“地球日行动的过程和内容”，并且谈
8、出个人体会等。2.确定内容 确定图片所描述的内容：(1)海报内容；(2)收集废弃物以便回收再用；(3)赠送急需家庭，变废为宝；(4)亲身做法，激励他人。3.确定要点 按照确定的内容，提炼要点并且用适当的句式、短语来表述，句式要多变，语法现象要灵活。4.连句成篇 尽量多地使用恰当的关联词、插入语，使文章条理清楚，语句衔接紧凑。返回 1 Directions:Write an English composition in120150 words according to the instruc-tionsgiven below in Chinese.请以“Misunderstanding”为主题写
9、一篇短文，内容包括：1.简要描述右图内容；2.结合生活谈谈你的感想。跟踪训练 参考范文 In this picture，a person is almost drowned and asking for helpwith one hand stretching out of the water(用独立主格结构改写：1.).While at this moment，a FatherChristmas with a large pack on his shoulder just presents a gift to him，atwhichwemustbeshockedforweknowthatth
10、ereisamisunderstanding between them.改写句子答案 onehand stretching out of the waterIn our daily life exist so many misunderstandings which may not beas serious as the one described above(用there be句型改写：2.)，but can still result in manyterrible consequences.答案 In our daily life there exist/are so many misun
11、derstandings which may not be as serious as the one described aboveIn my view，misunderstanding may arise from lack of commun-ication(用lead to改写：3.).Meanwhilethesameexpressionsmayhavedifferentmeanings under different circumstances，just as the hand appearing inthe picture above:its for life not for gi
12、ft.So，in order to reduce misunderstanding and make us understoodexactly，we need to express our meanings clearly by words，bygesturing，even by a smile or by an eye contact.答案 lack of communication may lead to misunde-rstanding2 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图先后顺序，介绍在“国画之旅”活动中，向国画艺术家学习国画的过程，并以“A Daywith an Art
13、ist of Traditional Chinese Painting”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：国画traditional Chinese painting；荷花lotus A Day with an Artist of Traditional Chinese Painting Last Friday，our class invited a well-known artist to teach us how todraw a lotus in Chinese painting.As soon as the artist came into the c
14、lassroom，he was given a warmwelcome which made him so happy(改为简单句：1.).All of us wore big smiles.First，he showed us some skills ofdrawing a lotus.We watched carefully around him.参考范文 改写句子Coming into the classroom，the artist was given a warm welcome，making him so happy答案 Then each of us made an attemp
15、t to do it by ourselves under the carefulinstruction of him(用动词instruct改写：2.).Finally，becauseofmyexcellentperformance，Iwasawarded“OutstandingYoungArtist”.Looking at the award，I felt very excited(用形容词短语作状语改写：3.).Through this experience，we are all amazed at Chinese painting andproud of being Chinese.W
16、e hope we can have more activities of this kind inthe future!Then instructed by him，each of us made an attempt to do it by ourselves答案 I looked at the award，very excited3 你即将参加学校举办的英语作文竞赛。请根据下面的四幅图画写一篇短文，介绍在过去的30年里人们的通讯方式发生的一些变化。写作要求如下：1.包括图画的全部内容，结构完整；2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。注意：词数100左右。答案 参考范文 In the past t
17、hree decades，peoples ways of communication have changed greatly.Thirty years ago，people kept in touch with others by writing letters.Although it took a long time for people to receive a letter from their relatives or friends，it could help to keep people who lived far away connected.With the science
18、and technology developing rapidly，the telephone and mobile phone were invented，which made it more convenient for people to communicate with others.The mobile phone makes it possible for us to call our friends wherever we are at any time.答案 Right now more and more people would like to chat with friendsthrough the Internet.So science and technology is making our life moreenjoyable.返回