1、书面表达训练(建议信)建议信 建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。建议信要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。建议信的常用结构如下:1首段:表明写作意图,陈述事由。2中段:围绕问题,婉转地提出有针对性的建议。注意充分考虑对方的实际情况。3尾段:简单予以希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。建议信开头常用句式:1.Thank you for trusting me.Its my pleasure to give you some suggestions/advice/tips.2.Im sorry to hear/lear
2、n that.3.You have asked me for my advice on and I will try to make some suggestions.表达建议常用句式:1.If I were you,I would 2.As far as I am concerned,/In my opinion 3.Why not?4.It would be a good idea if 5.In the first place/Firstly/First Secondly/Second Last but not least(最后)Compositions from Student Tim
3、es假如你是李华,你的笔友黎明来信说他的父母工作变动刚转入一所学校,由于性格内向,生活经历与同学差异很大等原因,在新学校没有知心朋友,很苦恼。请根据以上提示,给他写封回信,谈谈你对如何交友的看法。注意:词数100左右翻译下列句子:我很高兴了解到你现在一所新学校就读(learn)I am glad to learn that you are studying in a new school.如果你现在没有知心朋友,不用着急(if)Do not worry if you have no real friends right now.虽然你是一个性格内向的男孩,而且生活经历与你目前同学差异很大,只要
4、你遵循下列提示不是没有可能交上好朋友的。(although,as long as)Although you are not an outgoing boy and have different life experiences from your present classmates,it is not impossible to make good friends as long as you take the following tips.首先,如果你能与同学同甘共苦,就会交上朋友。(first of all)First of all,you can make friends with o
5、thers if you share their joys and sorrows.第二,你应该向同学敞开你的心扉。Secondly,you should open your heart to your friends,holding back nothing.最后,一旦有了朋友,你必须不断用善举来保持你们的友谊。(once)Last but not least,once you have a friend,youmustconstantlymaintainyourfriendship with acts of kindness.希望你很快找到真诚的友谊。I hope you will fin
6、d true friendship soon.连句成篇 Dear Li Ming,I am glad to learn that you are studying in a new school,which is a good chance for you to turn over a new leaf.(适当增加的细节,高级表达)Do not worry if you have no real friendsrightnow.Althoughyouarenotanoutgoingboyandhavedifferentlifeexperiences from your present clas
7、smates,it is not impossible to make good friendsas long as you take the following tips.First of all,you can make friends withothers if you can share their joys andsorrows.Secondly,you should open your heart to your friends,holding back nothing.(增加细节,闪光句子)最后,一旦有了朋友,你必须不断用善举来保持你们的友谊。(Last but not leas
8、t;once)Last but not least,once you have a friend,you must constantly maintain your friendshipwith acts of kindness.希望你很快找到真诚的友谊。I hope you will find true friendship soon.=Hopefully,youwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.=Itishopedthatyouwillfindtruefriendship.(变换多种句式,增加闪光点)Dear Li Ming,I am glad to learn tha
9、t you are studying in a new school,which is a good chance for you to turn over a new leaf.Do not worry if you have no real friends right now.Although you are not an outgoing boy and have different life experiences from your present classmates,it is not impossible to make good friends as long as you
10、take the following tips.First of all,you can make friends with others if you share their joys and sorrows.Secondly,you should open your heart to your friends,holding back nothing.Last but not least,once you have a friend,you must constantly maintain your friendship with acts of kindness.I hope you w
11、ill find true friendship soon.仿写 下面是一个中学生给某报编辑部写的一封信仔细阅读并就信的内容以编辑的名义给此中学生回一封信。Dear Editor,I am an active girl,and I speak and laughloudly in the classroom like a boy.I dontcare about small matters.On the contrary,my neighbor,the girl who sits next to me,speaks quietly and dare not do the things Ioft
12、en do.I can understand this.What I cant stand is that she often getsangry with me about small things.How can Iget along with her?Yours,Sunny.注意 1.书信格式要规范;2.给出至少三条建议(如谈心,相互理解,谈论共同话题,分享快乐等等)思路分析 写作时应注意下面几点:1确定文体:这是一篇应用文,写作中应注意书信的常规格式。2主体时态:文章应以一般现在时为主。3主体人称:由于是给别人提出建议,所以人称应该以第二人称为主。词汇热身 1与某人交朋友_ 2依我看_
13、 3与某人谈心_ 4参加某人.活动_make friends with sbas far as I am concernedhave a talk with sbjoin sb in.句式温习 1相互理解对你们两人都很重要。_for you two.2我认为邀请她参加你和你的同学们的各种活动也很好。I think its better for you to ask her _ 3与她分享你的喜怒哀乐。_.4真心希望这些建议能对你有帮助。_ to you.1.Understanding each other is very important 2.to join you and your cla
14、ssmates in all kinds of activities 3.Share your happiness and sadness with her 4.I truly hope the advice can be of great help连句成篇 Dear Sunny,Its very good that you want to makefriends with this girl.In my opinion,youd better first have a hearttoheart talkwith her,because understanding eachother is v
15、ery important for you two.Furthermore,I think its better for you toask her to join you and your classmatesinallkindsofactivities,suchasbirthday parties,going out for a walk,discussing some fashionable topics,and so on.Besides,helping each other is also veryimportantforbothofyou.Justsharehappiness an
16、d sadness with her.And I believeshe will understand you in time and it is certainthat you will be good friends in the future.I truly hope the advice can be of great help toyou.Yours,Editor Tape高考真题链接 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。参加中文学习班;看中文书刊、电视;学唱中文歌曲;交中国朋友。词数不少于100左右;内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯,书写清晰。