1、第4讲(半)开放类作文专题六 书面表达 题型指导 1 跟踪训练 2 栏目索引 所谓(半)开放作文，是相对于我们过去一直沿用的“书面表达”这种指导性写作(Guided Writing)而言的。它是一种比传统的“书面表达”限制较少的、留给考生自由发挥空间更多的考查学生书面表达能力的一种题型。(半)开放作文属于命题作文，考生要根据所给命题，独立进行构思，并必须做适当的发挥。它在一定的程度上考查了考生的写作能力，即要求考生根据写作动机选择相应的写作策略，并根据自己已有的相应知识完成写作。题型指导(一)写作策略 1.(半)开放作文通常以提供一个故事材料片段为主。大部分情况下，文中所使用的动词时态以一般过
2、去时为主，但人称的使用较为灵活，应该依据文章提示准确定位人称。2.在人称时态准确定位以后，考生应该将重点放在文章的遣词造句上。(二)注意事项 1.在着手写作之前，要认真审题，把握命题要求，找准素材或主题中的关键句。2.依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章脉络，抓住题干主旨，这样写起来就会有条不紊、条理清楚、详略得当，使得所写的文章中心突出。3.遣词造句要扬长避短。应尽可能运用自己熟悉的单词、短语或句型来灵活表达，但要避免单词、短语或句型的重复使用。(2016浙江)“Planning is good，but doing is better.”是一句英语名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100120词的短文。
3、要求如下：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。注意：文章的标题已给出，不计入总词数。典题印证 Planning Is Good，But Doing Is Better Planning Is Good，But Doing Is BetterPlanning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want todo.However，a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.My experience in the En
4、glish speech contest last October is a case inpoint.A month before the event，I spent hours working out a scheduleoutlining my goals and practical steps.After that，I set out to read widelyfor an inspiring topic，wrote a speech，and practiced its delivery inbeautiful pronunciation with good public speec
5、h skills.I finally came outof the contest as the first prize winner.I know how I achieved my success.It came from good planning andbetter doing combined.高分范文 1.认真审题，确定体裁 本题属于开放性作文，应该用第一人称，具体事例采用过去时态，其他主要用一般现在时。2.分清层次，确定要点 依据汉语提示确定写作要点：(1)引入话题；(2)介绍自己的事例；(3)做出总结，首尾呼应。写作良方 3.提取信息，确定方向 从英文提示Planning is
6、 good，but doing is better.中，我们可以先提取关键词planning，good，doing，better来确定中心，从而保证不偏题。这几个关键词意思都挺简单的，学生应该能够轻松读懂题意。4.句式多变，得分高高 要用多变的句式，灵活的语法去表述要点，尽量展示自己，提高得分点。5.注重衔接，浑然一体 一篇好文章段、句之间要通顺、条理、紧凑，所以要多用关联词、插入语，使上下文衔接起来。返回 1 生活中我们都需要朋友，我们该结交怎样的“朋友”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。A true friend is a sour
7、ce of strength and hope.Jonathan Lockwood Huie 内容要求：1.你对该引语的理解；2.你的相关经历；3.恰当的结尾。跟踪训练 注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。The quotation from Jonathan Lockwood Huie tells us that 参考范文 The quotation from Jonathan Lockwood Huie tells us that realfriends can give us strength and hope when we are in trouble and
8、 realfriends can benefit from each other(用beneficial改写：1.).翻译或改写句子答案 real friends can be beneficial to each otherTherefore，we need such friends who can point out our mistakesdirectly and who have the same life goals as us.2.(曾经我数学考试又一次不及格并对数学失去了兴趣，是我最好的朋友鼓励我不要放弃)and offered help intime.With his kind
9、 and selfless help，I gradually caught up with others.So I say we need friends and what we most need is a friend that canenrich our life(用强调句型改写：3.).答案 Once I failed again in my math exam and lost interest in math，it was my best friend who encouraged me not to give upit is a friend enriching our life
10、 that we most need2 以“A Good State of Mind Is the Base of Success”为题，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇词数100120的短文。要求：1.记述事情的经过，内容必须结合生活中的一个事例；2.简要说明好的心态对于获得成功的重要性以及从中得到的启示。注意：标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。A Good State of Mind Is the Base of Success Life is complicated.We cant avoid anything annoying or stressful.A Good State of
11、 Mind Is the Base of Success Lifeiscomplicated.Wecantavoidanythingannoyingorstressful.Therefore，what is of great importance is that we should keep agood state of mind(用it作形式主语改写：1.).参考范文 改写句子it is important that we should keep a good state of mind答案 An experience never fades from my memory.With a vi
12、tal examdrawing near，I felt so nervous that I even couldnt eat or sleep，thusmaking me very sleepy in class(用独立主格结构和定语从句改写：2.).Seeingthis，myteachercame to my help.With her aid，I adjusted myself and felt confidentagain.In the meantime，a detailed plan was made to go over my lessons.Inthe end，I managed
13、to pass the exam.A vital exam drawing near，I felt so nervous that I even couldnt eat or sleep，which made me very sleepy in class答案 It was a good state of mind that helped me get through the exam.Agood state of mind is what it takes to realize our goal(用强调句型强调主语：3.).It is a good state of mind that it
14、 takes to realize our goal答案 3 假设你是李华，你中国的好朋友开了一个网站提供个人闲置物品交换(exchange)服务。现在很多顾客有意愿想用自己的一些闲置物品交换些英语原版杂志读物。给你英国的朋友David写一封信，介绍一下这个网站并询问他想不想用英语原版杂志读物来做交换。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear David，Yours，Li Hua Dear David，参考范文 Im writing to you to introduce a website whose service is
15、 aboutused goods exchange.The website is established by my good friend，who wants to helppeople make full use of items，unused for a certain length of time.Myfriend mentioned that what is currently needed most by some people isoriginal Englishwritten magazines or other reading materials.If youhave some and no desire to preserve，would you like to exchange forsomething of a Chinese style？Additionally，its a good idea that youcall on people around to join us.答案 Yours，Li Hua 答案 Im looking forward to your reply.返回